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[omega253]

Originally Posted by silverexorcist

Third chapter of A Certain Collection of Events is up (fourth, if you count the introduction). I need more time for this...

Excellent comedy material as usual.

And am I the only one who gets the feeling that Yoshikawa is serious about lab coats like the Delta Trio is serious about fetishes?

[SmokinFerret88]

Originally Posted by omega253

Excellent comedy material as usual.

And am I the only one who gets the feeling that Yoshikawa is serious about lab coats like the Delta Trio is serious about fetishes?

Yoshikawa is mad scien-tist. It so coooool~, sonofabitch!

Sorry, I couldn't resist.

I'd say no, your not alone. Kinda have that vibe about her.

[silverexorcist]

Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

Yoshikawa is mad scien-tist. It so coooool~, sonofabitch!

This. I should have referenced this. I can just see Yoshikawa and Heaven Canceller doing the back to back pose in their lab coats. What a wasted opportunity XD

[omega253]

Originally Posted by silverexorcist

This. I should have referenced this. I can just see Yoshikawa and Heaven Canceller doing the back to back pose in their lab coats. What a wasted opportunity XD

You can still put it in a future chapter! So don't worry about it. Just write what feels natural.

[demino_hellsin]

“Phew”

Splash...

The bathroom is quiet, and its filled with steam. The cold autumn air quickly condenses the hot water of the bath. Vento enjoys the peace, but can't help frowning at how she knows why the steam exists. She hated science. The silence is golden to her, again it is routine. The boy knows well not to make a peep after angering her so. She made sure that was drilled into his head after throwing him out with a few hits for good measure. She dips into the bath, her hair a wet mess as they dangle in scraggly strands. She is a woman of piety, not a holy woman, but one devoted to her doctrines still. And yet she has lost her modesty too many times to count. She tells herself that it's that accursed right arm that undoes divine blessings from on high. In the end, she still blames the boy himself.

On a whim, Vento of the Front cups her breasts. She feels around her narrow waist and the flat stomach and eventually to the whole of her short wiry frame. Her hands reach her face and she can't help but give a bitter smile. Was she beautiful? She never asked that question, she never wondered. In all her years on this green earth, she has never thought to question such a topic. Maybe she was too thin, maybe her face was too gaunt. The piercings already broke away at her face's natural gentleness and removing them would just explose empty holes in her flesh. She doesn't know why she asks. She doesn't know why she cares. But still she wonders, still she cries. She cries for all the things she gave up on. She cries for the things she never cared for but suddenly wondered about. She cries because she had not really thought about the kind of woman she wanted to be, over the kind of revenge she wanted to inflict.

This isn't routine.

Vento can't stay in the bath forever, so she dips into the bath to wash her tears. She soaps up and washes herself clean in both mind and body. After rinsing and drying, she confronts her clothes. There really isn'yt much to confront when it comes to clothes. Normally one would just wear them and be done with it, and so would Vento. This was different. She remembers something about her clothes, she remembers where they've been from. Particularly one specific article.

“Th-That idiot.”, the woman grinds out as she glares at her panties. A certain spot quite clearly wet. It was a sacred spot and it was the worst place to be. She would like to assume that the wet spot is water splashed on it. She wants to but her mind flashes back to her clothes sprawled over a terrified boy, this particularly lacey number practically stuffed in his mouth. This one spot basically being kissed by his lips and clenched between his teeth. The thought sends a shiver down her spine.

Vento doesn't want to wear it, but she has to. There was no other choice, in both literal and figurative sense. Because Vento of the Front, only had three changes of underwear available to her. In the past month, she had only been able to obtain a meager wardrobe from the chicken scratch in Kamijou Touma's wallet. Forget shopping, the boy had to pay for the food of the ultimate freeloader's stomach, the Index Librorum Prohibitorum. It was miraculous he could afford the mid to high fashion marketed clothes Vento personally picked out without having them eat nothing but rice and tea for the past month.

Bottomline: It was wear this or go commando.

Mortifying did not begin to describe her situation. Vento earnestly wished that her current circumstances were different.

