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Off topic: I used to be hanging out in Nanoha Animesuki forum last year, but the Crazy Yuuno-hater kicked me out. These days, Old Iron apparently similar to me in that regard (he liked Yuuno, VERY MUCH). But since I left, the raging flare that is anti-Yuuno fandumb already subsided...
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2011-10-05, 19:00 | Link #2243 | |
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2011-10-05, 19:03 | Link #2244 | |
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@ Eratas
To learn what is love is part of Irish' character development, much like Sousuke Sagara from Full Metal Panic Quote:
Seriously, I have, unintentionally, having four of the most dangrous and risky tropes fulfilled! Batman Gambit Just As Planned Troll Fic Xanatos Gambit PROCEED TO CHAPTER 10! YAY!
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Tio Ginjyo - RaionPink and pilots a pink Tears-type MPIS "Penelope". Daughter of Admiral Tio of the Metroid Spacey, making her something like a princess, but in space. Gentle, somewhat airheaded (think Tsumugi from K-on!) Her voice actress is Kotobuki Minako. Risielle Hirashima - Based on a character by SaintHeartess. RaionYellow. Pilots a yellow Kurogane MPIS "Arashi". Kuudere, and may appear like Karon's enemy, often critical of Karon's actions and complains about having to clean up after the girl. But the two roommates are actually rather close. Her voice actress is Rie Tanak. Erika Weber - Based on a character by Kyral. RaionGreen. Pilots the green Rafale MPIS "Bastille". While she's not completely introverted, she does wish to have more guts and dare to do things differently. Her voice-actress is Toyosaki Aki. Celeste Eisenberg - Based on Blitz's first character here. RaionBlack. Pilots the black Schwarz MPIS "Panzergeist". Quiet, cold, mechanical. A cyborg from Schwarzehase and a subordinate of Laura. Her voice actor is Yui Ogura. Quote:
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Most of the time, she is doing things that remind her of her brother, like singing the National Anthem to the sun at dawn. She is also proud of him. At the same time, she's also a tad lonely, so she 'takes' it out on Ichika (comic relief, pranks, etc). The arc which Ichika takes the Imouto route is triggered when the anniversary of Kajie's death rolls by. Many Metroid pilots from ISA would volunteer for the salutory fly-by, and while 1st years are seldom granted this honor, it would be the first time Karon's taking part. This makes her more nervous and sadder than usual, and the slight change in personality starts everything. Quote:
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Drives Maximillan and Antonio nuts in the mean time (the original love triangle of 2 guys after an oblivious girl). Or should I try for a complete reverse harem?
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2011-10-05, 20:39 | Link #2247 |
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@ Zero and Blitz-Do you have any ideas how to make Irish understand what love is? All I have so far is that he justifies himself trying to free Joshua as being in debt to him while he justifies those two helping him because they had to/ it would help the team. I'll also have him try to justify his crush on Tatenashi as trusting her and later on even because he lusts for her rather than saying he actually likes her instead. Any ideas on how to get him to admit to love?
Meister- Loli? Karon probably looks older than Irish himself since his growth was stunted. He looks like a shota Accelerator is where I got the inspiration from Irish. Basically it amounts to: Touma- Ichika: Both are Harem heroes who are oblovious to love and have a something extremely unoque about then Shiage- Kyuukai: Both good people forced to fight because of circumstances, both also get a girlfriend first. Accelerator- Irish: Anti-heroes who believe in their ideals wether they're right or wrong, both have bad pasts which adversely affect their world view. Both of them also don't hesitate to kill people and admit to others that they're murderers. Karon's strength is exactly the same as Irish the only difference is his agility mostly goes to acrobatics and knife combat. Irish is the most screwed in regards to class 1-2 there are terrorist haters, paparazzis and feminists. Maybe I'll have Karon call Irish out on the whole IS=weapons thing along with the fact that the IS has life. Might make a chapter where Karon gets stalkers(probably during the school festival where the school is open to the public) because she gets popular due to her show and she grabs the nearest person passing by she knows to be her boyfriend, unfortunately that person was Irish. What do you think? So how does she know Houki? You mentioned he calls her Houki-nee Does she ever feel jealous of the harem? Assuming I do the fake boyfriend draft how would Maximillian and Antonio react? Probably not good since they'd have to pretend to be lovey dovey. How does her IS differ from the regular units? I need some specs to think of a strategy for Irish to supress it. Last edited by Eratas123; 2011-10-05 at 23:00. |
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Easy, we should introduce him to the very first form of love: Trust. As long as Irish cannot trust anyone, he'll never learn love. He already trusted his comrade (Joshua, I think?) without he even knew what trust is, Tatenashi probably will explain about that once he 'trust' her as well. If Irish is able to trust them, learning about family, friendship, or partnership and love is easy, trust me. Irish will learn by himself once the flag is raised. EDIT: Who is Antonio? Quote:
@ Falcolobo, my plan went smooth pal, just look at Sacred Twins reviews...
