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tsunade666 · 2012-07-15, 03:01

I also didn't get the defense mechanism in pen-dex. She can use magic in john pen mode but she can't in normal mode. What was isolating her from doing it? is it a safe mechanism so the grimoire's can't corrupt her or something and being summon as the mind of god can probably find a leeway on it but I'm not yet sure because tristain's designated familiar is always Gandalfr. hmmm still nit picking between index or accelerator. Having the starting familiar will drastically change the setting.

Twi · 2012-07-15, 04:14

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Well... it's been so long since I've written anything for M3 I've only got the bare bones of the plot left in my head >.< Having said that, I've only got the bare bones planned for the last 25% of M3 to begin with... M3 was something I've written when fueled by fanboying at Misaki ^^;

TtM, next chapter roughly 50% done, but I've hit writer's block and can't quite get this one scene working. At least it wasn't the same scene I've been stuck at for the last month or so

If/when I get this chapter done I'll need to find a Beta too, someone that can look over my chapter for me and tell me why I should change this rather than just fix up all the mistakes.

I can do the Beta.

Flere821 · 2012-07-16, 01:46

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Originally Posted by Twi

I can do the Beta.

Okay, that would be very helpful

Do you mind if I bounce some ideas off of you as well? It might help me get over this block.

Twi · 2012-07-16, 13:01

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Originally Posted by Flere821

Okay, that would be very helpful

Do you mind if I bounce some ideas off of you as well? It might help me get over this block.

Sure, send me some PMs.

rubix22 · 2012-07-16, 19:05

Anyway for a plebeian like me to get in on this as well...?

Sumeragi · 2012-07-16, 19:54

Kaori x Mikoto x Misaki.

The ultimate triangle of lilies.

Mr.Kyon · 2012-07-16, 20:49

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Kaori x Mikoto x Misaki.

The ultimate triangle of lilies.

Explain how this would come about. I'm intrigued.

Sumeragi · 2012-07-16, 21:02

I'm thinking Daihaseisai, with Kaori coming in the place of Stiyl for some reason, and somehow the Index and the Railgun stories combine into the mother of all lilies. It'll be delicious as we see Mikoto being jealous of Kaori's assets and perhaps Misaki getting a taste of magic vs. esper powers, resulting in her falling in love with the Ace and the Saint.

Flere821 · 2012-07-17, 02:07

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Sure, send me some PMs.

Sure. And remind me, do you have a FFN account? I'd like to send documents to you that way, I'm a bit paranoid to who gets my email

If we can get this set up I'll send you what I have done on the chapter thus far, get the context of my current block sorted and then I'll start asking for detailed help.

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Anyway for a plebeian like me to get in on this as well...?

Do you have a FFN account? And if so, I'd like to read what you have written first before I decide. I'd like my beta's to be at least as good at grammar as I am. Twi IIRC at least has that part sorted.

rubix22 · 2012-07-17, 02:21

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Originally Posted by Flere821

Do you have a FFN account? And if so, I'd like to read what you have written first before I decide. I'd like my beta's to be at least as good at grammar as I am. Twi IIRC at least has that part sorted.

...

Ah, hmm... well...

I have an account... And I guess I've written stuff...

( This might actually be interesting... )

The link to my profile page is below...

Spoiler for :

Before you actually read anything though, I should say that I don't consider myself to be a 'real writer'. Not even in the fan sense. However, I do have ideas and think that they're worth something.

I look forward to hearing your response.

Spoiler for :

Flere821 · 2012-07-17, 02:41

Sorry, I don't pay much attention to this thread often these days and I wasn't quite sure if it was you who wrote Toaru Super SS or if it was another guy

*picks a few chapter at random*

*reads*

Okay, more than good enough

Though I'm not sure if you'd really want to help - you seem to specialize in crack/humour, while I'm trying to outdo rival Fate/Zero and/or Madoka Magica in sheer angst/tragedy

TtM is basically IndexVerse running on the narrative laws of Nasuverse.

And you'd be getting spoilers, instead of watching in horror be surprised by what I have in stall for my readers (or what's left of them after my prolonged hiatus >.>). Sure you still want to help?

(By the way, thanks for the link - I'm now interested in reading more of this, will come back and read your fic later)

rubix22 · 2012-07-17, 02:52

Y-Y-Yes my lord...!

( Though I should say my type of humor is a bit more downtoearth than crack... )

Flere821 · 2012-07-17, 03:14

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( Though I should say my type of humor is a bit more downtoearth than crack... )

I dunno, it might not be the 'brain-explode' crack but it's still 'wait, what?' crack at times IMO. Either way it's still funny

Connection request on FFN is now sent to you. When Twi gets back to me we can get started

I'll send over what I've done so far within the next few days, get the context sorted, and then start (more) writing

tsunade666 · 2012-07-17, 10:20

What story is TtM Flere?

I haven't had much time to check on FFN or even read novels.

Atrum023 · 2012-07-17, 19:06

I'm guessing TtM refers to Flere's story, "Twice the Misfortune."

