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Eratas123 · 2011-12-13, 11:49

@ Treme - How in the hell did they all meet each other? Their locations are far away from each other.

agetreme · 2011-12-13, 11:54

err....

Mr Dunios went on a "world-tour" vacation......for a year.

Edit:
About the female character.... she has a mother who is not even more than twice her age.... The age of her mother is 28, she is a first year in ISA. Go do the math and you will realize how bad her father actually is. Has two half siblings(two different mothers) in another countries)

Eratas123 · 2011-12-13, 11:57

@ Treme - Then he had to have gone on two since Tatenashi was born a year before Kanzashi.

agetreme · 2011-12-13, 12:08

Hmm... you are right, then again Detail are not important since I am not going to expand it beyond this.....

Placeholder name for the Female character: Alma.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-13, 12:12

Oh christ, please don't tell me she wears red dresses or has psychic power running through her

agetreme · 2011-12-13, 13:23

How about her IS function like one?

edit: According to meaning of name, that name means Maiden in Hebrew... since she is pro-women.....

kazuma via america · 2011-12-13, 17:04

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Originally Posted by kazuma via america

ZeroXSEED just might get to develop the IS unit then.

well look like ZeroXSEED gets to choose the specifics for the new character for my fan fiction since nobody else wanted to put in there name

ZeroXSEED · 2011-12-13, 17:23

Quote:

Originally Posted by kazuma via america

well look like ZeroXSEED gets to choose the specifics for the new character for my fan fiction since nobody else wanted to put in there name

Give me the sex, basic personality and appearance, I'll give them name, origin, skill-set, and unit.

EDIT: just read "The American Transfer Student" and let me being a jerkass for a while: The worst OC-fic ever created in I.S. Fandom.

MeisterBabylon · 2011-12-13, 19:43

The title made me think it was a gag fic. But now that's just terrible.

No update from me yet.

kazuma via america · 2011-12-13, 20:05

alright ZeroXSEED all the specifications are yours.

agetreme · 2011-12-13, 20:28

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Give me the sex, basic personality and appearance, I'll give them name, origin, skill-set, and unit.

EDIT: just read "The American Transfer Student" and let me being a jerkass for a while: The worst OC-fic ever created in I.S. Fandom.

At least it is not the worst..... It is only bad because.... there are worst fanfic out there.....

EthernalRain · 2011-12-13, 20:50

Hello! I'm back from updating myself on all that I missed.

Anyone need anything?

blitz1/2 · 2011-12-13, 21:07

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Give me the sex, basic personality and appearance, I'll give them name, origin, skill-set, and unit.

EDIT: just read "The American Transfer Student" and let me being a jerkass for a while: The worst OC-fic ever created in I.S. Fandom.

Well, to me, it just felt that the dialogue was all over the place, another one was that the author didn't introduce her character properly, which gave me a "who is this I character?" Then we are immediately thrust with the fact, oh "I have a sis?"

Next, her monologue screams Sue at you. She's like 'oh I get beat Tatenashi, and oh I bet I can beat all the other pilots unless they gang up on me.' This killed my interest REAL fast. Although, it would be funny if the oc does get her ass handed to her and she goes emo.
next, i was like "what the hell does a fan get to do with IS piloting?"

And what the heck is the setting? First we have a meeting with the IS rep group, then we have Ran, then we are in a bath.

EDIT: never mind, this oc is a guy? WTF. Suggestion to author: MAJOR Corrections are needed.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-13, 21:19

@ Senpai and Rain - Part of Laura's next Daydream. Can you read and tell me what you think?

Spoiler:

EthernalRain · 2011-12-13, 21:22

@ Eratas: It's really good!

Ichika slept with Laura?

Well, at least it didn't go like the time she first slept with him in canon.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-13, 21:24

@ Rain - Clarissa told Laura that Ichika had to sleep on the same bed as her since she was his guide. Laura agreed for now and dragged him to the bed. Unfortunately, he bear hugged her and wouldn't let go of her so she had to sleep like that.

EthernalRain · 2011-12-13, 21:26

@ Eratas: Interesting habit.

I believe I read that one. A different iteration of "marshmallow hell".

Need any help with anything?

Eratas123 · 2011-12-13, 21:28

@ Rain - Gonna continue the Saw parody soon. Do you think there should be a time limit like Bobby Dagen's tests?

EthernalRain · 2011-12-13, 21:31

@ Eratas: It would give the protags more incentive to finish the tests quickly, which increases the chances for more errors and mistakes.

If more errors and mistakes are what you'd like to add, then put time limit.

But if they have the time to think about the situation, they'll try to solve it in more unique ways. If you like that, then don't put the time limit.

Eratas123 · 2011-12-13, 21:37

I'm still confused for a first test for Irish

All of the other traps can't be faked. I was thinking of the Venus Flytrap, but then I realized you have to cut near your eye and that can't be faked.

