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dotdotslash · 2014-09-08, 08:07

The first bit, where they are being a bit awkward isn't too bad. Once the actual sex starts, then yeah I found it a bit over the top; especially the notorious 'glug glug' ending. Also, to me it didn't really fit how the rest of the physics / physical interactions were described (not that there was a huge amount of detail to those).

Personally, I'd prefer to trade that story for a sentence or two in "morning dew girl", no need to be graphic, but something more than "they had been falling asleep everynight cuddling in each others arms".

omimon · 2014-09-08, 10:51

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Originally Posted by dotdotslash

The first bit, where they are being a bit awkward isn't too bad. Once the actual sex starts, then yeah I found it a bit over the top; especially the notorious 'glug glug' ending. Also, to me it didn't really fit how the rest of the physics / physical interactions were described (not that there was a huge amount of detail to those).

Personally, I'd prefer to trade that story for a sentence or two in "morning dew girl", no need to be graphic, but something more than "they had been falling asleep everynight cuddling in each others arms".

To hell with that, I want the two of them to have the most violent awe-inspiring sex the written word have ever witness. These two kids are too vanilla gotta start to learn how to spice things up at the rate they are going. (For those who don't know they go it a couple more times in 16.6 onwards.)

Tusjecht · 2014-09-14, 23:39

The point of 16.5, perhaps, is that that's how we imagine sex to be like, and 16.6 to illustrate, literally, how we imagine it to look like.

And then you finally get laid and try to do the same, and that's when you realize that among other things, Kirito has a humongous STR stat...

dotdotslash · 2014-09-15, 06:22

I doubt anything so well thought out. 16.5 seems to be 100% hard core fan serivce. The other 16.x that I've seen just recently found the translations for, also seem to be just about all fan service too (in that they don't really add anything to the existing plot), although more in line with other characterization.

Rageth · 2014-09-16, 03:06

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(in that they don't really add anything to the existing plot),.

Of course not. The 16.x series (excluding 16.5) were just little stories Kawahara wrote to sell at COMITIA, and just for fun.

omimon · 2014-09-16, 03:52

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Of course not. The 16.x series (excluding 16.5) were just little stories Kawahara wrote to sell at COMITIA, and just for fun.

Are you sure? Are you sure Kirito isn't a sex god and he fucks Asuna so much she craves his d everyday? I thought so.

Tusjecht · 2014-09-16, 11:07

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Are you sure? Are you sure Kirito isn't a sex god and he fucks Asuna so much she craves his d everyday? I thought so.

She'd be tsundere about her addicktion if the 16.x series are anything to go by.

More seriously speaking, if you're willing to write *that* many side stories celebrating one pairing, then... It's a chicken and egg question, really, to decide if it's Kawahara's fantasy or fan shipping. But i'm inclined to point out that throughout every single arc, Asuna is always described as the most beautiful. The prescence of competing haremettes seemed to merely serve to enhance her beauty in contrast to theirs.

Psyco Diver · 2014-09-16, 18:41

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The prescence of competing haremettes seemed to merely serve to enhance her beauty in contrast to theirs.

Kinda like how a chick will bring ugly friends with to the club, to make herself look hotter lmao

dotdotslash · 2014-09-16, 18:41

The later 16.x stories (which I enjoyed) seemed to be to be less directly tsundere and more about the shyness of two people who have just jumped into their first sexual relationship.

It seems pretty clear, based on what I've read so far (obviously incomplete) Kawahara is quite interested in the relationship (most likely partially as a form of wish fulfillment) but seems to have missed or decided to not follow any of the logical paths that would allow it to continue hence the 16.x stories have so far been set in the original SAO. I mean you have two people who have been through hell and all you can think of is to keep them together "off screen"? I guess that's why breaking up couples between major story lines has become the cliche that it is.

Faerie · 2014-09-17, 07:42

So after peeking into this thread and seeing all the talk about this "16.5" chapter, I went and read it. Well. How to say this.. it's certainly not good. "Comical" is a fitting way to describe it. "Embarassingly bad" also works.
Rather than Kirito and Asuna being virgins, I wondered the entire time whether Kawahara was

The piece reads like a sexual encounter, as imagined by a 14-year old virgin posting on a fanfiction site but certainly not a believably written piece by any stretch. Got a good laugh out of it though, and that's worth something.

Though I have to say, it left me somewhat creeped out. As if Kawahara wrote that for himself, based on his personal fantasies or something. Kind of like Meyer...

omimon · 2014-09-17, 21:58

I was just on the askreddit thread about people who stayed virgins until marriage and boy do their experience differ from 16.5. But hey what can I say Kirito is a sex god.

Baldurkai · 2014-09-19, 09:39

Lol after reading this, all I have to say is wdf did I just see....

After a while of boring reading I found myself finding it funny to replace some of his words , like Penis to Sword. which would make all this ahh hhaaa ha ha ahh aah haa hahaha ahaa aah ahhhh ahhh hhaa ooh hooo oh hoooh hohhho Bs make sense.

I feel bad for people who read this. Must have ruined their KiritoxAsuna fantasies.

Tusjecht · 2014-09-19, 10:24

Actually, I think 16.5 was the spark for lots of Asuna & Kirito fantasies... I remember when 16.5 overtook 69 as the most popular sexual reference.

Faerie · 2014-09-19, 15:33

^ If that's not a joking reference, then that's awkward.