[allfictions]

Originally Posted by Ilidsor

Would anybody mind telling me if I'm getting Misaki right in this:

Spoiler for Toums' Busy Day 9:

“Why do you have to show up again?” Touma complained.

“Shut up! Do you have something better to do then talk to me?”

“Well… not right now.”

“What’s with that response!?” Sarah Stone yelled at him. The first two times they had met she had attacked him, but now she was talking to him as if they were old friends.

“Nothing. So? What happened with your brother?”

Sarah lost all of her energy and her face became a mask. “He… he wouldn’t tell me. He made up a story but… it was obviously a lie. I don’t…”

“I’m sorry.” Touma said with as much sympathy as he could. He couldn’t imagine what finding out that a family member that you had looked up to your whole life was a criminal would be like…. Well aside from that moment during the Angel Fall incident where he had suspected his father but that didn’t really count since from his perspective he had just met the man.

“Yeah… It’s fine. I guess I never really knew him in the first place.”

“If you ever need any help, just let me know.” Touma offered a little awkwardly. He wasn’t entirely sure what to say.

Luckily it seemed to be enough. Sarah smiled at him and said. “Thank you. I will.”

For some reason Touma couldn’t help but think that she looked oddly cute.

“Hmm? What’s this romantic moment?” A new voice cut in.

“Romantic moment?” Sarah yelled with a little blush. “What are you talking about!?”

“Isn’t that obvious?” Shokuhou Misaki, the number five level five, asked. “I’m talking about how you two are flirting so much.

“Who's flirting!?”

Misaki grinned at her and ran over to Touma, grabbing onto his left arm like a lover. “Oh? So you aren’t interested in him at all? Not even a little bit? So it doesn’t matter to you if I do this?”

“Not at all!” Sarah hotly denied.

Misaki pulled out one of her remotes from her bag. “Tell the truth.” She commanded in a sing-song voice.

“It bothers me a little. I think he’s kind of cute and find you holding yourself against him kind of irritating.” Sarah said. “Wait. What just happened!? Why did I say that!? What did you make me do!?”

“I just made you tell the truth. It’s not my fault you said something like that.”

“It’s totally your fault!”

“Now, how should I punish you for lying? How about you show your panties?”

“Don’t just ignore what I said! Wait a minute, what are you doing!?” To her horror her hands were reaching down towards her skirt and then slowly pulling it upwards.

“That’s enough!” Touma finally yelled out. Just before something horrible could happen he grabbed Sarah’s arm with his right hand. Her hands stopped rising and she dropped her skirt.

“That was too far!” Sarah yelled. A sword made of fire materialized in her hands and she charged at Misaki, attempting to skewer her on it.

“Stop.” Was all Misaki needed to say. With the push of a button Sarah halted in mid-step and held completely still, her sword of fire still burning in her hands.

“What are you doing to me!?” Sarah demanded. “How is this happening?”

“This is my power.” Misaki explained. “I can control people’s minds.”

“What a despicable power!”

“How rude. Am I the one who just tried to burn another person to death? Isn’t that much more despicable?”

“You deserved it! How could you try and make me do something like that!?”

“You are very quick to get angry aren’t you?” Misaki said. “Now it’s time for your punishment for trying to kill me. Showing your panties isn’t enough so how about I have you strip down completely?”

“I will not!” Sarah yelled. “Even if I can’t move I can still do this!” The sword of fire turned into a more normal looking flame that shot out from her hands at Misaki.

The sound of shattering glass filled the air as Touma stopped the ball of fire from burning Misaki to death. “Stop that!” He yelled. “What the hell do you think you’re doing!? She could have died!”

Misaki clung to Touma’s back. “Thank you. That’s twice in one day you’ve saved my life.”

“You stop it too! Why are you antagonizing her like that?”

“What are you talking about? Don’t you want to see more of her?”

“As if I would!”

Misaki skipped over to Sarah and pressed a button on her remote. “Make an erotic pose.” She said and Sarah had no choice but to follow the order.

“I’ll burn you to cinders!”

