Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

I just finished the drawing

Spoiler for somewhat big...:

Spoiler for I told you.:

Spoiler for that no one escapes...:

Spoiler for the caramelldansen!!!:

Too bad I couldn't fit Altea there
Oh, well, I'll just do one with Koji and her

*runs*

Caramelldansen spreads!!!! Epic picture!!!!!!!

Originally Posted by Kha

The latter. Besides, I got Khracker Three coming. :3

Oh boy...

Originally Posted by Kha

The person who created Gundam and Ideon. He's even more h4xx than I can ever be.

Good ol' "kill them all' Tomino

Originally Posted by Keroko

Allas, even they have succumbed to the sheer joyous hypnotism that is Caramel Dansen.

Although I can't really see Altea do the Caramel Dansen voluntarily. Did Koji drag her into it?

Oh, and speaking of strange art, I stumbled upon this little number recently:

Spoiler:

Someone better explain this, that person, and the smile on Tesla's face. *glares at all Gurren Lagann crackgoers*

By the gods...IT'S SPREADING!!!!!!!!!

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

NO! It's not like that! *takes deep breath*

I am a pervert and a gentleman!

Sure....

Originally Posted by Saint X

Plain and Simple:

Do not mess with Nanoha and her friends, or even Sakura K or her friends...

So very true....

Originally Posted by Kagerou

....
:Kyonko-facepalm*

Even Kagerou's reaction got infected by the gender-bending

Originally Posted by Kagerou

OH MY GOD.
THIS. THIS SONG. EPIC.

Not Epic...BEYOND GOD-LIKE

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Well here's my own version of Post-StrikerS stories.

Those who've had their OC's mentioned so far, I hope you don't mind me using 'em :3

Spoiler for My Story:

*snip*

Very nice writing there . Good amount of detail and it flowed pretty well, too. So RF6 is still operational after 6 years, huh? Still need to see where NERV would be at that point. Though that all really depends on what Kha has planned for them in ReBuild (and character development from Kagerou's Alpha).

Originally Posted by Keroko

Tesla is an eternal teenager. Do the math.

*starts doing some 4th degree polynomials and Fourier transforms*

Originally Posted by Keroko

Griffith VS Simon?

Oooh yes I can use this.

Incoming!!

*dives for cover*

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Kha

Man that was sooo impressive. Too bad it's not the OG (and maybe Kerokanon?) timeline; I'd love to be able to stick several OCs in there. :3

Then again, this might just be the continuation of the Good End of Unlimited Blake Works, which means Anita's gonna be really happy cos Kha'd be paired with Sophia... And so even it's NxF, it's all still Keikaku Doori...

That aside, great work! I love how I can feel the grit of the character here, and the non-emo background sure makes you not stand out at all, ne?

6 years after StrikerS? Hayate's still pretty busy huh?

*books the year MC 0079, 4 years after StrikerS. And maybe MC 0093*

:3

Well if you want me to throw in a few characters, I don't mind :3 This is supposed to be another 'Alternate Universe' so I don't mind doing so :3

Originally Posted by Liingo

@Ghazghkull
I hope you didn't try to slip that in at the end to try and hide the fact.. Interesting start to a story. Just one thing though. Given the highly accelerated rates of promotion that they have, The aces need not be at the same ranks as after Strikers. Then again it's your story so go with it.

LOL You referring to how I slipped in the three aces at the end?

Originally Posted by arkhangelsk

Captain, do you have a shortage of sensor specialists? Why do you let a non-specialist stand the watch? Are you not worried you might miss something significant? If he's in training as the story implies, where is the qualified sensor operator to back up the report?

So noted

Wow, Hayato. You personally can't pick up anything, so you conclude there is no activity within the star system, even though you are not qualified for your post. Wouldn't "No contacts, sir" be more intellectually honest? Or even "the scope is clear" (which only means nothing is showing on the scope, not that there is no acitivity.)

By the way, if there is really no activity inside the system, why is it so interesting. Is there no life in this star system? Would the time be better spent checking out the next system, then?

So noted

It is self contradictory for Akemi to be an older (senior) sister while being 6 years his junior (younger).

Ooops

The story tries very hard to make Takei be the bad guy, but Takei has a point. But again, where is the sensor instructor? Shouldn't he be doing this?

Noted

The fact that a pistoleer is considered "long-range" says a lot about the TSAB

*Shrugs*

He's that Gun-Kata guy you've been talking about awhile back, right? I don't blame his company commander one bit. At least in the show, Gun-Kata was statistically proven with a scientific (statistical) methodology, something that won't be possible for a family project.

Read my...Actually better yet, I'd rather not hear from you on that regard.

By the way, he's enlisted, but he graduated from the "Academy"?

Have you not read the StrikerS manga?

How many sisters does this man have? Is this the same one that's now in officer school?

He has the one, who's in officer school right now.

