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2010-08-10, 19:22 | Link #26401 | |
"Hey, Isaac?"
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Very entertaining, as expected. But you got that freakin' Waffle song stuck in my head, Raiser, and I will make you pay. Someday, somehow. |
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2010-08-10, 19:24 | Link #26402 |
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Future Tense Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion In which three people are reunited that haven't been together in a long time, and a desperate plot is laid out... Previous chapters can be found here. Spoiler for Future Tense, Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion:
MGLN: Future Tense Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion Xx~~*~~xX Nanoha emerged from the short tunnel into a large cavern, lit by the soft green bio-luminescent glow of fungus growing over several crystal deposits. In the middle of the cavern loomed the still waters of a large lake, small pieces of ice floating upon the surface, but no sign of any oracle, or anyone else for that matter. Growing frustrated at everything that had happened, and what she had gone through thus far, Nanoha raised her voice, no longer caring who heard. "I'M HERE! That's what you wanted, right? You wanted me to come here, so here I am! Why are you hiding?" No reply was immediately forthcoming, and at first Nanoha wondered if Agito had been wrong or Rio and Corona had been misled; perhaps it all was a sick joke or perhaps the oracle was no longer here. The then waters of the lake began to churn, twisting and spiraling into the center, as a green light emerged from the center of the whirlpool and formed a sketchy image of an old man whose physical features were mostly obscured by a robe; all she could see were was a beard protruding from the darkened hood. "Welcome, Takamachi Nanoha," a somewhat distorted voice echoed around her, making her wonder at how her full name had been used. "I have been awaiting your arrival." Someone was projecting this holographic image, she realized, but it wasn't enough to impress her. "So now what? Are you going to tell me what's going on?" Her voice had started low, but slowly gained volume as the questions continued to burst forth. "Why I was cloned in the first place? What was so important that so many had to be sacrificed just for me? You're supposed to have all these answers, right?" The hologram was silent for a moment, but when he spoke again, his voice was heavy. "I am truly sorry for what you had to go through, and if it wasn't so important, I wouldn't have had done so. But all the hopes of the people, those still living, are depending on you. I cannot make you do anything, but if you desire answers, step into the pool; you shall find them at the bottom." Nanoha raised an eyebrow as she glared at him, the offer was tempting, but for some reason she found herself hesitant. "Why not explain right here and now? And why hide yourself like that from me, Carim?" "Bureau soldiers approach, and our time here is limited," the oracle told her as the image began to fade. "Enter the pool for your answers, or walk away. The choice is yours." Growling in frustration as she began to hear voices echoing from outside, she glanced at the ice floating in the water and strengthened her auto-barrier. As tired as she was dancing to someone else's tune, she realized there was only one thing for her to do, and thus entered the lake. She could still feel a bit of the chill from the near-freezing water though her barrier protected her from most of it, but continued to wonder what exactly she was supposed to find down there. Eventually the water reached her waist, and she took a breath and dove, using her magic to keep her body temperature up while swimming through the near crystal-clear water. There, at the bottom of the lake she found what she suspected; a device of some kind, probably the hologram emitter. Curious, she alighted atop the platform and begin to check for controls, but finding none and with her lungs starting to burn, she considered surfacing. However, the platform suddenly began to suddenly glow, and before she could even begin to wonder what was going on, she felt the familiar twist of teleportation. And then it was over and Nanoha was gasping for breath while stumbling sideways and grasping onto a railing on the teleportation pad, inhaling heavily to catch her breath while the light died off, finding herself in a dry room. “Welcome, Nanoha,” the oracle's male voice came again, but this time without any distortion, the tone familiar, while a pair of strong hands steadied her. “You can release your barrier jacket, as you are safe here. And we can treat your wound.” Her head came up as her eyes adjusted to the slightly darkened room, and in particular to the supposed oracle while his hands began to heal her side, things clicking into place in her mind. “You're....” One of his hands went up to pull back the hood, baring his face, eyes twinkling as he smiled. Nanoha's mouth dropped open; even with the beard, she recognized him in a heartbeat “Yuuno-kun!” x~~*~~x "Carim!" Schach cried as two Enforcer's brought the woman into the brig, carrying her limp form between them by her armpits and then tossed their prisoner into the cell next to hers. "Don't hurt her!" The Enforcers ignored Schach's protests, however, and sealed the cell door after depositing Carim, leaving afterward. Schach figured that they brought the two together to see if they could overhear any information, but at this point she didn't care. "Are you alright?" Schach asked. "Twilight approaches, the shadows move...." came the weak, delirious voice. "The demon has stirred...." The combat nun was fine taking whatever Fate dished out since she was used to being hurt in combat, but having that happen to Carim was almost more than she could bear. "What did they do to you?” "It's okay, sister...," Carim's voice told her, approaching a moment of lucidity "Everything will be okay.... Have faith...." Schach grit her teeth. "Dammit, Carim, why?" "Fate...." was the only response, before Carim seemingly went unconscious. Left alone again with her thoughts, Schach wondered what Carim meant by that. Was she referring to the Enforcer Fate? Or to a sequence of events that would happen regardless