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ganbaru · 2010-06-04, 22:22

@ MikoMiko as Evil Rick said , the colors are too pale
@Namiey Why not reduce the oppacity of the background text?
@Naoto way too chaotic
@Lord Crow a border would help

Haladflire65 · 2010-06-04, 22:26

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Originally Posted by Lord Crow

Why do you have to be so good? The sparkle on her glasses is a little much though.

Mine (DBZ stlye for the lulz

):

I've gotten into a bad habit of working with my sigs at 2-3 times the size they'll be when finished. They tend not to scale too well.

I agree with everyone else, a border would hugely improve it and maybe some text, too? It's otherwise really cool, IMO

Squarecrow · 2010-06-05, 01:17

Tweaked:

It may be a little bit too silly.

Evil Rick · 2010-06-05, 02:36

Quote:

Originally Posted by Drake

My first attempt so far.

<3 Mari

Looks good, really good, but I like a lot more your current Rei Sig

Quote:

Originally Posted by Haladflire65

Thanks for the critique, Rick

I took out the lighting and reworked the border... Does it look any better?

Yep, looks better, wuite an improvement from previous version

Quote:

Originally Posted by felix

final entry

It's a nice style but I dunno abou the black line going over the render, also the NERV logo looks a bit thicky.

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Originally Posted by Naoto

thanks for your advice, Halad and Rick

fixed it.

Quite an improvement from porevious version yet I would get rid of the outer glow at the text, at least I would use other color instead of that green and that aquua blue... maybe a blu more similar to Rei's hair...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lord Crow

Tweaked:

It may be a little bit too silly.

I think it looks good. It's really nice.

Rikimtasu · 2010-06-05, 04:52

Just watched EVA,It is amazing!So heres what i done for this month SOTM.

v1,without any good idea on border yet,CC is needed for me^^

ganbaru · 2010-06-05, 06:39

@ Rikimtasu I am not sure about the usefulness of those 3 empty squares and the very small text

My second try, insted of removing it, I modified the ''errasing '' C&c would be welcome.

Rikimtasu · 2010-06-05, 08:09

Quote:

Originally Posted by ganbaru

My second try, insted of removing it, I modified the ''errasing '' C&c would be welcome.

Looked better than v1.

felix · 2010-06-05, 08:30

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

I dunno abou the black line going over the render,

Working as intended.

Zwei · 2010-06-05, 11:29

First 2 versions:

C&C welcome.

Sabriel · 2010-06-05, 12:30

I really love the 1st version. No text suits the piece and colours are amazing. Can't see your second one though.

Here's my attempt:

Squarecrow · 2010-06-05, 15:08

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sabriel

Here's my attempt:

Spoiler for space:

The text is a little fuzzy and I think having some of the scanlines going across the render would help it blend better.

Your sig gave me a little inspiration. Wanted to try out some scanlines so I whipped up something simple:

Bottom left corner isn't what I hoped for.

Haladflire65 · 2010-06-05, 21:45

3rd revision:

Comparison with V2:

ganbaru · 2010-06-05, 22:27

Zwei I would suggest something betweem the 2 as the first seem compacted to me and the second too high
Sabiel, the background is interesting but the text need some work
Lord Crow is it me or there's something around her ?

milan kyuubi · 2010-06-05, 23:31

My entry.... had to decrease quality for at least 50% because of rules (only 50kb aloved).
Anyway......

Naoto · 2010-06-06, 01:47

my first sign is too chaotic so I remake.
maybe I was too greedy

Rikimtasu · 2010-06-06, 01:49

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zwei

First 2 versions:

C&C welcome.

v1 doesn't looked different compare to v2,beside the sizes.Both are pretty good.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sabriel

Here's my attempt:

Having the text without those scan-line will be better,other wise it looked ok.

Quote:

Originally Posted by milan kyuubi

My entry.... had to decrease quality for at least 50% because of rules (only 50kb aloved).
Anyway......

The spatter background...isn't really my fav taste of BG.
There's allway saves for web as your option in PS.

milan kyuubi · 2010-06-06, 03:24

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rikimtasu

The spatter background...isn't really my fav taste of BG.
There's allway saves for web as your option in PS.

It was accidently, I was going for somrthing else but in the end it turned like that. I alvaus loved pics with such BG but thats just me.
Thanks for the advice btv, it helped a lot

V2. of the first one, i improved it's quality a bit.

Tried something new here.

Miko Miko · 2010-06-06, 07:15

FINAL ENTRY

Thoughts?

Haladflire65 · 2010-06-06, 09:33

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miko Miko

New Attempt:

Thoughts?

Looks much better, but the right side of the render looks a bit messy.

Ver. 4!

Mekdra · 2010-06-06, 09:51

hi hi here my firts intent

or

I'm still not sure which to choose

bye

2010-06-04, 22:22	Link #21
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	@ MikoMiko as Evil Rick said , the colors are too pale @Namiey Why not reduce the oppacity of the background text? @Naoto way too chaotic @Lord Crow a border would help __________________

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Rikimtasu .... Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Malaysia Age: 33	Just watched EVA,It is amazing!So heres what i done for this month SOTM. v1,without any good idea on border yet,CC is needed for me^^ __________________

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ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	@ Rikimtasu I am not sure about the usefulness of those 3 empty squares and the very small text My second try, insted of removing it, I modified the ''errasing '' C&c would be welcome. __________________

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Zwei Natural Born Killer Graphic Designer Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Roanapur Age: 32	First 2 versions: C&C welcome. __________________ Last edited by Zwei; 2010-06-05 at 13:19.

2010-06-05, 12:30	Link #30
Sabriel ~ Graphic Designer Join Date: May 2010	I really love the 1st version. No text suits the piece and colours are amazing. Can't see your second one though. Here's my attempt:

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Haladflire65 Senior Member Artist Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Normandy SR-2 Age: 29	3rd revision: Comparison with V2: __________________

2010-06-05, 22:27	Link #33
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Zwei I would suggest something betweem the 2 as the first seem compacted to me and the second too high Sabiel, the background is interesting but the text need some work Lord Crow is it me or there's something around her ? __________________

2010-06-05, 23:31	Link #34
milan kyuubi Call me MK! :) Graphic Designer Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: The top of the world. Age: 34	My entry.... had to decrease quality for at least 50% because of rules (only 50kb aloved). Anyway...... __________________ My Twitter account! *Thanks to* Godlike1889 *for the sig! Last edited by milan kyuubi; 2010-06-06 at 00:04.*

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Naoto Here we go!? Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Vietnam Age: 28	my first sign is too chaotic so I remake. maybe I was too greedy Last edited by Naoto; 2010-06-15 at 15:15.

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Miko Miko Imouto-Chan♥ Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: England Age: 30	FINAL ENTRY Thoughts? __________________ Last edited by Miko Miko; 2010-06-06 at 11:01.

2010-06-06, 09:51	Link #40
Mekdra ImageM@ster Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Argentina	hi hi here my firts intent or I'm still not sure which to choose bye __________________ sincerely the Otaku / Gamer Mekdra