Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Cool, but something tells me that this isn't the first chapter, I need to find the first because your story sounds cool

Look at the first page, the second post. That should help you out a little bit.

About your comics, they are neat ^^ Tho I wonder what kind of thing that is, that could floor Nanoha in one hit? I'm interested in seeing more.

Having a problem in viewing the next to last image for some reason >.<

P.S~ Page claim! Claimed in the name of art and story combined!

EDIT: SbtB XVI

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/16/

Enjoy~ (Angel is really busy so I'm posting now so I won't have to bother her when she gets home to do this >< )

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Great, I'm starting to love this thread

But now I must go to the table of draw to continue this project, until that I'd like to show you some pages of chapter 1 to give you an Idea until it is complete

not nice such a teaser
but how you read your fanfic?
from right to left?
or left to right?


@Satashi
with a suprise attack

and Nanoha seems a little furious, though she couldn't think rational and was an easy victim
her opponent seems also to be a very fast fighter, what also took Nanoha on the false foot

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Look at the first page, the second post. That should help you out a little bit.

About your comics, they are neat ^^ Tho I wonder what kind of thing that is, that could floor Nanoha in one hit? I'm interested in seeing more.

Having a problem in viewing the next to last image for some reason >.<

P.S~ Page claim! Claimed in the name of art and story combined!

EDIT: SbtB XVI

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/16/

Enjoy~ (Angel is really busy so I'm posting now so I won't have to bother her when she gets home to do this >< )

Nanoha's in trouble...if she's not careful this could be a problem :3 I wonder how Fate'll eventually get around to the source of this and stomp it flat for good :3

This should be fun :3

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Gillian

not nice such a teaser
but how you read your fanfic?
from right to left?
or left to right?


@Satashi
with a suprise attack

and Nanoha seems a little furious, though she couldn't think rational and was an easy victim
her opponent seems also to be a very fast fighter, what also took Nanoha on the false foot

It's readed like a MARVEL comic, from left to right

And, yes, Nanoha was a bit furius to see Subare almost dead and she attack reacless, that makes her easy target for the quick attacks of ROBO-GATSURALLY,
but don't worry, the white devil will have his revenge

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

It's readed like a MARVEL comic, from left to right

And, yes, Nanoha was a bit furius to see Subare almost dead and she attack reacless, that makes her easy target for the quick attacks of ROBO-GATSURALLY,
but don't worry, the white devil will have his revenge

HIS?!! HIS?!!! WHAT?!!! Please tell me that's a typo...Please don't tell me you just gave Nanoha a sex change! XD

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Nanoha's in trouble...if she's not careful this could be a problem :3 I wonder how Fate'll eventually get around to the source of this and stomp it flat for good :3

This should be fun :3

Belive me, at that moment Fate have her own troubles

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

EDIT: SbtB XVI

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/16/

Enjoy~ (Angel is really busy so I'm posting now so I won't have to bother her when she gets home to do this >< )

Going to read it, review around 0000gtm
btw page claim mean what?

EDIT:

Spoiler for review:

Because my knowledge about english grammar and stuff like that is not at sufficient level allowing me to speak ebout it I won't. Insted of it I will speak about some things that picked my interest.

1. situation when Nanoha carries Fate's box and afterwards - Somehow I was hoping she will look in it. But maybe in future they'll use it. ....... So camera was on - there is possibylity that someone recorded it and then posted on net -> girls dealing with consequences (mainly Nanoha could be affected).
2. punishend - it's wierd. I was expecting that Fate will be ripped of her allowance. It seems the had money ....
3. thinking about future - It seems that they bother with it more than it's healthy There is no reason to be decided to do something and then not be happy with it. My impression of Fate is that she is a little bit undecisive. And I thought that she will inherit massage parlor after her mother.
4. Nanoha's smoking - Only 4 months and she is smoking addict? When she smokes only occasionally? It does not seems realistic to me (based on personal experiences). And I thought that she has stronger will. I'm glad Fate knows.

This chapter was good, but I still lack Arisa x Suzuka part - please spend a few words on them. Or is there possibility that you will write fic about them? Because I was not able to find any.

And how far is this story going? To their first time? To college? To marriage? Or somewhere in the middle?