“Stop trying to attack me.” Misaki commanded. “I don’t know how you’re making fire when your mind says you aren’t an esper… but as long as I use that command it doesn’t really matter.” She struck a cute pose beside Sarah. “So, how about it? Would you like to enjoy both of us?” She asked Touma.

“I won’t allow that!” Sarah yelled out. “I don’t want my first time to be like this!”

“Who said anything about sex?” Misaki taunted. “I was just going to let him kiss us a few times. What a perverted mind you have.”

“Anybody would assume that you were talking about that! You’re a pervert! A complete pervert!”

“Who’s a pervert? Why don’t you tell us what your most perverted thought is?”

“I really want to try doing that on the beach. No! No, I definitely don’t want that! You just made me say that with your power!”

“There’s no point in denying it to me.”

“I’ll kill you! I swear I’ll kill you eventually!”

“Don’t be silly, how do you intend to kill a level five like me?”

“I’ll find a way! I’m a magician! I can do anything with enough preparation!”

“Magic? Are you really going to try and stop me with those kinds of cheap tricks?”

Touma backed away. Slowly. The girls were so caught up yelling at each other that they didn’t even notice until he was completely gone.

“What the heck was that?” He asked himself when he was finally alone. “Such misfortune.”

Normally I'm pretty confident that I get her right, but I'm not so sure here. Any opinions?

Agh, I came in too late, I wanted to tell Ilidsor that I somewhat has a problem with this snip, but seems like he will update it today. Oh well, let's do it anyway.

Besides the thing with Touma touching Sandra's arm to dispell the mental control (shouldn't he touch her head? Makes more sense to me), I wanted to adress something that also bothered me in the chapter Misaki first appeared: why is Touma not interfering? I'm pretty sure he doesn't approve of someone being controlled against their will, or someone abusing their powers, and in the 2 instances Misaki did so, Touma either stand idly by, or give her the equivalent of a inconsequential slap on the wrist (''no, you shouldn't do that''), but nothing really convincing. That...doesn't match his personnality, you would expect him to hold Misaki thus preventing her from doing this with a power, not just say a weak ''no'' and letting her do as she pleases anyway.

Originally Posted by SmokinFerret88

Might I ask why you don't like it?

Why I don't like it? Simple, pretty much chapter 2:

After all, Touma had achieved something that no human could ever dream of achieving.

The One Above God.

It did not come easy, but he succeeded.

However, he no longer possessed such an incredible power anymore. A single, decisive strike by a Magic God using a legendary weapon had stripped away his power. It was his misfortune that the Magic God actually landed the strike on him.

I failed to change anything.

His purpose was to create a miracle that will change the world for the better, as well as for his own personal purposes. But it seems as though people are particularly resistant to change, so everybody turned against him.
...
Even if I wanted to be the hero I was in the past, I no longer have the power to do so.

Touma felt naked and lonely. His powers and that Invisible Thing inside his right hand was no longer there. Although his right hand still had his regenerative properties, it no longer had a meaning if there was nothing to seal.

He had lost 98% of his original power. The only power he still had was the right hand who could negate any supernatural phenomenon.

Random past overpowering which has no purpose in advancing the plot, at all.

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

snip

Nice, as usual

[Draco Spirit]

Hi guys!

Got a few fanfic idea in my head, wonder what other people think of there potential and possible opportunities/ problems that could arise?

1) A Certain Academy City Online World

A light hearted parody fanfic based around the Railgun girls becoming stuck inside a game full of fantasy and sci-fi clichés, mostly leaning on Final Fantasy and SAO, but with others filling out the jokes.

2) Railgun Reloaded

After a unpleasant event, Mikoto wakes up to find the world she once knew, is all but gone, with only the MISAKA Network remaining. Future based and pretty grim with a strong focus on grief, spiritual themes and family ties, as well as playing around with the basic idea that the MISAKA Network is basically immortal as long as new Sisters are created now and again.. and the logical consequences of that.

3) Telling Mum

A Mikoto/Kuroko romance fanfic that focuses less on the kissing and more on Mikoto coming to terms with the fact she has a girlfriend. Humor mixed with a bit of seriousness.

[demino_hellsin]

3...

