Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Eratas123]

Post itI'll read

[DarkJak2050]

Well...

If you insist.

This is why I need accurate info on IS Representative Candidates/Cadets for this scene.

Spoiler for IS Academy Students and IS Pilots:

Looking at the live video feed provided by one of the many recon drones, I’ve noticed one thing about what’s going on within IS Academy.

“It seems that the most heavily traffic areas are around the school buildings, dorms, cafeteria, arenas and training field.”

While I’m looking at the video footages, Ratchet, Sideswipe and Scourge are looking at the holographic image lying out IS Academy; also provided from the recon drones.

“Which is obviously over half of the island…”

“Yeah. So much for doing the testing and training in peace.”

“Oh come on guys, at least we won’t be pestered by all of the countries.”

As we’re scouring over the data from the recon drones reconnaissance, Tezla entered the lab.

Using IS Academy as a testing grounds for the Silverbacks was something was what we least expected from him.

Now that the world knows about this, I got another thing on my mind.

“Anything about the move, Tezla?”

“I’m still working on it, Eric. But right now I’ve got some things to tell you.”

“Like what?”

Tezla sat down close to us the moment we’ve turned to him.

“Well, it’s about the IS Academy students. There are some things that you should know about them before we head to IS Academy.”

“Hmm…”

Judging from how firmed Tezla sounded, he must have known some things; most likely from being held captive by Phantom Task.

“For all we know, they’re IS Pilots in training.”

“That’s basically the generalization of the student body, Brian. But there’s more to it…”

“…”

Tezla shut down the holographic image of IS Academy that’s in the center of us.

“Among the trainees in the student body are a mixture of higher level IS pilots, but not up to the elite stage. It’s true that an IS Pilot is among the world’s elites these days. And there are IS Pilots out there who are actually above the elite.”

“Above the elite? Hold on.”

I cut in to make sure that I heard what Tezla said was exactly what he just said.

“You’re saying that there are some IS Pilots out there who are stronger than the special armed forces?”

Without hesitation, Tezla gave an immediate response.

“Yes…”

He adjusted himself on his seat to get himself more comfortable.

“Actually, to be more specific about it, there are multiple levels of IS Pilots; and the students in IS Academy are of no exception.”

“?”

Even the students are a part of it?

Thinking about that in my head, Tezla continued on.

“First, is an IS Pilot Trainee; the lowest level of all IS Pilots. The vast majority of IS Academy’s student body is comprised of them. The one key note about them, is that they’re civilians who have the potential to become IS Pilots. Even though they’re considered as IS Pilots, they’re in the basic stages of their training. At this level, it’s virtually no problem for a Navy SEAL or Army Ranger to subdue. The problem is the next level…”

Hearing that last sentence, all of us blinked while keeping our attention on Tezla.

“This level of IS Pilots are the Representative Candidates. There are fewer of them compared to the IS Pilot Trainees, but these pilots have their own personal IS, given to them from their country’s government. And they’re much better fighters; both in and out of their ISes. The six IS pilots you’ve fought during that Rogue IS incident are of this level. To say the least, their strength is of that of a Navy SEAL and Army Ranger put together.”

“So they’re somewhat equal to us?”

“That’s to say the least, Eric. Some other Representative Candidates may say otherwise.”

Cutting off his words for the short moment, he adjusts himself in his seat again, before resuming.

“And finally, there are the IS National Representatives; the highest level of all IS Pilots. They’re very few of them around the world; with each country having one National Representative. And they’re chosen from a pool of Representative Candidates. But I’ll have to give it to you straight…”

Tezla’s face made a serious look as he paused.

“The grim truth is, that these National Representatives are far stronger than that of a Navy SEAL and an Army Ranger put together.”

!... National Representatives are far stronger than them?

For Thunder Crash’s basic training, we were trained by active veterans from two of the world’s best special armed forces.

Using that as a comparison on where we stand to the National Representatives… This is not good…

“And exactly how many National Representatives are in IS Academy is unknown. Considering that we’re going to an island that has 400+ IS Pilots, things are probably going to get hairy for our testing.”

And as if the countries around the world are bad enough. After hearing about the levels of these IS Pilots, the best thing for us to do while we’re at IS Academy is to stick together. We don’t know what those girls will do while we’re there.

It's not as long as I would like it to be, but maybe with some help it can.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Well, I'm playing Red Dead: Undead Nightmare, so my view of nightmarish monsters is tainted by the fact that I have a giant shotgun and I'm riding a horse of the apocalypse.

