2012-02-10, 08:46 | Link #21581 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Where did I get it? When I re-watched Gundam SEED, the subtext between Kira and Cagalli is extremely strong. THis pairing is the one introduced me to shipping, in fact. I was so hear-broken at the reveal about their blood relation and...
When she read through V6.... Tri joked about pairing Ichika and M, and that it'll extremely funny, you can guess where this leads to
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2012-02-10, 08:51 | Link #21583 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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Mostly thinking about the lack of Imouto character. Not as in tsundere, jealous little sister. But a spoiled sister who trying to act independent. At this point, I haven't think about drama, AT ALL.
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2012-02-10, 08:59 | Link #21585 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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Of course, it's a plagiarism of Novel chapter. When I wrote chapter 4, I was thinking about not portraying Ichika as pathetic, but not stu-ish either, and boy it delivers. Chapter 4 is the only one who is 100% original.
The rest of chapter often contain 5-10% words taken out of canon, with slight changes in terms of context and delivery.
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2012-02-10, 09:02 | Link #21586 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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@ Senpai - Did you plan for it to be a serious story to begin with or just twincest antics?
Side note - What are the most noticeable physical changes for boys and girls in puberty? I'm planning another segment for a teaching class.
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2012-02-10, 09:06 | Link #21587 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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I planned it as SERIOUS romantic story between the twins with a good dose of action, the comedy comes from the supporting harem antic.
Note - It's called secondary sexual characteristic, such as boy growing muscles and their voicebox went broken (feeling itch or painful, and has weird voice for a while), female growing chest and their body turned from rectangle into hourglass. Both also migth grow some hair in places. Google it in case of mistake on my part.
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2012-02-10, 09:12 | Link #21589 |
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@ Senpai - So everything was planned from the beginning?
Side note - Planned a parody bit: Due to required subjects, they have to teach the class about puberty. Since females were already covered, they try males. First Maya tries to use Irish as a template....but he has none of the obvious granted such as wider shoulders or muscles. Then comes Ichika....
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2012-02-10, 09:26 | Link #21593 |
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Nobody gets naked. Ichika and Maya complain about it since that would be harassment. Irish does nearly take off his pants, but he gets stopped when he was halfway done. Considering his appearance, that's not really Fanservice.
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2012-02-10, 09:38 | Link #21595 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Nothing done due to Kingdom of Amalur.....
Anyway trivial information (to kick start the engine (hopefully)): Reason for Sligis' age: A young teacher who is close to the student's age (giving off a feeling that he is on their side/ understand them). I tried to lower his age as much as possible but there is still a limit to how low I can go Nationality will also be changed ==== Time for random nonsense Spoiler for Don't have to read this unless you are bored:
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2012-02-10, 20:41 | Link #21597 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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@ Eras
At worst Chifuyu dope slap him as always, and really, would Yamada DARE to tell him fully naked? Maybe just his upper body @ Age Erm... that's.... quite a paranoia there. @ Demi Assuming it's very existence is really important to the Country, such as Dunois, then they have a good chance of having one.
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2012-02-10, 22:02 | Link #21599 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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Think like this: Tabane spread the core by herself (from the implication) to various countries, corporation AND private organization. Therefore, owning an I.S. core, they'll start their work on developing I.S., not inversely.
So, nope, a corporation showing interest of developing I.S. tech without owning one in the first place? At best they could be sub-contractors.
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2012-02-11, 00:24 | Link #21600 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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is it plausible scenario for a corporation to be a sub-contractor with official field tests done using some other group's IS. However most of their tech is secretly used to support an underground group/terrorists like Phantom Task. Phantom Task agrees to obtain an IS core for the company, even just one from an uchigane. So the company has an illegal IS that no one knows about.
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