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

HIS?!! HIS?!!! WHAT?!!! Please tell me that's a typo...Please don't tell me you just gave Nanoha a sex change! XD

AHHHHHHH!!!

Don't even mentione that!
I'm sorry! Little mistake!

"her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge"

It's that O.K?

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

AHHHHHHH!!!

Don't even mentione that!
I'm sorry! Little mistake!

"her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge""her revenge"

It's that O.K?

LOL XD

I have been appeased :P XD

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Look at the first page, the second post. That should help you out a little bit.

About your comics, they are neat ^^ Tho I wonder what kind of thing that is, that could floor Nanoha in one hit? I'm interested in seeing more.

Having a problem in viewing the next to last image for some reason >.<

P.S~ Page claim! Claimed in the name of art and story combined!

EDIT: SbtB XVI

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/16/

Enjoy~ (Angel is really busy so I'm posting now so I won't have to bother her when she gets home to do this >< )

I'm looking forward, when Nanoha searchs something in Fate's closet
*there would be dying someone *
but the punishment from Precia, I found it a little bit weird and I'm also worried about Nanoha, that are the first steps to addiction


good chapter
hope you update soon

PS:I think, I only found one mistake, but I didn't try to proof read

Spoiler for short story comment, really short ;):

I thought also, 'When Fate shut off the webcam'*I wish, I were a guild member* that has to be a good sight

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

HIS?!! HIS?!!! WHAT?!!! Please tell me that's a typo...Please don't tell me you just gave Nanoha a sex change! XD

don't be so stingy, everybody makes mistakes
you know, for sure, what he meant

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

It's readed like a MARVEL comic, from left to right

And, yes, Nanoha was a bit furius to see Subare almost dead and she attack reacless, that makes her easy target for the quick attacks of ROBO-GATSURALLY,
but don't worry, the white devil will have his revenge

yeah, my guess was right

sing: "when you are happy, then clap your hands*clap my hands*..."

Originally Posted by KoSSa

Going to read it, review around 0000gtm
btw page claim mean what?

the first post on a new page
Satashi started it and I think Satashi only waits, until Satashi gets page claims xD

@ghazghkull
Can you give me some informations about the main pairings about daichi-prime's fics?
you read them, so I hope you know them

in some aspects I'm like Haru

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Gillian

@ghazghkull
Can you give me some informations about the main pairings about daichi-prime's fics?
you read them, so I hope you know them

in some aspects I'm like Haru

As far as I can tell, there is no real pairings at the moment, just a crude load of really strong friendships that are forming as the story progresses. That's as far as I can tell at the moment. I'll have to re-read the Academy Blues, since I had read this while I was in school, which therefore meant I couldn't completely relax cus I had to keep track of time and such.

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Great, I'm starting to love this thread

But now I must go to the table of draw to continue this project, until that I'd like to show you some pages of chapter 1 to give you an Idea until it is complete

Wow Rick, that's some really detailed work. And your going to be doing MORE? That's some dedication you got there Hope you have fun with your project though, it certainly is fun to read for us hehe

Originally Posted by Satashi

Look at the first page, the second post. That should help you out a little bit.

About your comics, they are neat ^^ Tho I wonder what kind of thing that is, that could floor Nanoha in one hit? I'm interested in seeing more.

Having a problem in viewing the next to last image for some reason >.<

P.S~ Page claim! Claimed in the name of art and story combined!

EDIT: SbtB XVI

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/16/

Enjoy~ (Angel is really busy so I'm posting now so I won't have to bother her when she gets home to do this >< )

Woo ~ new chapter to read. Fate getting caught on camera was the best. Good thing she didn't get spied on as she was about to get into bed though. She sleeps naked right? Lol.

Oh, and I just updated my own ficcy. Linky here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4099527/3/

@Thread: Lemme know what you guys think? :3

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Satashi

EDIT: SbtB XVI

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/16/

Enjoy~ (Angel is really busy so I'm posting now so I won't have to bother her when she gets home to do this >< )

Tee hee....

Spoiler for Notes:

ROTFL

No seriously you had me slide out of my chair with the webcam incident. And rock paper scissors, can’t forget that. Of forget that I was done in just when Fate’s box arrived.

