Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Nanya01]

Okay, you guys convinced me.

Pregnancy is up on FF.Net now.

WHEE! Page claim!

[RadiantBeam]

I must review that! ... Sometime tomorrow along with "Concession"...

[synaesthetic]

I'm reading it, but I'm thinking of other things. For something like this, Callisto's newest album doesn't exactly fit.

Truth be told, Providence makes me think of Canaan more than anything. I should make a few icons...

[MeisterBabylon]

His home is a war. His hangout is a mess. But he loved the latter chaos best.

Ran through 3 pages of shits and giggles. Thank you.

[Nya~n]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Due: This line of reasoning makes no sense *SLICE* Once again I have cut a confusing plotline.

So have your daily dose of Jail and His Merry Numbers

Spoiler for Someone for... Everyone? Part 4:

Jail felt many things. Mostly shades of greed. Ambition, desire, a need to become better than himself. He felt the basics, happy when his plans succeeded, sad when they fell through. Right now, however, he felt none of his familiar emotions, instead his stomach felt like Wendi was doing somersaults throughout it. Anyone else would have had a name for the feeling. Jail was nervous.

He was also making everyone within a five foot radius nervous. What exactly were they supposed to do about the tall suspicious man standing outside the door, looking up and down from his watch five times a minute?

The bouquet in Jail's hand was completely crumpled around the middle, a result of the death grip he had on it. His hand was clenched so tight it shook. Where was she? No, she wasn't late, rather... Jail was ten minutes early. Not a good thing for his nerves.

“Mr. Pralastiper you're here already?”

How lucky, she was the early type too.

“Ah! Maria!” Jail's face erupted into his goofy smile. “I didn't think you'd get here so early.”

She chuckled a little embarrassedly, “I thought you wouldn't be here yet so I came early to get ahold of my nerves...”

There was a pause in the conversation where both parties blushed and focused on the ground. If only Fate could see the terrifying criminal she'd spent years chasing now.

“Ah right! These are for you,” Jail forced the begonias forward and into Maria's hand.

“Begonias! My favorite,” she bent down to sniff them then started giggling. “Though you know,” She looked up at him through the flowers, “In the language of flowers Begonias mean 'beware'. Are you trying to tell me something?

There's a language of flowers?!? Why hadn't anyone Jail that? “What? Of course not! There's nothing dangerous about me, nothing at all, absolutely not nothing close I've certainly never plotted to take over the world or anything like that. No way no how not me. Ah ha ha ha ha ha.”

Had Jail's brain worked better he would have come back with a line like, 'Oh? Well since begonias are your favorite do you like a little danger?' or 'Well I suppose you better be wary of my good looks.” Then again if he had said one of those things she would have left him right then and there for sounding so stupid.

“You're so silly Mr. Jail,” she began to shake with her own laughter, “you're way too nice to ever do anything evil like that.”

“Right, that's me, Mr. Nice Guy,” he joined in with her but he couldn't stop the voice in the back of his head from telling him “what a load of crap.”

She headed to the door. “Well since we're both here we might as well go in.”

Ah. This was it, what Sein had talked about. The entrance. He was supposed to open the door? Or was he not supposed to? He couldn't remember. She was approaching the door, it was now or never did he go for it or not?

“Allow me madam.”

It didn't matter, they had a guy by the door to open it for patrons.

Jail couldn't tell if this was a good start or a bad start to the date.

~~~

“Oh doctor.”

Across the street from the roof of the opposing building a person was lying on the rooftop watching, through a pair of binoculars, the scene unfurling.

“Oh stupid, stupid doctor,” Quattro sighed, kicked the ground. “If you wanted love you could have just told me.” The bespectacled number tossed the binoculars to the side. She sighed dramatically.

It was no secret that Quattro harbored love for the Doctor (he was her second favorite person, right after Due, pity Due was always off doing things and forgetting Quattro existed). But more then her unrequited love, (which she'd just program out of herself when it got annoying) the problem was the Doctor's blatant disregard for his mission.

The Doctor Quattro loved was insane, greedy and cackled at the pain and misery of others. This new guy was soft and kind, he didn't deserve to bear the same name. So Quattro was going to fix the problem.

She reached into her jacket, taking out the tiniest of bombs, one of the Doctor's own creations. It seemed she was going to have to kill the hypotenuse to get the old doctor back.