Psyco Diver · 2014-09-19, 23:14

Out of curiousity I decided to check out 16.5 and like so many threads on 4chan and Reddit I wish I never looked lmao. It reminds me of this cheap porno knock offs like Forest Hump and Star Whores

omimon · 2014-09-20, 04:03

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Originally Posted by Psyco Diver

Out of curiousity I decided to check out 16.5 and like so many threads on 4chan and Reddit I wish I never looked lmao. It reminds me of this cheap porno knock offs like Forest Hump and Star Whores

Except it actually stars Tom Hanks as Forrest Hump. "Hump Forrest hump!!"

c933103 · 2014-09-20, 05:36

1. 16.5 is not anime only (not even novel.) so i think all discussion about it, by this thread's rule, should be in spoiler tag.

Spoiler for and:

Fizix · 2015-03-08, 14:53

I know this thread is old now, but I'll give my 2 cents worth anyway.

I had no idea this existed and wish I continued to not know that this existed.

It's one of the most cringeworthy things I've ever read, I couldn't even finish it. I'll assume the author was really, really young when he wrote that.

Lady_Asuna · 2015-06-12, 13:44

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I was just on the askreddit thread about people who stayed virgins until marriage and boy do their experience differ from 16.5. But hey what can I say Kirito is a sex god.

I've been married for almost three years and my husband and I were virgins until we got married and we've never quite had a session like 16.5. Close. Or parts of it. But not that entire thing!

I felt so weird reading 16.5 like wow!
As far as their relationship and when they fell in love with each other...everyone has already stated my thoughts. Pretty much on page 1 before the conversation got...nasty.

ninjastarforcex · 2015-06-12, 13:55

author was in high school when he wrote SAO
don't overthink lol

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2014-09-20, 05:36	Link #57
c933103 FTNR Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Hong Kong, UTC+8	1. 16.5 is not anime only (not even novel.) so i think all discussion about it, by this thread's rule, should be in spoiler tag. Spoiler for and: 2. Are we sure we want to discuss their relationship base on anime as anime is a mix of web version/published novel/progressive series which each of them describe their emotion development differently? I'd say the Asuna-Kirito development in progressive novel from progressive vol.1 to vol.3 is the most major point of difference between it and the main series, which anime episode 2 take out a bit of that while lefting other as the main

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2014-09-08, 08:07	Link #41
dotdotslash Member Join Date: Aug 2014	The first bit, where they are being a bit awkward isn't too bad. Once the actual sex starts, then yeah I found it a bit over the top; especially the notorious 'glug glug' ending. Also, to me it didn't really fit how the rest of the physics / physical interactions were described (not that there was a huge amount of detail to those). Personally, I'd prefer to trade that story for a sentence or two in "morning dew girl", no need to be graphic, but something more than "they had been falling asleep everynight cuddling in each others arms".

2014-09-14, 23:39	Link #43
Tusjecht Anomaly / 矛盾存在 Join Date: Jan 2013 Age: 29	The point of 16.5, perhaps, is that that's how we imagine sex to be like, and 16.6 to illustrate, literally, how we imagine it to look like. And then you finally get laid and try to do the same, and that's when you realize that among other things, Kirito has a humongous STR stat...

2014-09-15, 06:22	Link #44
dotdotslash Member Join Date: Aug 2014	I doubt anything so well thought out. 16.5 seems to be 100% hard core fan serivce. The other 16.x that I've seen just recently found the translations for, also seem to be just about all fan service too (in that they don't really add anything to the existing plot), although more in line with other characterization.

2014-09-16, 18:41	Link #49
dotdotslash Member Join Date: Aug 2014	The later 16.x stories (which I enjoyed) seemed to be to be less directly tsundere and more about the shyness of two people who have just jumped into their first sexual relationship. It seems pretty clear, based on what I've read so far (obviously incomplete) Kawahara is quite interested in the relationship (most likely partially as a form of wish fulfillment) but seems to have missed or decided to not follow any of the logical paths that would allow it to continue hence the 16.x stories have so far been set in the original SAO. I mean you have two people who have been through hell and all you can think of is to keep them together "off screen"? I guess that's why breaking up couples between major story lines has become the cliche that it is.

2014-09-17, 21:58	Link #51
omimon Professional Hikkikomori Join Date: Feb 2009	I was just on the askreddit thread about people who stayed virgins until marriage and boy do their experience differ from 16.5. But hey what can I say Kirito is a sex god.

2014-09-19, 09:39	Link #52
Baldurkai Ultra durable Join Date: Jul 2014 Location: Aincrad - Floor 22 - Log House	Lol after reading this, all I have to say is wdf did I just see.... After a while of boring reading I found myself finding it funny to replace some of his words , like Penis to Sword. which would make all this ahh hhaaa ha ha ahh aah haa hahaha ahaa aah ahhhh ahhh hhaa ooh hooo oh hoooh hohhho Bs make sense. I feel bad for people who read this. Must have ruined their KiritoxAsuna fantasies.

2014-09-19, 10:24	Link #53
Tusjecht Anomaly / 矛盾存在 Join Date: Jan 2013 Age: 29	Actually, I think 16.5 was the spark for lots of Asuna & Kirito fantasies... I remember when 16.5 overtook 69 as the most popular sexual reference.

2014-09-19, 23:14	Link #55
Psyco Diver Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014	Out of curiousity I decided to check out 16.5 and like so many threads on 4chan and Reddit I wish I never looked lmao. It reminds me of this cheap porno knock offs like Forest Hump and Star Whores

2015-03-08, 14:53	Link #58
Fizix Nitpicking Join Date: Dec 2014 Location: From England old chaps Age: 42	I know this thread is old now, but I'll give my 2 cents worth anyway. I had no idea this existed and wish I continued to not know that this existed. It's one of the most cringeworthy things I've ever read, I couldn't even finish it. I'll assume the author was really, really young when he wrote that.