2012-02-03, 00:19 | Link #20621 | |
~`Seito Kaichō`~
Join Date: Sep 2011
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That would be... uhhh... weird
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2012-02-03, 00:25 | Link #20624 |
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@ Rain - I want to avoid the whole "I curse like a sailor" stereotype. He's too busy thinking of a way not to get shot. Thankfully, Ichika smashes the wall in the lower floor and distracts him long enough to get close.
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2012-02-03, 00:28 | Link #20625 | |
~`Seito Kaichō`~
Join Date: Sep 2011
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By the way, what's their ages again? Charles, Shouta, Kazuma and Yuu? And still, thank God they're not in the Bathroom of the dorms
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2012-02-03, 00:30 | Link #20627 |
Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Eratas: An interesting way to portray such a scene would be having him work over possible scenarios proceeding, then showing the possibilty of failure in each one.
So you could have him imagine a short action based on his environment and what he's fighting, and then procede with him imagining his scenario self getting riddled with holes and/or failing at what he was trying to do, putting emphasis on him being pragmatic. And when he quickly thinks of one that has a good chance of success, have him act on it. It may or may not work, but it'll show he gives rational thought instead of an impression of being a death-seeker. |
2012-02-03, 00:33 | Link #20628 | |
~`Seito Kaichō`~
Join Date: Sep 2011
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I'm still 10% of chapter 6 of Everything is Radiant, I can't think of better scenes ._.
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2012-02-03, 00:36 | Link #20629 |
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@ Rain - He's not a death seeker Not height scared of death and actively looking for it are different. Anyway, I can't make the chapter too long since after the Ichika and Irish fight, I have to do the death scene for Michael.
@ Yachi - What thing? Side note - What do you need help with?
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2012-02-03, 00:40 | Link #20630 | |
~`Seito Kaichō`~
Join Date: Sep 2011
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Spoiler for EiR:
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2012-02-03, 00:40 | Link #20631 |
Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Eratas: For Micheal's death scene (I have two friends name Micheal, so when I wrote "Michael's death scene" in an earlier post, he thought I had turned him into a character and made an elaborate death for him. ), are you gonna use the one you posted up here?
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2012-02-03, 00:42 | Link #20632 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Bikini IS suit is a custom IS suit (the wearer is obviously a rep or rep candidate)
It BOOST 200% HIGHER SYN RATE (due to more skin exposed)! ======== I think I will modify the story I currently had... little to commemorate Bikini IS suit
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2012-02-03, 00:43 | Link #20633 |
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@ Rain - I'm gonna add more details. Specifically: He almost dies no less than three times in the entire segment. So it looks like he's gonna make it.....then he gets shot when he tried to explain
@ Treme - Will you re-do the entire story? @ Yachi - Continue. It's better than timeskipping.
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2012-02-03, 00:56 | Link #20638 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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@Eratas: Not entire story.
Just additional stuff. Think of it as add-on/DLC to the Main campaign. The main plot remains the same. On the other hand...things like that make male OC fun to play with..... (being accused of being a pervert).
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2012-02-03, 01:00 | Link #20640 |
Head of FRACTURE R&D
Join Date: Oct 2011
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@ Eratas: Nope, I meant the first chapter. But since the protagonist's travelling across the multiverse, his homeworld is the first to be brushed up on.
The next world is going to be an alternate universe, about an entire miniarc crammed into a chapter. Each of these worlds has the potential to be actual fics, with the exception of the times they visit canon places. |
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