2011-12-13, 11:49	Link #12821
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Treme - How in the hell did they all meet each other? Their locations are far away from each other. __________________

2011-12-13, 11:54	Link #12822
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	err.... Mr Dunios went on a "world-tour" vacation......for a year. Edit: About the female character.... she has a mother who is not even more than twice her age.... The age of her mother is 28, she is a first year in ISA. Go do the math and you will realize how bad her father actually is. Has two half siblings(two different mothers) in another countries) __________________ Ara Han

2011-12-13, 11:57	Link #12823
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Treme - Then he had to have gone on two since Tatenashi was born a year before Kanzashi. __________________

2011-12-13, 12:08	Link #12824
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	Hmm... you are right, then again Detail are not important since I am not going to expand it beyond this..... Placeholder name for the Female character: Alma. __________________ Ara Han

2011-12-13, 12:12	Link #12825
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Oh christ, please don't tell me she wears red dresses or has psychic power running through her __________________

2011-12-13, 13:23	Link #12826
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	How about her IS function like one? edit: According to meaning of name, that name means Maiden in Hebrew... since she is pro-women..... __________________ Ara Han

2011-12-13, 19:43	Link #12829
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	The title made me think it was a gag fic. But now that's just terrible. No update from me yet. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-12-13, 20:05	Link #12830
kazuma via america Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: New York Age: 29	alright ZeroXSEED all the specifications are yours. __________________ Love has three shades dark red, red and pink. each representing how you heart is. loving, hurting or missing something. which are you?

2011-12-13, 20:50	Link #12832
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	Hello! I'm back from updating myself on all that I missed. Anyone need anything?

2011-12-13, 21:19	Link #12834
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai and Rain - Part of Laura's next Daydream. Can you read and tell me what you think? Spoiler: "A new project by the German Military. It goes by the name: Valkyrie Trace System." Clarissa felt herself stiffen as she heard the Captain’s announcement. The Valkyrie Trace system, or VT system for short, was an experimental system designed by the German research division “Did you say the Valkyrie Trace system? Wasn’t that still in the experimental phase just a few months ago?” Clarissa nearly lost her grip on the phone as she tried to stay composed. Chifuyu was staring at her, but she ignored her for now. She had bigger things to worry about. “Rest assured, the project has been perfected and all of the kinks have been worked out to ensure the most possible benefits.” Enyala answered. The fact that she didn’t answer whether the user would be safe or not wasn’t lost on Clarissa. “When do you plan to do this experiment?” Clarissa asked. “We will be doing the experiment once we are prepared to do so. Just prepare for our arrival at any point.” Clarissa tried to ask for more information, but the phone clicked and the line disconnected. Sighing, she sat back down on her seat and grabbed the glass of wine again. “What happened?” Chifuyu asked, worry evident in her voice. “Well.....it’s a bit complicated. I’d rather not talk about it.” She poured more wine onto her glass and raised it to her lips slowly. Chifuyu stood up from her seat before she took the glass away from Clarissa’s hand and placed it gently on the table. “What was that for?” Clarissa asked annoyed at the fact that her drink was taken from her. She really needed one right now and talking to the Captain just made it worse. Chifuyu sat back down and merely looked at her with that all too familiar stare of hers. “I asked you what happened.” She said this without any hints of threats or pleading, but Clarissa knew all too well what would happen if she didn’t answer. Clarissa gulped and resisted the urge to whimper (Standard when Chifuyu gives you that look) before composing herself. “Do you know what the Valkyrie Trace system is?” She asked. “No.” She replied curtly. Clarissa leaned back in her chair and tried to relax herself. This was going to be a long night. “Then I guess I’m going to have to explain.” “You should.” She really needed a drink right now. ~o.O.o~ Sunlight shined through the small windows of the barracks and bathed the entire living area with light. The various recruits were moving around, preparing for the days events, but there were two who had yet to awaken. All of them looked at the last bed on the corner of the room where two figures were blissfully sleeping. One was the boy who had introduced himself to them only yesterday and the other was their best soldier, their arms were wrapped around each other in an embrace. No one could find an odder pair, but they seemed to complement each other perfectly. “Do you think they’re together?” One of them asked. “Laura? You really think Miss ‘I can shoot you from 50 feet away wih my eyes closed’ is in a relationship?” Another answered. “Then why are they hugging and sleeping on the same bed?” Another asked. “She was probably asleep and he just slept there last night.” “Doesn’t that mean he likes her? Why else would he sleep on her bed when it’s the farthest from the entrance? It couldn’t have been an accident.” “...” They all sighed in dissapoinment as they left the room. They just lost their chance of getting into a relationship that Lieutenant Clarissa kept telling them about when she read shoujo manga. They did agree on one thing, however: If anyone would benefit from a relationship, it would’ve been Laura ‘Ice queen’ Bodewig. __________________

2011-12-13, 21:22	Link #12835
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@ Eratas: It's really good! Ichika slept with Laura? Well, at least it didn't go like the time she first slept with him in canon.

2011-12-13, 21:24	Link #12836
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain - Clarissa told Laura that Ichika had to sleep on the same bed as her since she was his guide. Laura agreed for now and dragged him to the bed. Unfortunately, he bear hugged her and wouldn't let go of her so she had to sleep like that. __________________

2011-12-13, 21:26	Link #12837
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@ Eratas: Interesting habit. I believe I read that one. A different iteration of "marshmallow hell". Need any help with anything?

2011-12-13, 21:28	Link #12838
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain - Gonna continue the Saw parody soon. Do you think there should be a time limit like Bobby Dagen's tests? __________________

2011-12-13, 21:31	Link #12839
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@ Eratas: It would give the protags more incentive to finish the tests quickly, which increases the chances for more errors and mistakes. If more errors and mistakes are what you'd like to add, then put time limit. But if they have the time to think about the situation, they'll try to solve it in more unique ways. If you like that, then don't put the time limit.

2011-12-13, 21:37	Link #12840
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I'm still confused for a first test for Irish All of the other traps can't be faked. I was thinking of the Venus Flytrap, but then I realized you have to cut near your eye and that can't be faked. __________________