2009-10-11, 15:43 | Link #16741 | |
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It probably does have to do with word processors, but I think how things are written online matters as well since lines of dialogue are more or less universally spaced apart online you get stuff like Spoiler for right:
This I think to allot of people looks sort of strange. This is likely because quotes are often whole sentences that are self contained and so when they see like one word with a comma just hanging off it, it looks odd. In theory what’s happened is that the sentence is basically “Agreed, said the random guy gruffly” with the quotation marks merely showing what part of it was spoken, but there is a tendency in people’s minds to consider them entirely separate objects. So you end up in... Spoiler for wrong:
The capitalization then follows on because people say “Oh a period Capital time!” (The fact such lines are often followed by a name which IS capitalized only adds to it, and shows how completely arbitrary these rules really are) That said I’m not sure it really matters frankly while one is correct and the other not the difference when actually read is… pretty much nonexistent. The fact is that a quote is more or less already always followed by a brief pause anyway. People don’t ramble right into and right out of a quote with no transition at all when speaking so in practice the period or comma makes no real difference. The capitalization is more or less a style thing as well it’s not like it really changes the meaning of what’s being said. Plus with the quotation marks often containing a fully developed sentence just before it, it actually looks rather natural. So to me this is sort of one of those “incorrect, but completely irrelevant to actually understanding what’s written” type errors. Yeah it’s not right from a technical perspective, but the fact is it really has almost no effect whatsoever on the readability of the piece (IMO). I suppose it might bother someone who is really a stickler for grammar, but I frankly almost never even notice it. Too me such nitpicking is really more trouble then it’s worth and feed back on characterization, plot, and perhaps style (subjective as all that is) is often much more useful for a writer. In many cases the fact is a writer knows about the issue, but it’s not something so easily and quickly fixed as with many bad habits. Not that you where all harping on it like total grammar nazi's, but I've seen it happen where someone will just tear into a story or argument harping on minor grammatical details to the exclusion of any remarks on it's actual content, or will just keep bringing up some tick constantly even after a writer says, "I know I'm trying to work on it." That's just my take anyway based on my own nowhere near perfect grammar knowledge.
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2009-10-11, 15:55 | Link #16742 |
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The problem is if a writer isn't made aware of a constant problem the writing suffers for it. I, for one, have trouble reading pieces with constant mistakes. Nitpicking is bad but it hurts the writer if repeated mistakes aren't pointed out.
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2009-10-11, 19:27 | Link #16743 | |
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But a lot of English rules are just plain weird: "I before E, except after C" Science Neighbor Weigh Weird Their Theiler It is hard to really understand sometimes, 'specially when writing fics. I do recall making the previously mentioned error many times, the one about ending a quote with a period and starting next word Capped.....
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2009-10-11, 19:56 | Link #16746 |
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How else did you think I get by with my lousy language power? I can barely speak English properly, let alone manage other languages!
And then there's linguistic monsters like Anita and her mastery of 7 (2 Asian + 5 European). >_>
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2009-10-11, 20:50 | Link #16747 |
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English is hard because it's so easy. There are so man exceptions to the rules, and all sorts of dialects are integrated into the mother language, you can basically not speak a lick of English and speak it fluently.
Example: "The hat is red" "The red hat" the adj describing the noun can come before or after it. You can basically throw words together and it'll generally make sense. Because of the dialects that often "dumb down" (I'm sorry, they DO!) the language, even mispronouncing things is accepted as correct. To sum up this post, English is a horrible, horrible language that took little parts of everything and made it all into one language. And that's the truth, America is the "melting pot" afterall. But anyway, relating this to writing, because of all this, writing is kind of simple but difficult at same time. For example, "you was" is accepted here and isn't counted off on grammar tests I took. Why? Because that's how people where I grew up talked. Same with " 'cha " and " 'ya " being an abreviation of "are you" (What'cha doing? Where'ya going?) were accepted as being correct because of our dialect. but when I wrote, I quickly found out that not everyone likes it. I understand all languages have that problem, but still... I also kind of wish that English had better ways of expressing things. Some way to connect it so everyone can understand.... Like the Japanese honorifics. Just by the way you address people in Japan really reflects how you feel about them. Calling them by last name, adding -san, or -kun, or whatever and then dropping it to call them by their normal name... America just doesn't do that really, and it can't translate to the degree of character development on paper that I would like to see. On another note, I still think that at least 40-60% of posters here don't have English as their main language (well that probably changed since we have many newcomers and a lot of older ones don't show up much anymore...), but everyone speaks English really well. I'm impressed by that.