~~~

It was a quiet evening. That was always a good thing. When 12 girls lived under one roof that was a rare feat indeed. But here it was. A night where Cinque could calmly lie on the couch and read her book, 'Your Eyepatch and You: 10,000 ways too look badass with a missing eye'.

“SEIN!”

And like that the peace darted out of the room like a cat in a water park.

Sein backed into the room, hands raised to defend herself, “I was just trying to help out.”

She was being pushed back by Wendi and Nove, both with faces as red as their hair and fists raised. Wendi was the one too speak as Nove looked too taken aback to manage to form words, “I appreciate the sentiments but what are you trying to do by putting rose petals all over our beds and lighting candles everywhere!”

“I'm just trying to facilitate the rounding of the bases!” Sein ducked a right hook from Wendi. “You two obviously aren't going to get there without my help.”

Cinque chuckled, the younger sisters were so lively.

“Ahem.” A cough stopped the potential murder of Sein.

They all turned to find Dieci standing in the door way flanked by Otto and Deed. A taciturn trio.
Dieci started talking, “We've checked all the rooms, Quattro isn't here.”

“When did you three become friends,” Wendi pointed to the trio with curious eyes, not seeming to have heard of care about what Dieci had said.

“We have similar hobbies but will you please pay attention to what I'm saying.”

“Similar hobbies? Like what?” Sein, relieved that Wendi had forgotten to keep strangling her, continued the line of questioning.

“Will you please keep on topic Sein?” Deed spoke up from behind Dieci.

Sein acted hurt, “oww so informal...”

Cinque put her book to the side, “Even if Quattro isn't here, that doesn't mean anything's wrong.

“Glasses-nee is harmless,” Wendi insisted, “Just a little nuts.”

Dieci frowned, “I can't believe that. She might smile on the outside but I know Quattro-nee. She was upset.”

The other sisters exchanged looks.

Otto spoke up, “Simply put we think she's gone to ruin the Doctor's date.”

Cinque furrowed her brow, deep in thought, “If that's the case then we have no choice.”

Nove ran a hand through her short red locks, “It can't be helped I guess...”

“It might not be the case but it can't hurt to check it out now can it?” Cinque smiled at her younger sisters.

The tactiturn trio looked at each other with something like happy expressions and nodded.

Wendi grinned. She pointed to the ceiling and declared, “Team Scaglietti's Love Protectors! MOVE OUT!”

Special extra Bonus!

“There's a problem!” Wendi stopped short of the door nearly causing the others to crash into her.

“What?” Nove's brow knit in confusion.

“The doctor took the car!”

Nove's eye twitched and her fist came very very close to connecting with Wendi's head. “ARE YOU A CYBORG OR NOT!?!”

Spoiler for A/N:

Cookies for anyone who knows where I stole the Bonus' joke from.

So remember what I said last A/N about sticking to canon... well after a little chat on the FFC I decided to say fork you to canon. So now SfE is officially an alternate continuity fic.

Previously

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Quattro makes for a very hot stalke-*is killed*

re: Bonus: and it's from Harry Potter, isn't it? Rowling's used the same joke TWICE, after all...

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Cookies for anyone who knows where I stole the Bonus' joke from.

Do I get cookies if I knew it but didn't post it first? (Harry Potter. Specifically, Ron -> Hermione "ARE YOU A WITCH OR NOT?!")

Originally Posted by Satashi

"... And one more for Jail and the wimp."

And a lifetime's supply of ice cream.

[Nya~n]

Originally Posted by spawnofthejudge

Do I get cookies if I knew it but didn't post it first? (Harry Potter. Specifically, Ron -> Hermione "ARE YOU A WITCH OR NOT?!")

And a lifetime's supply of ice cream.

Spoiler for ^^:

You forgot Deathly Hallows, except this time Hermione chastises Ron for the exact same reason in the same scenario.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Nya~n

Quattro makes for a very hot stalke-*is killed*

re: Bonus: and it's from Harry Potter, isn't it? Rowling's used the same joke TWICE, after all...