@allfictions: thanks. I'll be posting up Vento's chapter after finishing the last scene. Hope you'll like it.

[Draco Spirit]

Oh and one more that bouncing around my head...

4) The Last Days of Academy City

A action/mystery themed story with a side dish of Accelerator/Saten romance (because why not? ) as a era comes to a end and Crowley's plans come to fruit. Would likely include character death.

[Ilidsor]

Originally Posted by allfictions

Agh, I came in too late, I wanted to tell Ilidsor that I somewhat has a problem with this snip, but seems like he will update it today. Oh well, let's do it anyway.

Besides the thing with Touma touching Sandra's arm to dispell the mental control (shouldn't he touch her head? Makes more sense to me), I wanted to adress something that also bothered me in the chapter Misaki first appeared: why is Touma not interfering? I'm pretty sure he doesn't approve of someone being controlled against their will, or someone abusing their powers, and in the 2 instances Misaki did so, Touma either stand idly by, or give her the equivalent of a inconsequential slap on the wrist (''no, you shouldn't do that''), but nothing really convincing. That...doesn't match his personnality, you would expect him to hold Misaki thus preventing her from doing this with a power, not just say a weak ''no'' and letting her do as she pleases anyway.

Thanks for the input. The touching her face instead of her arm thing should be easy to change. As for the other thing, Touma's not interfering for two reasons. First of all is that he really doesn't want to get involved as soon as he heard Misaki say she was going to strip Sarah. That was a major red flag for him and he wants to get the hell away. The other is that I don't think he's as against mind control as you say he is, he seemed fine with talking to that mind controlled girl Misaki was using in NT7. Basically I think he's fine with it as long as he's knows it's not permanent and that Misaki is just joking around. For those other two girls who attacked Misaki, Misaki was breaking into their heads often enough that they were willing to attack her over it. For Sarah, Misaki is making her do some embarrassing things this once and then tomorrow (he assumes) Sarah will be out of the city and back home.

Also the new chapter won't be comin out today since I've got some stuff to deal with first.

And also also I vote for number 1 Draco Spirit

[Kira477]

Originally Posted by Draco Spirit

Hi guys!

Got a few fanfic idea in my head, wonder what other people think of there potential and possible opportunities/ problems that could arise?

1) A Certain Academy City Online World

A light hearted parody fanfic based around the Railgun girls becoming stuck inside a game full of fantasy and sci-fi clichés, mostly leaning on Final Fantasy and SAO, but with others filling out the jokes.

2) Railgun Reloaded

After a unpleasant event, Mikoto wakes up to find the world she once knew, is all but gone, with only the MISAKA Network remaining. Future based and pretty grim with a strong focus on grief, spiritual themes and family ties, as well as playing around with the basic idea that the MISAKA Network is basically immortal as long as new Sisters are created now and again.. and the logical consequences of that.

3) Telling Mum

A Mikoto/Kuroko romance fanfic that focuses less on the kissing and more on Mikoto coming to terms with the fact she has a girlfriend. Humor mixed with a bit of seriousness.

1) Would be the most fun idea in my opinion. Instead of being stuck, you can say that Academy City has a VR system and those girls are playing games in that system if you want. Have you watched Boku wa Tomodachi ga Sukunai Season 1 Episode 2? Yeah something like that.

2) I would suggest you write it if you have a decent plot already in mind, because I get the impression that things may get really complicated.

3)For the serious part, you could partially explore the topic on bisexual psychology regarding Mikoto. Like, does she like Touma more or Kuroko more etc etc.

Originally Posted by allfictions

Random past overpowering which has no purpose in advancing the plot, at all.

It's there for character establishment. Basically I'm setting the groundwork for Touma as a character and potential plot progression, which is why I wrote this part at Chapter 2. And, while it may seem to have no purpose in advancing the plot, it'll explain a lot of important things later on in this fic, so I have to write that out as early as possible to prevent any Deus Ex Machina.

Anyway, thanks for feedback. You made me re-think quite a lot of things that I should revise. Especially in Chapter 3 I suppose, but it ended up being nothing related to do with what you pointed out strangely.