The TSAB has bunkers? And what weapons caches?

Tough luck, you whiner.

Oh, so your little nepotism failed, and now you want to fix it with more nepotism. Very typical TSAB, but still...

The selfishness of Hayato and family, trying to get someone else into the position they so hate...

I can't believe Hayato wants and expects someone to be fired for actually being fair and not falling victim to nepotism. Oh, the TSAB corruption!

Your guy seems to believe being assigned to an "exciting" unit is his right, not just his fortune...

So noted....and disregarded

Bad choice, Sergeant. Awful choice of words for a superior to use on a subordinate.

I've been there, literally on the receiving end of such...incompetence when I was an Air Cadet.

The TSAB has artillery? Sure would be nice to see some of them when Scarlietti was around...

I'm not going to give it any further response

I find it laughable that this formality occurred after the complete breakdown of discipline and superior-subordinate relationships above.

This line is marginal. I can see a private using the same words when speaking to his officer. Perhaps "I would like to speak with you" is more appropriate. In fact, have Rein say it, as in "The Colonel wants to see you."

Hayato might have something to him, but he needs a firm hand more than most if he's not to turn insubordinate, and Hayate isn't doing it.

I'll agree the Sergeant didn't act the best way there. However, Hayato was clearly insubordinate. To do nothing to Hayato while scrawling over the Sergeant's file is hypocritical and makes a mockery of the chain of command, the basic superior-subordinate relationships ... etc.

Also, the Sergeant is not under Hayate's chain of command. A more appropriate action will be to discuss this with the Platoon commander and let him decide. Hayate is making a hash of the unity of command principle.

Further, the action is unproductive. Does she think the Sergeant will reform? No. With the file scratched like that, his promotion prospects are probably shot forever. There's no point in being enthusiastic.

And who is Hayate to complain about unenthusiastic leadership (the Sergeant's only real "crime") anyway, considering StrikerS... pot kettle black.

Such neglect of discipline is typical of canon Hayate, who acted as if nothing has happened even after an incident where her training officer shot a trainee. But I thought this thread is moving in the De-Shaft Hayate direction, and even the canon Hayate is not such a pot-kettle-black hypocrite.

Okay, you got me there on Hayate.

I suppose the General Idea of the above was to portray Hayato as an enthusiastic visionary that is unafraid of authority. However, he doesn't look that way at all. He looks like a insubordinate, whiny, dislikable brat that keeps going "Rights! Rights! Rights!" when he's in a service and is supposed to be serving people. If that's what you want, I guess that's OK, you did a good job then. But if not, some thought is necessary.

Yeah....You are taking this WAY too seriously dude....granted you picked out things that I missed out....I'd rather you keep your hands off my story before this 'discussion' ends up in a heated argument, due to you finding logical fallacies in my story. If there's a contradiction, or an error, I'd rather let those whom I consider peers pick at it.

I'd rather not let any bad blood run boiling in here.

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

For a while there, I thought you actually went to do a Caramelldansen GIF with the template.

Still though.

There's a template?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

YATTE YARUZE!!!

Final Update of Ninja of Ninja Julie Liu Ming's profile is up!

Spoiler for Special Moves and Trivia:

Special Moves:

As with any self-respecting Belkaranger would have, Julie has her own set of special moves created through the combination of the various spells in her arsenal. Most of these are ranged attack spells made using her “Seven Swords” arsenal through her Impulse and Wizard spells.

Cannonball Shoot -

While Julie’s Boost Jump is more powerful than that of Asagi and Mayura’s, Julie can propel herself even farther by going though an oversized Gunner Wizard ring, essentially using herself as a projectile. While used mostly to enhance her mobility, this move can also be used offensively, with Julie blasting herself towards her enemies. This move can also be used to give Julie a form of “pseudo-flight” by “bouncing” into rings while in mid air to keep herself aloft, and in this manner the move is called “Ring Hop”. This move is quite dangerous with Julie having no control of her flight path once in the air, with the massive amount of energy needed to create such massive rings complicating matters, and is used only when absolutely necessary.

Blade Storm –

Asides from her Seven Swords, Julie also keeps an hefty load of physical throwing knives on her person. Julie can throw these knives using her Wizard spells to enhance their effectiveness, and her favorite method of using them is to summon all 6 of her Slash Wizard Rings around her and “load” them with knives using her teleport spell before unleashing them in a salvo against her enemies. As these Wizard Rings are maintained for as long as Julie needs them to she can keep loading them with knives, pelting her opponents with rain upon rain of knives, until her enemies are annihilated or she runs out of ammo.

Iron Blizzard –

This magically-taxing technique is similar in principle to Blade Storm, but using Julie’s Strike Balls and Gunner Wizard Rings instead. While Julie can only summon up to two Strike Balls she can keep creating them as long as her magic holds out, essentially giving her unlimited ammunition, unlike with her knives. Since Julie can only summon two balls at a time she needs a minimum of only two Wizard Rings, although she can enhance each ball’s already potent destructive power by using 3 rings per ball. And with each ball’s “Bunshin Makyuu” splitting ability she can unleash a wide-area torrent of magical explosive firepower at any spot where lots of death and destruction is needed, making it Julie’s most powerful technique.