So Nanoha got a little taste of Fate’s videogames this time around. I could see her stammering trying to figure out what button does what (not like I know what buttons do what in those games but…). I see that Fate keeps her favorite pictures handy as well but I can’t see how Nanoha didn’t make the connection between the pictures and sticky keys. Maybe she just chooses to believe that Fate doesn’t do that kind of thing….

Anyways, good to see Hayate and Yunno back in the picture. It’s a good divergence from the FxN antics and if you chose to spend some time on HxY you could help some writers get a starting point on how to develop the two.

Having the characters start to think about their futures is quite an important part of the story. For one it adds direction to their lives. Second and more importantly what and how they begin to pursue their dreams will have an impact on how they relate to each other and possibly build stress in any relation. Nanoha is already figured out, but exploring Fate’s choices might need some priority and help to start to build your ending.

Fate’s box… Boy does Precia know how to tease her daughter. And thank you for explaining how Precia got Fate her first personal device… But if they couldn’t talk like this then you would have to question how close the two really are. In this world it’s a firmly established fact Precia and Fate are a happy family.

It’s also good to see the crew back in school, and the possibility of new situations. Somehow it would be nice to return to seeing the cast interact during school a little more, making the title a little more than just a placeholder.

I can understand Nanoha turning to smoking a little more to calm herself down after that bus ride. Being desperate for a calming agent will lead you to do things. You have hinted that Nanoha quitting is going to be a little difficult. Instead of seeing fighting between Fate and Nanoha I see Fate taking the smart thing and helping her quit, being very supportive regardless if Nanoha doges the subject. Fate might just know something else Nanoha could do to calm her down when she starts to panic.

Fate’s webcam worries me though. That could be a source of damnation for both girls.

Fate likes cleaning (except her keyboard…)? Dosen’t mind cleaning Nanoha’s room? I smell the opportunity of a change of scenery (even if its safe for work).

I had pondered on Landscaper Fate and wrote up something... Its pretty much out in left field but...

Spoiler for Fate being sexy and some NSFW language.:

Landscaper!Fate

Phase One: Girl Meets Girl

“Tease”

‘Three more passes.’ Fate dug her baseball spikes into the ground and prepared for another fight with her lawnmower. The company she worked for picked up a new property on their list and of course she was the one assigned to do all the banks. This last one was a particular pain in the ass that had Fate sweating every ounce of water in her body out. ‘Two more passes.’ She flipped around with the mower and surged again shifting eyes from her line, her finished coworker on the tractor, and a window on the property.

The coworker stopped the tractor at the bottom of the bank and waited for Fate to finish her last pass. Once done he couldn’t hold back teasing his female partner.

“Took you long enough… What where you doing, polishing your nails?”

Fate stood hands on hips staring at the man on the tractor. “You’re one to talk, Chrono, when you spend all your time jerking off on the tractor. I see you putting your hands down your crotch.”

“Fine Fine… but,” he leaned in a little “I think that brunette is checking you out.”

“You mean the one in the window?”

“Yep.”

“I thought she was” She snatched her water bottle from Chrono and walked a little bit out so the girl in the window could see her clearly, “Let her check this out.” She opened the lid to her bottle with her teeth. Standing so that the girl got a profile view she pulled the long pony tailed hair from out of her sweaty gray tee-shirt. Once the hair was loose The blonde placed the opening of the bottle on her lips and raised it up to chug down on the water. With a careful burgundy eye on the girl in the window she purposefully let some of the water escape, running down her cheek, neck, and finally to her already soaked shirt. Satisfied she was making the girl blush enough she let the rest of water empty onto her breasts. Closing the bottle she turned straight towards the window and licked her lips to grab any water left on them effectively making the girl in the window hid behind her curtains.

Of course Chrono had his head down on the tractor’s steering wheel trying to suppress his laughter. “Come on… We’re done here…” He started up the tractor and made his way to the company tuck. Fate grabbed her mower and caught up with him.

“Next time we’re here, I’m trimming the bushes.” Fate tripped when her spikes caught on transition from grass to concrete.

“And that’s what you get for thinking about the vag*. One of these times you’re going to cut your foot off because of watching some girl with a nice ass.”

Once she recovered Fate fired right back, “And maybe that would be enough for her to take care of me during recovery.” Deciding to talk to some imaginary girl she added, “Can you help wash me. Its ok, you can get naked too.”