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That is why grammar is important! Your schooling did you a huuuuuge injury by not correcting you. Grammar is what links the thousand dialects together. Without grammar no one would be able to read what anyone else wrote because everyone has distinct verbal characteristics. Writing should be universal to anyone who can read the language. (the only exceptions being 1st person and dialog and even then it should be toned down and fit the character. Quote:
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2009-10-11, 21:41 | Link #16749 |
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Well I finally finished putting together chapter one of my fanfiction, which is actually my first one. I do not have a name for it yet though. I hope Admiral Tigerclaw doesn't mind that I added a little allusion/shout out to his fic.
Anyway here is the story. Constructive criticism would be very welcome. Spoiler for Chapter One:
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2009-10-11, 22:03 | Link #16752 |
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I think everyone here really is good in English, except me.
Although English is not my main language, I've enjoy writing stories very much. But compare to everyone here my English is bad(Grammar & spelling). Even if I knew that, I just like to write stories to express myself. If I'm in a bad mood, I'll write angst and drama story. If I'm happy, there be lots of fluffy romance. So when I write something, I'll apologize in advance for the bad English. *BOW DOWN* *TURN* (=/////=) *RUN AWAY* |
2009-10-11, 23:00 | Link #16753 |
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It amuses me that people always apologize for their English, regardless of how good or bad it is. One's grasp of the language actually varies quite a bit in here, but I suppose everyone can stand for some improvement.
Though Rika's behavior reminds me of this this.
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2009-10-12, 00:07 | Link #16755 |
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I was bored and decided to write a short fic but I found the first chapter of a series I began half a year ago and I decided to continue it. So here you go.
Spoiler for Please, Arrest Me!:
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2009-10-12, 00:11 | Link #16757 |
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Since I’ve been told that it’s okay to post outlines and ask for help & opinions, here is what I have for a Nanoha/Negima crossover. Despite the fact that the Negima-verse’s events are the primary focus here, there is no “Negima Fanfic Discussion” forum, so this entry is going here. If you haven’t read Mahou Sensei Negima, don’t even bother reading this post.
Also, a few elements of the Naruto-verse make themselves known here. However, none of the characters show up (though there may be a passing mention much later on of a certain invincible, mask-wearing, current-and-true Big Bad of the series), and the Naruto world is not visited. The influence? Jutsu. A few Naruto-verse techniques will show up (partly thanks to the Negima-verse’s local ninja-girl Kaede), and another dark jutsu of the ‘verse will play an important point soon… This is an outline, not a full story; I am soliciting help in ideas to flesh out the storyline. There will be parts below that are woefully undetailed, and after a certain point everything just stops altogether as I have no idea how to proceed. For every month spent in the Negima-verse, one day passes back on Midchilda in this story; a side-effect of the below-mentioned dimensional anomaly. Spoiler for Main Plot:
And this is where I’ve hit a dead-end. I have no idea how to approach the following plot ideas: Spoiler for Help Please:
I… I have no clue whatsoever how to proceed with all this. Help? Ideas? Suggestions? Comments? Details? Anyone? Be nice, please (by that I mean, no “OMG ur stoopid NEGYMA sux u fayl at stohreetelyng” comments). |
2009-10-12, 02:45 | Link #16759 | |
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2009-10-12, 02:48 | Link #16760 |
Goat Herder
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And to add to that, there's her whole personal goal to consider, which is impossible if she goes rogue from the TSAB.
... also I'm getting serious deja vu here. Wasn't the idea of Teana going rogue brought up here once before?
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