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ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-10, 00:39

Ahem, I was talking about height, not breast. Once again, I rule out T&A. So yeah, I think it's a matter of interpretation

EDIT: I think it got worse, so let's end it here. But at least I will keep the gospel case intact in ST.

StratoSpear · 2012-09-10, 00:49

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

@ Stratos
That's a cool sword

Funny thing that came into my mind:
The Senonami was supposed to have an experimental PIC system integrated into it to reduce its weight to nothingness but Tsurugi refuses have it as such, saying that the weight is one of the core aspects of the weapon and it will allow her to utilize the Senonami better than it would without weight.

With that said, she is capable of swinging that sword around like she would with a katana. There's a reason to that and it ties up with the Memento Sword, a customised, ancient training sword that is passed down through generations of the Katami family.

Sword stuffs aside, how does the revised Minerva Kai look? Any comments on the unit? I figured the changes would be somewhat major seeing as it no longer has ranged weaponry and relies solely on the twin beam sabers.

Eratas123 · 2012-09-10, 00:52

@ Senpai - Would a harem end be plausible at all?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-10, 01:10

@ Eras
So far, if not personal moral of the people involved (Such as hero's unwillingness or love interest justifiable selfishness), then it's the law.

Many harem didn't end with harem because of law problem, in Japan, Polygamy is illegal. Some that did end with multipair usually justified with the lack of said law, To-Love-Ru for example, or Tenchi series. Hentai tend to skip marriage altogether, but there will be a problem...

@ Stratos
Design wise, it's fine. You just need to put it to the story and see what changed, especially fight scenes.

StratoSpear · 2012-09-10, 01:16

Working towards it, that's for sure. Who else I could use to inflict the damage if not the Gospel herself?

Then again, would this apply to the CC's canon tendecies?:

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A shot from above lands near the two as the resulting impact force sends them tumbling away. Ichika quickly recovers and sees Laura heading towards him in her Schwazer Regen IS, smirking gleefully with her Railgun pointed at him.

“L-Laura…!”

“Prepare yourself… The real training starts now!”

Streaks of electricity discharge within the Railgun’s muzzle as it begins to glow bright. Humming from the weapon grows loud as it loads up a shot while Laura locks the targeting reticule on Ichika, who is still stunned at her arrival while Cecilia slowly steps back. With him in clear sight, Laura triggers the shot.

*BDOOF*

“This isn’t happeni—” were the only words Ichika could mumble as the hi-powered shot from the Schwarzer Regen zeroes towards him.

*BOOM*

Eratas123 · 2012-09-10, 01:20

But is there a choice other than harem end? If Ichika picks one, the other 4 get pissy and bring out WMD's.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-10, 01:33

No, if they can accept it and grew, if not, then fail end.

Eratas123 · 2012-09-10, 01:38

Accept? Grow? I can't relate these words to the IS cast.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-09-10, 01:54

Well, you did ask... in ST, one by one confess and get refused.

DarkJak2050 · 2012-09-10, 01:58

Spoiler for "Deleted" Ch. 7 Content.:

That's part of the excess content I had to take out...

HasuMasu · 2012-09-10, 02:09

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Originally Posted by StratoSpear

Disregard what I said about having Tsurugi one-arm-fighting a horde of drones in the previous pages. I figured it'll be impractical since I plan her to use this during the fight:

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In the re-write, the weapon is known as Senonami (A Thousand Waves).

EDIT: Fix'd image

Grand Slam huh?

Also, shouldn't it be Chinami? If I'm not mistaken Sen no Nami is 'Wave of the Thousands' or something.

DarkJak2050 · 2012-09-10, 02:17

And that's just typical; whenever I post something, everyone just stops posting...

StratoSpear · 2012-09-10, 02:19

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Originally Posted by Hasumi

Grand Slam huh?

Also, shouldn't it be Chinami? If I'm not mistaken Sen no Nami is 'Wave of the Thousands' or something.

Kinda split for that part... But since its a single sword but the user(in this case, Tsurugi), could use it just as easily and deadly as she would with a katana, "Wave of the Thousands" sounds more apt for her case.

@Jak
Timezones.

DarkJak2050 · 2012-09-10, 02:22

My bad...

Anyway, did you see that "Deleted Content"?

StratoSpear · 2012-09-10, 02:29

Of course! Were they like teleported to Venus Fort? If it caused that much of a noise, it would have at least caught the attention of like 4-5 people despite the place being quiet... It is a parking lot after all.