[Shockz]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Hi there Shockz Compared to SB a lot of us here might be a bit more lenient and/or have differing opinions about what particularly is a bad thing for Raildex, so hopefully you won't be too put off by sticking around here and reading some of our comments

Not at all; I try to be cognizant of the fact that what I like isn't what everyone else likes; and inversely, the stuff that makes my eyes twitch and my blood pressure rise a bit is probably totally fine in many people's books. And I'm actually quite enjoying the NT books; NT3 is probably my favorite in the series so far (narrowly edging out 12) and I'm about 20-30 pages into NT4. Between NT and Railgun (both the manga and the anime-original stuff), a lot of the issues I had with the earlier parts of the series are at least partially resolved. (On the other hand, I now have to figure out how to top the finale of Railgun S while keeping things within the parameters I've set for the story. I have a few ideas there, though...)

As far as my story goes, the only criticism I've found to be especially unfair is that I'm making it excessively dark, or that I'm sucking all the fun out of it. I won't deny that I'm writing something dark, but let's not forget that canon gets pretty damn dark, too! The Sisters arc involved 10,000 teenage girls being brutally murdered as a plot point, after all. And I've tried to keep things lighthearted whenever the shit's not actively hitting the fan.

On that note, Chapter 10 (or 11, depending on whether you count the interlude) of In Memoriam is now up! Enjoy!

[demino_hellsin]

What would Saten-san's persona be?

[MrTerrorist]

Originally Posted by TkMacintosh

Thanks for liking the snippet guys, but...I won't be writing any more of that. That was all that came to me.

Once I got the basic idea down and the snippet written up, I figured I could take a crack at it and get it out.

If anybody wants to continue the snippet, then be my guest. I have no problem with it what-so-ever.

Oh i have one.

Spoiler for length:

"I can't believe Komoe-sensei made us stay late." sighed Frenda as she walk with her friends Saiai and Rikou along with her younger sister Fremea.

"I super know. But you know, it was kinda your fault that we had to stay and help Tessou-sensei and Komoe-sensei clean the school." reply Saiai with a smirk.

"No it wasn't!" Frenda quickly replied with an embarrass face. "Basically it was that blue-haired pervert's fault. If he wasn't trying to stalk Fremea, none of this would have happen!"

The Blue haired pervert that Frenda was talking about was a teenager from a certain highschool known as Aogami. Normally, Frenda would just ignore this weird looking guy but when Mugino's new boyfriend, Touma learned that Frenda had a younger sister, Touma gave some talk with her, telling her to be careful about Aogami being near her sister since Aogami was an Otaku pervert with lots of fetishes, lolis being one of them. So when Frenda, Saiai and Rikou walk home that afternoon to pick up Fremea and saw Aogami talking to her little sister, Frenda, like any worried big sister would do, immediately walk to him and slap him.

Normally, these kind of things would end with the big sister telling the pervert to stay away from her sister and leaving. But Frenda decided Aoagmi deserve an extra punishment, which in her case, was a grenade. Thankfully, Tessou-sensei was there and manage to stop Frenda from using the grenade. Unfortunately, Tessou threw the grenade away, believing it was unarmed but it exploded and blew up a part of the walls of the certain highschool. Komoe sensei was not please and scolded the three girls for bringing weapons to a school. As punishment, they were ordered to help the clean up (Team ITEM thankfully had the money to fix the wall.) which took them all afternoon.

Now tired and hungry, the girls just wanted nothing more to have a rest and eat.

Saiai noticed it was already night. "You know, it's already night. Usually Mugino would be Super piss about us coming this late."

"True." Answered Frenda "But thankfully, we got that Kamijou guy to make sure that won't happen."

Both Rikou and Fremea nodded in agreement. "Of course Sis! With Touma around, Mugino-nee-chan becomes nicer."

"Yes. Kamijou-san has become a good influence for Mugino."

Ever since Shizuri meet Touma, her heart skipped a beat and had a strange feeling every time she saw him. At first, she thought she hated him but as both of them continue seeing each other, she realized she was in love with him. Shizuri was afraid he would reject her if he learned about the things she done but Touma, a kind hearted man he was, did not see that. To him, she was not the dangerous Level 5 Meltdowner but just plain Shizuri Mugino, the girl that he loves. Since admitting their feelings for each other, Shizuri became a nicer, kinder person and was taking least missions for the Board of Directors. Team ITEM could never thank Touma enough for what he did for their leader.