Sturm Bolt –

The best and most concise way to describe this move would be: A Gunner/Blaze Impulse-propelled Baseball Bat, typically Julie’s Shuriken Bat, with a 90% knock-out rate. This is Julie’s most effective weapon anti-stupid weapon.

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“…”

“That’s all she ever uses it for anyway…”

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Blade Breaker –

While Julie’s Seven Swords are too valuable to be used as mere Wizard Ring ammunition, there have been cases when Julie has used them as such against powerful enemies due to their power and enhanced magical abilities. Julie can launch up to six of her swords at once in Blade Storm fashion, though their uniqueness means using them in this manner is a one-shot affair, and she’ll have to recover her blades manually, though she can use her teleport spell to “recall” them if they’re less than 10 meters away.

Buster Homerun –

One of Julie’s strangest uses for her Shuriken Bat is to use it to deflect and redirect an enemy ball-type physical or magic shot by batting it right back at them, which is accomplished through a specially-cast Triangle Shield on the batting head. While its practicality in combat is questionable, it has proven to be a useful move in certain cases, the threat of collateral damage aside.

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"... And I thought I was the only one with Gunbuster style attacks..."

"So that's where all your Buster Form attacks are from..."

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OMNI Slash –

Julie’s most powerful single sword technique, this is one of her more powerful trump cards. Julie charges at her enemy using Sonic Move with a dashing slash. If it misses, Julie maintains momentum by bouncing off a waiting Gunner Wizard Ring and recasting Sonic Move, redirecting her charge at the enemy in the blink of an eye without losing speed. By changing her orientation and deflection from each “bounce”, Julie can attack from different directions each time, confusing her enemy and allowing her to press on the attack until he is overwhelmed. This technique allows her to maintain the advantages of Sonic Move without its time limitations, and it can be used to overwhelm a single opponent, or an entire battalion of foes.

Though powerful, the intense forces on Julie’s body from the abrupt and nauseating changes in direction and constant high speed movement can leave her highly exhausted and strained, and if her attack fails she would be too weak and incapable of defending herself from attack.

Blade of Vengeance: OMNI Blade –

The ultimate of Julie’s Special Moves, and her most powerful melee technique, feared by all those who’ve seen its power. The OMNI Blade is a remarkably simple concept on paper: At the first opportunity Julie launches her enemy high into the air with a powerful strike, then assaults the enemy with OMNI Slash while at the same time launching a random sequence of timed Blade Breakers with 6 of her swords. By recalling each sword before it gets out of her range and re-launching them through Wizard Rings from different directions Julie can unleash an unceasing barrage of swords from all sides that will tear apart even the toughest enemies till he is utterly and unquestionably obliterated. For those unlucky enough to have forced Julie to use this technique, it is like a hail of blades descending upon them from all sides – from above, below, left, right, front, back, and everywhere in between - leaving them with no room to escape.

This ultimate technique is incredibly difficult to execute, for Julie not only has to attack the enemy at high speed, but also coordinate the launch, recall, and relaunch of all 6 flying blades – and timing her attacks to not get hit by her own weapons, on top of evading and anticipating enemy counterattacks and maintaining her own altitude with Wizard Rings. This overwhelming complexity makes this move extremely dangerous and risky for Julie to perform under normal situations, and it is a move most effective only against individual targets and opponents.

Also, the very nature of the OMNI Blade makes it impossible for Julie herself to WANT to use it, no matter the situation; As the sadistic epitome of excessive overkill, only Trisha, Julie’s persona of vengeance and hatred, has the mentality and killer desire to execute this move flawlessly, and thus OMNI Blade can only be unleashed when this Avenger takes over the reins.

So far, this move has only been recorded in action only 4 times in Julie’s entire life so far – with all four victims successfully terminated with extreme prejudice, including recently the infamous S-ranked rogue Knight Sven, which helped spread the terrifying legend of this technique amongst criminals and the TSAB alike.

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“That humongous macho guy always wielding this strange looking sword, with an ego larger than his already mammoth biceps. To think that he got chopped up by a girl three times smaller than him, serves him right…”

“In other words Kay, never piss her off. Not even I would be able to keep up.”

“Coming from you, I’ll believe that…”

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Trivia:

- Depending on which persona is currently active, Julie addresses Asagi in different ways.

As Ocean, she addresses Asagi as “Leader”.
Rin and Dell call her “Asa”.
Rusty refers to her as “Ms. Colwell”.
As Virgil, she’s known as “Sister”.
Tury playfully calls her “Big Sis”.
Yen’s name for her is “Comrade”.
Catty calls her by her complete name “Asagi Colwell”.
Tara has nicknamed her “A” or “C”.
Saul doesn’t refer to Asagi by name, only by “You”… as he does to everyone else.
And finally, Trisha strangely enough refers to her as “Asa-nee”.

