Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Nanya01]

Even when I feel down, my muse makes me write...

At least the Transformers (1985 movie) theme song is good to listen too.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - History Start:

History Start

She grimaced as an explosion rocked the whole building. "Doctor, are you sure that this will work?"

The man looked at her, grimacing slightly. "Honestly... Not a clue. But we don't have a choice here." There was an explosion from the consoles as the building was rocked by a powerful blast of magic from outside. "GAH!" The man screamed, holding his bloodied face and left eye. "I thought we stopped making consoles that exploded all the time!" Groaning and pulling his bloodied hand away from his face, he growled. "Whatever!" The doctor looked at the woman again. "Do you have it?"

She picked herself off of the floor and pulled out a thick black book on it. "The Tome of the Night Sky, and this..." She pulled a black crystal out of her pocket. "Will taint the magic within to always be Black Magic."

He looked at her as she put the book and the black crystal into a clear dome. "Are you sure about this?"

She gave him a wane smile. "Does it matter anymore? After what happened to me a few years ago, nothing matters anymore." She watched through detached red eyes as the book opened up and the crystal seemed to react, splintering into fragments that were slowly absorbed by the book. "I gave up my humanity to fight against the creatures that threaten us now."

The man said nothing as the book absorbed the energy completely. "I warn you, we don't know what this concentrated Black magic will do to the book."

Opening the door to the dome and taking the book out, she smirked at him. "Does it matter? The book is a part of myself." Turning and walking to the door outside, she looked at him. "I shall defeat these Mazoku and with the help of everyone involved, we shall save this place. The human sanctuary, Al Hazard."

He watched silently as she left. "Good luck... Daughter."

Even if there wasn't a blood relation, he made her into what she was now. Grasping his chest, he fell to the floor as he felt his heart stop working. "Guess... I won't see... how it turns out."

(---)

Her eyes snapped open and she slowly sat up, panting softly. "That was..." Was it her past? Was it some fragment that the book had from years ago? "Al... Hazard..." She licked her lips and shuddered. Why couldn't she remember more?

Getting up and out of bed, she really didn't want to get back to sleep. Not after a dream like that.

(---)

Elsewhere...

"What was that?" He asked as he looked at the broken electronic equipment. The technology was ancient, almost unworkable, but it had a small amount of power left, and that video... "This is..." He floated upwards and looked at the destruction. "Must have been the remains of that room." But, why would they wish to taint something with Black magic?

More important, to him at least, was how they were able to get the Black magic into crystal form. Energy didn't become a crystal, especially not Black magic, not freely. "Unless..." He breathed and ran the video through his mind one more time. "...It was a trap..." It was the only thing that made sense to him.

"This universe is interesting." His eyes widened and he turned to see a man with short white hair, long dark pants and a long coat that was open, revealing a rather muscled chest. "Never thought I'd see a Shinzoku from another staff though." The man raised an eyebrow at him. "Then again, I never thought I'd see a Shinzoku look pink either." He chuckled softly. "You can call me Abby."

"Abby?" He blinked and looked the being over. "My name is Sirius. What happened here?" He really couldn't tell if the being was a Mazoku or a Shinzoku, but Sirius was leaning towards the latter with this person.

Abby looked at the ruins and shook his head. "A monumental disaster... One that nearly wiped out all humans in this staff. The Mazoku Lord Garoth led an assault on a human sanctuary called "Al Hazard, to destroy them before they could develop more weapons that could destroy him and his kind. He wasn't stupid though, he made the humans inside become desperate to stop him and laid a trap..."

"They fell for it..." Sirius trailed off as Abby nodded to him. "What was the trap?"

"To have the Tome of the Night Sky become unstable, and turn on its allies." Abby shook his head. "Such a waste of potential. Very few beings survived and most of the technology was wiped out by Garoth."

"Most?" Sirius looked at Abby, who nodded.

"Some devices managed to make it to the present day, but there are very few."

"I wonder what they were..." Sirius trailed off as he shook his head. It was unlikely that he would ever know.

(---)

On Earth...

Lindy smiled as she looked at Nanoha. "Hey, how are you?"