Originally Posted by spawnofthejudge

Do I get cookies if I knew it but didn't post it first? (Harry Potter. Specifically, Ron -> Hermione "ARE YOU A WITCH OR NOT?!")

And a lifetime's supply of ice cream.

Originally Posted by Nya~n

Spoiler for ^^:

You forgot Deathly Hallows, except this time Hermione chastises Ron for the exact same reason in the same scenario.

Spoiler for :D:

You both get cookies forever.

It's like my favorite line in book 1. When she used it in book 7 I cheered at the little well done echo.

And yes I am a Harry Potter dork why do you ask :P

And in Nanoha news....

Jail's Pure Love Love Forever~

[Nya~n]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for :D:

You both get cookies forever.

It's like my favorite line in book 1. When she used it in book 7 I cheered at the little well done echo.

And yes I am a Harry Potter dork why do you ask :P

And in Nanoha news....

Jail's Pure Love Love Forever~

Jail in love.... I'm expecting love of Shakespearean proportions.

Spoiler for yay cookies:

my fellow dork! it IS my first fandom, after all
and yes, that was probably the best scene in DH

[Nanya01]

I have to say this...

It's weird but...

I honestly don't like Harry Potter.

I find it weird because I LOVE both Slayers and Nanoha and other series that use magic...

But I can't stand Harry Potter for some reason.

Like I said, I find it weird.

[itanshi1]

Its not weird at all, can't stand it myself.

[Kokuyoku]

I need some help people - I was browsing FF.net and I can't see to find a certain fic, any help with locating it? (I don't have the name since it's been several months now)

From what I remember of the plot:

- It's several Chapters long, 3 IIRC
- It's AU from the Section 6 attack
- It is likely the ONLY fanfic with a possible pairing of Erio/Lutecia or Erio/Caro/Lutecia
- Chapter 3 ends with Erio and Lutecia in the same sleeping bag ^_^

Btw - Is it me or did the option to select Lutecia as a main character disappear from FF.net's character list?

Might later post some ideas up for grabs If anyone wants them.

[DezoPenguin]

Originally Posted by Kokuyoku

Btw - Is it me or did the option to select Lutecia as a main character disappear from FF.net's character list?

I don't believe that it's just you. Which must be really annoying RadiantBeam about now. The fact that Shiro is there and Lutecia isn't makes me wonder who's running the show...particularly the misspelling of Arf's name (I'll put up with Aruf, since it's what the Japanese told the subtitlers of the English version to use and it's their character, but...Alph??? Where did that come from?).

Putting aside the nerdrage for a moment, here's the missing omake from "Blood & Spirit" chapter 13:

Spoiler for It would explain a lot...:

"Well, what do you think?" Sakura Kido said, closing the last panel.

Falin didn't answer right away.

"The diagnostics say that everything is working perfectly, Mistress Sakura," she at last concluded.

"Great! So what do you think of the upgrades I built in?"

"Well, I really appreciate the enhanced wireless connectivity, particularly since it piggybacks on the long-range net that you'd previously designed for us."

"Yep, no dead zones for you."

"But, um..." She raised her hands to her face. "Why am I wearing glasses? My vision shouldn't require correction."

Suzuka's aunt grinned.

"No, no, they're non-prescription. I only added them for the appeal factor."

Falin touched the top of her head.

"And the redesign of my primary audio sensors?"

"More efficient by 37 percent."

"Er...and this?"

A tail snaked out from beneath her.

Sakura laughed.

"Strictly for added moe. The way I figure it, a ninja robot meganekko catgirl maid will cause spontaneous combustion of otaku within a forty-foot range!"

Arisa looked at Suzuka.

"Offhand, do you happen to have any Yagamis in your family? Because it would explain an awful lot about you and your aunt both."

[itanshi1]

Alpha Romero i believe

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by DezoPenguin

I don't believe that it's just you. Which must be really annoying RadiantBeam about now. The fact that Shiro is there and Lutecia isn't makes me wonder who's running the show...particularly the misspelling of Arf's name (I'll put up with Aruf, since it's what the Japanese told the subtitlers of the English version to use and it's their character, but...Alph??? Where did that come from?).