This is typically the method by which most people who know her recognize who Julie’s current persona is in charge. Strangely enough, Julie more or less calls Mayura by “Mayura” or “Mayu” no matter which persona is in charge, asides from Saul.

- Julie’s disguises are more or less perfect to the point that most mages would need to concentrate in order to pick out her unique magical signature. Strangely enough, Asagi can confidently identify Julie at a glance no matter what disguise she uses, unlike Mayura who would have difficulty picking out the girl without at least a proper scan.

The only time Asagi has failed to identify Julie’s disguise was then the latter disguised herself as Mitsuomi Takahashi, the actor behind Boukenger’s BoukenRed, in order to lure the stalking and awe-struck Asagi away from the real Takahashi and prevent an embarrassing disaster from taking place. Thankfully the matter was resolved without much incident, and the Belkarangers got to claim their individual mementos from the star.

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“Fangirls.”

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- While she was introduced to Super Sentai first due to Asagi’s influence, Julie has a slight preference towards the Metal Heroes series of Japanese Tokusatsu shows, with her favorite of that series being “Uchuu Keiji Shaider” (Space Sheriff Shaider).

Her all time favorite Toku character though is Shurikenger from the Super Sentai title “Ninpuu Sentai Hurricanger”, reflected in her use of his costume as one of her barrier jacket designs. The character’s story as a faceless ninja forever disguising himself as other people is one of his appeals to Julie’s own predicament, not to mention his love of baseball and over-the-top attitude, and when using her incidentally named “Shurikenger” form she copies out his mannerisms almost perfectly. When speaking about him, Julie always refers to him as “Shurikenger-sama”.

- Ever since she could remember, Julie has had an incredible aptitude for acting and drama. This aspect of her makes a lot of her duties as an infiltrator possible, and it is also the base for her representation of her various personas. Despite this talent though, Julie has repeatedly denied the invitations, requests and suggestions of her entering show business.

- Julie has incredible access to all manner of digital and human intelligence resources, all due to the influence of her eldest brother and current head of LM Digital Andrew Liu Ming, who has lots of connections in various intelligence agencies in Ordered Space due to their reliance on equipment and services provided by their family’s company, and her sister Tina, who works as a TSAB Intelligence field agent. While Julie is not cleared to access high-level sensitive information, she is still able to gain leads and tips on Lost Logia movements and locations from her sources, invaluable to SGS operations.

- Despite being the self-proclaimed romantic of the bunch, Julie has so far failed to attract or maintain a relationship with any guy she has been introduced to, most often due to… interference from her various personas popping out due to her almost chronic nervousness and confusion as Ocean when it comes to matters of love. Many horror stories abound, from Trisha threatening to cut off a suitor’s private parts, to finding out her partner had a Lolita complex when Tury showed up, and even Saul’s body appearing just as her date French kissed her…

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“… and I heard the guy needed SEVERE psychiatric help soon after”

“Amen.”

“Should I add in the part about Gil?”

“Gilliam? Gilliam Aker?”

“Yes him, who seems to be the most persistent in the pursuit of Julie’s feelings…

On the other hand, maybe not… It won’t be fun if Julie finds out Gil has feelings for her from reading this…”

“…

And you say I’M evil…”

“It’s the man-and-woman-who-like-each-other-but-can’t-seem-to-say-it-yet-everybody-else-knows scenario, it’s much better if they find it out themselves!”

“… I give up.”

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And that ends the profile for the three primary Belkarangers, but like all Super Sentai you need additional members, so stay tuned!

Wow, those are some nasty, yet cool, attacks

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Caramelldansen spreads!!!! Epic picture!!!!!!!

And here's the rest of the pic, I just finished it

Spoiler for BreakerS Caramelldansen 2:

Well...back to work...
*runs*

[krisslanza]

The Caramelldansen just can't be escaped can it...?

[LimitedEternal]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

And here's the rest of the pic, I just finished it

Spoiler for BreakerS Caramelldansen 2:

Well...back to work...
*runs*

Someone doesn't look very happy about being a part of this...it is cute, though.

Originally Posted by krisslanza

The Caramelldansen just can't be escaped can it...?

There is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escape

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by arkhangelsk

Actually, if by God you meant something like Jehovah in Judeo-Christian religion (or Allah for Muslims), sorry, that guy, who only handles one universe, is only Tier 8 or thereabouts. In the Seinarukana context, he's but a Jiroru fragment. The Sword that Jesus will bring in Revelations 1:16 will be cast as a Class 5-6 Eternity Sword, complete with permanent wills for his beast.

