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SuzushinaYuriko · 2010-11-08, 16:05

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........................I'm not sure if I should be lurking here anymore................... The fan fiction thread is turning into a grimoire and it's poisoning my mind.....

OH NOOOO'S!!!

Come over to the dark side. We have Pocky.

And wow, chapter 6 out already. You're one of the fastest writers I've ever seen.

Miraluka · 2010-11-08, 19:53

When the inspiration is there things can be faster than you can think.

outerelf · 2010-11-08, 20:38

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Originally Posted by Ashaman

Ha ha, awesome.

poor Touma though.

Why do you call it chap 6? It seems to be chap5 to me.

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Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

Come over to the dark side. We have Pocky.

And wow, chapter 6 out already. You're one of the fastest writers I've ever seen.

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Originally Posted by Wilfriback

When the inspiration is there things can be faster than you can think.

Thank you all. As for my writing style- I do not post the story until I have written *all* of it out. I might go back to make minute adjustments, but I know myself, and know that unless I finish it first, there's a good chance I might never finish it, and that is bad service to the readers who take time out of their day to read my story.

And you're right, it's actually chapter five. Sorry about that- next time I'll post the correct chapter.

outerelf · 2010-11-08, 23:23

Oh yeah, I guess I brought for you guys a teaser of the genderbent

Spoiler for You sure you can handle this?:

shmaster · 2010-11-09, 00:16

Nice, nice chapter. Now I wonder how is Accelerator going to cover up the fact now he is wearing dress in public.

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Originally Posted by tsunade666

........................I'm not sure if I should be lurking here anymore................... The fan fiction thread is turning into a grimoire and it's poisoning my mind.....

OH NOOOO'S!!!

The grimores are a lot nicer to those who would accept and spread its knowledge. Come, join us, and you won't feel pain ever again......

outerelf · 2010-11-09, 16:28

Well, I now have the real chapter six up for reading seeming how I don't know when I'll next be able to post:

Accelerator was silent as he thought back to his childhood- the time when an entire tank division had been sent out to 'subdue' him because nothing else would work and people were panicking. The people that had fled in terror. Maybe perhaps this was the reason why he had gotten a crush on this man? Because he viewed him invariably as 'human' and not just 'monster'?

...Somehow this chapter did not seem humorous whatsoever.

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Oh, and if possible, I'd like some help on my genderbent fic- How should we have Touka and Touma meet? Delinquents hitting on her- both of them being stricken by misfortune at the same time?

Ashaman · 2010-11-09, 16:51

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Originally Posted by outerelf

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Oh, and if possible, I'd like some help on my genderbent fic- How should we have Touka and Touma meet? Delinquents hitting on her- both of them being stricken by misfortune at the same time?

Not delinquents hitting on Touka. Guys hitting on a Third person, while both come into save at the same time, maybe. Or something even grander could work.

It would seem strange to have Touka need saving (even if she doesn't) as I imagine her being a semi competent street fighter who can smack a bitch whenever neccessary.

Well, now that I think about it, it depends abit on who is in who's universe.

simultainious misfortune could work. Just passing each other by, both of them get struck by water/ Misaka's electricity. Something like that.

Actually, better yet, both walking home in the same direction (not yet noticing one is in Genderbent Universe). Misaka (M/F) gets flustered and attacks.

Or better yet, (depending on universe, though I think you're putting Touka in Touma's universe, so wouldn't work) Female Aogami meeting Touma. I... I feel like writing that right now, to be honest.

tsunade666 · 2010-11-09, 18:09

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Originally Posted by outerelf

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Oh, and if possible, I'd like some help on my genderbent fic- How should we have Touka and Touma meet? Delinquents hitting on her- both of them being stricken by misfortune at the same time?

No Misaka please and if's meeting. I would like to see Touma rescuing someone but ended up getting rescued instead. That kind of situation.

And the one who rescued him would be Touka.

Ashaman · 2010-11-09, 19:35

I see you've joined us, lol.

And yeah, I like that idea. Touma goes to help someone, gets into to trouble himself, and Touka comes to the rescue.

SuzushinaYuriko · 2010-11-09, 19:39

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“Just as planned-“ the person in the tube began to say, when the other interrupted.

“Don’t lie.”

LOL

I think how Touko/Touka and Touma would meet is by them attempting to save someone from a group of delinquents at the same time. Bonus points if they used the same excuse to try and get the person out of there. I can already picture a "FUKOU DAAAA" duet sounding through the air...

Please, no excess Mikoto screentime, since I'm already sick of seeing her everywhere.

Also, it'll be really chaotic for a while, but I'd like to see everyone and their genderbent selves team up at some point to try and solve the problem.

Actually, the guys are easier to turn into girls, but what should we do about the girls' accessories? There's not really any way to make ribbons or flowers masculine...

MrTerrorist · 2010-11-09, 20:48

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Originally Posted by Ashaman

I see you've joined us, lol.

And yeah, I like that idea. Touma goes to help someone, gets into to trouble himself, and Touka comes to the rescue.

Indeed. And i shall reward him with a yuri fic soon.