Meanwhile I'm busy giving Ichika rocket punch and put him in outdated unit.

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

Well...

If you insist.

This is why I need accurate info on IS Representative Candidates/Cadets for this scene.

Spoiler for IS Academy Students and IS Pilots:

Looking at the live video feed provided by one of the many recon drones, I’ve noticed one thing about what’s going on within IS Academy.

“It seems that the most heavily traffic areas are around the school buildings, dorms, cafeteria, arenas and training field.”

While I’m looking at the video footages, Ratchet, Sideswipe and Scourge are looking at the holographic image lying out IS Academy; also provided from the recon drones.

“Which is obviously over half of the island…”

“Yeah. So much for doing the testing and training in peace.”

“Oh come on guys, at least we won’t be pestered by all of the countries.”

As we’re scouring over the data from the recon drones reconnaissance, Tezla entered the lab.

Using IS Academy as a testing grounds for the Silverbacks was something was what we least expected from him.

Now that the world knows about this, I got another thing on my mind.

“Anything about the move, Tezla?”

“I’m still working on it, Eric. But right now I’ve got some things to tell you.”

“Like what?”

Tezla sat down close to us the moment we’ve turned to him.

“Well, it’s about the IS Academy students. There are some things that you should know about them before we head to IS Academy.”

“Hmm…”

Judging from how firmed Tezla sounded, he must have known some things; most likely from being held captive by Phantom Task.

“For all we know, they’re IS Pilots in training.”

“That’s basically the generalization of the student body, Brian. But there’s more to it…”

“…”

Tezla shut down the holographic image of IS Academy that’s in the center of us.

“Among the trainees in the student body are a mixture of higher level IS pilots, but not up to the elite stage. It’s true that an IS Pilot is among the world’s elites these days. And there are IS Pilots out there who are actually above the elite.”

“Above the elite? Hold on.”

I cut in to make sure that I heard what Tezla said was exactly what he just said.

“You’re saying that there are some IS Pilots out there who are stronger than the special armed forces?”

Without hesitation, Tezla gave an immediate response.

“Yes…”

He adjusted himself on his seat to get himself more comfortable.

“Actually, to be more specific about it, there are multiple levels of IS Pilots; and the students in IS Academy are of no exception.”

“?”

Even the students are a part of it?

Thinking about that in my head, Tezla continued on.

“First, is an IS Pilot Trainee; the lowest level of all IS Pilots. The vast majority of IS Academy’s student body is comprised of them. The one key note about them, is that they’re civilians who have the potential to become IS Pilots. Even though they’re considered as IS Pilots, they’re in the basic stages of their training. At this level, it’s virtually no problem for a Navy SEAL or Army Ranger to subdue. The problem is the next level…”

Hearing that last sentence, all of us blinked while keeping our attention on Tezla.

“This level of IS Pilots are the Representative Candidates. There are fewer of them compared to the IS Pilot Trainees, but these pilots have their own personal IS, given to them from their country’s government. And they’re much better fighters; both in and out of their ISes. The six IS pilots you’ve fought during that Rogue IS incident are of this level. To say the least, their strength is of that of a Navy SEAL and Army Ranger put together.”

“So they’re somewhat equal to us?”

“That’s to say the least, Eric. Some other Representative Candidates may say otherwise.”

Cutting off his words for the short moment, he adjusts himself in his seat again, before resuming.

“And finally, there are the IS National Representatives; the highest level of all IS Pilots. They’re very few of them around the world; with each country having one National Representative. And they’re chosen from a pool of Representative Candidates. But I’ll have to give it to you straight…”

Tezla’s face made a serious look as he paused.

“The grim truth is, that these National Representatives are far stronger than that of a Navy SEAL and an Army Ranger put together.”

!... National Representatives are far stronger than them?

For Thunder Crash’s basic training, we were trained by active veterans from two of the world’s best special armed forces.

Using that as a comparison on where we stand to the National Representatives… This is not good…

“And exactly how many National Representatives are in IS Academy is unknown. Considering that we’re going to an island that has 400+ IS Pilots, things are probably going to get hairy for our testing.”

And as if the countries around the world are bad enough. After hearing about the levels of these IS Pilots, the best thing for us to do while we’re at IS Academy is to stick together. We don’t know what those girls will do while we’re there.

It's not as long as I would like it to be, but maybe with some help it can.

And this, jak, how you make a good male OC (or a group of them). Even if some say too much spotlight, you portrayed them in much better light, by not downplaying the strength of the girls.

