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[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Chapter 3 of the Christmas Special is out.

The previous chapter was my favorite in terms of comedy, but this one I had the most fun writing

You... you sly dude. I can smell references towards the characters' voice roles. What, Accelerator and Seiri? More than likely than what I thought. Good chapter anyway!

*coughcough*ohlookslikeAyuzawagrewherselfarackandl ongerhair*coughcoughcoughcough*

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Maybe some things were not meant to be mixed? xD

Haruhi and Index could still work, in fact I myself had some ideas after watching the Disappearance Movie. But for stuff like that you have to be specific about how much you want to include from both worlds into the story.

Or likewise you can do it like the "Secret Wars" which was what Spiderman did. And throw those characters into a completely unknown world for both of them and force them to work together to achieve a goal... Or maybe ever recruit them, like what Mass Effect did...

Originally Posted by Soul Assassin

You... you sly dude. I can smell references towards the characters' voice roles.

You had to have known that it was coming

[kaizerknight01]

plot ideas

MISAKA 10032 appears in front of Misaka Mikoto asking help, and tells her that there spin off of the tree diagram project called"imaginary number" that involves the cloned Touma( Using his brain cell obtain(Stolen) from heaven canceler.

from the data that MISAKA 10032 got the a cloned version of Kamijou Touma has cybernetic/ nano tech enhancement notably his right arm can shape shift into guns/rocket launcher/AIM disruptor. the scientists want to test out if this clone can be use for military/ anti skill operation.

Misaka Mikoto , outraged knowing will be just another repeat of "SISTER"


just throwing ideas here and there this one kinda interested me the most

[Chaos2Frozen]

...Mah, I'm sure other people will handle the more obvious stuff, but let me ask you this- What's the reason for cloning Touma?

[kaizerknight01]

well, the main premise that Touma beat accelerator, the scientists wanted to study / examine how did a lvl 0 beat accelerator AC strongest lvl 5 only to find out that there nothing special ...... until they notice the cloned Touma effect AIM fields

[Master Assassin]

That means you'll have to deal with the fact that there is only one Imagine Breaker and it belongs to only one human that is Kamijou Touma (the original himself). And even though it was stated that a Level 0 beat Accelerator, the strongest Level 5 Esper in Academy City, nobody knew who was it, so you'll have to clarify that as well.

And you'll need to produce plausible reasoning on why Heaven Canceler will have a blueprint of Touma's genes such as his brain cell. I'd believe if it was his hair or some skin cells, but brain cells is quite pushing it.

[kaizerknight01]

Originally Posted by Soul Assassin

That means you'll have to deal with the fact that there is only one Imagine Breaker and it belongs to only one human that is Kamijou Touma (the original himself). And even though it was stated that a Level 0 beat Accelerator, the strongest Level 5 Esper in Academy City, nobody knew who was it, so you'll have to clarify that as well.

And you'll need to produce plausible reasoning on why Heaven Canceler will have a blueprint of Touma's genes such as his brain cell. I'd believe if it was his hair or some skin cells, but brain cells is quite pushing it.

1. The Clone DOES NOT have IB at best what he can do is redirect a spell/ psionic attacks to miss him, and it does not work against high tier magician/ espers.

2 Surveillance robots that can relay the the battle against Touma vs Accelator. just like those cleaner droids their either air borne or stealthy.

3 in the first season i thought Heaven Canceler treated/ operated on Touma head and Touma frequents that hospital guess dr frog face know his genetic blue print

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by kaizerknight01

well, the main premise that Touma beat accelerator, the scientists wanted to study / examine how did a lvl 0 beat accelerator AC strongest lvl 5 only to find out that there nothing special ...... until they notice the cloned Touma effect AIM fields

Originally Posted by kaizerknight01

1. The Clone DOES NOT have IB at best what he can do is redirect a spell/ psionic attacks to miss him, and it does not work against high tier magician/ espers.

So basically the clone have developed an esper ability to affect both AIM and Magic?

Even so, What's the justification of cloning this person? why not another Esper?

[Master Assassin]

And the next thing would be: On what justification would Frogface Doc keep at least a trace of his genetic blueprint, and why would he allow it to be used for experiments and clonings, so that the events that lead to Touma being cloned will happen?

[Chaos2Frozen]

Since we're on the topic of throwing out fanfic ideas, here's one I would like to try after I'm done with Christmas... Hopefully I could get some help with this

Spoiler for Heads up, it can be abit... Detailed:

I haven't really decided on a title yet for now I'll refer to it as the [Three Worlds Story]. As you can probably guess, it would involve three toaru heroes (Touma, Mikoto, Accelerator) trying to solve three different incidents at seem to have no relations whatsoever.


Magic World - Burning Blade
Academy City - Homeland Chaos
Fringe Science - Original Sins

[kaizerknight01]

Originally Posted by Soul Assassin

And the next thing would be: On what justification would Frogface Doc keep at least a trace of his genetic blueprint, and why would he allow it to be used for experiments and clonings, so that the events that lead to Touma being cloned will happen?

1. Dr. Frog face kept it as a sample to further examine the brain damage cause by the feather that hit touma head( forgot the name ) in hope of reversing the damage and restoring his patience memory

2 Nope He did not allow it , his samples and data where stolen, heaven canceler asked IMOUTO to investigate this



to chaos2frozen

sure,I would like to give my ideas and input. but still its your idea its still up to you (Author) to decide.

