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Old 2011-02-09, 02:02   Link #1
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My AMVs

Hey, what do you think of my new amv on one Piece (marineford war arc)?









*EDIT* Could a moderator please change the topic title to 'My AMVs'? Thanks in advance

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Old 2011-02-09, 08:54   Link #2
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The song really doesn't match the AMV all too well (Breaking Benjamin "Diary of Jane" yes?) there were some scenes that were out of touch. The AMV doesn't fit with the song too well also. Most of it looked like fast-forward action more then syncing with the beat (well there were some scenes that matched well, but alot were just fast-forwarded) but you did good matching the drumbeat with your effects.

Otherwise I give it an 7/10 it's a good attempt I must say.
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Old 2011-02-10, 01:29   Link #3
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I thought the song matched some action scenes, that's why i used it.
I appreciate your constructive criticism.
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Old 2011-02-10, 16:53   Link #4
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I thought the song matched some action scenes, that's why i used it.
I appreciate your constructive criticism.
I rated alot of AMVs in the past, but I tried to keep myself from sounding harsh when I was typing my thoughts. I hope none of it offended your work, it was great overall.
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Old 2011-02-16, 05:51   Link #5
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Here is another one on Impel Down. Hope you all like it.



Please comment, subscribe and give it a thumbs up Thanks.
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Old 2011-02-16, 16:53   Link #6
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There is some improvement in this AMV, I like how you kept the upbeat with the song during the video, but there were sometimes when the lyrics just din't fix the scene all that well "We've all been hurt", first time this was said everyone was dancing and cheering. Also at 2:38, the scene seemed sorta dramatic for it to keep with the high-beat of the song. So a random scene before that would be good, and then put that chair scene when the music starts to get slowed down to cause some effect. But that's probably enough from me good job here as well.
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Old 2011-03-05, 00:00   Link #7
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Just finished my newest amv



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Old 2011-03-05, 01:10   Link #8
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8.9/10

I must say, you have defiantly made a huge improvement in this one, you matched timing with the impact of the song quite nicely. The sudden angelic appearance in 1:25 surprised me a bit since it was Rise Against I was expecting it when it started near the end with "I believe in angels" or something like that. But you really have gotten quite good with this, especially without using heavy-effect programs.
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Old 2011-04-30, 06:26   Link #9
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Part 2 of my Marineford amv




Leave a comment telling me what you think

Yes, I didn't use many effects because I think it does not fit into this style of amv if you get what i mean.
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Old 2011-04-30, 23:06   Link #10
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8.2/10

There were some scenes that could have made an impact but was a little timed out like in 2:29-2:33 speeding it into the next scene would have made it possible to keep on track with the song. I like how you tried to slow the video down to get the impact of the dramatic vocals (the song was from Two Steps from Hell right? Or someone else?), but the slowness sorta timed out certain scenes. The starting was a little strange without the voices. For a song like this where it fits perfectly with a movie, some voices at the beginning would tell the viewers there in for an surprise. Overall it's better then part 1.
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Old 2011-09-27, 07:49   Link #11
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After a loooooooong time due to exams and technical difficulties here's my newest amv:



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Old 2011-12-30, 02:31   Link #12
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Finally finished my new amv on Luffy and Ace, what do you think?

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Old 2012-03-30, 07:29   Link #13
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One Piece AMV - Abyss of Darkness

So after a long time, I finally finished my newest amv
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Old 2012-05-12, 07:32   Link #14
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Here is my first Naruto AMV, or a trailer. Konan was one of my favourite characters



Hope you like it
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Old 2012-05-12, 16:05   Link #15
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Really good Konan tribute, love the music. I would say 7.9/10
Only two things I don't like is that you didn't show much of the fight with Tobi, and some fade's are really fast and then some slow.
What I really liked was the bit at 0:30 really nicely done
Other then that keep up the work!
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Old 2012-05-12, 19:19   Link #16
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Really good Konan tribute, love the music. I would say 7.9/10
Only two things I don't like is that you didn't show much of the fight with Tobi, and some fade's are really fast and then some slow.
What I really liked was the bit at 0:30 really nicely done
Other then that keep up the work!
Hey thanks for the constructive criticism. Yes, I realised that afterwards that I shouldve shown more of the fight, and yes next time I will be more consistent with the transitions. Thanks for your feedback
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Old 2012-05-27, 05:46   Link #17
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Here is my amv on the Straw Hats long awaited REVIVAL, hahaha, anyways hope you enjoy it!


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Old 2012-07-03, 01:34   Link #18
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I had time on the weekends, so I made this amv (trailer) of the impel down arc and Luffy's sheer determination



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Old 2012-10-01, 22:06   Link #19
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If you have the time, here is my most recent amv.
Any feedback and comments are greatly appreciated

The amv is about the loyalty and bonds of the nakama and how they develop during their journey together

Thanks for your time



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Old 2012-10-02, 09:38   Link #20
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I think this is your best AMV yet, even though your marine ford part 1 gave me shivers ^^ . Are you using Song Vegas?

I really like the transitions at 0:36, really well done.
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