Putting aside the nerdrage for a moment, here's the missing omake from "Blood & Spirit" chapter 13:

Spoiler for It would explain a lot...:

"Well, what do you think?" Sakura Kido said, closing the last panel.

Falin didn't answer right away.

"The diagnostics say that everything is working perfectly, Mistress Sakura," she at last concluded.

"Great! So what do you think of the upgrades I built in?"

"Well, I really appreciate the enhanced wireless connectivity, particularly since it piggybacks on the long-range net that you'd previously designed for us."

"Yep, no dead zones for you."

"But, um..." She raised her hands to her face. "Why am I wearing glasses? My vision shouldn't require correction."

Suzuka's aunt grinned.

"No, no, they're non-prescription. I only added them for the appeal factor."

Falin touched the top of her head.

"And the redesign of my primary audio sensors?"

"More efficient by 37 percent."

"Er...and this?"

A tail snaked out from beneath her.

Sakura laughed.

"Strictly for added moe. The way I figure it, a ninja robot meganekko catgirl maid will cause spontaneous combustion of otaku within a forty-foot range!"

Arisa looked at Suzuka.

"Offhand, do you happen to have any Yagamis in your family? Because it would explain an awful lot about you and your aunt both."

Spoiler for What was I thinking?:

"Well..." She blinked and thought about it. "I think there's my third cousin once removed named Iori... But he's a fighter that throws around purple flames."

"Purple... Flames?" Arisa twitched, that couldn't be normal.

"Something about a deal with a devil over 600 years ago." Suzuka muttered. "He's also a rock star."

"Oooohkay..."

"I haven't seen Cousin Iori in a long, long time. The last time I saw him was at a family reunion, but he was all bandaged up from a fight he got into. He really should stop trying to fight gods so often."

Arisa twitched, she just HAD to have friends that were all stupidly powerful, didn't she?

For those who aren't getting it... I'm making a reference to Iori Yagami from SNK's Fighting Series King of Fighters.

I'm a fighting game nut.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Spoiler for What was I thinking?:

"Well..." She blinked and thought about it. "I think there's my third cousin once removed named Iori... But he's a fighter that throws around purple flames."

"Purple... Flames?" Arisa twitched, that couldn't be normal.

"Something about a deal with a devil over 600 years ago." Suzuka muttered. "He's also a rock star."

"Oooohkay..."

"I haven't seen Cousin Iori in a long, long time. The last time I saw him was at a family reunion, but he was all bandaged up from a fight he got into. He really should stop trying to fight gods so often."

Arisa twitched, she just HAD to have friends that were all stupidly powerful, didn't she?

For those who aren't getting it... I'm making a reference to Iori Yagami from SNK's Fighting Series King of Fighters.

I'm a fighting game nut.

Iori Yagami?!

Nanya...are you sure you're not high on crack here?

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by DezoPenguin

I don't believe that it's just you. Which must be really annoying RadiantBeam about now. The fact that Shiro is there and Lutecia isn't makes me wonder who's running the show...particularly the misspelling of Arf's name (I'll put up with Aruf, since it's what the Japanese told the subtitlers of the English version to use and it's their character, but...Alph??? Where did that come from?).

Putting aside the nerdrage for a moment, here's the missing omake from "Blood & Spirit" chapter 13:

Spoiler for It would explain a lot...:

"Well, what do you think?" Sakura Kido said, closing the last panel.

Falin didn't answer right away.

"The diagnostics say that everything is working perfectly, Mistress Sakura," she at last concluded.

"Great! So what do you think of the upgrades I built in?"

"Well, I really appreciate the enhanced wireless connectivity, particularly since it piggybacks on the long-range net that you'd previously designed for us."

"Yep, no dead zones for you."

"But, um..." She raised her hands to her face. "Why am I wearing glasses? My vision shouldn't require correction."

Suzuka's aunt grinned.

"No, no, they're non-prescription. I only added them for the appeal factor."

Falin touched the top of her head.

"And the redesign of my primary audio sensors?"

"More efficient by 37 percent."

"Er...and this?"

A tail snaked out from beneath her.

Sakura laughed.