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Yes! Steve is dead! The tyrant falls! The people's freedom to choose how and why they use their devices shall prevail!
<-- Apple hater. Was a microsoft hater. Probably will become a Google hater once they become tyrants too. On topic wise, I realize that I write better if its something about exploring themes, life of the class and the mystery of the week, interspersed with shoutout episodes and crack in general. I see the Star Trek influence already. But I absolutely can't make moe or drama. At least you guys have that covered. XD
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Thats a good idea! Irish's only emotion tied to friends/comrades is trust which he gives most to Joshua and later Tatenashi, Ichika and the others. I have an Idea! The reason Irish was so hurt by Tatenashi showing the video to the journalism club was because he already started to trust her and her doing that actually hurt him more than he realized, maybe I'll even do a scene where he starts wondering why he feels hurt despite her doing that not compromising his mission. What do you think? Tatenashi and Maya will probably act like his conscience and dissuadw him from killing people and look for other solutions. Tatenashi's character development on the other hand will focus on her reapizong the consequences her actions and how they can hurt others. I just thought of something after reading volume 4 and 5. The shopping trip with Laura and Charlotte but including Kyuukai, Irish, and Tatenashi. The robbers will have a hard time . Also the chinese cafe of class 1-2 with Irish in a china dress dropping bridgets and gertting more attention than Rin The festival happens during his "Moe Phase" which will explain why he agrees to do it (Tatenashi-"neechan" told him to) Seem possible or leave them out? |
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I don't know, is that Talia trying to kill Irish back then? If so, Irish should ran to his room (Cause you know, it's well guarded moreso than any place in I.S. Academy, jsut kidding) unless Tatenahsi being a dick again and let him crossdressing again for the lulz...
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2011-10-05, 23:53 | Link #2255 |
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Talia doesn't want to try and get the skull suit in a public area, that'd bring unwanted attention to what she's doing. Since every place is crowded during the festival then she will postpone it til after.
The crossdressing will happen during his second amnesia phase so he'll act like an obedient kid The reason he gets more customers than Rin is because he acts like an awkward kid you want to protect, basically like Mikuru Asahina. So is it possible or not? Sorry for asking but you're kind of like my beta writer for lulz while Blitz is for GrimDarkness |
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Honestly, making him crosdressing during THAT state is unambiguously low. Even if she doesn't knew he's amnesiac, Tatenashi is RECEPTIVE about people's emotion, she'll notice the strangeness of his obedient response. At the very least, have her doubting about it until Amnesiac!Irish said it'll be fine. Of course by the time Irish regain his 'memories' again, he'll unleash a whole new level of tranquil fury, made Tatenashi confused and began to think if what she did is wrong on some level. (She stopped the teasing on Ichika as soon as he lose his usual flustered, idiotic state and implying great annoyance in his own words and expression)
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*shot* And when asked why on earth Irish, she says its because he was nearby, he's the only man on campus her size, and that now this gives him the excuse to be her friend. Irish would of course flip at this, but she doesn't care because its fun. Quote:
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I'm also planning a retcon on her backstory: She was trained in leading for her organization so she never had time to have fun with life and to top it all off her own sister doesn't even like her that much. Because of this she doesn't seem to see what happens when her actions go too far. Amnesiac!Irish would probably try to keep her happy and he thinks crossdressing would do that, he normally follows what she says anyway so she doesn't think anything would happen once he regained his memory. Besides, that's arguably the entire point of that segment. In any harem comedy the guy getting amnesia and being tricked into crossdressing would be played for laughs. I'm planning to subvert this by playing this for laughs at first then showing what would happen if it happenned to somebody for real. They'd be PISSED! Tatenashi would probably try to apologize but Irish will say she doesnt have to because he never trusted her to begin with and he shouldn't have been surprised. Tatenashi would then proceed to blow up and call him out that he's lying and that she really is sorry for her actions. This is when the partnership improves Does this answer everything? Any contradictions or something I missed? |
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Of course I'll probably be mauled by the Tatenashi fanboys seeing her apologize for the crossdressing and not the other way around I'll probably get messages like "how dare Irish not apologize when it's his fault"
I love deconstruction destroys that pesky fridge logic that people complain about all the time. Can the IS be hacked or distrupted at least temporarily? I can ise that for combat later in Irish and Kyuukai's segments. I also plan to have Irish willing to hit girls back outside of combat unlike Ichika and Kyuukai which will get even MORE complaints that Irish is some kind of wife beater. |
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