*A/N: That line (fixed) is only in here because I hear it once from a coworker after I flipped a mower. Meanwhile I just in a hurry to get finished.

It's somewhat continuable but yea... Just a thought.

Originally Posted by Gillian

@ghazghkull
Can you give me some informations about the main pairings about daichi-prime's fics?
you read them, so I hope you know them

Ok question not directed at me but i do know the parings for Path of Vengeance. There is one that i cant describe, you should read the story for it. Nanoha and Yunno are paired together and while I think there was a poor job done in building the relationship it serves a purpose. I haven't read the other two fics so i can't elaborate on anything.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by SpaceBrotha

Anyone who remembers Daishi Prime and his works, Path of Vengeance and it's sequel Academy Blues might be interested in the next installment of the series: Endless Waltz

Anyone who hasn't read them, should.
But please note that it's not an easy read, considering that PoV is 44,7k words and AB is 263k words... meaning a LOT of time is required in order to read them through. The fics take place some time after nanoha A's, and were written before strikers came out, so there might be some differences to canon, but i still recommend them to anyone who's even mildly interested in nanoha fanfics.

I'd just wish he picked another name rather than "Endless Waltz"...

*imagines Nanoha with angel wings and going Twin Divine Buster*

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Kha

I'd just wish he picked another name rather than "Endless Waltz"...

*imagines Nanoha with angel wings and going Twin Divine Buster*

LOL You're not the only one imaging it. To top it off, Nanoha spinning like a top as she fires it XD

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Kha

I'd just wish he picked another name rather than "Endless Waltz"...

*imagines Nanoha with angel wings and going Twin Divine Buster*

For Kha:

Fate walked over to Nanoha. "Hit me."

"What?" She blinked.

"Hit me," Fate repeated.

Nanoha cracked her knuckles "okay..." Rearing back, she slugged Fate hard, ripping her face to the side, before doubling over as the blonde's hand slammed into her stomach "wha...?"

"A hit for a hit," Fate caught Nanoha and handed her to Chrono before laying on the floor.

A few moments later the door to the computer room burst open and several people barged in. "They got some information," Chrono to told them as they shuffled in. "I got them down, go secure other areas!" Fate got up and darted forward, kicked one of the me, and ran out of the room before the other could react. ';Good luck, Fate,' Chrono thought.

~*Meanwhile*~

Yuuno attempted to wiped the sweat off his forehead as he disengaged the safety lock on Death Scythe Assault. Groaning at his arm hitting his space suit shield, he shook his head and floated in the zero gravity to the hatch that would release the mech into space. 'I hoped to never use these things again...'

Moving over into another hanger he looked over the large mobile suit in front of him. 'Hello again, Sand Rock.' The hatch opened for him as he landed on the large chest and fell into the pilot seat, lighting up the controls and finally grabbing both joysticks. A relic glowed faintly as the energy powered up, allowing the mech to stand and walk to the door, which was sliced into four pieces, revealing the cape covered mechanized unit. 'I thought we stopped this war...'


~**~

Anyway, thanks for the review Junkedcat! And the Fate landscaping thing was spiffy. Really interesting to imagine Fate like that, specially pouring water over her chest sounds like something landscaping!Fate would do.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by AshLikeSnow

Oh, and I just updated my own ficcy. Linky here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4099527/3/

@Thread: Lemme know what you guys think? :3

you shouldn't apologise for the delay(I don't think there is a delay )
and congratulation for your longest chapter
can we look forward to such a rate?(first 1k words than 2k words and now 4k words )
for wiki words:
maybe I look for some, but its more funnier, to use the random article feature of wiki and implement the article name *g* and much easier to find

Spoiler for story itself:

poor fate, there come some things together
I wonder how she'll explain that all
I hope Fate will don't get to hard with herself and could go visit Nanoha soon

I definately looking forward to chapter3

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Tee hee....

Spoiler for Notes:

ROTFL

No seriously you had me slide out of my chair with the webcam incident. And rock paper scissors, can’t forget that. Of forget that I was done in just when Fate’s box arrived.

So Nanoha got a little taste of Fate’s videogames this time around. I could see her stammering trying to figure out what button does what (not like I know what buttons do what in those games but…). I see that Fate keeps her favorite pictures handy as well but I can’t see how Nanoha didn’t make the connection between the pictures and sticky keys. Maybe she just chooses to believe that Fate doesn’t do that kind of thing….

