2008-08-22, 09:49 | Link #16502 |
~ I Do ~
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
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So that's how Saint's Union came about...!
If that's the case... "I owe you my life, and I'm here to give you my thanks. But now I need to get back to looking for the Kaiser. "See you later, Nanoha-san." The Three Pillars stand as ever with Vivio! ALL HAIL SANKT KAISER! ALL HAIL SAINT'S UNION!!!
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2008-08-22, 10:19 | Link #16503 | |||
Too much Caffine
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Under your Bed
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2008-08-22, 11:02 | Link #16504 |
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: フェイトの中
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Mmm, judging from their blog, the artist for the Nyanoha comics was at C74 and came back a day or so ago, so I'm expecting either something to pop up soon or something will pop up in a while.
I fifth it~ From the scans of Satashi I've seen, they've been pretty good to work with. Though, I think I remember there's a spot on the scanner where there was some reddish speck of dirt on it, but it's no biggie. ;P So, that BetrayerS doujin is hot. Thanks for the summary. It'd be great if someone could completely translate it.... -winks and hopes to edit it-
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2008-08-22, 11:02 | Link #16505 | |
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Join Date: May 2008
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I think it is reversed. It's the Physics-based weapons-ban indirectly wiped out the Battalion 108. General public and all local government start to question if the ban on physics-based weapon really can protect their world and ask the council to lift that ban. After a few vote on this issue, the council finally agree to lift the ban. At the same time release Jail in order to start mass-produce the combat cyborgs. Fate, knowing this, declare herself and some of her team to leave TSAB and demand the council to reconsider that. But the council just delete Fate's service record and declare her as a rebel and launch a attack on them.
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2008-08-22, 11:07 | Link #16506 | |
He Who Smites Shippers
Join Date: Mar 2008
Age: 36
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Where's my Nanoha vs Fate smackdown? Subaru and Mach Caliber getting another Crowning Moment of Awesome is all well and good, but I was expecting an epic slugfest between Blaster Mode Nanoha and Sonic Drive Fate, not a pithy little catfight with Caro/Erio/Subaru having to save Fate's ass at the last second when Fate hasn't even started to get warmed up. And Hayate not only continues to get shafted as a combatant but gets painted as the villain who freaking instigated this whole thing. That's called character assassination, my friends, and I do not appreciate it being applied to one of my favorite characters. Truly Utterly Epic Fail. That is all.
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2008-08-22, 11:19 | Link #16507 | |
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Secondly, everything needs not be given in entirety. The fact that it leaves the story hanging at the climax either means that there's a sequel, or we're supposed to let our imaginations run free on the possible endings. It's food for thought. Take it or leave it. The "shafting" may or not be intentional. Constraints, restrictions, and other factors have influence on how authors write their stories. They can decide to leave some characters unpolished so that you can polish it yourself. You should know this yourself. Whether it's utter epic fail or not is up to everyone else to decide. You have your say on the matter. |
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2008-08-22, 11:21 | Link #16508 | ||||
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Your English is not bad at all. Don't worry. I'll edit my summary, I guess. |
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2008-08-22, 11:34 | Link #16511 | ||
Truth Martyr
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Doing Anzu's paperwork.
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The internets. Serious business.
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2008-08-22, 11:47 | Link #16513 | |
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Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Outer Cadia
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Also we don't even have a proper translation of the story yet... and this is clearly (To me) not the entire story. Please remember that the first few episodes of Nanoha S1 wasn't that good as well (in my opinion) but after Fate came in, it quickly turned better (also in my opinion). A doujin is in essence a fanfic and what I seen so far is totally plausible. Sure there are a few plot holes mentioned, but I would like to see at least the entire translation before labelling it a failure or not. Like a lot of things, there is too much unsaid, too much unknown. Lastly calling it an epic failure is way beyond rude in my opinion Comar. If you think its really that bad, perhaps you should try your hand at making a better story. |
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2008-08-22, 11:54 | Link #16515 | ||
Adeptus Animus
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Age: 36
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What Hayate was doing wasn't wrong. They tried to bring peace back to a land that was torn by chaos and death. They just did it in a way others didn't like. |
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2008-08-22, 11:56 | Link #16516 | |
Truth Martyr
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On to more cheerful things: Nice; I can use this. Oh how I can use these.... also Otto looks more masculine while Deed looks... softer, somehow. Maybe because she's smiling... and 2nd pic is lol As for Hayate being shafted as a combatant, it's because none of the canon cast know how to use artillery.
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2008-08-22, 12:08 | Link #16519 | |
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Anyway without being able to read the Japanese from this doujin, it seems good. I don't think I can consider it "an Epic Fail", I dislike how this author draws facial expressions (specially speaking of Fate-chan, she looks ugly in some panels), but overall I think the artistic quality is good, and without doubting a moment is better than the standard Nanoha H-doujin. If someone from this site wants to translate this doujin, the problem will be that it's not your usual 20P doujinshi, but it has 70 pages instead, and the text density per page seems to be higher than the average as well, so I don't know if the work will worth it. We wish you luck with that BTW we will have more NanoFate scanlations going out soon at our site, so look forward to them ^^ Cuídense y sigan sonriendo Last edited by BPHaru; 2008-08-22 at 12:29. |
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2008-08-22, 12:12 | Link #16520 |
Sleep beneath the flowers
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Lording above all of humanity >;3
Age: 34
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I haven't read BetrayerS yet (Planning to after work) but I doubt it'll be a disappointment... Since I know I'm just looking at it for the battles I already said screw the plot from the teaser.
Just give us fights
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