Not that god...

since you're placing it in the Seinarukana context, you will know what i mean. unless...

and yes, the "" smiley is somewhat annoying and an invitation for a plasma torch

Originally Posted by Kha

I believe the spoiler kinshi level can be downgraded by now...

Spoiler for 22 Spoilers:

I feel sad for Michael. I still think he was the only Trinity worth saving.

And I was right! VEDA was Aeolia's brain!

Now the Cleric-Knights have a unique name for their Limiter Breaks, and it really looks like Arisa Trinity crack is building a hell lot faster, not to mention Hiro finding himself in a harem situation...

- Why Michael? I don't his fangs sinking anywhere here.

- Been right all along with VEDA... but that means...

Tiera/Ribbons: NOOOOOOO~ *sound of lightsaber slicing thru hand*

- Did you say Arisa has a Trinity?

*imagines 3 boys chasing after her*

Originally Posted by Liingo

@SaintX
Nice character models that you're using. Looks good overall. XD

Bridget? Ruri? who?

Thanks ayways

hey~

when did i double compute?

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

And you forgot Tier 11...Becoming the GOD of HAXX!!!

HUSH YOU!

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Now all we need is a Harmonizer Keroko that in an epic story, will take all Kerokos into him/her to become the one true Keroko. :3

The Quest for the One True Keroko Begins...

Is she tsun-tsun, dere-dere or yan-yan

*runs from ICB*

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Hmm...

Spoiler:

Tesla couldn't hide her giddiness, as she sets herself on the half-completed bridge of the latest developmental warship model. Her eyes were literally sparkling as her eyes motioned the entire place as if she's rushing in Starcraft, though her rational side still comes into place as she wonders why the heck does the bridge she's standing in has such a long central pathway, almost as if it was made for a fashion walk or something.

"It'd suit an overdecorated captain with the love for bravados, though. Like that idio-"

...

What...

What... was...

Tesla dropped to her knees, as her head were in pain, almost as if it's splitting in two, as she held it hard.

"What did I just..."

The pain hit her hard, as she dropped down completely, her mind slowly losing its conscious, though at that last moment, she recalls something that she had never seen before.

An image of a bridge, and the back of a man... donned with a cape with the symbol of a burning demon skeleton...

A natural hair of deep blue... and a voice that rings deep.

"Believe in me."

Believe in who...?

"Believe in me who loves you, Tesla!"

possible story?

Spoiler:

A long time ago... Tesla met a small boy, from an off-shoot Scryan-ish tribe.

He was often discriminated, for being merely a good-for-nothing except excavating, which held little value compared to the more 'smart' Scrya-tribe, which are far more able to locate key-sites through their research/site-surveying skills.

In his hand held a small device he excavated... just when he was about to throw it away...

Tesla spoke to him, and reprimanded that.

"You can't do that, boy. Even if others think it holds little value, it is something you found through your hardwork and spirit.

This, represents your heart, and soul."

Days later, as he was returning back from the excavation site to his home...

He found his village destroyed.

By whom were called... the Wolkenritter.

Then, time passes...

Tesla stayed the same, while 11 years later, the boy became a man.

And when Tesla awakened once again under the Book of Darkness... the 2 of them meet again.

WHY DOES IT COMPUTE SO MUCH

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

...and a crapload of guns and ammo.

Kyla checks over the shipment of ammo from *static*

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

...Gilliam Aker?

.....Gespenst-RV & GN OVERFlag fusion?

Fixed

ALL HAIL!!!

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From me: nothing much so far...

[Erio]

Wow, tons of new backlog, but nothing much to comment on. Except for one thing. Kha, that's a ton of crack you got there!

Oh, and that female!Kamina pic is so disturbing... damn, my eyes.

And yes, my little free time is being eaten by Brawl these past few days.

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Hmm...

Spoiler:

Tesla couldn't hide her giddiness, as she sets herself on the half-completed bridge of the latest developmental warship model. Her eyes were literally sparkling as her eyes motioned the entire place as if she's rushing in Starcraft, though her rational side still comes into place as she wonders why the heck does the bridge she's standing in has such a long central pathway, almost as if it was made for a fashion walk or something.

"It'd suit an overdecorated captain with the love for bravados, though. Like that idio-"

...

What...

What... was...

Tesla dropped to her knees, as her head were in pain, almost as if it's splitting in two, as she held it hard.

"What did I just..."

The pain hit her hard, as she dropped down completely, her mind slowly losing its conscious, though at that last moment, she recalls something that she had never seen before.

An image of a bridge, and the back of a man... donned with a cape with the symbol of a burning demon skeleton...

A natural hair of deep blue... and a voice that rings deep.

"Believe in me."

Believe in who...?

"Believe in me who loves you, Tesla!"

possible story?

Spoiler:

A long time ago... Tesla met a small boy, from an off-shoot Scryan-ish tribe.