The teenager smiled back at her. "Pretty good. Just doing some early morning practice." The girl was dressed in shorts and a t-shirt. "Sparring isn't as much fun without Raising Heart to help me." The girl pouted before shaking her head. "So, what brings you out so early, Miss Lindy?"

"Master."

Nanoha gasped as a familiar pink gem flew up from Lindy's hands and over to her. "Raising Heart!" She grabbed her device and hugged it. "I missed you!"

"As did I, master."

"Sorry it took so long." Lindy smiled at Nanoha. "Mary didn't want it breaking again, or as she told me," Lindy grabbed a piece of paper from her pocket and cleared her throat, "she said, and I quote, 'I need to strengthen the shell on this thing and increase the durability of the modes because I don't want this thing getting slashed, stabbed, shattered, and broken so damn easily all the time because that girl has no idea how much stress she puts on her device and all her enemies are so unbelievably powerful that anything less would likely cause her device to shatter into a million pieces in less than ten years, but her device will never tell her that because it's just as stupid as she is and I want to work on other things besides fixing it all the time'."

Nanoha stared, sweat-dropping heavily. Chancing a look at Raising Heart, she face-faulted when she saw her device was, somehow, also sweat-dropping. "Nyahahahahahaha... I'll make sure not to stress Raising Heart so much. Raising Heart?"

"No worries, my master. Clear to go."

Nanoha smiled and patted her device. "Good girl."

She couldn't wait to show the others that she had Raising Heart back now!

[mega1987]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Even when I feel down, my muse makes me write...

At least the Transformers (1985 movie) theme song is good to listen too.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - History Start:

History Start

She grimaced as an explosion rocked the whole building. "Doctor, are you sure that this will work?"

The man looked at her, grimacing slightly. "Honestly... Not a clue. But we don't have a choice here." There was an explosion from the consoles as the building was rocked by a powerful blast of magic from outside. "GAH!" The man screamed, holding his bloodied face and left eye. "I thought we stopped making consoles that exploded all the time!" Groaning and pulling his bloodied hand away from his face, he growled. "Whatever!" The doctor looked at the woman again. "Do you have it?"

She picked herself off of the floor and pulled out a thick black book on it. "The Tome of the Night Sky, and this..." She pulled a black crystal out of her pocket. "Will taint the magic within to always be Black Magic."

He looked at her as she put the book and the black crystal into a clear dome. "Are you sure about this?"

She gave him a wane smile. "Does it matter anymore? After what happened to me a few years ago, nothing matters anymore." She watched through detached red eyes as the book opened up and the crystal seemed to react, splintering into fragments that were slowly absorbed by the book. "I gave up my humanity to fight against the creatures that threaten us now."

The man said nothing as the book absorbed the energy completely. "I warn you, we don't know what this concentrated Black magic will do to the book."

Opening the door to the dome and taking the book out, she smirked at him. "Does it matter? The book is a part of myself." Turning and walking to the door outside, she looked at him. "I shall defeat these Mazoku and with the help of everyone involved, we shall save this place. The human sanctuary, Al Hazard."

He watched silently as she left. "Good luck... Daughter."

Even if there wasn't a blood relation, he made her into what she was now. Grasping his chest, he fell to the floor as he felt his heart stop working. "Guess... I won't see... how it turns out."

(---)

Her eyes snapped open and she slowly sat up, panting softly. "That was..." Was it her past? Was it some fragment that the book had from years ago? "Al... Hazard..." She licked her lips and shuddered. Why couldn't she remember more?

Getting up and out of bed, she really didn't want to get back to sleep. Not after a dream like that.

(---)

Elsewhere...

"What was that?" He asked as he looked at the broken electronic equipment. The technology was ancient, almost unworkable, but it had a small amount of power left, and that video... "This is..." He floated upwards and looked at the destruction. "Must have been the remains of that room." But, why would they wish to taint something with Black magic?

More important, to him at least, was how they were able to get the Black magic into crystal form. Energy didn't become a crystal, especially not Black magic, not freely. "Unless..." He breathed and ran the video through his mind one more time. "...It was a trap..." It was the only thing that made sense to him.

"This universe is interesting." His eyes widened and he turned to see a man with short white hair, long dark pants and a long coat that was open, revealing a rather muscled chest. "Never thought I'd see a Shinzoku from another staff though." The man raised an eyebrow at him. "Then again, I never thought I'd see a Shinzoku look pink either." He chuckled softly. "You can call me Abby."