The girls finally arrived to their apartment but notice something strange. Even though there were signs that Touma and Mugino were inside thanks to their shoes, none of the lights inside were on.

"Whoa. That's weird. Why aren't the lights on? Is anyone home?"

"Saiai, Mugino and Kamijou's shoes are inside so they must be but it looks like no one's here. Did they basically leave to eat out or something?"

"I don't know. I think we should-" When Saiai turn to Rikou, who earlier had the same stoic expression, suddenly gave a look of horror, which scared both Saiai and Frenda.

Rikou was using her tracking abilities to see if anyone was inside the apartment, which there was except her ability also told her what else was going on, the revelation horrifying her.

Rikou quickly put her hands on Fremea shoulder with a strange look to the others.

"Guys? Why don't we just go out and eat, like now?'

"Rikou, why are you giving us that super weird look?" worried Saiai.

"Rikou, your scaring us. We can't leave until we know if Mugino's at home or not." Frenda felt the same as well.

"No. We leave. Now!"

"Why are you so-" but it was too late. Rikou wanted to spared the others over what was about to happen. She knew it was coming and tried to have her friends leave before they hear it but it was too late. The only thing Rikou could do was spare Fremea from this experience by covering her ears.

On that day, Rikou, Frenda and Saiai would experience a horror they wish they didn't know. A horror they would like to believe was a bad dream but sadly, it was fact. And that horror came with a scream.

YES! YESSSS!! YESSSSSS!!! OH YESSSS!!!! TOUMA-SAMA! PLEASE GIVE ME MORE OF YOUR PUNISHMENT OF LOVE!!

NO! EHH!! IF....YOU WANT.....IT!.....YOU HAVE BEGGED AND...UGHHH...SAY PLEASE! AHH!

TOUMA-SAMA PLEASE!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! MUGINO HAS BEEN A BAD GIRL AND WANTS YOUR SPECIAL PUNISHMENT OF LOVE!! PLEASE!!! GIVE IT ME!!!

VERY WELL!!! THIS KAMIJOU IS ABOUT TO GIVE YOU YOUR SPECIAL PUNISHMENT OF SUPER LOVE!!!! HERE I-

AHHHH!!!!!! YES! YES!!! OH MY GOD YESSSSS!!!!!!!!! THATS IT!!!! MORE!! GIVE ME MORE!!!

"THEN I'LL BREAK THAT ILLUSION OF UNFULFILLED SATISFACTION!!! YAAAAHHHH!!!!

TOUMA-SAMA! TOUMA-SAMAAAAAAA!!!!!!
SHIZURI!!! SHIZURI!!!!!!!!!!

Saiai and Frenda gave each other a dumbstruck and finally realize why Rikou was so adamant in leaving the apartment.

"Dinner out ain't so bad?"

"Indeed. Let's go!"

The four of them left the apartment quickly to any family restaurant that was far away with an clueless Fremea wondering why were her sister, Rikou and Saiai had these embarrassed look on their faces.

"Oh God that was embarrassing. Like super embarrassing. I hope no one else heard that."


-Meanwhile-

"Hey Misaki. Did hear that? I think i heard a scream."

"No, Mikoto. It's just your imagination. Come back to bed. I'm lonely."

_

"Kuroko, was that you making that noise?"

"Awaki, I'm next door inside our bedroom, tied up naked and wearing a blindfold. Am i in any position to do that?

"Sorry. Just wait for a few minutes while i find the whip and candles."

_

"So Tou-san, looks like somebody outside is screaming with pleasure. Wanna experience the same thing?"

"Oh? So will this little teasing dance in your Qipao your giving me will entice me. Well do your Worst!"