Flere821 · 2010-11-09, 20:55

... Remind me why didn't Touko's IB negate the portal as soon as she touched it?

If you want to say it's 'Rule of Cool' then fine, let's go with that

outerelf · 2010-11-09, 21:26

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Originally Posted by Flere821

... Remind me why didn't Touko's IB negate the portal as soon as she touched it?

If you want to say it's 'Rule of Cool' then fine, let's go with that

Because it was held in place by too much magic. Like Touma can't automatically negate Accel's wings because there's too much power. Rule of Cool works as well.

Master Assassin · 2010-11-09, 22:11

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Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

LOL

I think how Touko/Touka and Touma would meet is by them attempting to save someone from a group of delinquents at the same time. Bonus points if they used the same excuse to try and get the person out of there. I can already picture a "FUKOU DAAAA" duet sounding through the air...

Please, no excess Mikoto screentime, since I'm already sick of seeing her everywhere.

Also, it'll be really chaotic for a while, but I'd like to see everyone and their genderbent selves team up at some point to try and solve the problem.

Actually, the guys are easier to turn into girls, but what should we do about the girls' accessories? There's not really any way to make ribbons or flowers masculine...

Some thoughts...

Kaori >> Kaoru: Can keep her ribbon, I see no problem though.
Mikoto >> Makoto: Not really atypical, but not that typical either to see hairpins used by men - except for the flower-shaped ones.

so I guess that'll do for now.

... Some... uh, fanartists scrap the accessories altogether though.

SuzushinaYuriko · 2010-11-09, 22:33

Also, it just occurred to me, but if this BL fic takes place after the Russia arc, wouldn't Accel have a halo and white wings instead of black ones? Or are his wings color-coded depending on his mood?

outerelf · 2010-11-10, 00:12

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Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

Also, it just occurred to me, but if this BL fic takes place after the Russia arc, wouldn't Accel have a halo and white wings instead of black ones? Or are his wings color-coded depending on his mood?

His wings are color-coded. You see- I noticed that black wings represent hatred/anger while the white wings represented a much more pure intent.

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I think how Touko/Touka and Touma would meet is by them attempting to save someone from a group of delinquents at the same time. Bonus points if they used the same excuse to try and get the person out of there. I can already picture a "FUKOU DAAAA" duet sounding through the air...

... I'll take this idea.

Also- someone mentioned Aogami... Anyone up for a fetish fuel battle?

Spoiler for TOO LONG:

^ I need a guy equivalent for all of these- all you fetish people out there, go.

Now then- I will go disappear for awhile

Master Assassin · 2010-11-10, 00:47

Spoiler for Aogami Pierce-chan:

... If I were Touma/Touko/Touka I'd plaster AoPi with a plaster for spilling out walls of text on my ears

tsunade666 · 2010-11-10, 02:23

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Originally Posted by outerelf

H

Spoiler for TOO LONG:

^ I need a guy equivalent for all of these- all you fetish people out there, go.

Now then- I will go disappear for awhile

I like every type of beautiful girl chara but seriously someone needs to knock some sense on Aogami that shota is a guy....

outerelf · 2010-11-10, 11:05

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Originally Posted by Soul Assassin

Spoiler for Aogami Pierce-chan:

... If I were Touma/Touko/Touka I'd plaster AoPi with a plaster for spilling out walls of text on my ears

Thank You so much for helping me out! The battle of the fetishes shall take place!

outerelf · 2010-11-10, 16:37

The last chapter of my BL fic. I know you might be going 'huh, it's this short?' but I realized I don't know anything about GROUP and I don't want to mess it up for others. That's why I decided to let imagination fill in the rest here:

"Ah- I remember something- You made a very cute girl."

"WHY CAN YOU ONLY REMEMBER THAT ONE THING? HUH? WHY DO YOU HAVE TO REMEMBER THAT AND ONLY THAT?"

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outerelf Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Bouncing	Oh yeah, I guess I brought for you guys a teaser of the genderbent Spoiler for You sure you can handle this?: The person in the liquid floated upside down serenely, speaking softly and quietly to the person outside of the clear, transparent tube. “A portal has been opened between dimensions. Currently no one has passed through it, but we’re not certain why or even how such a portal was made.” A holographic video screen appeared, showing a small back alleyway. “I recognize that place.” The calm, clear voice of the person standing outside of the tube spoke. “So you want me to shut down the portal, correct?” “Yes- the portals strength as is might not even be completely destroyed by Kamijou’s right hand, and such a destabilized portal might bring a rather bad situation about-“ BOOM! Both stopped talking as a bolt of electricity scorched the ground in the video, as a hurtling form could be seen streaking down the alleyway, directly for the portal. Another lighting bolt followed the form, just as the person darted through the portal. The portal flared unstably for a moment, before settling as the other hurtled through the portal. Silence reigned for a few seconds. “Just as planned-“ the person in the tube began to say, when the other interrupted. “Don’t lie.” More silence. “Very well then, master magician of the Onmyouji- please retrieve the students who went through the portal and return them safely.” A sharp grin split the persons face as they turned to leave. “Do not fail me- Tsuchimido Motoka.” The girls hand waved lazily. She was wearing a opened Hawaiian shirt, knotted beneath the breasts, flashing a large amount of cleavage. Tight jeans emphasized her bottom and legs, and a gold chain that dipped into the cleavage twinkled in the dim light. “Of course not.” Her tone was completely serious as she finally left.