He was often discriminated, for being merely a good-for-nothing except excavating, which held little value compared to the more 'smart' Scrya-tribe, which are far more able to locate key-sites through their research/site-surveying skills.

In his hand held a small device he excavated... just when he was about to throw it away...

Tesla spoke to him, and reprimanded that.

"You can't do that, boy. Even if others think it holds little value, it is something you found through your hardwork and spirit.

This, represents your heart, and soul."

Days later, as he was returning back from the excavation site to his home...

He found his village destroyed.

By whom were called... the Wolkenritter.

Then, time passes...

Tesla stayed the same, while 11 years later, the boy became a man.

And when Tesla awakened once again under the Book of Darkness... the 2 of them meet again.

Originally Posted by krisslanza

The Caramelldansen just can't be escaped can it...?

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

Someone doesn't look very happy about being a part of this...it is cute, though.

Not just cute, tsundere cute

As as seen, only Maren and Altea find embarrassing to dance it

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

There is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escapeThere is no escape

Originally Posted by Saint X

hey~

when did i double compute?

oops, my bad

*edits post*

Originally Posted by Saint X

HUSH YOU!

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

There's a template?

Yup . Check out the first post of the Caramelldansen thread here.

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

And here's the rest of the pic, I just finished it

Spoiler for BreakerS Caramelldansen 2:

Well...back to work...
*runs*

There's MORE?!?!

Originally Posted by krisslanza

The Caramelldansen just can't be escaped can it...?

Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.
Escape is futile.

Originally Posted by Saint X

hey~

when did i double compute?

*looks around for flying pigs*

Originally Posted by Saint X

The Quest for the One True Keroko Begins...

Is she tsun-tsun, dere-dere or yan-yan

*runs from ICB*

*runs far, far, FAR away from SaintX*

Originally Posted by Erio

Wow, tons of new backlog, but nothing much to comment on. Except for one thing. Kha, that's a ton of crack you got there!

Oh, and that female!Kamina pic is so disturbing... damn, my eyes.

And yes, my little free time is being eaten by Brawl these past few days.

Welcome back to the backlog and crack Erio

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Oh man...I want to go home already .
The Kamen Rider Den-O movie just got subbed and I MUST WATCH IT!!!!!!

[Kha]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Ah, Tesla-chan it is then

...

Though that still isn't any consolation now is it?

*Smith and Creator-san RUNS FASTER*

Yeah.

Originally Posted by Saint X

- Why Michael? I don't his fangs sinking anywhere here.

- Been right all along with VEDA... but that means...

Tiera/Ribbons: NOOOOOOO~ *sound of lightsaber slicing thru hand*

- Did you say Arisa has a Trinity?

*imagines 3 boys chasing after her*

I mixed up Michael and Johann! NUUUUuuuuuuuuuuu.....

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

There's MORE?!?!

No
I'm just going back to writing the next chapter

Which reminds me...

@Keroko: Mind if I use the same name you did for the prison Jail and his loyal numbers are being kept?

[Keroko]

I was unaware I had copyright on it.

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Keroko

I was unaware I had copyright on it.

Maybe when you make things it gets Keroright?

[Kagerou]

...
:Kyonko Facepalm:

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Keroko

I was unaware I had copyright on it.

Well considering it was probably your idea originally, that's why people are asking for rights to use it. It's the same thing with me asking if I can use Syn, Keroko, and Tesla actively in my story.

[Kha]

I suppose that grants me a right to Khapyright? And is copying Keroright a Khapyleft?

*runs from frozen tsukikomi*

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Kha

I suppose that grants me a right to Khapyright? And is copying Keroright a Khapyleft?

*runs from frozen tsukikomi*

Sorry Kagerou...I'm gonna need to copy you to reply to this one...

...
:Kyonko facepalm:

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Kha

I suppose that grants me a right to Khapyright? And is copying Keroright a Khapyleft?

*runs from frozen tsukikomi*

KHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!

Btw, I've also added a picture for what Reddo Farukon looks like :3 *points to link on the bottom of his Signature banner*

*Runs like the wind*

[FlameSparkZ]

It's amazing how a simple question can trigger all this...

Anyways...here's Chapter 23!

Spoiler for Chapter 23 - Codename: Heart Waver - Part 1:

[Skies above Mid-Childa Urban Area - Helicopter]
[14:54 MST]

The helicopter was heading to the TSAB Ground Central, where they'd take the warp to the TSAB Main Branch HQ, and from there a ship would take them to the Maximum Security Prison.

Inside the helicopter, Koji stared at his right hand...

[Flashback]
"Koji..." Cinque said, extending her right hand.
"Eh?" Koji blinked.
"I never got to thank you properly...For saving us that day."
Koji smiled, grabbing her hand for a handshake.
"Good luck." Cinque smiled.
"Cinque-san too, good luck. For you and your sisters."