Anyways, good to see Hayate and Yunno back in the picture. It’s a good divergence from the FxN antics and if you chose to spend some time on HxY you could help some writers get a starting point on how to develop the two.

Having the characters start to think about their futures is quite an important part of the story. For one it adds direction to their lives. Second and more importantly what and how they begin to pursue their dreams will have an impact on how they relate to each other and possibly build stress in any relation. Nanoha is already figured out, but exploring Fate’s choices might need some priority and help to start to build your ending.

Fate’s box… Boy does Precia know how to tease her daughter. And thank you for explaining how Precia got Fate her first personal device… But if they couldn’t talk like this then you would have to question how close the two really are. In this world it’s a firmly established fact Precia and Fate are a happy family.

It’s also good to see the crew back in school, and the possibility of new situations. Somehow it would be nice to return to seeing the cast interact during school a little more, making the title a little more than just a placeholder.

I can understand Nanoha turning to smoking a little more to calm herself down after that bus ride. Being desperate for a calming agent will lead you to do things. You have hinted that Nanoha quitting is going to be a little difficult. Instead of seeing fighting between Fate and Nanoha I see Fate taking the smart thing and helping her quit, being very supportive regardless if Nanoha doges the subject. Fate might just know something else Nanoha could do to calm her down when she starts to panic.

Fate’s webcam worries me though. That could be a source of damnation for both girls.

Fate likes cleaning (except her keyboard…)? Dosen’t mind cleaning Nanoha’s room? I smell the opportunity of a change of scenery (even if its safe for work).

I had pondered on Landscaper Fate and wrote up something... Its pretty much out in left field but...

Spoiler for Fate being sexy and some NSFW language.:

‘Three more passes.’ Fate dug her spikes into the ground and prepared for another fight with her lawnmower. The company she worked for picked up a new property on their list and of course she was the one assigned to do all the banks. This last one was a particular pain in the ass that had Fate sweating every ounce of water in her body out. ‘Two more passes.’ She flipped around with the mower and surged again shifting eyes from her line, her finished coworker on the tractor, and a window on the property.

The coworker stopped the tractor at the bottom of the bank and waited for Fate to finish her last pass. Once done he couldn’t hold back teasing his female partner.

“Took you long enough… What where you doing, polishing your nails?”

Fate stood hands on hips staring at the man on the tractor. “You’re one to talk Chrono when you spend all your time jerking off on the tractor. I see you putting your hands down your crotch.”

“Fine Fine… but,” he leaned in a little “I think that brunette is checking you out.”

“You mean the one in the window?”

“Yep.”

“I thought she was” She snatched her water bottle from Chrono and walked a little bit out so the girl in the window could see her clearly, “Let her check this out.” She opened the lid to her bottle with her teeth. Standing so that the girl got a profile view of her she pulled the long pony tailed hair from out of her sweaty gray tee-shirt. Once the hair was loose she placed the opening of the bottle on her lips and raised it up to chug down on the water. With a careful burgundy eye on the girl in the window she purposefully let some of the water escape running down her cheek, neck and finally to her already soaked shirt. Satisfied she was making the girl blush enough she let the rest of water empty onto her breasts. Closing the bottle she turned straight towards the window and licked her lips to grab any water left on them effectively making the girl in the window hid behind her curtains.

Of course Chrono had his head down on the tractor’s steering wheel trying to suppress his laughter. “Come on… We’re done here…” He started up the tractor and made his way to the company tuck. Fate grabbed her mower and caught up with him.

“Next time we’re here, I’m trimming the bushes.” Fate tripped when her spikes caught on the transition from grass to concrete.

“And that’s what you get for thinking about the vag*. One of these times you’re going to cut your foot of because of watching some girl with a nice ass.”

Once recovered Fate fired right back, “And maybe that would be enough for her to take care of me during recovery.” Deciding to talk to some imaginary girl she added, “Can you help wash me. Its ok, you can get naked too.”

*A/N: Pardon my language. That line (fixed) is only in here because I hear it once from a coworker after I flipped a mower. Meanwhile I just in a hurry to get finished.