[tsunade666]

but it's memory destruction. It's like resurrecting a dead person if frog face doctor manage to cure such thing because your basically reviving the dead cells.

[kaizerknight01]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

So basically the clone have developed an esper ability to affect both AIM and Magic?

Even so, What's the justification of cloning this person? why not another Esper?

The simple answer of curiosity and with the approval of Alister Crowly

Originally Posted by tsunade666

but it's memory destruction. It's like resurrecting a dead person if frog face doctor manage to cure such thing because your basically reviving the dead cells.

Well, some researchers in Alzheimer disease did it , why not DR. Frog face

[tsunade666]

memory destruction? as in dead cells retrieving memory?

[Zakoo]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

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Well I'm more or less trying to do that actually, though i created the third hero because ... because ... ( Damn i could have used Mikoto !! Well too late already, the story is already written in my head ).

I would love to read your next fanfiction but if there are three heroes, it will be a long one right ? Well since I have many ideas but I'm not really good at taping, I don't think I will write all so i could more or less help you.

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Since we're on the topic of throwing out fanfic ideas, here's one I would like to try after I'm done with Christmas... Hopefully I could get some help with this

Spoiler for Heads up, it can be abit... Detailed:

I haven't really decided on a title yet for now I'll refer to it as the [Three Worlds Story]. As you can probably guess, it would involve three toaru heroes (Touma, Mikoto, Accelerator) trying to solve three different incidents at seem to have no relations whatsoever.


Magic World - Burning Blade
Academy City - Homeland Chaos
Fringe Science - Original Sins

It sounds really interesting! Will everyone eventually find out the truth behind the incidents and somehow band together to fight the true enemy behind them?

I'm still waiting for an ending like that. I haven't really found any in To Aru fics, and I'd like to see the protagonists actually interact with each other for once.

[kaizerknight01]

Originally Posted by tsunade666

memory destruction? as in dead cells retrieving memory?

yup, Alzheimer researchers did something like they "revive dead brain" cells form an Alzheimer patient but with limited results only.. i remember watching/hearing it form a cable news company some time ago

[Flere821]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Since we're on the topic of throwing out fanfic ideas, here's one I would like to try after I'm done with Christmas... Hopefully I could get some help with this

Spoiler for Heads up, it can be abit... Detailed:

I haven't really decided on a title yet for now I'll refer to it as the [Three Worlds Story]. As you can probably guess, it would involve three toaru heroes (Touma, Mikoto, Accelerator) trying to solve three different incidents at seem to have no relations whatsoever.


Magic World - Burning Blade
Academy City - Homeland Chaos
Fringe Science - Original Sins

Interesting... though (see spoiler)

Spoiler for comments:

1)Adding clone troopers that's not the SISTERs seems a bit wrong to me somehow, seeing as only Academy City so far has cloning technology that actually works well.

2)The 'Horseman' is another supernatural entity trying to intervene? Disregarding there might be some sort of rules regarding divine intervention in IndexVerse (eg Christianity's laws on Angels only descend on God's orders and such, or the Aztecs' gods not wiping Earth out), what's to stop Aiwass to just crush whoever is interrupting Aleister's plots to prolong the game?

3) And someone from Accelerator's childhood? Even if it's not impossible, didn't Vol12 say something like he's the only survivor from series of experiments that killed off all other participants? This bit might need some detailed explanation.

Just my two cents worth of comments, no flaming intended.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Interesting... though (see spoiler)

Spoiler for comments:

1)Adding clone troopers that's not the SISTERs seems a bit wrong to me somehow, seeing as only Academy City so far has cloning technology that actually works well.

Spoiler:

Anyway to write it off as inferior?

Originally Posted by Flere821

Interesting... though (see spoiler)

Spoiler for comments:

2)The 'Horseman' is another supernatural entity trying to intervene? Disregarding there might be some sort of rules regarding divine intervention in IndexVerse (eg Christianity's laws on Angels only descend on God's orders and such, or the Aztecs' gods not wiping Earth out), what's to stop Aiwass to just crush whoever is interrupting Aleister's plots to prolong the game?

Spoiler:

I'm going to play it like the members of [God's Right Seat]- The Horseman are not supernatural beings, they're humans that wield Angel class spells. The particular 'Divine' powers they wield cannot be completely destroyed because of their traits (War, Famine, Pestilence, Death).

I was under the impression that Aiwass cannot pop out anytime he please because he would need Last Order to do so... Or the Imaginary Number District.

Originally Posted by Flere821

Spoiler:

3) And someone from Accelerator's childhood? Even if it's not impossible, didn't Vol12 say something like he's the only survivor from series of experiments that killed off all other participants? This bit might need some detailed explanation.

.

Spoiler:

My idea was that this was from a time where Kihara was trying to study Accelerator and his powers, so he attempted a number of ways to try to kill him. One of those method is a psychic mind attack from another Esper... Accelerator thought he had killed her, but her broken body was kept alive and was given, as a good will gift, to the Americans as research still they don't need her anymore.

[MeisterBabylon]

Chaos handled most of the canon cast, so I shall throw in a bit of OC x CC. Once again, starring L4 Firestarter, Kataru Tsubomi:

Christmas of the 5 Percent

My pet theory is that the novels will end on the dot of Christmas, which has affected this short somewhat. Give a lot more hope for the season too.

And like my Sith Lord Chaos, I included a surprise...