2006-02-11, 12:06 | Link #22 | |
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I can't help but to laugh as well as be serious when reading this post. Everything you said here pretty much wraps up of what I think about this story. That and many of the charecters are children of past SEED hero's. Not that i think that idea is a bad one just that there are too many of them for my taste. |
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2006-02-11, 12:51 | Link #23 | |
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Anyway, I have to agree with the character numbers being too many. Of course, the character numbers were larger in SEED and DESTINY but most of them were support/filler characters, meaning that they really weren't significant. See, Dark here has TWELVE main characters that s/he must cover almost in every chapter. And for my taste, that's way too many significant, or main, characters to cover at the same bloody time. Dark, another advice. You might want to keep the character numbers really short. I only cover four characters in my fanfiction for now and I intend to keep it that way for a while. One last thing. I know that almost all the characters are children of paring couples, like Lalia being the child of Kira and Lacus. Somehow, I don't see this as an original idea. I haven't seen a fanfiction in the FF.Net so far, but it just doesn't feel like that the idea of the next-gen children fighting in a war like their parents did too original. If this is discouraging you, I'm sorry. I never intend for any kind of discouragement. @Everyone: BTW, could everyone call me Knighty? If you are lazy enough to type only seven characters instead of thirteen, or just want to, you can, alright? EDIT:@Headspace: I was being sarcastic where it was a compliment or not. I knew you were. Last edited by Knightmare213; 2006-02-11 at 13:33. |
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