Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Old_Iron]

Originally Posted by Lycodrake

...okay.

http://forums.animesuki.com/showthre...54#post4320454
Put it back with the first.

I enjoyed writing both the first and the new snippet for the idea.
Just hoping that others like it...

That second one made me laugh. Vivio's overreactions were pretty funny. And Hayate the succubus preying on Yuuno? I'd feel sorry for the guy, but... Its Hayate. He gets no pity from me. XD

[Lycodrake]

Originally Posted by Old_Iron

That second one made me laugh. Vivio's overreactions were pretty funny. And Hayate the succubus preying on Yuuno? I'd feel sorry for the guy, but... Its Hayate. He gets no pity from me. XD

Really glad you enjoyed it. ^^

Well Vivio certainly seems to think Hayate is a succubus of some sort.
Nanoha, what have you been telling Vivio? :3

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Lycodrake

Added more:

Spoiler for Vivio Overreacts - Things Get Complicated:

Fate had had a long day; she had gone on a wild goose chase, with only archaic clues as to not only what she was supposed to investigate, but also as to who or what her suspect was. So, when she returned home, after knocking a few heads together for sending her on such a meaningless and headache-inducing task, she was only just cycling down from being frazzled.

Nanoha, on the other hand, had had a relaxed day in her office writing critiques and reviews on some of the trainees under her care. So she was home early and able to cook for her worn and weary friend and herself.

They were jerked out of their reverie by the front door opening, noise of stumbling feet, and a distraught wail from Vivio, "Nanoha-mama-!!!" The blonde, dragging Einhart right behind her, had at least made sure to get their shoes off before entering the rest of the building.

Huffing and puffing with her hands on her knees, the adoptive daughter of the two Aces tried to gather oxygen back to her lungs, while Fate and Nanoha had a mix of curiosity, worry, and long-suffering written all over their faces. Einhart could at least empathize in their suffering.

"Auntie Hayate is dating Yuuno-san!!!" her exclamation was said with all the seriousness of a poor, rank-and-file soldier reporting to a king that the ruler's daughter had been taken by a dragon or scoundrel.

Fate, for all her weariness, could only chuckle lightly at this, "This is going to be good-"

On the other hand, Nanoha sweat-dropped, "Um...Vivio-chan...mind explaining what you mean? You might have misunderstood. Yuuno-kun and Hayate-chan are friends, but I don't know about-"

Vivio cut her off, "I know what I saw and heard, Nanoha-mama! Yuuno-san told use he had a meeting with Auntie Hayate earlier today, and he looked really, really happy! But also really tired- and he was going to meet up with her again this evening!"

The young blonde was on a roll, and Fate was struggling to not start giggling horribly at it all. Nanoha, though, had a strange expression between amusement, confusion, and worry.

"Yuuno-san will die, mama! Zaffy, Auntie Shamal, and Zwei-chan won't do anything to him or for him. Auntie Signum and Agito-chan probably won't care- but if Vita doesn't bruise him a lot-"

Now that brought both adoptive mothers to giggles, "-or doesn't throw Miura-chan his way, Auntie Hayate will drain him dry!"

The only response Nanoha could give was, "Miura-chan is a bit too young for Yuuno-kun, Vivio-chan, and I doubt Hayate-chan would-"

"Miura-chan likes older men, mama. The bookish type. Corona-chan too," Vivio had tears in her eyes, more worried about what Hayate would do, but still sharing that piece of info. Fate's giggling started to hurt her sides.

"-I have no response to that, Vivio-chan," Nanoha put that aside. She didn't want to think of her childhood friend dating or attracting Vivio's friends and rivals. The thought of him spending time with Uno still unnerved her. "But I assure you Hayate won't drain him dry-"

Einhart decided to speak up, "Ah, she knows how to control her hunger. Yagami-san is an experienced succubus or vampire. It makes sense."

Poor Fate's sides hurt too much in her reaction to that. Vivio started crying a little bit, while Nanoha could only sigh, '...poor Yuuno-kun.'

*SPURTING SODA*

Ah... classic snippet is classic. In universe memeteic molester, that is, Hayate. Thumbs up.

[Lycodrake]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

*SPURTING SODA*

Ah... classic snippet is classic. In universe memeteic molester, that is, Hayate. Thumbs up.

Very glad to hear you enjoyed it, and that you got a good laugh from it. ^^

[agetreme]

Could be worst if the topic of Zwei x Yuuno come up at that point of time.....

[Lycodrake]

Originally Posted by agetreme

Could be worst if the topic of Zwei x Yuuno come up at that point of time.....

...what. :|

[Lhklan]

Originally Posted by agetreme

Could be worst if the topic of Zwei x Yuuno come up at that point of time.....

Ever since Iron's LoA, I can't see them as anything but father and daughter.

[Lhklan]

All right. Here's Aritfact - originally UYD - chapter 7 , Pt 1.

Spoiler for UYD 7 - Part 1:

Chapter 7

When the cyborg returned to the world of the living, it was almost noon. She didn’t want to get up, since she can still remember what happened earlier. For her, an expert in tactical espionage actions, it was very embarrassing. Her recent dreams didn’t help her any.

“Why am I feeling like this?” Due muttered absentmindedly. It was strange. Ever since she started her undercover works, never once have she felt like this.

As she tried to get up, her arm brushed against something soft and … fuzzy? Checking for the source, what she saw made her blink.

“A … teddy bear?” Gingerly, she reached out and stroke it ears. “It’s this… for me?”