"Abby?" He blinked and looked the being over. "My name is Sirius. What happened here?" He really couldn't tell if the being was a Mazoku or a Shinzoku, but Sirius was leaning towards the latter with this person.

Abby looked at the ruins and shook his head. "A monumental disaster... One that nearly wiped out all humans in this staff. The Mazoku Lord Garoth led an assault on a human sanctuary called "Al Hazard, to destroy them before they could develop more weapons that could destroy him and his kind. He wasn't stupid though, he made the humans inside become desperate to stop him and laid a trap..."

"They fell for it..." Sirius trailed off as Abby nodded to him. "What was the trap?"

"To have the Tome of the Night Sky become unstable, and turn on its allies." Abby shook his head. "Such a waste of potential. Very few beings survived and most of the technology was wiped out by Garoth."

"Most?" Sirius looked at Abby, who nodded.

"Some devices managed to make it to the present day, but there are very few."

"I wonder what they were..." Sirius trailed off as he shook his head. It was unlikely that he would ever know.

(---)

On Earth...

Lindy smiled as she looked at Nanoha. "Hey, how are you?"

The teenager smiled back at her. "Pretty good. Just doing some early morning practice." The girl was dressed in shorts and a t-shirt. "Sparring isn't as much fun without Raising Heart to help me." The girl pouted before shaking her head. "So, what brings you out so early, Miss Lindy?"

"Master."

Nanoha gasped as a familiar pink gem flew up from Lindy's hands and over to her. "Raising Heart!" She grabbed her device and hugged it. "I missed you!"

"As did I, master."

"Sorry it took so long." Lindy smiled at Nanoha. "Mary didn't want it breaking again, or as she told me," Lindy grabbed a piece of paper from her pocket and cleared her throat, "she said, and I quote, 'I need to strengthen the shell on this thing and increase the durability of the modes because I don't want this thing getting slashed, stabbed, shattered, and broken so damn easily all the time because that girl has no idea how much stress she puts on her device and all her enemies are so unbelievably powerful that anything less would likely cause her device to shatter into a million pieces in less than ten years, but her device will never tell her that because it's just as stupid as she is and I want to work on other things besides fixing it all the time'."

Nanoha stared, sweat-dropping heavily. Chancing a look at Raising Heart, she face-faulted when she saw her device was, somehow, also sweat-dropping. "Nyahahahahahaha... I'll make sure not to stress Raising Heart so much. Raising Heart?"

"No worries, my master. Clear to go."

Nanoha smiled and patted her device. "Good girl."

She couldn't wait to show the others that she had Raising Heart back now!

And alas, the History behind the Tome of the Night Sky and probably Raising Heart will be revealed to us...



No more implication of the upcoming Scrya harem? Right?

*Got dragged by Val as he flee from some ravaging fans who wants the harem to be born*

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Tempy

Yuuno Scrya
“Everyone’s Student”
“Librarian of Infinity”

Type A: Fortress Sign
Shot type: Reflective Shot
Focus fire: Refraction Shield

Type B: Scholar Sign
Shot type: Extermination Needles
Focus fire: Elemental Laser

Type C: Support Sign
Shot type: Wide Spread Bit Fire
Focus fire: Focused Bit Blaster

Bomb:
Yuuno A: Charged Shot - Master Spark (alpha ver.)
Yuuno B: Bounded Field - Time Distortion Field
Yuuno C: Restriction - Struggle Bind

Oh, you!

[vic-vic]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Even when I feel down, my muse makes me write...

At least the Transformers (1985 movie) theme song is good to listen too.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - History Start:

History Start

She grimaced as an explosion rocked the whole building. "Doctor, are you sure that this will work?"

The man looked at her, grimacing slightly. "Honestly... Not a clue. But we don't have a choice here." There was an explosion from the consoles as the building was rocked by a powerful blast of magic from outside. "GAH!" The man screamed, holding his bloodied face and left eye. "I thought we stopped making consoles that exploded all the time!" Groaning and pulling his bloodied hand away from his face, he growled. "Whatever!" The doctor looked at the woman again. "Do you have it?"