_

"Psst. Hey Kikyou. You know, Accelerator and Worst are out and Last Order is with that Uiharu and Saten. Since we're both alone, why don't we-"

"Aiho. I just came back from a 10 hour live e-conference with Nunotaba on how we can stop Janie and Febri's bodies from secreting poison in their bodies permanently. It's late, i'm tired and have a headache and so i just want to sleep. So no, we are no doing it."

"Your such a spoilsport."

"......If you behave, i might wear that erotic lingerie you like next time."

"........And that's why i love you."

I would like to thank all the ToAru fanfic writers for giving me this weird idea.

[rubix22]

Quick question for curiosity's sake. Do the novels implicitly state that Accelerator is of Japanese descent?

[TkMacintosh]

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

Oh i have one.

Spoiler for length:

"I can't believe Komoe-sensei made us stay late." sighed Frenda as she walk with her friends Saiai and Rikou along with her younger sister Fremea.

"I super know. But you know, it was kinda your fault that we had to stay and help Tessou-sensei and Komoe-sensei clean the school." reply Saiai with a smirk.

"No it wasn't!" Frenda quickly replied with an embarrass face. "Basically it was that blue-haired pervert's fault. If he wasn't trying to stalk Fremea, none of this would have happen!"

The Blue haired pervert that Frenda was talking about was a teenager from a certain highschool known as Aogami. Normally, Frenda would just ignore this weird looking guy but when Mugino's new boyfriend, Touma learned that Frenda had a younger sister, Touma gave some talk with her, telling her to be careful about Aogami being near her sister since Aogami was an Otaku pervert with lots of fetishes, lolis being one of them. So when Frenda, Saiai and Rikou walk home that afternoon to pick up Fremea and saw Aogami talking to her little sister, Frenda, like any worried big sister would do, immediately walk to him and slap him.

Normally, these kind of things would end with the big sister telling the pervert to stay away from her sister and leaving. But Frenda decided Aoagmi deserve an extra punishment, which in her case, was a grenade. Thankfully, Tessou-sensei was there and manage to stop Frenda from using the grenade. Unfortunately, Tessou threw the grenade away, believing it was unarmed but it exploded and blew up a part of the walls of the certain highschool. Komoe sensei was not please and scolded the three girls for bringing weapons to a school. As punishment, they were ordered to help the clean up (Team ITEM thankfully had the money to fix the wall.) which took them all afternoon.

Now tired and hungry, the girls just wanted nothing more to have a rest and eat.

Saiai noticed it was already night. "You know, it's already night. Usually Mugino would be Super piss about us coming this late."

"True." Answered Frenda "But thankfully, we got that Kamijou guy to make sure that won't happen."

Both Rikou and Fremea nodded in agreement. "Of course Sis! With Touma around, Mugino-nee-chan becomes nicer."

"Yes. Kamijou-san has become a good influence for Mugino."

Ever since Shizuri meet Touma, her heart skipped a beat and had a strange feeling every time she saw him. At first, she thought she hated him but as both of them continue seeing each other, she realized she was in love with him. Shizuri was afraid he would reject her if he learned about the things she done but Touma, a kind hearted man he was, did not see that. To him, she was not the dangerous Level 5 Meltdowner but just plain Shizuri Mugino, the girl that he loves. Since admitting their feelings for each other, Shizuri became a nicer, kinder person and was taking least missions for the Board of Directors. Team ITEM could never thank Touma enough for what he did for their leader.

The girls finally arrived to their apartment but notice something strange. Even though there were signs that Touma and Mugino were inside thanks to their shoes, none of the lights inside were on.

"Whoa. That's weird. Why aren't the lights on? Is anyone home?"

"Saiai, Mugino and Kamijou's shoes are inside so they must be but it looks like no one's here. Did they basically leave to eat out or something?"

"I don't know. I think we should-" When Saiai turn to Rikou, who earlier had the same stoic expression, suddenly gave a look of horror, which scared both Saiai and Frenda.

Rikou was using her tracking abilities to see if anyone was inside the apartment, which there was except her ability also told her what else was going on, the revelation horrifying her.

Rikou quickly put her hands on Fremea shoulder with a strange look to the others.

"Guys? Why don't we just go out and eat, like now?'

"Rikou, why are you giving us that super weird look?" worried Saiai.