"Strictly for added moe. The way I figure it, a ninja robot meganekko catgirl maid will cause spontaneous combustion of otaku within a forty-foot range!"

Arisa looked at Suzuka.

"Offhand, do you happen to have any Yagamis in your family? Because it would explain an awful lot about you and your aunt both."

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Spoiler for What was I thinking?:

"Well..." She blinked and thought about it. "I think there's my third cousin once removed named Iori... But he's a fighter that throws around purple flames."

"Purple... Flames?" Arisa twitched, that couldn't be normal.

"Something about a deal with a devil over 600 years ago." Suzuka muttered. "He's also a rock star."

"Oooohkay..."

"I haven't seen Cousin Iori in a long, long time. The last time I saw him was at a family reunion, but he was all bandaged up from a fight he got into. He really should stop trying to fight gods so often."

Arisa twitched, she just HAD to have friends that were all stupidly powerful, didn't she?

For those who aren't getting it... I'm making a reference to Iori Yagami from SNK's Fighting Series King of Fighters.

I'm a fighting game nut.

You are both so brilliant it's scary sometimes.

[DezoPenguin]

Originally Posted by itanshi1

Alpha Romero i believe

That would be Alfa Romeo, I believe...but in that case, wouldn't her name be A-ru-fa as opposed to A-ru-fu? What do the A's booklets give for her Romanized name spelling?

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Spoiler for What was I thinking?:

"Well..." She blinked and thought about it. "I think there's my third cousin once removed named Iori... But he's a fighter that throws around purple flames."

"Purple... Flames?" Arisa twitched, that couldn't be normal.

"Something about a deal with a devil over 600 years ago." Suzuka muttered. "He's also a rock star."

"Oooohkay..."

"I haven't seen Cousin Iori in a long, long time. The last time I saw him was at a family reunion, but he was all bandaged up from a fight he got into. He really should stop trying to fight gods so often."

Arisa twitched, she just HAD to have friends that were all stupidly powerful, didn't she?

For those who aren't getting it... I'm making a reference to Iori Yagami from SNK's Fighting Series King of Fighters.

I'm a fighting game nut.

Spoiler for Come to think of it...:

"You mean there's another Yagami out there who received uncontrollable supernatural powers through a bond with an insane force of eternal darkness? Is this like a family tradition or something?"

"No, dressing the women around them in fetish costumes is the family tradition. The other stuff is just coincidence, really."

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Iori Yagami?!

Nanya...are you sure you're not high on crack here?

Well, I could've gone worse...

Spoiler for I have no clue!:

Vita blinked as she looked at Hayate. The woman was getting rather excited. "Hayate? What's wrong?"

"I'm going to meet my uncle! I haven't seen him since I was seven!"

Vita blinked. "Gil Graham?" That was the only uncle of Hayate's that she knew of.

"No." Hayate shook her head as there was a knock on the door. "Ah! That must be him now!"

Vita shrugged as Hayate ran to the door. Her eyes widened as she saw the rather large man with red hair that fell over one eye, a black coat and red pants that had a belt connecting his two legs together.

"Uncle Iori!" Hayate smiled. "It's so good to see you again."

Iori smirked at her. "Good to see you too, squirt."

Hayate pouted. "Not all of us can be giants like you are." He chuckled at her.

See?

[DezoPenguin]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Well, I could've gone worse...

Spoiler for I have no clue!:

Vita blinked as she looked at Hayate. The woman was getting rather excited. "Hayate? What's wrong?"

"I'm going to meet my uncle! I haven't seen him since I was seven!"

Vita blinked. "Gil Graham?" That was the only uncle of Hayate's that she knew of.

"No." Hayate shook her head as there was a knock on the door. "Ah! That must be him now!"

Vita shrugged as Hayate ran to the door. Her eyes widened as she saw the rather large man with red hair that fell over one eye, a black coat and red pants that had a belt connecting his two legs together.

"Uncle Iori!" Hayate smiled. "It's so good to see you again."

Iori smirked at her. "Good to see you too, squirt."

Hayate pouted. "Not all of us can be giants like you are." He chuckled at her.

See?

Heh. I think Iori wants to be Hayate when he grows up. (and yes, I didn't mean that the other way around!)