Mr.Kyon · 2012-07-17, 19:19

And if you haven't been reading it, I shall smite the ever loving crap outta you.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7409145/

Twi · 2012-07-17, 20:10

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Originally Posted by Flere821

I dunno, it might not be the 'brain-explode' crack but it's still 'wait, what?' crack at times IMO. Either way it's still funny

Connection request on FFN is now sent to you. When Twi gets back to me we can get started

I'll send over what I've done so far within the next few days, get the context sorted, and then start (more) writing

I'm known as Born of Prayers there:

Spoiler for Link:

Flere821 · 2012-07-18, 01:27

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I'm known as Born of Prayers there:

Spoiler for Link:

Thanks

Connection to you now pending, and I'll try and fix up what I've got on my current chapter so far and send it over to you and rubix.

TkMacintosh · 2012-07-18, 19:37

*plops down and sighs heavily* FINALLY done with ch 4 in word...

I have sent it off to my editor and hopefully within a week, 2 at the most.

There is a SMALL part in the story that a few people here MIGHT like...totally not sure though :P

Twi · 2012-07-20, 02:19

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Originally Posted by TkMacintosh

*plops down and sighs heavily* FINALLY done with ch 4 in word...

I have sent it off to my editor and hopefully within a week, 2 at the most.

There is a SMALL part in the story that a few people here MIGHT like...totally not sure though :P

Don't forget to drop in a reference to Touma being an adult film star while he's up for auction. Comedic gold~!

2012-07-15, 03:01	Link #2701
tsunade666 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: In my room	I also didn't get the defense mechanism in pen-dex. She can use magic in john pen mode but she can't in normal mode. What was isolating her from doing it? is it a safe mechanism so the grimoire's can't corrupt her or something and being summon as the mind of god can probably find a leeway on it but I'm not yet sure because tristain's designated familiar is always Gandalfr. hmmm still nit picking between index or accelerator. Having the starting familiar will drastically change the setting. __________________ To A certain Lonely Hero

2012-07-16, 19:05	Link #2705
rubix22 On Cleaning Duty Join Date: Jun 2011	Anyway for a plebeian like me to get in on this as well...? __________________

2012-07-17, 02:52	Link #2712
rubix22 On Cleaning Duty Join Date: Jun 2011	Y-Y-Yes my lord...! ( Though I should say my type of humor is a bit more downtoearth than crack... ) __________________

2012-07-17, 10:20	Link #2714
tsunade666 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: In my room	What story is TtM Flere? I haven't had much time to check on FFN or even read novels. __________________ To A certain Lonely Hero

2012-07-17, 19:06	Link #2715
Atrum023 Eternal Silence Join Date: Jul 2011	I'm guessing TtM refers to Flere's story, "Twice the Misfortune." __________________ 不幸だ...

2012-07-16, 19:54	Link #2706
Sumeragi Banned Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Dai Korai Teikoku	Kaori x Mikoto x Misaki. The ultimate triangle of lilies.

2012-07-16, 21:02	Link #2708
Sumeragi Banned Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Dai Korai Teikoku	I'm thinking Daihaseisai, with Kaori coming in the place of Stiyl for some reason, and somehow the Index and the Railgun stories combine into the mother of all lilies. It'll be delicious as we see Mikoto being jealous of Kaori's assets and perhaps Misaki getting a taste of magic vs. esper powers, resulting in her falling in love with the Ace and the Saint.

2012-07-17, 02:41	Link #2711
Flere821 Lurker Join Date: Aug 2010	Sorry, I don't pay much attention to this thread often these days and I wasn't quite sure if it was you who wrote Toaru Super SS or if it was another guy picks a few chapter at random reads Okay, more than good enough Though I'm not sure if you'd really want to help - you seem to specialize in crack/humour, while I'm trying to outdo rival Fate/Zero and/or Madoka Magica in sheer angst/tragedy TtM is basically IndexVerse running on the narrative laws of Nasuverse. And you'd be getting spoilers, instead of watching in horror be surprised by what I have in stall for my readers (or what's left of them after my prolonged hiatus >.>). Sure you still want to help? (By the way, thanks for the link - I'm now interested in reading more of this, will come back and read your fic later)

2012-07-17, 19:19	Link #2716
Mr.Kyon I crack you up Join Date: Dec 2010 Age: 30	And if you haven't been reading it, I shall smite the ever loving crap outta you. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7409145/ __________________ *The One Who Has Snuffed God's Crack.* *Believer of the Great Sumeragi.* One Does Not Simply Make Touma A Good Protagonist ~ The Truth. "Kyon has set his 'enemy that must be defeated' to be 'bad writing' of the world. The more there is, the stronger his Holy Crack " ~ Chaos2Frozen.

2012-07-18, 19:37	Link #2719
TkMacintosh Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2010	plops down and sighs heavily FINALLY done with ch 4 in word... I have sent it off to my editor and hopefully within a week, 2 at the most. There is a SMALL part in the story that a few people here MIGHT like...totally not sure though :P