Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[ghazghkull]

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Originally Posted by Satashi

Satashi Lunch time short!

*nibble microwaveable french bread pizza* Spoofing Road trip. *drinks Adrenaline rush so s/he'll stay awake*

Spoiler for Long:

Yuuno, having dated Nanoha since he was nine is now in his seconds year of college. At one party he finally gave in and made love to his crush: Fate. Fate, being the spunky girl she is, video taped it.

Now as Yuuno realizes that the video letter he just sent Nanoha is really the recording of him and Fate, he only has three days to drive from California to Florida. As Chrono told him, this can only mean one thing: Road Trip.

"Are you sure this is the right way?" Yuuno asked yet again as they bounced down the bumpy back road surrounded by trees and hills. "Seems like a lot of hassle to save a few hours... Is this really a short cut?"

"Of course it's a short cut," Chrono complained. "If it was easy it would just be 'the way', you know?"

"Relax," Erio leaned back in his car seat. "Besides, why not just date Fate?"

"Because," Yuuno growled, eyeing the roads as he turned. "I have to break up with Nanoha first, and the video isn't the way to do it."

"I don't know what you're so worried about," Chrono took a drink from his soda can. "It's not like you're cheating."

"Right." Yuuno glanced at him sideways. "How is having sex with Fate not cheating."

Erio chose to answer. "Differnt zip code man."

"...What!?"

Chrono elaborated for his red haired friend. "It's like... a set of rules men have. It's not cheating if you're in a different zip code, let alone a different STATE."

Yuuno shook his head. "That makes no sense."

"Hey! I don't make the rules man."

"Okay..." Yuuno smirked, turning down another curve and sliding along the dirt road. "So like.... If you have sex with two women at the same time... It's not cheating because they cancel each other out?"

Chrono nodded and pointed at him. "Exactly."

Yuuno slowed down and came to a halt. "Oh no...." Together with his friends they got out of the car and looked at the old broken down wooden bridge that was half on their side and half on the other. "Oh no... no way..."

Erio shook his head and sighed. "Well that gives us twenty minutes before our first butt-raping."

Yuuno pulled on his hair. "What now!? We're going to lose three hours just backtracking!"

Chrono scoffed. "Backtrack? Dude... we can make it."

"MAKE IT!?" Yuuno paled. "As in jump it?"

Erio nodded and walked forward. "This ramp is twenty degrees right? Thirty tops... projection alone would carry us fifteen feet at fifty miles per hour easily."

"NO! No way!" Yuuno threw out his arms.

"Dude!" Chrono put his arm around him. "Bill Murry made this in a golf cart! It's ten feet, I can SPIT over it." To prove his point he snorted heavily and harked, making Yuuno gag and move away. Letting the loogey fly, he grinned when it landed on the other side.

All three men jumped back when the other side of the bridge shattered and fell to the ditch below it and wash away in the water. "Right..." Erio swallowed. "Better make it sixty."

"I'm driving!" Chrono ran to the car and jumped in the driver's seat.

"OH man oh man oh man oh man..." Yuuno got in the back and buckled his seatbelt, praying as Chrono threw it in reverse to gain distance.

"We're fine." The driver nodded to himself before grinning and flooring the gas.

Erio looked forward at the approaching ramp. "We only need to hit sixty right?"

"I'm trying!" Chrono laughed out. "This car sucks!"

In a collected scream, the men hit the ramp and flew through the air, hitting the other side and skidding a few times before coming to a halt.

"YEAH!"
"Fricking right!"
"Hell yeah!"

The wheels fell off the car all at the same time. Seconds passed in silence before the airbag finally deployed, slapping Chrono in the face.

"Great... Perfect." Yuuno got out of the car and started walking, soon joined by his friends. "I don't have time to be walking through the woods right now!"

"Dude," Chrono slapped him on the back. "It's the wheels. We'll call a tow service and get them replaced. We'll lose half a day at most!"

A sudden explosion made them all stop in their tracks and stare ahead of themselves. "Just the wheels," Yuuno repeated softly as a flaming hubcap rolled next to him. "Just the wheels..."

That was...amusing...LOL XD

Way to kill a care LOL XD

[SpaceBrotha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Satashi Lunch time short!

Spoiler for ouch:

*nibble microwaveable french bread pizza* Spoofing Road trip. *drinks Adrenaline rush so s/he'll stay awake*

Yuuno, having dated Nanoha since he was nine is now in his seconds year of college. At one party he finally gave in and made love to his crush: Fate. Fate, being the spunky girl she is, video taped it.