They looked at each other, nodded and parted ways.
[/Flashback]

And closed his hand, smiling.
"Cinque-san is a great person, isn't she?" Maren said as she saw Koji like that.
"Yeah..." He nodded.
"The others too, it's hard to believe that last month they were still our enemies..." Yui said.
Fate nodded, "That girl, Lutecia, too...what I read about her reminds me of myself when I was about her age..."
Koji and the others looked at Fate as she reminisced.

"She helped gather Relic cores for Scaglietti so her mother could be revived..." Fate looked at the floor.
"Can a actually Relic do that?" Koji asked.
"According to the information retrieved so far from the laboratory's main computer, each Relic core has an innate ability or purpose, they just needed to find one compatible with the host." Rein explained.
"Lutecia said that the one she was looking for was Relic number 11. They had found several of them but not the intended one."
"So, that Relic must still be out there, right?" Yui asked Fate.
"It is very possible, either it was already found, or still it is buried somewhere, we don't know..." Fate replied.
As Koji heard that, he remembered the incident three years ago...and looked out the window.
(Lost Logia...Relic...what exactly are they? And for what purpose were they made?) He asked himself.

"Oh! There it is." Vice said as he saw the TSAB Ground Central.
"Everyone, we're almost at the Ground Central, just wait a bit longer and we'll land." Alto announced.
Yui sighed, "Thank goodness..." She looked a bit relieved, but also nervous.
"Yui, Is something wrong?" Maren asked.
"W-well...nothing really..." Yui replied, fidgeting.
"It doesn't look like 'nothing'..." Koji said.
"Yes but...it's kind of embarrassing." Yui's legs restlessly rubbed against each other.
"Just say it already...it can't be that bad." He forced her to say it.
"I-I need to go to the bathroom!" Yui said it loud and clear.

Silence filled the helicopter...
Koji's eyebrow twitched, "I-I'm sorry I asked..." He looked away, embarrassed.
The others also had a shade of red on their faces.
"Mou...Onii-chan no ijiwaru..." Yui pouted.
"H-how could I possibly know?" He countered.
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[TSAB Ground Central - Heliport]
[15:07 MST]

Having arrived, Yui dashed out of the helicopter, into the building.
While the others calmly left the helicopter.

"Well, this is as far as we can go." Vice said, with Alto at his side.
"We'll go pick up the Forwards and Treize and head back to the RF6 HQ." Alto said.
"Thanks for the ride." Fate thanked them.
"No problem, Fate-san." Vice grinned.

Having said farewell to Alto and Vice, they saw the helicopter take off, then entered the building.
"The teleporter room is this way..." Rein said, looking at one hall.
"And the closest bathroom is this way." Koji said, looking at another hall.
"Well go pick up Yui first and then head to the teleporter." Fate suggested.
"No, I'll go get her, you can go on ahead." Koji asked them.
"Okay." Fate replied without hesitating.
"Okay ~desu" Rein said after Fate.
"I can accompany you if you wish..." Maren looked at him.
"It's okay, Maren...go with Fate-senpai and Rein." Koji looked at her.
"O-okay..." Maren said a tad disappointed.

Fate and Rein headed to the teleporter while Maren saw Koji go the other way, catching up with them afterwards.
"Fate-san..."
"Yes?" Fate looked at Maren.
"How can I say this...I'm worried about Koji-sama."
"So you sensed it too." Fate replied, looking ahead.
"Eh?" Maren looked at Fate.
"It's about Koji wanting to speak to Jail Scaglietti, right?" Fate asked.
"Yes." Maren nodded.
"I found it odd too." Fate paused, "The part about Treize seems to be true, but I can feel there's another reason."
"Yes, it's like something is bothering him." Maren speculated.
"Unfortunately it's no use asking Koji about it, he'll try to change the topic." Fate said.
Rein sighed, "Koji-sama is doing it again...carrying the burden all on his own..."
"Again?" Maren blinked.

They arrived to the teleport room, but waited for Koji and Yui.
And while they didn't come, Fate and Rein talked to Maren about Koji's past.

Sitting down, Fate began to speak, "It's been eight years since I met him, but he's still very passionate when it comes to his friends and family. In fact, I'd say he sees us all more as family than friends."
Maren agreed with a nod.
"Back then, when he met me and Nanoha through Signum, and knew that we were mages, he asked us to teach him Mid-Childa style as well."
"He tried hard to be good at both styles, and was learning fast, but his magical growth couldn't catch up with his progress and eventually came to a stop when he reached his limit."

"After that, Koji-sama focused on the Belka style that Signum taught him, and worked with it to make a new style to fit his needs." Rein added.
"Koji's style can be considered Neo-Belka, but also somewhat different as it uses more Mid-Childa style than the standard Neo-Belka does."
"I see..." Maren gave it some thought. "So Koji-sama hasn't changed much, he still wants to be strong enough to protect everyone he cares about...even if it means pushing himself to his limits."