Lifting the stuffed animal up to take a closer look, the blond noticed a book beneath it. The book was title “Book and Blade”, written by Alt Eisen – “What kind of name is that?”. A small note fall out when the ex-assassin opened the book. It read:

“Sorry for not being there on Sunday. That got me thinking: Since I can’t be there all the time, maybe this could help you with your boredom. Sincerely – Yuuno.”

“… Idiot …” Yet, even as she said so, Due hugged the bear close to her body, a content smile on her face as she read the newest book he had given her.

***** Infinity Library *****

“And … done.” Yuuno slumped down in his chair, wiping his brow.

“And for the last time, YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO USE THE LIBRARY’S NETWORK AS A DOWNLOAD PORTAL!!!” Yuuno winced. Even inside his office, Arf’s roar was quite loud. No doubt the new recruits’ ears were ringing by now.

Then again, he understands her frustration. Due to the need of quick and reliable data transfer, Infinity Library boasts the highest connection speed in the entirety of the TSAB networks. Information can be transferred from there to the fringe worlds in the blink of an eye.

Of course, such advantage attracts abuser. One of the first rule, should one chose to work here, is to never use the network for personal purpose. The punishment ranges from being suspended to going to prison.

Even so, every time a new batch of recruits start to work here, at least one of them will breaks that rule. This time, the entire group had broken it. They had tried to download a rather risqué video game, called ” SnU” by G.U. From what he gathered, it was actually a lot darker many of its contemporain.

Unfortunately, there was a virus hidden in the files. Once the user extracts it to their computer, it activated itself and starts to infect the system. Thankfully, this looks to be a joke virus, with it main purpose being randomly reorganizing the files. Usually, it wouldn’t be much of a problem, but since the Infinity Library possess and absurd amount of information… Well, reorganizing it would take a long time, time which could be used for other purposes. Instead, Yuuno had to destroy to old database and put the reserve database up.

“How is it Yuuno?” The wolf familiar poked her head in “Any problem?”

“Thankfully, no” Yuuno replied. “Most of the data are up to date, so just a few modifications and everything will be back to normal.”

“Thanks Kaiser for small favor” Arf sighed in relief. “Still, we gotta do something about these kind of things.”

“I know.” The Head Librarian nodded solemnly “Maybe we should start up a monitoring system.”

“That could work, but who’s gonna operate it?”

“That’s the problem.” A frown crossed his face. “With all the sensitive requests, obviously I can’t be the one running it. You’re overseeing the transfer of the normal one, so you can’t do it either. And none of our staffs have the ability to pull it off without exhausting themselves. Even then, they might just abuse the position and use it for their own purpose.”

“That’s certainly true.” Arf groaned in frustration “Damn it.”

“We think about it later. In the meantime, concentrate on creating another backup just in case.”

***********

R&R please.
Oh, and kudos to those who can guess what the book alludes to.

[bhl88]

Sword and Shield xD Iron's fanfic xD

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Lhklan

Ever since Iron's LoA, I can't see them as anything but father and daughter.

More of a crush than a love...

Edit: Silver Cross? or Shining Force Exa?

Hey, to be fair: The two main Characters of the game wield a book and a sword respectively.....

[bhl88]

lol only if Yuuno died and was turned into a Unison Device. Then Zweino/Yuwei will be possible

[Craxuan]

What. That's unexpectedly sad, first he couldn't live as a main character, now he couldn't live as a human?

[agetreme]

No no no, you got it all wrong!

HE CAN LIVE A MAIN SUPPORTING CHARACTER!!! :

Which would probably give him more screen-time than when he is human... face it Agito have more screen-time than him in StrikerS.....

[Lycodrake]

...I don't know what's going on, now. I just know the conversation disturbs me a bit.

@lhklan: Nice.

[GaelicDragon]

Originally Posted by bhl88

lol only if Yuuno died and was turned into a Unison Device. Then Zweino/Yuwei will be possible

In Ancient Belka, the books bind you

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by bhl88

lol only if Yuuno died and was turned into a Unison Device. Then Zweino/Yuwei will be possible

I guess a relationship beteen unison devices will be more innocent and cute due to them not being reproductive and thus having no need of pesky things like sex, hormones and stuff. Being happy just by being able to share each other's company n_n

[Lycodrake]

Ah, so...when Signum gets sliced and diced by Cypha, "we can rebuild her, we have the technology".
And then Signum was a cyborg with no libido and the anatomy of a Barbie doll. Isn't it sad, Akiyon?

[Akiyoshi]

Originally Posted by Lycodrake

Ah, so...when Signum gets sliced and diced by Cypha, "we can rebuild her, we have the technology".
And then Signum was a cyborg with no libido and the anatomy of a Barbie doll. Isn't it sad, Akiyon?

To be fair, Signum should be a warrior with no libido sonce the beginning. Fighting hundreds of years war after war should teach her that modesty is a costly mistake during battle usually paid with death ..or something worse. Also the fact she was bound to masters she cannot disobey, i'm pretty sure she doesn't mind flash skin or parts of her body during a fight, specially against a seriously dangerous opponent.

I find funny people chastised me for suguesting she should had a more emotionally believable reaction to her loss to Cypha claimind that would be childish and immature for her character yet they're perfectly ok with Signum reacting like an overgrown teenage girl to mere teasing and behaving more like Vita than herself in certain fics. LOL'd at the irony xD

[Lycodrake]

Hm...no response to Barbie-anatomy Signum. From Akiyoshi of all people.

Akiyon is of the highest order of Waifu Worshipper.

[agetreme]

alternatively when all the Wolkenritter are down....

We can rebuild them into combining Wolkenritter?

Hayate: I activate Spell Card: Polymerization and Fusion Summon ultimate Wolkenritter, Wolkenritter!