Now as Yuuno realizes that the video letter he just sent Nanoha is really the recording of him and Fate, he only has three days to drive from California to Florida. As Chrono told him, this can only mean one thing: Road Trip.

"Are you sure this is the right way?" Yuuno asked yet again as they bounced down the bumpy back road surrounded by trees and hills. "Seems like a lot of hassle to save a few hours... Is this really a short cut?"

"Of course it's a short cut," Chrono complained. "If it was easy it would just be 'the way', you know?"

"Relax," Erio leaned back in his car seat. "Besides, why not just date Fate?"

"Because," Yuuno growled, eyeing the roads as he turned. "I have to break up with Nanoha first, and the video isn't the way to do it."

"I don't know what you're so worried about," Chrono took a drink from his soda can. "It's not like you're cheating."

"Right." Yuuno glanced at him sideways. "How is having sex with Fate not cheating."

Erio chose to answer. "Differnt zip code man."

"...What!?"

Chrono elaborated for his red haired friend. "It's like... a set of rules men have. It's not cheating if you're in a different zip code, let alone a different STATE."

Yuuno shook his head. "That makes no sense."

"Hey! I don't make the rules man."

"Okay..." Yuuno smirked, turning down another curve and sliding along the dirt road. "So like.... If you have sex with two women at the same time... It's not cheating because they cancel each other out?"

Chrono nodded and pointed at him. "Exactly."

Yuuno slowed down and came to a halt. "Oh no...." Together with his friends they got out of the car and looked at the old broken down wooden bridge that was half on their side and half on the other. "Oh no... no way..."

Erio shook his head and sighed. "Well that gives us twenty minutes before our first butt-raping."

Yuuno pulled on his hair. "What now!? We're going to lose three hours just backtracking!"

Chrono scoffed. "Backtrack? Dude... we can make it."

"MAKE IT!?" Yuuno paled. "As in jump it?"

Erio nodded and walked forward. "This ramp is twenty degrees right? Thirty tops... projection alone would carry us fifteen feet at fifty miles per hour easily."

"NO! No way!" Yuuno threw out his arms.

"Dude!" Chrono put his arm around him. "Bill Murry made this in a golf cart! It's ten feet, I can SPIT over it." To prove his point he snorted heavily and harked, making Yuuno gag and move away. Letting the loogey fly, he grinned when it landed on the other side.

All three men jumped back when the other side of the bridge shattered and fell to the ditch below it and wash away in the water. "Right..." Erio swallowed. "Better make it sixty."

"I'm driving!" Chrono ran to the car and jumped in the driver's seat.

"OH man oh man oh man oh man..." Yuuno got in the back and buckled his seatbelt, praying as Chrono threw it in reverse to gain distance.

"We're fine." The driver nodded to himself before grinning and flooring the gas.

Erio looked forward at the approaching ramp. "We only need to hit sixty right?"

"I'm trying!" Chrono laughed out. "This car sucks!"

In a collected scream, the men hit the ramp and flew through the air, hitting the other side and skidding a few times before coming to a halt.

"YEAH!"
"Fricking right!"
"Hell yeah!"

The wheels fell off the car all at the same time. Seconds passed in silence before the airbag finally deployed, slapping Chrono in the face.

"Great... Perfect." Yuuno got out of the car and started walking, soon joined by his friends. "I don't have time to be walking through the woods right now!"

"Dude," Chrono slapped him on the back. "It's the wheels. We'll call a tow service and get them replaced. We'll lose half a day at most!"

A sudden explosion made them all stop in their tracks and stare ahead of themselves. "Just the wheels," Yuuno repeated softly as a flaming hubcap rolled next to him. "Just the wheels..."

I... He... Wait...

Spoiler for NSFW - random encounter:

*experiencing techical difficulties*
*static*

[Gillian]

oh that's bad krisslanza
get better soon


@satashi
I saw the movie
nice entertainment
*bomb threat for the way*

edit: now I remember the name of the movie*have to read carfully *

by the way:
poor Nanoha, yuuno tricked her with fate
poor fate...

a never ending circle

[Satashi]

@SpaceBrotha tag that NSFW! Before someone like me looks at it during break and have peopl "WTF!?" at it.....

@ Thread: Gonna try to have SbtB chapter X done tonight. @_@ wish me luck.

