2011-09-28, 17:41 | Link #1761 | |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
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I might be wrong, but that was my impression AS READER. The only thing keeping them from become Ali Al-Sacheez successor is the fact that they had comrades as emotional support.
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2011-09-28, 18:35 | Link #1762 |
The Third Runner
Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: In my house
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A teaser for what I'm writing for chapter 2.
Chapter 2 TEASER- All my Classmates are Female I looked into the mirror as I started at my chest…or rather…something that was in my chest. What I was looking at was a glass like orb that was glowing, softly. This was the IS core that was currently keeping me alive, keeping my life preserving functions such as heart rate and blood flow under control. I had received it after I was caught in an explosion after I was kidnapped and held hostage at ransom. “Keeping me alive huh?” I said to myself. It was keeping me alive, but also dropped me into a troublesome position. I looked over to my left on a hanger was a black and white uniform- the uniform of the prestigious IS academy. I picked up the blazer and felt the material. Luckily it was thick enough to cover the light from the core, so I shouldn’t attract attention unwittingly. As I pulled on the clothing my thoughts started to wander…about that day….about those… “No!” I yelled out loud. I couldn’t let myself remember, I just couldn’t. That time had passed, long ago. I put on the blazer and checked myself in the mirror again. I was right, the blazer covered up my core nicely; and I have to admit- I did look pretty sharp in this stiff uniform. I walked out of the bathroom, picked up my travel bag, and left out the door….to the start the first day of my new life…in IS Academy. How bothersome…replied my mind to this clichéd thought. How agreeable…I replied back. Well, there goes my normal life. OH NO! YOU RUINED THE SURPRISE! Yeah, actually the pier that Ichika was held hostage in was a drug dealer hide out. The drugs were a new hallucinogenic that was cheap and easy to make, but extremely flammable. Due to lack of intel on the government side, it was assumed to be a food depot (which was actually the front of the pier). The IS was cleared to use beam weaponry....and I think you can fill in the rest. The government told the news that it was the criminals who set the place on fire. So government was lying!
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2011-09-28, 18:55 | Link #1763 |
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@ ZeroXSEED- At least me and jak aren't completely the same My deal is that Irish has no idea how to even act like a teenager. He's constantly paranoid and acts abnormally around a normal environment (he always acts careful, carries weapons at all times, and hates physical contact with others) which will gradually improve as the story goes on. Ichika's conflict is personal rather than external . I have no Idea what to do with Kyuukai cause he doesn't seem to have any lingering problems other than fear of losing loved ones which all the characters have.
@ falcolobo- Ichika is darker compared to the canon counterpart. Though this is justified since he nearly got killed and is kept alive by a machine. |
2011-09-28, 19:00 | Link #1764 | |
I am no one
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Ummm, I meant both of you did a deconstruction via warfic, yours and EthernalRain's aren't the same either. Anyway, just started writing chapter 9 @Falcolobo LOL My wild guess is right!
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2011-09-28, 19:20 | Link #1766 | |
~ Your Smile ~
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Location: 346Pro
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But now you see what kind of class would make Huang Lingyi class-rep (in case you guys forgot that she's from the canon Class 1-2...) In the rare Class Battles (much like Baka Test fights), Class 1-2 has the reputation of a rag-tag band of hooligans who somehow make it through. Because of their class rep "General Huang", Karon initiated the practice where all Class 1-2s would charge into a Class Battle wearing yellow scarves, calling themselves the Koukinzoku. Karon herself would carry a large Chinese war banner attached to her I-type's backpack. *projects mental image of 30 odd IS standing on a cliff, banner flapping in the wind while Shenlong stands at the utmost forefront*
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2011-09-28, 19:30 | Link #1767 | |
I am no one
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JUST AS I EXPECTED! it was your crack stash that made Ichika hallucinate in Falcolobo's fic.
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2011-09-28, 19:40 | Link #1768 |
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Have you guys read volume 5 chapter 1- They had something called the fight for Ichika competition where the winning club gets Ichika planning to do the same thing exceptnit will be the four males (Ichika,Kyuukai,Irish,and Maximillian) which will make it a crap ton more hectic. What do you guys think?
Btw- I wish I was here a few months earlier. I would've loved to see the massive amounts of crack |
2011-09-28, 19:59 | Link #1770 | |
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For example: 1. Tatenashi expected Irish to run into air vent system (since he's small), but she found Kuukai instead. And since they're not exactly the smallest person around... 2. Meanwhile, Laura is struck with Irish in ANOTHER airvent. Laura was informed that Kyuukai is hiding, they explore the vent together (more like Laura forced him to follow) 3. Some accidental pervert moment between Kyuukai/Tatenahsi and Irish/Laura, in first case, Tatenashi might just spice it (much to Kyuukai's disbelief and anguish), in second case, Laura is indifferent while Irish is stunned in fear of wrath. 4. Ichika meanwhile run for his lives because he's the only one hiding in ordinary places and was found easily...until Kyuukai and Tatenashi breaks forcibly from the vent using their weapon. 5. Laura and Irish getting out via the bathroom, and the girls mistook the two chibis for doing something perverted. Those two isn't the best when it comes to social and romance stuff so they misinterpreted the girls' teasing and innuendos. 6. Tatenashi accusing Kyuukai for 'kidnap and do something unwholesome' to her, of course Kyuukai is angry. Just add some SERIOUS romantic moments after those oddballs incident... Anyway, who's Maximilian?
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2011-09-28, 20:33 | Link #1773 |
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@ZeroXSEED- Thats a great Idea! Though Irish wouldn't be stunned with fear since he's a chaste hero so he probably wouldn't even blink even if Laura and him were right next to each other naked Tatenashi screwing over Kyuukai is completely believable though XD.
Maximillian is the OC teacher for class 1-2. I have a favor: Could you also beta my work? EthernalRain say's he's busy and you seem to know a loulot about the story so yoir help would be appreciated |
2011-09-28, 20:49 | Link #1774 | |
I am no one
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(not to mention my crazy grammar) Mun hayang ngirim sok we imelkeun, ke dipariksa ku simkuring. As for Irish/Laura incident, he feared that Laura misinterpret him for literally trying to attack her and he quickly apologize, so Irish doesn't know that the accident is pervert in nature.
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2011-09-28, 21:06 | Link #1775 |
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Thanks for the beta acceptance . I just realized that Tatenashi and Kyuukai kinda look like Shotacon/Lolicon now since they look older than they're age implies (Tatenashi does not look 16) while they're romance partners look younger than they're given age (Laura looks like she's late 13 years old while Irish looks even younger) might have paparazzi spread that around as a joke rumor later
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2011-09-28, 21:17 | Link #1776 | |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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