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Old 2004-04-01, 11:25   Link #1
gizmo
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joining the shinobu-lovas

Older shinobu, angry because Naru's taken Keitaro.
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Old 2004-04-01, 11:47   Link #2
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It's nice. I like the style and especially the coloring
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Old 2004-04-01, 11:49   Link #3
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maybe you should do her a bit more of forehead the rest is really nice
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Old 2004-04-01, 11:52   Link #4
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I like the lightheadedness in the colors, especially the hair.
Very neatly drawn.

As for the crits..

Her neck seems to be a tad too long. and Shinobu has blue eyes

It's a nice drawing ^^
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Old 2004-04-01, 12:05   Link #5
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Smal crit. ^^

Her left side and her right side doesn't match. Cover half her head with your hand and now try cover the other side.

It's a symetry problem, her right side head look as if she's looking down, while her left side look as if she's looking straight ahead.

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Old 2004-04-01, 12:30   Link #6
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Smal crit. ^^

Her left side and her right side doesn't match. Cover half her head with your hand and now try cover the other side.

It's a symetry problem, her right side head look as if she's looking down, while her left side look as if she's looking straight ahead.
It's because of the iris of the eye's not hitting the bottom of her eye on the left side, and the right side does. Small thing to fix, thanks for seeing.
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Old 2004-04-01, 21:55   Link #7
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what was that done with? It doesnt look computer colored.
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Old 2004-04-01, 22:03   Link #8
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what was that done with? It doesnt look computer colored.
I think it's done with "crayon de couleurs" lol and seeing the way the colour is preaded, it's was drawn on 70-100g paper lol Ok sorry Gismo, i think it's listening to Sponge Bob OST that make me crazy lol
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Old 2004-04-02, 04:17   Link #9
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AAAAAAAARHHHHHHHHHHGGGGGG don't ever mention SB on MY thread!!! Please don't mention it on the whole FORUM!!! me just HATE SB.

And yes it's just drawn with normal color pencils, like the ones you buy in a toystore :P
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