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Constellation
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the hair of the render is kinda out of place???
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2008-09-30, 22:48 | Link #23 |
dn ʎɐʍ sıɥʇ
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Arg never realized i saved my sig format as jpeg instead of png.
Had to take out the transparency as it made the file size just too large and i had no luck optimizing it enough. Pity =/ i liked the curved corners...
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2008-09-30, 22:51 | Link #24 | |||
~La-la Land~
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I really like what you've started here, but the major thing that bothered me is the mismatch of the render and background. The colors are great, but the styles are different. The render seems hand-drawn/painted and the background is sharp. Quote:
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As stated before, it'd be good if you befriended the splice tool! The animation is too fast and I'll echo again, the render needs to blend in better with the rest of the piece. I'd start with first cleaning up the render a bit (it looks a little pixelated) and then complementing it with a suitable background/theme. It'd also be nice to see what other text you could substitute instead of your name that would represent the theme nicely. Very pretty colors and the sig has a nice calm feel. One question I have is: What's up with the blurry whiteness smack-dab in the middle of the sig and to the left of the render? It creates a feeling that there's something lacking. I look forward to seeing what revisions you come up with!
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2008-09-30, 23:08 | Link #26 |
Black Dragon
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Wow!
Is the first time I recive so many coments! Okay, I took the advices, I slowed the animation, fixed the render and sliced the sig as sugested Second Atemp The only advice I didn't take was the one of the text, I want to have an electronic so I personally thiunk that the text I used is okay @The Artist: Yes, I think that the animation is worthy, she's holding an electric gutar, I wanted to recreate the electronic feeling on my sig, thanks
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2008-09-30, 23:08 | Link #27 |
(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻
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Was echoing your thoughts and offering my opinion in a subtle way.
The animation is fine, if a little fast. But the splice tool would greatly enhance the quality of the signature. Right now the signature is a little empty and washed out, and the entire image being a gif hurts that.
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2008-09-30, 23:13 | Link #28 | ||
Black Dragon
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Heh, very good placing the guitar on her hand Still, the text is a bit hard to see
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2008-09-30, 23:28 | Link #30 | |
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2008-09-30, 23:37 | Link #31 |
~La-la Land~
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When I say flat, I mean that it doesn't have any depth: foreground, background. Aka sharper front (him), blurrier further away (like the piano?)
Just a suggestion, you don't have to take the tip if you don't want
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2008-09-30, 23:55 | Link #33 |
~Nanchatte Renai
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Made some changes to it, draft number 3
::Moved render, changed colour slightly:: Uguu, still looks rather dark >.< Draft 4 *I seriously do NOT know why it ends up being dark, in photoshop and windows image viewer it doesn't look that dark ><!!*
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2008-10-01, 00:04 | Link #35 | |
is not amused
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2008-10-01, 00:12 | Link #37 | |
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anyway... music related objects
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2008-10-01, 00:16 | Link #38 | ||
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