[Eratas123]

@ Jak - Pretty good. But again, it still kinda confuses me why they'd o there of all places. ISA is a school, not a battlefield. It does research only because of lessons. You wouldn't be able to actually use an IS there when not in lesson time, for example. All the abuse is 'comedy'.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Lets be honest: If they were stuck in the CP world, they'd use their IS to bust out. Failing that, Chifuyu will glare all the sprits into submission and make them bow down.

We are going with IF they are simply students trapped in the school WITHOUT the use of their ISes. So we are only using their personalities.

[demino_hellsin]

non non non. We are assuming they have their IS. and then we assume the ghost was a former IS pilot who got shamed, stripped of her pilot's position, ended up in massive amounts of debt and was pushed into dehumanizing prostitution by her former financial backers who turned out to be part of an organized crime syndicate.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

We are going with IF they are simply students trapped in the school WITHOUT the use of their ISes. So we are only using their personalities.

........you guys still at it??

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

non non non. We are assuming they have their IS. and then we assume the ghost was a former IS pilot who got shamed, stripped of her pilot's position, ended up in massive amounts of debt and was pushed into dehumanizing prostitution by her former financial backers who turned out to be part of an organized crime syndicate.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

non non non. We are assuming they have their IS. and then we assume the ghost was a former IS pilot who got shamed, stripped of her pilot's position, ended up in massive amounts of debt and was pushed into dehumanizing prostitution by her former financial backers who turned out to be part of an organized crime syndicate.

Yandere Madoka should be the Sachiko of the crossover.

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

And this, jak, how you make a good male OC (or a group of them). Even if some say too much spotlight, you portrayed them in much better light, by not downplaying the strength of the girls.

But doesn't it feel kind of short? I feel that this scene should've been longer.

Are there any ways to extend it?

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Pretty good. But again, it still kinda confuses me why they'd o there of all places. ISA is a school, not a battlefield. It does research only because of lessons. You wouldn't be able to actually use an IS there when not in lesson time, for example. All the abuse is 'comedy'.

Why they're heading to IS Academy will be explained when Phase 2's Chapters are released.

Edit:
OKay, now I would like your guys's thoughts on this next idea for Phase 2.

I'm getting another idea for a different scene. Set before the start of Project Silverback, when my guys were in Thunder Crash, but they're at the base relaxing and watching an NHL Playoff game, along with the majority of the mercenary unit.

If there's a sport that Thunder Crash watch, it's Ice Hockey. Particularly, the National Hockey League.

How I'm going to use this scene in the actual story, will be when my guys are showing their past to the Canon Characters.

Why? It's to show that not all of their past is about being in combat.

[demino_hellsin]

@blitz: I'veonly read one corpse party manga and I don't remember veryone by name. But if I assume correctly, Madoka is far too tame for my tastes :P

@jak: and on the day of the finals they cancel all training and collect the bets

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

@blitz: I'veonly read one corpse party manga and I don't remember veryone by name. But if I assume correctly, Madoka is far too tame for my tastes :P

@jak: and on the day of the finals they cancel all training and collect the bets

But from what we have, canon Madoka is the only one that's batshit insane (to self mutiliating to wanting to Ichika's place and wanting to kill almost everybody around her)

[Eratas123]

And yet Madoka still scared of Tabane

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

and on the day of the finals they cancel all training and collect the bets

No bets man, no bets.

They actually support certain teams in the NHL. And if the team(s) they're supporting is playing, no bets are made and everyone's on that team's side.

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

And yet Madoka still scared of Tabane

Actually that is quite understandable. Because the reason contain spoiler, I am not going to say why she has a reason to be afraid.

[demino_hellsin]

Man, I haven't worked on an IS fic in like... 2 weeks.

[Eratas123]

Uh, no offense, but hasn't it been more like months? THat was the last time I saw an update.

[demino_hellsin]

But erachi, there is a difference between working on something and publishing it. XD

[Saint X]

2220 pages.

holy mother of god.

can anyone give me the a tldr summary of what has happened?

also, where any of my characters used?

[demino_hellsin]

TLDR: lots of gore. Alternative harem list. Older harem list. Lots and lots of techwank. some RL drama. Comparison of the OC plague to the rise in "corrected" Ichika boom. deconstruction deconstruction and more deconstruction. Some drafts. And here you are.

[Saint X]

lol suddenly i don't know where to catch up.

maybe i can reread everything i made and then some