2012-01-06, 07:38 | Link #16664 |
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@ Jak - Pretty dark Anyway, problem with the timing: Since the IS was revealed when he was 11, wouldn't that make him 21 by the current story? Chifuyu's 24 and she said that the IS was released 10 years ago, so does Ichika. Ichika's 15 here so the background has to be the same.
@ Box - That's where she's from?
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Riko don't go to high school (at first anyway, until she move to Sainan XD) and has been in Schwarzer Hase since two years ago. Yuu spend most of his time in military college, while Akiho has finished her education while being an I.S. rep. Quote:
Charl took a month I believe (the timeframe between Ichika feed her and Gospel arc, correct me if I'm wrong). @ Jak HOLY FREAKING SHIT! That was dark... deliciously tragic. Seriously. (but you hafta be careful when you mention 'sexual abuse')
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2012-01-06, 07:41 | Link #16666 | |
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2012-01-06, 07:48 | Link #16667 |
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@ Senpai - So even Saruyama's a badass?
Side note - So about a month for someone skilled? @ Jak - Mondo Grosso's happened twice by the time canon starts. White Knight happened a few years before the first Mondo Grosso. So when he was 11, the first MG should have already happened or is happening.
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2012-01-06, 07:55 | Link #16668 |
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@ Eras
No, Risa, Mio, Aya, Run, none of them are badass in this case. Also, Lala and Ren moved to I.S.A. later in the story. Leaving only Rito, Riko, Yui, Saki and Rin as Sainan's resident badass. Plus Dan, but he's not a member of ASDF and unrelated to plot most of the time. Also, the timeline is screwed as hell. We need box for the real stuff. Jak was right that I.S. are introduced few years after WK incident though.
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2012-01-06, 08:00 | Link #16669 |
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@ Senpai - Isn't the fact that they're fighting aliens make them badass?
Wait, that makes no sense! The IS was introduced a few years after the WK incident, but wasn't the IS introduced 10 years ago? That would mean Chifuyu had to be TEN when she was piloting WK.
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2012-01-06, 08:03 | Link #16670 |
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Okay, I think it went like this:
2011: Infinite Stratos space exploration suit first introduced, but scoffed at. 1 Month Later: White Knight Incident 2015: Tabane formally unveils the IS and Houki moves away. 2016: 1st Mondo Grosso 2019: 2nd Mondo Grosso, Ichika gets kidnapped and Chifuyu leaves for Germany (after saving Ichika) 2020: Chifuyu returns from Germany 2021: Canon begins |
2012-01-06, 08:09 | Link #16672 |
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@ Eras
Okay, let me get this straight. Mio, Risa, and Run is non-action girl. Dan and Saruyama is badass normal, they don't fight aliens either (and they act mostly as comic relief). Aya is ASDF member, but mostly a mission control or transport pilot, also non-action girl. On the other hand, Rito, Riko, Yui, Haruna, Saki, and Rin all fight aliens directly using their units. Count Ren and Lala when they're still in Sainan before they move to I.S.A. Side note -Wait, all the cores are produced in the same year?!
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2012-01-06, 08:12 | Link #16673 |
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Finally got it! Houki's Bio states that the IS was introduced "Six years ago and I had to move". This means that the IS was officially introduced when the characters were 9. Damn, this plot gives me a headache
@ Senpai - So what's the girls role if they're not fighting or aren't involved? Side note - Yep. She made the cores at the same time, before she disappeared.
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2012-01-06, 08:22 | Link #16676 | ||
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Take the scene where Lun is basically traumatized for days, Haruna is terrified but recover quickly in a matter of hours, while Yui only flinch and went into combat stance. All face the same thing: a soldier-class ETX
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2012-01-06, 08:25 | Link #16677 |
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@ Senpai - Son of a bitch! I just screwed myself out of writing Shadow now! I'll have to make Irish 12-13 to make the timeline make relative sense since PT would've had to get access to the cores before they were shown to the world if he was 14.
Side note - Be careful about too much mood whiplash
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2012-01-06, 08:34 | Link #16679 |
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@ Senpai - ARRRRRGGGGH! Stupid wonky timeline! I really don't want to make him younger than 14 since that'll be way too ridiculous. Think I can just do it and hope no one notices?
Side note - Just be sure to balance it
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2012-01-06, 08:45 | Link #16680 |
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Hah! Just increase Irish age to 9 or 10 when he was in the camp, that would make more sense. Since the reader haven't knew his backstory, unlike us.
Side note - Yes, since To-love-Ru has more Harem antic than I.S., I had to add even more wham and plot in the corssover. Small sample of interaction -------------------------------------- Ren: "My name is Ren Elsie Jewelria, Australian I.S. Cadet Representative, I hope we can get along" Class B: *Silent* Lingyin: "Are you sure you're not a crossdresser" Ren: "What the... you" Lingyin: "Look, his voice isn't that deep, and look at that girly face... you remind me of that green-haired Pop singer" Ren: "You... %#*@%!^*!" Lingyin: "WHAT?! I'm not a %#*@%!^*!! You want a fight?! Fine!" ------------------------------------------------------ Being called girly is Ren's berserk button, and they'll have a lot of foe yay.
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