She picked herself off of the floor and pulled out a thick black book on it. "The Tome of the Night Sky, and this..." She pulled a black crystal out of her pocket. "Will taint the magic within to always be Black Magic."

He looked at her as she put the book and the black crystal into a clear dome. "Are you sure about this?"

She gave him a wane smile. "Does it matter anymore? After what happened to me a few years ago, nothing matters anymore." She watched through detached red eyes as the book opened up and the crystal seemed to react, splintering into fragments that were slowly absorbed by the book. "I gave up my humanity to fight against the creatures that threaten us now."

The man said nothing as the book absorbed the energy completely. "I warn you, we don't know what this concentrated Black magic will do to the book."

Opening the door to the dome and taking the book out, she smirked at him. "Does it matter? The book is a part of myself." Turning and walking to the door outside, she looked at him. "I shall defeat these Mazoku and with the help of everyone involved, we shall save this place. The human sanctuary, Al Hazard."

He watched silently as she left. "Good luck... Daughter."

Even if there wasn't a blood relation, he made her into what she was now. Grasping his chest, he fell to the floor as he felt his heart stop working. "Guess... I won't see... how it turns out."

(---)

Her eyes snapped open and she slowly sat up, panting softly. "That was..." Was it her past? Was it some fragment that the book had from years ago? "Al... Hazard..." She licked her lips and shuddered. Why couldn't she remember more?

Getting up and out of bed, she really didn't want to get back to sleep. Not after a dream like that.

(---)

Elsewhere...

"What was that?" He asked as he looked at the broken electronic equipment. The technology was ancient, almost unworkable, but it had a small amount of power left, and that video... "This is..." He floated upwards and looked at the destruction. "Must have been the remains of that room." But, why would they wish to taint something with Black magic?

More important, to him at least, was how they were able to get the Black magic into crystal form. Energy didn't become a crystal, especially not Black magic, not freely. "Unless..." He breathed and ran the video through his mind one more time. "...It was a trap..." It was the only thing that made sense to him.

"This universe is interesting." His eyes widened and he turned to see a man with short white hair, long dark pants and a long coat that was open, revealing a rather muscled chest. "Never thought I'd see a Shinzoku from another staff though." The man raised an eyebrow at him. "Then again, I never thought I'd see a Shinzoku look pink either." He chuckled softly. "You can call me Abby."

"Abby?" He blinked and looked the being over. "My name is Sirius. What happened here?" He really couldn't tell if the being was a Mazoku or a Shinzoku, but Sirius was leaning towards the latter with this person.

Abby looked at the ruins and shook his head. "A monumental disaster... One that nearly wiped out all humans in this staff. The Mazoku Lord Garoth led an assault on a human sanctuary called "Al Hazard, to destroy them before they could develop more weapons that could destroy him and his kind. He wasn't stupid though, he made the humans inside become desperate to stop him and laid a trap..."

"They fell for it..." Sirius trailed off as Abby nodded to him. "What was the trap?"

"To have the Tome of the Night Sky become unstable, and turn on its allies." Abby shook his head. "Such a waste of potential. Very few beings survived and most of the technology was wiped out by Garoth."

"Most?" Sirius looked at Abby, who nodded.

"Some devices managed to make it to the present day, but there are very few."

"I wonder what they were..." Sirius trailed off as he shook his head. It was unlikely that he would ever know.

(---)

On Earth...

Lindy smiled as she looked at Nanoha. "Hey, how are you?"

The teenager smiled back at her. "Pretty good. Just doing some early morning practice." The girl was dressed in shorts and a t-shirt. "Sparring isn't as much fun without Raising Heart to help me." The girl pouted before shaking her head. "So, what brings you out so early, Miss Lindy?"

"Master."

Nanoha gasped as a familiar pink gem flew up from Lindy's hands and over to her. "Raising Heart!" She grabbed her device and hugged it. "I missed you!"

"As did I, master."

"Sorry it took so long." Lindy smiled at Nanoha. "Mary didn't want it breaking again, or as she told me," Lindy grabbed a piece of paper from her pocket and cleared her throat, "she said, and I quote, 'I need to strengthen the shell on this thing and increase the durability of the modes because I don't want this thing getting slashed, stabbed, shattered, and broken so damn easily all the time because that girl has no idea how much stress she puts on her device and all her enemies are so unbelievably powerful that anything less would likely cause her device to shatter into a million pieces in less than ten years, but her device will never tell her that because it's just as stupid as she is and I want to work on other things besides fixing it all the time'."