"Rikou, your scaring us. We can't leave until we know if Mugino's at home or not." Frenda felt the same as well.

"No. We leave. Now!"

"Why are you so-" but it was too late. Rikou wanted to spared the others over what was about to happen. She knew it was coming and tried to have her friends leave before they hear it but it was too late. The only thing Rikou could do was spare Fremea from this experience by covering her ears.

On that day, Rikou, Frenda and Saiai would experience a horror they wish they didn't know. A horror they would like to believe was a bad dream but sadly, it was fact. And that horror came with a scream.

YES! YESSSS!! YESSSSSS!!! OH YESSSS!!!! TOUMA-SAMA! PLEASE GIVE ME MORE OF YOUR PUNISHMENT OF LOVE!!

NO! EHH!! IF....YOU WANT.....IT!.....YOU HAVE BEGGED AND...UGHHH...SAY PLEASE! AHH!

TOUMA-SAMA PLEASE!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! MUGINO HAS BEEN A BAD GIRL AND WANTS YOUR SPECIAL PUNISHMENT OF LOVE!! PLEASE!!! GIVE IT ME!!!

VERY WELL!!! THIS KAMIJOU IS ABOUT TO GIVE YOU YOUR SPECIAL PUNISHMENT OF SUPER LOVE!!!! HERE I-

AHHHH!!!!!! YES! YES!!! OH MY GOD YESSSSS!!!!!!!!! THATS IT!!!! MORE!! GIVE ME MORE!!!

"THEN I'LL BREAK THAT ILLUSION OF UNFULFILLED SATISFACTION!!! YAAAAHHHH!!!!

TOUMA-SAMA! TOUMA-SAMAAAAAAA!!!!!!
SHIZURI!!! SHIZURI!!!!!!!!!!

Saiai and Frenda gave each other a dumbstruck and finally realize why Rikou was so adamant in leaving the apartment.

"Dinner out ain't so bad?"

"Indeed. Let's go!"

The four of them left the apartment quickly to any family restaurant that was far away with an clueless Fremea wondering why were her sister, Rikou and Saiai had these embarrassed look on their faces.

"Oh God that was embarrassing. Like super embarrassing. I hope no one else heard that."


-Meanwhile-

"Hey Misaki. Did hear that? I think i heard a scream."

"No, Mikoto. It's just your imagination. Come back to bed. I'm lonely."

_

"Kuroko, was that you making that noise?"

"Awaki, I'm next door inside our bedroom, tied up naked and wearing a blindfold. Am i in any position to do that?

"Sorry. Just wait for a few minutes while i find the whip and candles."

_

"So Tou-san, looks like somebody outside is screaming with pleasure. Wanna experience the same thing?"

"Oh? So will this little teasing dance in your Qipao your giving me will entice me. Well do your Worst!"

_

"Psst. Hey Kikyou. You know, Accelerator and Worst are out and Last Order is with that Uiharu and Saten. Since we're both alone, why don't we-"

"Aiho. I just came back from a 10 hour live e-conference with Nunotaba on how we can stop Janie and Febri's bodies from secreting poison in their bodies permanently. It's late, i'm tired and have a headache and so i just want to sleep. So no, we are no doing it."

"Your such a spoilsport."

"......If you behave, i might wear that erotic lingerie you like next time."

"........And that's why i love you."

I would like to thank all the ToAru fanfic writers for giving me this weird idea.

....What have I done? What have I wrought?

The answer is...something AWESOME. Though I do have to suspect that English isn't your first language >.>;

Eitherway, I liked it :3

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by rubix22

Quick question for curiosity's sake. Do the novels implicitly state that Accelerator is of Japanese descent?

Not that I remember.

[silverexorcist]

It's been mentioned that his real name contains Kanji, though that could be for a non-Japanese name too.

[Gray Servant]

It's been implied he's Japanese I believe, but it never actually affects anything in-series anyways, so making him non-Japanese isn't really a problem for the purpose of a fic.

[Mr.Kyon]

Holy shit, if I get this fight right, it's going to be amazing. I hope I can get this next chapter out by Sunday.