Then again, not much point commenting on deleted content aside from the fact that this played in my mind when I read it:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AhKuH6AWKDo

DarkJak2050 · 2012-09-10, 02:36

Yeah they were.

That content right there was suppose some of the last parts of Chapter 7, but it made it too long and I had to cut it out.

It is out of Chapter 7, but not out completely. By the way, have you read Ch. 7 yet?

StratoSpear · 2012-09-10, 02:48

Not yet, too busy trying to get stuffs out of my head and into chapters. But I'll get to it :3

DarkJak2050 · 2012-09-10, 02:52

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Originally Posted by StratoSpear

Not yet, too busy trying to get stuffs out of my head and into chapters. But I'll get to it :3

Sorry about that.

StratoSpear · 2012-09-10, 02:58

Another short. Figured this would deliver his yearning yet fearful emotion to meet up with a childhood friend whom he left behind for five years.

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At the coastal town of Odake, part of Hokota city in the Ibaraki Prefecture, the atmosphere is unlike any other typical town: Quiet and peaceful with very few people and vehicles moving along the streets at slow speeds without any indication of a stressed or passive lifestyle.

Amongst the town stands a two-storey house of the Katami family with a small training shed built next it but well within the house’s vicinity.

*duup* *duup*

Inami’s heart beats fast while he stands in front of the house, his finger twitching to press the doorbell at the iron gates. At this point, all he cares about is to see his childhood friend, Tsurugi Katami, whom he’s been separated from for ages along with several different ways to apologize for his absence to her.

‘Should I…? I’m this close to seeing her… I just… need…’

His finger remains elevated with the index finger touching the button of the electronic doorbell such that a slight push will alert the house’s tenants to the gates.

‘Tch… She will forgive me, wouldn’t she…? Or maybe she wouldn’t… Gaah! Why now? Why am I so troubled over this…?’

*gulp*

Nervous of the various chances of outcomes, Inami takes a deep breath and pushes the button.

*ding*

Silence. That was all that replied to his troubled hesitation in the dilemma.

DarkJak2050 · 2012-09-10, 03:09

Oh yeah, remember that you asked me about how the weapons are stored on the Silverbacks, that'll be answered in Chapter 7.

And you remember the Flashback Eric's been having virtually throughout the whole thing?

You'll see what happened to his Big Brother figure. Just read it and you'll find out.

2012-09-10, 00:39	Link #36761
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Ahem, I was talking about height, not breast. Once again, I rule out T&A. So yeah, I think it's a matter of interpretation EDIT: I think it got worse, so let's end it here. But at least I will keep the gospel case intact in ST. __________________

2012-09-10, 00:52	Link #36763
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Would a harem end be plausible at all? __________________

2012-09-10, 01:10	Link #36764
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Eras So far, if not personal moral of the people involved (Such as hero's unwillingness or love interest justifiable selfishness), then it's the law. Many harem didn't end with harem because of law problem, in Japan, Polygamy is illegal. Some that did end with multipair usually justified with the lack of said law, To-Love-Ru for example, or Tenchi series. Hentai tend to skip marriage altogether, but there will be a problem... @ Stratos Design wise, it's fine. You just need to put it to the story and see what changed, especially fight scenes. __________________

2012-09-10, 01:20	Link #36766
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	But is there a choice other than harem end? If Ichika picks one, the other 4 get pissy and bring out WMD's. __________________

2012-09-10, 01:33	Link #36767
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	No, if they can accept it and grew, if not, then fail end. __________________

2012-09-10, 01:38	Link #36768
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Accept? Grow? I can't relate these words to the IS cast. __________________

2012-09-10, 01:54	Link #36769
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Well, you did ask... in ST, one by one confess and get refused. __________________