It's somewhat continuable but yea... Just a thought.

lol
that is a story
hope you will continue it

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Ok question not directed at me but i do know the parings for Path of Vengeance. There is one that i cant describe, you should read the story for it. Nanoha and Yunno are paired together and while I think there was a poor job done in building the relationship it serves a purpose. I haven't read the other two fics so i can't elaborate on anything.

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

As far as I can tell, there is no real pairings at the moment, just a crude load of really strong friendships that are forming as the story progresses. That's as far as I can tell at the moment. I'll have to re-read the Academy Blues, since I had read this while I was in school, which therefore meant I couldn't completely relax cus I had to keep track of time and such.

thx both of you
*sits besides Haru on the I-don't-read-any-other-FF-than-NxF-FF-bench*
nothing against daichi, but I'm no fan from NxY

Originally Posted by Satashi

For Kha:

Spoiler for shorty:

Fate walked over to Nanoha. "Hit me."

"What?" She blinked.

"Hit me," Fate repeated.

Nanoha cracked her knuckles "okay..." Rearing back, she slugged Fate hard, ripping her face to the side, before doubling over as the blonde's hand slammed into her stomach "wha...?"

"A hit for a hit," Fate caught Nanoha and handed her to Chrono before laying on the floor.

A few moments later the door to the computer room burst open and several people barged in. "They got some information," Chrono to told them as they shuffled in. "I got them down, go secure other areas!" Fate got up and darted forward, kicked one of the me, and ran out of the room before the other could react. ';Good luck, Fate,' Chrono thought.

~*Meanwhile*~

Yuuno attempted to wiped the sweat off his forehead as he disengaged the safety lock on Death Scythe Assault. Groaning at his arm hitting his space suit shield, he shook his head and floated in the zero gravity to the hatch that would release the mech into space. 'I hoped to never use these things again...'

Moving over into another hanger he looked over the large mobile suit in front of him. 'Hello again, Sand Rock.' The hatch opened for him as he landed on the large chest and fell into the pilot seat, lighting up the controls and finally grabbing both joysticks. A relic glowed faintly as the energy powered up, allowing the mech to stand and walk to the door, which was sliced into four pieces, revealing the cape covered mechanized unit. 'I thought we stopped this war...'

yepp, now you made it
you confused me 100% with that shorty
hope you are happy

PS: I'm not mad at you

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Gillian

thx both of you
*sits besides on the I-don't-read-any-other-FF-than-NxF-FF-bench*
nothing against daichi, but I'm no fan from NxY

Then forgot Path of Vengeance and go straight for Academy Blues. Fate and Nanoha are benched except near the end of that story, and even then Yuuno doesn't play any part, last time I checked. Aspects of the story may be confusing because you don't know some of it due to not reading PoV, but if you're not going to read the N/Y aspect of it, then just go straight to Academy Blues.

Besides, the entire series is for the most part Hayate's life. Academy Blues focuses a bit more on her students, but all in all, none of the characters get shafted.

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Gillian

lol
that is a story
hope you will continue it

If i get some time i might just, but its will be really out there as in AU and somewhat out of character...

*sits besides on the I-don't-read-any-other-FF-than-NxF-FF-bench*
nothing against daichi, but I'm no fan from NxY

Actually NxY is pretty much in the back seat in the first fic. It serves a purpose in the story and it ain't like their making sloppy.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Then forgot Path of Vengeance and go straight for Academy Blues. Fate and Nanoha are benched except near the end of that story, and even then Yuuno doesn't play any part, last time I checked. Aspects of the story may be confusing because you don't know some of it due to not reading PoV, but if you're not going to read the N/Y aspect of it, then just go straight to Academy Blues.

Besides, the entire series is for the most part Hayate's life. Academy Blues focuses a bit more on her students, but all in all, none of the characters get shafted.

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Actually NxY is pretty much in the back seat in the first fic. It serves a purpose in the story and it ain't like their making sloppy.

ok
the other things I read sounds interesting*especially Kha's: Nanoha with angel wings and twin divine buster*

I will start reading with PoV even though there are YxN scences, then I will skip them like I did it with the Frodo scence's in Lord of the Ring: The Return of the King

thx for the information

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

If i get some time i might just, but its will be really out there as in AU and somewhat out of character...

I don't mind
it sounds very funny
I hope you will find some time