[SpaceBrotha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

@SpaceBrotha tag that NSFW! Before someone like me looks at it during break and have peopl "WTF!?" at it.....

@ Thread: Gonna try to have SbtB chapter X done tonight. @_@ wish me luck.

Tagged, though you deserved that for breaking my brain for a bit with that crack you wrote.

and GL with the SbtB, also a good night to you and see you in the morning

[HoyaSaxa]

Nub here- just wanted to let all you guys/girls know what an awesome job everyone's doing.

Having lurked for a few months now, I decided to finally make an account so I could give people some feedback. I've left reviews for the stories/chapters I've read so far on fanfiction.net, but I've wanted to comment on some of the drabbles people here write as well. So as soon as I get the hang of this board, I'll get to that.

[krisslanza]

And we lure another lurker out of the shadows! Victory for the fanfic'ers!
Well welcome to our humble lil' section of the forum. Make sure you worship Satashi-sama as a GOD o:

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by HoyaSaxa

Nub here- just wanted to let all you guys/girls know what an awesome job everyone's doing.

Having lurked for a few months now, I decided to finally make an account so I could give people some feedback. I've left reviews for the stories/chapters I've read so far on fanfiction.net, but I've wanted to comment on some of the drabbles people here write as well. So as soon as I get the hang of this board, I'll get to that.

I'm glad you decided to come talk to us ^_^ Doesn't matter if you're new here or not, we all take comments happily If you need any help on posting, spoiler tags, ect. I'll be happy to help.

Originally Posted by krisslanza

And we lure another lurker out of the shadows! Victory for the fanfic'ers!
Well welcome to our humble lil' section of the forum. Make sure you worship Satashi-sama as a GOD o:

Please ignore everything Kriss-chan says.

[HoyaSaxa]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

And we lure another lurker out of the shadows! Victory for the fanfic'ers!Well welcome to our humble lil' section of the forum. Make sure you worship Satashi-sama as a GOD o:

Actually Satashi is the reason I found this board months ago. It was mentioned at the end of a story; can't remember which now. Also, I thought Satashi did not like to be referred to as "sama."

I've written some (bad) fanfics in the past (we do not speak of those dark times), so I get how important feedback is to writers. Also, it's just nice to know people are actually reading your stuff.

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by HoyaSaxa

Nub here- just wanted to let all you guys/girls know what an awesome job everyone's doing.

Having lurked for a few months now, I decided to finally make an account so I could give people some feedback. I've left reviews for the stories/chapters I've read so far on fanfiction.net, but I've wanted to comment on some of the drabbles people here write as well. So as soon as I get the hang of this board, I'll get to that.

Welcome to the board . Remember, the best thing you can give a writer is a review. It's like food for us and keeps us going

Originally Posted by krisslanza

And we lure another lurker out of the shadows! Victory for the fanfic'ers!
Well welcome to our humble lil' section of the forum. Make sure you worship Satashi-sama as a GOD o:

Only 'god' I know of is 40 meters tall, purple, green, and has taste for Tang.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by HoyaSaxa

Actually Satashi is the reason I found this board months ago. It was mentioned at the end of a story; can't remember which now. Also, I thought Satashi did not like to be referred to as "sama."

I've written some (bad) fanfics in the past (we do not speak of those dark times), so I get how important feedback is to writers. Also, it's just nice to know people are actually reading your stuff.

If they're Nanoha fics, we'd like to see them

and I prefer not to be called "sama" but I can't seem to stop them >.<

[HoyaSaxa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

If they're Nanoha fics, we'd like to see them

No Nanoha fics. These are some old school Saint Seiya and Sailormoon ones. They are very cringe worthy and I would not subject anyone to them, ever.

I thought of doing a Nanoha crossover about a year back, but quickly learned the error of my ways. The two universes were in no way related, and forcing xovers just gets ugly. Nowadays I stick mostly to beta work.

[krisslanza]

We ignore everything Satashi-sama says about not calling him/her '-sama' At least some of us anyway
And there isn't a thing as "bad' fanfiction! Only... Fanfiction you learn from? My early works are garbage I think but I keep them up as a reminder of how I've improved...

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

We ignore everything Satashi-sama says about not calling him/her '-sama' At least some of us anyway
And there isn't a thing as "bad' fanfiction! Only... Fanfiction you learn from? My early works are garbage I think but I keep them up as a reminder of how I've improved...