Nanoha stared, sweat-dropping heavily. Chancing a look at Raising Heart, she face-faulted when she saw her device was, somehow, also sweat-dropping. "Nyahahahahahaha... I'll make sure not to stress Raising Heart so much. Raising Heart?"

"No worries, my master. Clear to go."

Nanoha smiled and patted her device. "Good girl."

She couldn't wait to show the others that she had Raising Heart back now!

Well, I always had feeling that Raising Heart not ordinary Device... Something big are coming.

[Enternal]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Even when I feel down, my muse makes me write...

At least the Transformers (1985 movie) theme song is good to listen too.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - History Start:

History Start

She grimaced as an explosion rocked the whole building. "Doctor, are you sure that this will work?"

The man looked at her, grimacing slightly. "Honestly... Not a clue. But we don't have a choice here." There was an explosion from the consoles as the building was rocked by a powerful blast of magic from outside. "GAH!" The man screamed, holding his bloodied face and left eye. "I thought we stopped making consoles that exploded all the time!" Groaning and pulling his bloodied hand away from his face, he growled. "Whatever!" The doctor looked at the woman again. "Do you have it?"

She picked herself off of the floor and pulled out a thick black book on it. "The Tome of the Night Sky, and this..." She pulled a black crystal out of her pocket. "Will taint the magic within to always be Black Magic."

He looked at her as she put the book and the black crystal into a clear dome. "Are you sure about this?"

She gave him a wane smile. "Does it matter anymore? After what happened to me a few years ago, nothing matters anymore." She watched through detached red eyes as the book opened up and the crystal seemed to react, splintering into fragments that were slowly absorbed by the book. "I gave up my humanity to fight against the creatures that threaten us now."

The man said nothing as the book absorbed the energy completely. "I warn you, we don't know what this concentrated Black magic will do to the book."

Opening the door to the dome and taking the book out, she smirked at him. "Does it matter? The book is a part of myself." Turning and walking to the door outside, she looked at him. "I shall defeat these Mazoku and with the help of everyone involved, we shall save this place. The human sanctuary, Al Hazard."

He watched silently as she left. "Good luck... Daughter."

Even if there wasn't a blood relation, he made her into what she was now. Grasping his chest, he fell to the floor as he felt his heart stop working. "Guess... I won't see... how it turns out."

(---)

Her eyes snapped open and she slowly sat up, panting softly. "That was..." Was it her past? Was it some fragment that the book had from years ago? "Al... Hazard..." She licked her lips and shuddered. Why couldn't she remember more?

Getting up and out of bed, she really didn't want to get back to sleep. Not after a dream like that.

(---)

Elsewhere...

"What was that?" He asked as he looked at the broken electronic equipment. The technology was ancient, almost unworkable, but it had a small amount of power left, and that video... "This is..." He floated upwards and looked at the destruction. "Must have been the remains of that room." But, why would they wish to taint something with Black magic?

More important, to him at least, was how they were able to get the Black magic into crystal form. Energy didn't become a crystal, especially not Black magic, not freely. "Unless..." He breathed and ran the video through his mind one more time. "...It was a trap..." It was the only thing that made sense to him.

"This universe is interesting." His eyes widened and he turned to see a man with short white hair, long dark pants and a long coat that was open, revealing a rather muscled chest. "Never thought I'd see a Shinzoku from another staff though." The man raised an eyebrow at him. "Then again, I never thought I'd see a Shinzoku look pink either." He chuckled softly. "You can call me Abby."

"Abby?" He blinked and looked the being over. "My name is Sirius. What happened here?" He really couldn't tell if the being was a Mazoku or a Shinzoku, but Sirius was leaning towards the latter with this person.

Abby looked at the ruins and shook his head. "A monumental disaster... One that nearly wiped out all humans in this staff. The Mazoku Lord Garoth led an assault on a human sanctuary called "Al Hazard, to destroy them before they could develop more weapons that could destroy him and his kind. He wasn't stupid though, he made the humans inside become desperate to stop him and laid a trap..."