of what one did? Did she really think what was happening was unavoidable? Or had she just slipped back into delirium? Schach slammed her fist against the wall, almost hating times like this when faith was all she had to go on. x~~*~~x "You're the oracle!?" Nanoha questioned in disbelief. "I thought it would be Carim, because of the whole twice a year future reading... Wait, does that mean you were the one who contacted Jail to have me cloned...?" He nodded. "And I'm sorry for that. If there were another way, I would have let you rest in peace. But due to one of Carim's prophecies, I realized we'd need your help so I gave Jail your genetic material in order to have a clone made. In the meantime, I've been relaying Carim's messages to Rio's resistance group in the form of intel.” Her eyes widened at the realization. "Oh wait, Rio and Corona are still back there, probably prisoners of Hayate! They diverted enough of the Bureau army that I was able to get here. We have to save them!" "I'm afraid the teleportation is only one way, and the other pad was disabled once you used it," he told her. "It was programmed to recognize your DNA and activate, then self-destruct. Even if they are prisoners, Hayate will keep them alive for interrogation, so you'll have a chance to rescue them." "But not Agito," Nanoha told him darkly. "Why?" he asked, his voice full of concern. “What happened?” Nanoha felt her hands clenching. "She gave her life to enable me to get here. So it's time you told me everything. If Carim saw things, why didn't she see Rio's resistance group falling? Why didn't she see what would happen to Agito?" “She couldn't see everything,” Yuuno replied softly, sorrow in his tone. He turned and took several steps away, a door opening on the far side that brought light into the room. "But if you'll walk with me a bit, I'll try to answer all your questions." The light enabled her to see that the room was some sort of workshop and communications room, probably darkened to enable the holographic transmitter to work better. Nanoha sighed, realizing that she had been pushed along this far already, so she might as well continue that for now. "Alright," she said at last, taking up a position beside him as he led her out and down a hallway, feeling a sense of warmth and nostalgia as she glanced at his wizened face. "It is good to see you again." He half-smiled, glancing at her from the corner of his eye. "It's good to see you, too. Your loss affected us all greatly. Now, where do you want to start?" Nanoha suddenly realized she had so many questions, that she didn't know where to begin, either, but settled on one of the more prominent ones in her mind. "Why me? Why bring me back from the dead and have Jail do it?" "Despite how far technology has come, Jail is still the best at cloning, and for our plans to work, we needed as exact a clone as we could get," he informed her. "Especially with strengthened magic powers." "Uno told me I was somewhere above SSS rank, though I don't feel any different," she admitted as they turned a corner, her attention partially noting the candles and paintings that occasionally dotted the walls. "But I don't see why." Yuuno appeared to hesitate for a second. "Partly because of how you died." His statement made her realize that she had never really heard exactly how it happened. "It had to do with some lost logia, right?" He nodded. "One that was going out of control in Clanagan, that would have engulfed the whole city and probably would have taken out a good portion of the planet as well, if you hadn't stopped it. Before it went off, though, we had received an anonymous report that it was there, somewhere, and 'good luck trying to stop it' as the warning message said. I wasn't on planet at the time, but Fate told me later that you were the one to find it, although it had already 'exploded' at the time into a slowly-growing white dome cloud of mana. Based on what they could learn, the lost logia was collecting the mana, and when it had enough, it would detonate. A very potent magical bomb." "And I stopped it?" Nanoha deduced. “How?” "You volunteered to go into the concentrated mana cloud come and use Raging Heart to gather the magic for a continuous Starlight Breaker," he explained, pausing as they reached a staircase that led up. "Essentially, bleed off all the explosive power the device was building up until it was small enough that it could be sealed. If it was sealed off too soon, before the mana was drained away, there was still a chance it would have gone out of control and destroyed most of Clanagan. His smile turned sad as he gazed upward. "And you did it. But by the time you drained the last of the mana away, enough for the device to be sealed... well, they said your body was beyond recovery. At the time, we assumed it was because you processed so much mana, but some of Shamal's later examinations didn't quite fit with that. To this day, we don't know exactly what happened in there." There was a moment of silence, then he ascended the staircase and Nanoha numbly followed him, her body tingling strangely. It all sounded like something she would do, but it was somehow strange to hear about the circumstances of one's own death. "So why clone me?" Nanoha asked at last as they reached the top of the stairs, exiting out of what looked to be a basement. Yuuno paused again, turning to gaze at her seriously. "Because you'll need to take her place, when you travel back in time." x~~*~~x "Commander, I think we have something." Fate turned to the holographic screen as it opened up, displaying one of her Enforcers. "Report." "The computer system itself is well-scrambled, with almost everything of importance deleted and overwritten, but they didn't get everything," he replied. "Some of the communication encoded log headers were still recoverable, and although the messages themselves are gone, we may be able to trace where they came from once we decode them." "Send me what you have," she told him, analyzing the data stream. He was right, the data was mostly gone, scrambled, but there did appear to be quite a few pieces and she could almost detect some patterns. "Continue working on this, and let me know when you have something." "Yes, sir," he replied, promptly signing off. Something about those message headers continued to bug her, as if she had seen them before. Closing