Oh I've seen bad fanfictions in my time around. Except that my definition is when one takes a story and performs an utter act of butchering it to the point you don't even realize that it's a fanfiction, because the story's been so horribly written that you're wondering, 'WTF IS THIS ?!' Pardon my language of course.

In short, I've seen people make fics that make the usual funny crack-fics look like normal run-of-the-mill stories.

I'm talking about stories where characters are put into such ed up situations that you're wondering what in the world is going on in that person's mind.

It's even worse if they're accepting your insults and warnings about getting banned as a compliment ><

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Oh I've seen bad fanfictions in my time around. Except that my definition is when one takes a story and performs an utter act of butchering it to the point you don't even realize that it's a fanfiction, because the story's been so horribly written that you're wondering, 'WTF IS THIS ?!' Pardon my language of course.

In short, I've seen people make fics that make the usual funny crack-fics look like normal run-of-the-mill stories.

I'm talking about stories where characters are put into such ed up situations that you're wondering what in the world is going on in that person's mind.

It's even worse if they're accepting your insults and warnings about getting banned as a compliment ><

Yeah, I've seen those. Mainly the reason I don't read fanfiction anymore. I can't enjoy it. Actually, fanfiction.net was avoided by me for a long long time because the fanfics I read on it were so pathetically bad, I just assumed FF.N was a children's place to post stories. like for K-3rd grade. That bad. That and back then each chapter of a story was a new story all together @_@ I joined when the chaptering system came in.

now I don't really like FF.N because it just plain sucks. Authors have no freedom at all. I can't even use my " ~**~ "for section breaks, I have to use that damned horizontal line (page breaks). Can't post links either, so I can't do polls. I even got a flag on my account for one of my lemon stories (which was taken down and now I don't have it anymore).

But anyway, my first fanfics sucked too. I did a long arse Pokémon story a long long time ago. When I was 16......wow, that's been ages @_@ So yeah, keep writing and you'll get better.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Yeah, I've seen those. Mainly the reason I don't read fanfiction anymore. I can't enjoy it. Actually, fanfiction.net was avoided by me for a long long time because the fanfics I read on it were so pathetically bad, I just assumed FF.N was a children's place to post stories. like for K-3rd grade. That bad. That and back then each chapter of a story was a new story all together @_@ I joined when the chaptering system came in.

now I don't really like FF.N because it just plain sucks. Authors have no freedom at all. I can't even use my " ~**~ "for section breaks, I have to use that damned horizontal line (page breaks). Can't post links either, so I can't do polls. I even got a flag on my account for one of my lemon stories (which was taken down and now I don't have it anymore).

But anyway, my first fanfics sucked too. I did a long arse Pokémon story a long long time ago. When I was 16......wow, that's been ages @_@ So yeah, keep writing and you'll get better.

Yeah well unfortunately FF.N has decided to be sons of es and pretty much shaft everyone to the point they are forced to use their style of configuration. ><

Seriously, but then again...it's mostly on profit so they can do w/e the hell they want since it's their website and such.

As for getting flagged on that, I am going to assume that some hole who's hell-bent on enforcing the rules decided to flag you for it >< But hey...if they have an M-rated section, WHY NOT ALLOW LEMONS!

Although there is another place I go to now to post lemons. Try MediaMiner.org. They have no issues on it, plus they actually have a hentai/lemon category for those who decide to go, "WTH I feel like writing a lemon," and can post 'em without getting shafted by the admin...At least so long as the lemon is within tasteful reasons, rather than some ed up recreation of a horrible porno movie ><

Anyways, back on topic, when can we expect SbtB to be updated? Tonight, or tomorrow night?

[Hiddenryuu]

Well, if it's something you enjoy do it, my writing is laughably bad, but I occasionally get a crazy idea or 2, and doing it is fun even though it's not up to 'par'. I feel that anything that allows you to stretch your imagination is worthwhile, and if you have fun doing it why not?

[ghazghkull]

Actually, out of random curiosity, does anyone happen to know of any Nanoha/Hayate or Nanoha/Fate/Hayate fics out there?

In fact has it been done before? @.@

And if not, how does that kind of pairing sit with those who are open minded and not part of the Legion?

[krisslanza]

Hmmm to my knowledge I haven't seen any of those on FF.net
But who knows... I never thought I'd find a lot of pairings in FF.net or DA... And I usually do.

[ghazghkull]

*Has a thoughtful expression*

Hmm...then maybe I could venture into that...*shrugs* It's just a random idea mind you.

P.S.

Oh damn it, I missed the page claim ><