"It's not just Koji, we're all like that." Fate paused, and looked at Bardiche. "We all have someone we care about. It's only natural that you'd want to be stronger so you are able to protect that person."
"Yes." Maren nodded. "But is it really alright to do it alone?" She asked no one in particular.
"We agreed to establish a contract between us, that made us both stronger...and I'm supposed to protect Koji-sama, but he insists in protecting me instead..."

"Maren-san..." Rein interrupted her, "About that contract you made with Koji-sama...it provides him with more magic isn't that right?"
"Yes. Since much of my power is sealed away, my magic reserves tend to become full and stagnate if I don't release enough power. Now that the contract linked us, my excess magic is sent to Koji-sama."
"As I thought..." Fate pondered, "That contract between you provided Koji with what he couldn't achieve before. Thankfully, it seems he knows how to use it without it affecting him."
"What do you mean?" Rein blinked.
"Yes, it's only a theory due to lack of solid evidence. But it says that one might become affected by another person's magic if it is given to them on a regular basis." Fate explained.
"EH? I-is that so?" Maren worried.
"M-Maren, like I said, it hasn't been proven yet! Besides, Koji has a strong will, he wouldn't be influenced that easily." Fate tried to assure her.
"Thank you, Fate-san." Maren sighed in relief.
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Meanwhile, in the opposite direction, Koji leaned against a wall, waiting for Yui to come out.
(Just a bit longer...if all goes as planned, Scaglietti will brag about his work, and I'll have the answers I want.) He thought, with a serious expression.
"Ah, Onii-chan! You came to get me, thank you~" Yui saw him as she left the bathroom, but he was still meditating.
"Onii-chan?" She got closer. "Onii-chan!"
"Eh?" Koji snapped out, "Oh...you're out. Let's go." He said, and started walking.
"mou..." Yui replied as she saw him go.
As she followed him, Yui said to herself, (Lately, Onii-chan has been acting strange...something must be troubling him.)
She looked at his back as she followed him, (But...even if I ask, Onii-chan will just say it's nothing, to avoid talking about it.)
(At times like this, I feel like there's a wall between us...) Yui worried.
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[Dimensional Sea - TSAB Main Branch]
[15:12 MST]

Koji and Yui met up with everyone at the teleport room, and took the warp to the Main Branch HQ.
Arriving, they headed to the ship hangar to meet up with the person who was to take them to the Off-World Maximum Security Prison.

In the hangar, they saw Chrono talking to a clerk, possibly giving him instructions for something.
The group walked towards them, as they noticed Fate and the others, the clerk saluted them, then Chrono, excused himself and went on his way.
"Admiral Chrono." Fate said as she saluted him, the others saluted him as well.
"It's been a while, Enforcer Fate, Enforcer Maren, Master Sergeant Reinforce, Knight Koji and Private Yui." Chrono greeted them.
(pu~~~ I'm the only one with a low rank...even though after the JS Incident I became a Private Second Class...) Yui complained to herself.
"What brings you here?" Chrono asked, palyfully feigning ignorance.
"I requested for a ship to take us to the Orbital Prison Facility 354, where Jail Scaglietti is." Fate replied.
"That would be Claudia. My crew is currently doing a quick check to her systems, we'll depart shortly." Chrono said.
"Understood." Fate replied formally.

Koji waited patiently...killing time by thinking of what questions to ask Scaglietti, while pretending to be looking at the ships.
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[Dimensional Sea - XV-class Warship, Claudia ]
[15:18 MST]

En route to the Orbital Prison Facility 354, Koji and the others waited in a room, while Fate spoke with Chrono in another room.
"What? Koji requested it?" Chrono looked at Fate, somewhat surprised.
"I'm sorry I didn't tell you earlier..." But before Fate could finish, Chrono spoke.
"No it's okay, I just find it odd. As far as I know, he's never been involved in investigating any case concerning Scaglietti. For him suddenly ask this, I can understand why you didn't mention it."
"I tried to ask him, but you know how Koji is." Fate said concerned.
"Well..." Chrono sighed, "It can't be helped, he's been like that ever since we've known him."
Fate nodded in agreement, "I just hope it's not something serious..."
Chrono looked out the window, staring at the flow of dark purplish 'matter' go by, (Koji...what the heck are you trying to find out?) He asked himself...
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Why does this chapter has this name? You'll find out in the next part

That's it for now
The next part should be posted soon, sicne most of it is already written, just needs to be revised and updated

But right now, I'm tired...
*goes to bed*

[Fuyu no Sora]

@Thread: Hey guys.

Due to some problems on my end, I'll be most probably missing for a while... I'll be mostly like Aaron and crawl in sometime to comment on something...Anyway, hope you guys have fun. Keep the backlog going (hurray for super long to-read list) 'kay?

Oh and @Keroko-kun: Do keep fighting against the Darth Chaos He needs ro realize not all of us are his 'acolytes'