"They fell for it..." Sirius trailed off as Abby nodded to him. "What was the trap?"

"To have the Tome of the Night Sky become unstable, and turn on its allies." Abby shook his head. "Such a waste of potential. Very few beings survived and most of the technology was wiped out by Garoth."

"Most?" Sirius looked at Abby, who nodded.

"Some devices managed to make it to the present day, but there are very few."

"I wonder what they were..." Sirius trailed off as he shook his head. It was unlikely that he would ever know.

(---)

On Earth...

Lindy smiled as she looked at Nanoha. "Hey, how are you?"

The teenager smiled back at her. "Pretty good. Just doing some early morning practice." The girl was dressed in shorts and a t-shirt. "Sparring isn't as much fun without Raising Heart to help me." The girl pouted before shaking her head. "So, what brings you out so early, Miss Lindy?"

"Master."

Nanoha gasped as a familiar pink gem flew up from Lindy's hands and over to her. "Raising Heart!" She grabbed her device and hugged it. "I missed you!"

"As did I, master."

"Sorry it took so long." Lindy smiled at Nanoha. "Mary didn't want it breaking again, or as she told me," Lindy grabbed a piece of paper from her pocket and cleared her throat, "she said, and I quote, 'I need to strengthen the shell on this thing and increase the durability of the modes because I don't want this thing getting slashed, stabbed, shattered, and broken so damn easily all the time because that girl has no idea how much stress she puts on her device and all her enemies are so unbelievably powerful that anything less would likely cause her device to shatter into a million pieces in less than ten years, but her device will never tell her that because it's just as stupid as she is and I want to work on other things besides fixing it all the time'."

Nanoha stared, sweat-dropping heavily. Chancing a look at Raising Heart, she face-faulted when she saw her device was, somehow, also sweat-dropping. "Nyahahahahahaha... I'll make sure not to stress Raising Heart so much. Raising Heart?"

"No worries, my master. Clear to go."

Nanoha smiled and patted her device. "Good girl."

She couldn't wait to show the others that she had Raising Heart back now!

Nice! Definitely makes Raising Heart seems more special (well it probably is). Always find it a bit odd that nothing was explained about Raising Heart and how it was able to do so well with Nanoha.

[Rising Dragon]

So none of you remember Deathbringer mentioning Raising Heart being a relic from Al-Hazard in BTF? For shame.

[Enternal]

Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

So none of you remember Deathbringer mentioning Raising Heart being a relic from Al-Hazard in BTF? For shame.

Nope. Where is that fanfic? I don't think I have read it.

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Enternal

Nope. Where is that fanfic? I don't think I have read it.

Look in my sig. It links to my FF.Net page.

[Rising Dragon]

Originally Posted by Enternal

Nope. Where is that fanfic? I don't think I have read it.

*facepalms* It's in an earlier chapter of what you just read...

[Enternal]

Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

*facepalms* It's in an earlier chapter of what you just read...

Oh! Did not know there was an earlier chapter to it. I just read it directly from the post and... I have just started to read the fanfics here and there sure is a lot.

@ Nanya
Oooh! You have so much here! Thanks!

[Rising Dragon]

Originally Posted by Enternal

Oh! Did not know there was an earlier chapter to it. I just read it directly from the post and... I have just started to read the fanfics here and there sure is a lot.

Well, you have an excuse, but vic-vic and mega, whom I know have been reading since then, have none. :V

[Astral Corruption]

Originally Posted by Tempy

Yuuno Scrya
“Everyone’s Student”
“Librarian of Infinity”

Type A: Fortress Sign
Shot type: Reflective Shot
Focus fire: Refraction Shield

Type B: Scholar Sign
Shot type: Extermination Needles
Focus fire: Elemental Laser

Type C: Support Sign
Shot type: Wide Spread Bit Fire
Focus fire: Focused Bit Blaster

Bomb:
Yuuno A: Charged Shot - Master Spark (alpha ver.)
Yuuno B: Bounded Field - Time Distortion Field
Yuuno C: Restriction - Struggle Bind

What made you give Yuuno Yuka's spell card A.K.A. the spell Marisa stole A.K.A. the spell that inspired Starlight Breaker in the first place? Also, who are the people that are going to write about the Scrya Clan's creation anyway?

