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Link #19281 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2011
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@ Senpai - Here's Kanzashi's pic
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Link #19293 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2011
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@ Senpai - Then I know how to introduce Cecilia's kid and where Tatenashi and Rin's kid went
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Link #19296 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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My problem always lies in the beginning of the story.... If I could do a good beginning, I can go full stride on the rest (for middle part at least).
For now, I had a better idea on how Joan is like than my own main lead. I think I really need to simplify things... instead making it too complex. Spoiler for Soul searching Rants:
The first draft is felt a little imperfect because I had new ideas on how things should work out.... Mostly deal with introduction to antagonist/rival.... Anyway.....Since Eratas currently is my beta reader but he is busy...so while waiting on his verdict for the first draft, I will go back to the drafting board again to draw up a second draft....(Using the same lead because I am too lazy to think up a new meaningful name...(Ya, really. I always do research on names before I use them and I am really tired of keep doing research on name.) (@Eratas: Don't worry and just give your verdict (for the first draft) anyway (even while I am working on second draft), because I know how to direct the second chapter (of First Draft's chapter 1) back into introduction of antagonist. The only problem with that is: It felt a little awkward and rushed for me....)
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Link #19297 |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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I forgot when was the last time I did this but...
Chapter 8 of Athena Sabre is now LIVE~! Chapter 8: Fighting Spirit Though everyone's already asleep... but what de heck. :3
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