2012-09-10, 01:58	Link #36770
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Spoiler for "Deleted" Ch. 7 Content.: *12:12 PM, August 17, 2021. Venus Fort Shopping Mall, Odaiba, Japan.* Sirens echoed throughout the air as people are evacuating in an orderly fashion. In a parking lot on the opposite side of the shopping mall, abandoned cars littered the lot as the summer breeze blows on through; like the whole place is a ghost town. Pzzt Pzzt Pzzt Electricity began arcing in the middle of the lot, disrupting the parking lot’s empty silence. Pzzt Pzzt! Vr-r-r-r-r- A deep ‘humming’ began to sound through the lot as electricity continues to arc faster and faster, creating a mini lightningstorm. R-r-r-r-VOOM! *Klunk. Klunk* Klunk! Klunk. Klunk. Klunk… A thunderous sound echoed through the air and the lightning storm dissipated soon afterwards. When its all clear, in the center of it were 4 suits of silver colored and blue neon light armor; lying completely motionless in the middle of the parking lot. A few seconds later, they all began to slowly move and recover of what has happened. [Change] “Uh.” That ‘trip’ left a slight churning feeling in my gut. Now I know what getting squashed into a tiny box feels like. “Ah…” I slowly began to sit up as I to check if my brothers are still with me. ““Ugh…”” Sideswipe and Ratchet were just coming around and Scourge lying on his back, struggling to get up. “Oh, man. Everybody in one piece?” Sideswipe and Ratchet slowly began to get on their feet and Scourge, still appears to be affected, said… “Uh... I’ll get back to you on that…” I got up and checked the status on my Silverback and everyone’s. Even though we’ve gotten banged up from that ‘trip’, our Silverbacks are okay. “Come on, Scourge. Up and at’em.” I picked Scourge up as Sideswipe and Ratchet seemed to have fully recovered and looking at the surrounding area. “Where did Tezla sent us?” “Venus Fort, Sideswipe.” “He could’ve sent us directly to Ishiyama High.” “If Tezla would’ve sent us directly to Ishiyama High with the IS attacking, it might look like that we’re there to assist it instead of stopping it. Tezla, come in. Tezla, come in.” “…” “Ah, shit. Ratchet, how do we look on long-range radio?” “We’re looking like shit on it right now, must’ve been damaged on the way here. Now we’re limited to short-range.” “Great, there goes our communications with Tezla.” If we had Hawkeye with us, then it wouldn’t be a problem. He’s equipped with a radio uplink to relay long-range radio signals to and from Tezla. Freakin terrific time for him to be out… But that aside, there’s one other thing I need to check… [Saber Assault Rifle: Online] [Shockburst: Online] [Desert Ranger (x2): Online] [Concussion Grenades: Online] [Cryo Grenades: Online] [Forearm Blades: Online] [All Weapons: Nominal] The feed I got on the visor at least showed me that something’s going right… I looked back at my bros to see that they’re all checking their weapons. Just like me, they want to make sure everything’s functioning properly. “Alright, since we’re at Venus Fort, we ought to be about 3 Kilometers (1.8 Miles) southwest of Ishiyama.” “Yeah, and I can see the IS causing a lot of havoc from up here.” Sideswipe, clinging on the wall above the shopping mall’s sign, is looking off towards the high school’s direction. “And that’s our signal to get moving. Sideswipe, you take the roof tops; keeps us posted on the IS’s activities.” “Right!” Sideswipe climbed up to the roof top and went ahead towards high school. Time for us to get going. “Ratchet, Scourge you’re with me.” We began to make our way out of the parking lot and onto the streets. This street we’re taking has a train line in the center and it goes to a station that’s just a 5 minute walk away from Ishiyama High’s Dormitories. This’ll make it faster to get to the high school. ”We’ll follow the train tracks. Let’s move!” That's part of the excess content I had to take out...

2012-09-10, 02:17	Link #36772
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	And that's just typical; whenever I post something, everyone just stops posting...

2012-09-10, 02:22	Link #36774
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	My bad... Anyway, did you see that "Deleted Content"?

2012-09-10, 02:29	Link #36775
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Of course! Were they like teleported to Venus Fort? If it caused that much of a noise, it would have at least caught the attention of like 4-5 people despite the place being quiet... It is a parking lot after all. Then again, not much point commenting on deleted content aside from the fact that this played in my mind when I read it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AhKuH6AWKDo __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2012-09-10, 02:36	Link #36776
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Yeah they were. That content right there was suppose some of the last parts of Chapter 7, but it made it too long and I had to cut it out. It is out of Chapter 7, but not out completely. By the way, have you read Ch. 7 yet?

2012-09-10, 02:48	Link #36777
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Not yet, too busy trying to get stuffs out of my head and into chapters. But I'll get to it :3 __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2012-09-10, 03:09	Link #36780
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Oh yeah, remember that you asked me about how the weapons are stored on the Silverbacks, that'll be answered in Chapter 7. And you remember the Flashback Eric's been having virtually throughout the whole thing? You'll see what happened to his Big Brother figure. Just read it and you'll find out.