[Tempy]

Originally Posted by Astral Corruption

What made you give Yuuno Yuka's spell card A.K.A. the spell Marisa stole A.K.A. the spell that inspired Starlight Breaker in the first place? Also, who are the people that are going to write about the Scrya Clan's creation anyway?

Official story: Yuuno learned from Marisa, as well as a number of Touhou girls. As a result, several of his new spells are, in ways, tribute to his teachers. Yuuno's version of Master Spark, as indicated as "Alpha version," is his first rendition of it. Instead of a single, coherent beam, it's a highly explosive burst of magic power; a charged plasma shot.

Unofficial story: because it'd be funny to pit Master Spark VS Starlight Breaker.

[Sunder the Gold]

Speaking of spell cards, I have this theory that the "boss-type" Spellcards (as opposed to "player-type") are actually field spells.

In a Spellcard battle, the first one to set their Spellcard up as a field type gets to control the battle (since you can't expand a field in someone else's field), and the opponent who got caught their field has to attack them until the field breaks.


In A's, this is Vita using Magical Prison, and then Nanoha using Lyrical Sign: Starlight Breaker to bomb her way out of it.

Only Nanoha can't ever return the favor, since she never learned a field-type spell. Not that Vita used it for anything other than a trap, herself.


Oh, and on a semi-related note, I've gotten more of Yuuno's Maze chapter written.

Same as before: Looks like a few minor setbacks where I wrote something that I need to unwrite, and trying to figure out how to balance the exposition against the action.

[Astral Corruption]

Originally Posted by Tempy

Official story: Yuuno learned from Marisa, as well as a number of Touhou girls. As a result, several of his new spells are, in ways, tribute to his teachers. Yuuno's version of Master Spark, as indicated as "Alpha version," is his first rendition of it. Instead of a single, coherent beam, it's a highly explosive burst of magic power; a charged plasma shot.

Unofficial story: because it'd be funny to pit Master Spark VS Starlight Breaker.

So Fortress Sign: Charged Shot - Master Spark (alpha ver.) is from Marisa, Scholar Sign: Extermination Needles is from Reimu, Scholar Sign: Elemental Laser is from Patchouli and Scholar Sign: Bounded Field - Time Distortion Field is from Sakuya? Who did he learn Fortress Sign: Reflective Shot, Fortress Sign: Refraction Shield, Support Sign: Wide Spread Bit Fire, Support Sign: Focused Bit Blaster and Support Sign: Restriction - Struggle Bind from?

[Tempy]

Originally Posted by Astral Corruption

So Fortress Sign: Charged Shot - Master Spark (alpha ver.) is from Marisa, Scholar Sign: Extermination Needles is from Reimu, Scholar Sign: Elemental Laser is from Patchouli and Scholar Sign: Bounded Field - Time Distortion Field is from Sakuya? Who did he learn Fortress Sign: Reflective Shot, Fortress Sign: Refraction Shield, Support Sign: Wide Spread Bit Fire, Support Sign: Focused Bit Blaster and Support Sign: Restriction - Struggle Bind from?

Bounded Field - Time Distortion Field is a combination of Yukari Yakumo's teachings and his own pre-existing spells. I suppose Sakuya could have some influence, but her ability is more innate than teachable, so she makes for a poor instructor.

Reflective Shot and Refraction Shield are just his regular danmaku when Type A. Once someone taught him what danmaku was about, he made his own.

Reflective Shot actually bounces around the screen a bit until it either hits someone or it fades away after three or four bounces. Refraction Shield is actually not a bullet, but it forms a shield that deflects danmaku. This can survive a few hits before breaking, leaving him vulnerable for a bit.

Wide Spread and Focused Bit Blaster are also his regular danmaku in Type C. Using lessons from Alice Margatroid, he has his own orbital bits that shoot danmaku.

Struggle Bind is a spell he knew already. It's just in bomb form.

[GaelicDragon]

I am creating a Fanfiction . Net C2 for the forums and wanted to know what you guys wanted to put for a community description?

Options made so far...

Showcasing what the authors on Animesuki have to offer

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I am going to create this tomorrow evening so I can get more members to make suggestions. I am also looking for people interested in becoming staff for the C2

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by GaelicDragon

I am creating a Fanfiction . Net C2 for the forums and wanted to know what you guys wanted to put for a community description?

