2011-03-03, 02:53 | Link #29582 |
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Shine 1 -45
Shine 46 Shine 47 Shine 48 Shine 49 A, B, C Shine 49 D Shine 49 E Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Shine 50:
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Queen of Tragedy
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
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It......came out of nowhere? =O I was laying on the season 1 comparisons pretty thickly , and there Fate barely chose to side with Nanoha at the end, and only because Precia was so openly nasty to her did Fate fail to help Precia when the TSAB had invaded the Garden. But you're right, I probably could have done a better job in building the story up, but I wanted a shorter story instead of an epic multi-chapter tale, so I did skimp out on narrative buildup that I shouldn't have left out. And LOL, yes, I do depressing all on my own . I blame English Literature since all the books I read for school end depressingly--a requirement to be considered "literature", I believe! Quote:
Super....happy...fun....FLUFF?!?! *implodes* Hmmmmmmmm.......... Something has to keep my interest while writing sugary happy fun time!
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2011-03-03, 03:11 | Link #29584 | |
The Flame Crussader
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2011-03-03, 07:16 | Link #29585 | |
GregOS Offline
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Philippines
Age: 36
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And looks like things are evening out.... The cyborys getting offensive upgrade while TSAB getting mostly defensive upgrades...
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2011-03-03, 08:38 | Link #29589 | |
Labda Prakarsa Nirwikara
Join Date: May 2010
Location: Pekanbaru (UTC+07:00)
Age: 37
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Ah, but don't worry Vivio, it's all just a dream! Why? the real Linith had the appearance of a housecat, not a cougar!
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2011-03-03, 08:48 | Link #29590 |
"Hey, Isaac?"
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It would depend on what happened in it, but I could sort of see the value of an epilogue showing, say... what Vivid learned from this, her determination to move on and grow stronger so it never happens again, her family's love helping her cope, etc.
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2011-03-03, 08:57 | Link #29591 | |
Labda Prakarsa Nirwikara
Join Date: May 2010
Location: Pekanbaru (UTC+07:00)
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Cute things, sharp teeth.
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2011-03-03, 09:26 | Link #29595 | |
Labda Prakarsa Nirwikara
Join Date: May 2010
Location: Pekanbaru (UTC+07:00)
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A child that dreamed of becoming a hero, only to snapped and be disillusioned after actually doing the job? "You can't save everyone! To save the many, you must sacrifice the few!" - Counter Guardian VIVIO (the name TAKAMACHI is already associated with a certain infamous Heroic Spirit)
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2011-03-03, 13:25 | Link #29596 | |
Under Death by College
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Join Date: May 2010
Location: Where you least expect me
Age: 30
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Also, upgrades! Yay, everyone's becoming more powerful, it'll make one hell of a challenge for either side.
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2011-03-03, 16:26 | Link #29598 |
Queen of Tragedy
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
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Blood Calls To Blood Special Epilogue for spawnofthejudge and RadiantBeam EDIT: Whoops, and for yuiseppe and Tiresias too ^^, a little... Spoiler for BCTB Special Epilogue for spawn and RB:
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It seems like lots of people want some kind of a short epilogue....I keep doing this to myself! I have some vague ideas for an epilogue, but it'll depend on how it plays out in my head. No promises, guys .
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2011-03-03, 21:06 | Link #29600 | |
Test Drive
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Can I say that as short as this is, it made me grin stupidly? Because it made me grin stupidly. That is all.
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