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Old 2011-01-19, 11:48   Link #121
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@milan kyuubi: I definitely prefer v5 to v4. Do I like v5 better than v3? That's harder to decide. I like that v5 doesn't have the cloud covering the center of the sun. Although I think the cloud's leftmost edge where it meets the sun should be softer. But I'm still a little iffy on how distinct the sun's rays are. They're definitely better in v5 than in v4 though, IMO.
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Old 2011-01-19, 12:17   Link #122
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I fixed the cloud and some sun rays (those closest to the sun more) (making them a little softer by using blur effect). I also erased some parts, like those black markings near her hand.

v6


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Old 2011-01-19, 13:15   Link #123
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@milan kyuubi: v6 is your best yet, IMO. I don't have anything else to comment on right now.
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Old 2011-01-19, 13:58   Link #124
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Thanks for the help LKK and all the others

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Old 2011-01-19, 18:35   Link #125
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more edit (seriously, i keep on editing my stuff lol):
previous

latest edit:
don't see the difference really, sorry.
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first draft:


EDIT:
made a version 2
left side seemed empty, so I added text and some additional brushes
and a little sharpening



which is better?
oh and C&C are appreciated?
it's beautiful. I agree the second draft is better, and i think it's fantastic as is.
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Old 2011-01-19, 19:02   Link #126
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Thanks for the help guys. @LKK-Sensei, scan is from DN Angel, thats about all I know Looks like Sage might know and yeah I entered but in my defense I started this before Sage posted her epic sig.

Final Entry since I have no more time to work on it, fixed a few things.


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Old 2011-01-19, 19:06   Link #127
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Thanks for the help guys. @LKK-Sensei, scan is from DN Angel, thats about all I know Looks like Sage might know and yeah I entered but in my defense I started this before Sage posted her epic sig.

Final Entry since I have no more time to work on it, fixed a few things.


Spoiler for Vers 1 for comparision:
Nice change on the head of the person from Version 1. The text placement and color is good as well. Good luck White Manju Bun
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Old 2011-01-19, 19:12   Link #128
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first draft:


EDIT:
made a version 2
left side seemed empty, so I added text and some additional brushes
and a little sharpening



which is better?
oh and C&C are appreciated?
Second one is better IMO. The text does a good job of filling the space, though I'm not so sure about the x's below "silhouettes". The colors are also slightly more vivid

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more edit (seriously, i keep on editing my stuff lol):
previous

latest edit:
Hmmm so you increased the brightness of the sig a bit? Because that's all that I can see I'm not sure which one I like better.
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Old 2011-01-19, 19:38   Link #129
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scan is from DN Angel, thats about all I know
The silhouette on the right is Dark Mousy I believe. Well, looks like anyways.
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Old 2011-01-19, 21:57   Link #130
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Just a reminder. I will do a round-up of the final entries 24 hours after this post.
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Old 2011-01-19, 22:57   Link #131
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Just a reminder. I will do a round-up of the final entries 24 hours after this post.
um, shit? thanks for the reminder
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Old 2011-01-19, 22:59   Link #132
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Just a reminder. I will do a round-up of the final entries 24 hours after this post.
Will this be the final round-up? Because if it is, then isn't it a day early?
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Old 2011-01-20, 00:11   Link #133
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Old 2011-01-20, 06:02   Link #134
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Will this be the final round-up? Because if it is, then isn't it a day early?
It's just for the day. So it's not completely final.
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Old 2011-01-20, 09:04   Link #135
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Second one is better IMO. The text does a good job of filling the space, though I'm not so sure about the x's below "silhouettes". The colors are also slightly more vivid
about the x's, I'll edit it tomorrow
the file is on my pc, I'm using my mom's right now and it's way too late to do it.
I have to review for my exams so.. yeah

anyway, about the sig being vivid. Is it a good thing? if it's bad, I could make the sig darker

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@Frailty - I'd just have the text 'Memories' personally. It looks great though. Nothing else to add.
thanks for the suggestion, but I'd rather keep the 'sotm: silhouettes' text
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Old 2011-01-20, 18:33   Link #136
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about the x's, I'll edit it tomorrow
the file is on my pc, I'm using my mom's right now and it's way too late to do it.
I have to review for my exams so.. yeah

anyway, about the sig being vivid. Is it a good thing? if it's bad, I could make the sig darker
I can't say exactly because it's really personal preference, and IMO there isn't a significant difference between the two sigs color/brightness-wise to worry about it.
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Old 2011-01-20, 19:20   Link #137
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Old 2011-01-20, 22:08   Link #138
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Old 2011-01-21, 06:09   Link #139
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Old 2011-01-21, 09:52   Link #140
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