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Ashaman Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Age: 34	I see you've joined us, lol. And yeah, I like that idea. Touma goes to help someone, gets into to trouble himself, and Touka comes to the rescue. __________________

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SuzushinaYuriko SHSL Lurker Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Academy City	Also, it just occurred to me, but if this BL fic takes place after the Russia arc, wouldn't Accel have a halo and white wings instead of black ones? Or are his wings color-coded depending on his mood? __________________

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Master Assassin Portable Dude Mk. II Artist Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: All ghillied up spying on someone ~2,000 yards away using telescope sights. Age: 35	Spoiler for Aogami Pierce-chan: "Haaa, you're too naive, Kami-yan. I have a wide range of acceptance when it comes to women, not just including fallen female main characters, but also includes foster sisters, foster mother -> Foster father foster daughter, -> foster brother twins, -> left the same widows -- > widowers senpais, kouhais, same-class classmates, teachers, childhood-friends, ojou-samas, -- > literal use of "bocchama" implied, meaning Young Master, but I believe there are better words, or "rich guys" will do? blondes, brunettes, brown-haired, silver-haired, long-haired, medium-length haired, short-haired, girls wearing bobby pins, --> how about guys wearing headbands? wavy hair, twin-tails, pony tails, one-sided pony tails, twin braids, ahoges, curly hair, girls in sailor clothes, --> boys in ... gakuran? blazers, judougis, kyuudougis, kindergarten nurses, maids, -> Butlers (obviously LMAO) policewomen -- > Policemen witches, --> Wizards shrine maidens, --> priests? monks? nuns, --> like above? military women, --> obviously "military guys", or "soldiers" or w/ever secretaries, --> since secretaries are usually women's jobs, how about chief executives (CEOs)? lolis, --> shotas shotas, --> SERIOUSLY AOPI YOU'RE THAT GAY!? DEPRIVED!? W/ever. Lolis tsunderes, cheerleaders, --> Can't think of a boy cheerleader. How about team captains? stewardesses, --> Stewards? waitresses, --> Waiters? Goth girls wearing black, --> Emoboys wearing black? Goth girls wearing white, --> Emoboys wearing white? girls in China dresses, --> change it into boys, but not in a qipao/cheongsam/w/ever, something suitable for men (they have it) frail girls, --> frail boys? albino girls, --> albino boys (coughAcceleratorcough) fantasists, girls with split personalities, --> boys ver. queens, --> kings. d'uh princesses, --> princes thigh-high socks, --> low cut jeans or w/ever? don't think there's a matching boys version of this fashion sense garter belts, --> ???? girls who crossdress as guys, --> TRAPS (coughoneHideyoshipleasecough) meganekkos, girls who wear an eye-patch, --> make it boys girls who wear bandages, --> same as above girls in school swimsuits, --> boys in swimming trunks one-piece swimsuits, ->trunks bikinis, -> ...Speedo's? V-shaped bikinis, --> same as above bikinis that barely cover anything, --> fundoshi (has this been mentioned?) youkais, ghosts, kemonomimi girls etc. Any female is within my area of acceptance". ... If I were Touma/Touko/Touka I'd plaster AoPi with a plaster for spilling out walls of text on my ears __________________ I like to run portable on my dude, so I ran while running runs in my portably portable, dude-like dude. --- This line over here is a placeholder. ----

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Miraluka Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Age: 34	When the inspiration is there things can be faster than you can think.

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outerelf Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Bouncing	Well, I now have the real chapter six up for reading seeming how I don't know when I'll next be able to post: Accelerator was silent as he thought back to his childhood- the time when an entire tank division had been sent out to 'subdue' him because nothing else would work and people were panicking. The people that had fled in terror. Maybe perhaps this was the reason why he had gotten a crush on this man? Because he viewed him invariably as 'human' and not just 'monster'? ...Somehow this chapter did not seem humorous whatsoever. --- Oh, and if possible, I'd like some help on my genderbent fic- How should we have Touka and Touma meet? Delinquents hitting on her- both of them being stricken by misfortune at the same time?

2010-11-09, 20:55	Link #352
Flere821 Lurker Join Date: Aug 2010	... Remind me why didn't Touko's IB negate the portal as soon as she touched it? If you want to say it's 'Rule of Cool' then fine, let's go with that

2010-11-10, 16:37	Link #360
outerelf Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Bouncing	The last chapter of my BL fic. I know you might be going 'huh, it's this short?' but I realized I don't know anything about GROUP and I don't want to mess it up for others. That's why I decided to let imagination fill in the rest here: "Ah- I remember something- You made a very cute girl." "WHY CAN YOU ONLY REMEMBER THAT ONE THING? HUH? WHY DO YOU HAVE TO REMEMBER THAT AND ONLY THAT?"