Options made so far...

Showcasing what the authors on Animesuki have to offer

The writings of AnimeSuki's Nanoha forum organized for your perusal.

A collection of stories writen by AS authors and published here on fanfiction.net

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I am going to create this tomorrow evening so I can get more members to make suggestions. I am also looking for people interested in becoming staff for the C2

*raises hand*

I'd be interested in being staff, if you want me.

[mega1987]

Originally Posted by GaelicDragon

I am creating a Fanfiction . Net C2 for the forums and wanted to know what you guys wanted to put for a community description?

Options made so far...

Showcasing what the authors on Animesuki have to offer

The writings of AnimeSuki's Nanoha forum organized for your perusal.

A collection of stories writen by AS authors and published here on fanfiction.net

--

I am going to create this tomorrow evening so I can get more members to make suggestions. I am also looking for people interested in becoming staff for the C2

Wow... now I can see which nanoha fics came from animesuki...

[Nanya01]

My muse...

It hungers!

Nanya-muse: NOM!
DC-muse: You don't need to eat that loudly.
Nanya-muse: Waaahh! DC-muse-chan is being mean again!
DC-muse: *sighs* Knock it off, people are staring again.
Nanya-muse: ...Can we have ice cream later?
DC-muse: ...Sure.
Nanya-muse: Yay! *Glomps DC-muse*
DC-muse: *Turns red* Dammit! Stop doing that!

Told you that these mini-arcs were short.

Peek's Mini-Arcs:

Yagami Mid Four Dwell Takamachi Scrya Fatherhood Harlaown Dreams Dance Healing Twins Advice

History Start

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Peek - History End:

Stepping over the debris as he followed the being called Abby, Sirius wondered just what the other being knew. "This disaster, why were the people living here?"

Abby turned to look at him, before turning and shaking his head. "It was an ironic safe house for humans. Living in what they knew as Al Hazard."

Sirius raised an eyebrow. "Ironic?"

Abby chuckled and continued to walk on. "Never-mind that. It's not important anymore." Walking over to a pile of debris, he kicked it over, revealing nothing but circuits and dust. "Amazing that the technology, as damaged as it is, survived so long."

"That Tome of the Night Sky," Sirius stopped a few feet back as Abby stood straight and looked at him, "what was it meant for?"

Abby chuckled softly. "It was meant to absorb spells." He frowned in confusion and stroked his chin. "I think so anyway. It's been a long time since I saw it, but it was originally used to help older magic users who were dying. They would pour their magical knowledge into the book so that their spells would not disappear with them."

"Really?" Sirius nodded slowly at the logic of that. That would be helpful, since uncommon magic was often-times lost when a person died. "So, what changed?"

Abby smirked sadly. "The people of Al Hazard needed someone who could always use the book, as the thing didn't always allow its user to access the spells within." He snapped his fingers and an image of the book appeared. "So, they crafted a bond with the book by creating a Unison Device."

"Unison?" Sirius raised an eyebrow. "Sounds like what would have happened had all our ships merged together a few centuries ago."

"Maybe." Abby chuckled softly. "This device was created rather differently than most of the ones that followed."

"How so?" Sirius did find this stuff interesting. At least it kept him distracted from several worlds that were in the middle of conflict one way or another.

Abby shrugged. "I'm not sure." When he heard Sirius slam into the ground, he shook his head. "I'm not omniscient. All I know is that the device itself was different." He smirked slightly. "To be honest, she felt almost like a human that had been turned into some sort of Mazoku or Shinzoku. Other than that, I don't know."

"Interesting." Sirius looked at the wreckage before turning back to see Abby gone. "...Huh." Shrugging, the Shinzoku continued onwards. The universe was huge and there was always something new to see after all.

(---)

She smirked as she looked at the data. "So, they did survive." She muttered to herself, before chuckling. Even if they weren't the same ones from the past, the fact that their power had survived for thousands of years made for some interesting possibilities.

Still, this would require a lot of thought.

After all, they were created to destroy her and all of her kind. She just wondered if they knew what their original purpose was.

Oh well, even if they did, she could figure something out.

It was what her master taught her after all.