her eyes, she allowed her mind to drift with the topic of the headers just lightly hanging on the edge of her thoughts, a well-rehearsed mental technique for tracking down isolated bits of information. An image of a message screen appeared in her mind's eye, the header's scrambled, but still having that tinge of familiarity. Then the image clarified as more was added to it; the picture of a room, in a house, and the sender's face. Her eyes flashed open while she frowned and reopened the communications link to her Enforcer; she knew who it was, and had a pretty good idea how to decode it and thus tell where they came from. x~~*~~x "Time travel?" Nanoha wondered aloud, disbelievingly. "That's impossible!" "Improbable, but not impossible," came a new female voice, drawing attention to the side. "And incredibly difficult. But don't worry, I had the same reaction when he told me." Nanoha turned to find the female speaker standing in the doorway, smiling while pushing a pair of glasses up her nose. "Shari!" The elderly woman closed the distance to hug her. "Hello, Nanoha, long time no see!" "Likewise!" Nanoha echoed, pulling back to look at her, having a thought. "Is there anyone else here? Carim or Vivio perhaps?" Shari's face dropped a bit, the enthusiasm being replaced by a solemn silence. "No, just us two, I'm sorry. But speaking of Carim, perhaps you'd better explain first, dear." Nanoha raised an eyebrow. "Dear?" Yuuno finally turned around, and Nanoha was surprised to actually see an embarrassed smile on his face. "Well, yes, we've been married for 25 years after all, right before the war. Long before that, though, I had actually gone underground to do my studies, and later got Shari to help." "Working side by side for several years in secret, I guess we sort of naturally fell in love," the device technician added with a gentle smile. "Well, I suppose since we were both scientists, we kinda operated on a similar-enough wavelength. But anyway, dinner is ready, so let's continue the conversation in the dining room." Nanoha wanted to ask more about them as the trio sat down to eat, but decided to let the explanations proceed at their own pace; there was still a lot she didn't know, and right now, she was having a hard time forming useful questions. Instead, she just found herself noticing the small looks and ease the couple had around each other; it reminded her a lot of Vice and Alto, and brought her a bit of warmth to know that at least some people were finding happiness. But with the thought of the latter couple, her heart dropped back down as she didn't know what had happened to them. Did they survive? Were they captured? Nanoha picked up her silverware and began to eat, trying to push those questions out of her mind for now and focus on the present. "Anyway, as I was saying, it was actually Carim's unique skill that got me thinking all those years ago," Yuuno started up again as they ate. "You know how she gets her readings twice a year, when the moons align?" "Yes, and it takes the form of ancient Belkan poems," Nanoha confirmed, recalling the explanation she had received so long ago. "I remember you helped with the translation of the one dealing with the Cradle and JS incident." He nodded. "Well, I became curious about it, and so began to look up Carim's genealogy and the history of her family. Quite a few members of her family tree had the ability, but they didn't all take the exact same form. While Carim's specific form interprets it as Belkan poems, others went into seizures and blurted things out, while one particular person was blind from birth and could actually see future events from time to time. The common thread in all of them was gaining knowledge of future events. Or to phrase it another way, interpreting knowledge sent back from the future during times when the two moons of Mid-Childa aligned." Nanoha begin to see what he was getting at. "So, you're saying their information actually comes from the future? How does that help time travel?" "That's where he got me into this," Shari interjected at Yuuno's nod. "I helped analyze Carim's linker core when she used her special skill. Strictly speaking, since time and space are related, time travel isn't impossible. For instance, you can travel rapidly into the future if you can approach the speed of light, but the amount of energy required is astronomical. Standard hyperspace travel simply bypasses the speed of light limit." "Which makes it improbable like you said before," Nanoha realized, as she cut off another piece of cooked meat, unsure exactly what animal it came from. "But you're talking about sending me back through time." The two glanced at each other, before Shari continued again. "It appears to be a natural event unique to Mid-Childa. The two moons possess a lot of mana, and twice a year they align, one behind the other, and combine their effects on the surface of Mid-Childa. My readings indicate a small tear in the space-time continuum is opened at that time, enough for information to magically flow back and forth. My best theory to date seems to fit the idea that information encapsulated in magical data packets travels into the rift and is sent back through time, emerging in the past. Carim and her ancestors were sensitive to this, their linker cores allowing them to make some sense of what was coming through." Nanoha set her silverware down, her meal half-eaten. "So you think you can send me through this rift to go back in time? That it can take a person instead of just information? Is that even possible?" Shari pushed her glasses up on her nose and half-smiled. "If my theories are correct, it should be possible, with some modifications and if done in the right spot under the right conditions." "First of all, you'll need this," Yuuno told her, bringing out a small jewelry box, and pushing it across the table to her before Nanoha could ask what the conditions were. She look at him in confusion, then picked up the box and opened it, her breathing catching in her throat as she beheld the spherical red jewel within, attached to a cord. "Is this...?" "Hello, my master," Raging Heart intoned as Nanoha picked it up. "It is good to see you again." "Raging... Heart," Nanoha breathed, not realizing until this very moment how much she had missed her device; a single tear appeared in her left eye as she clutched it to her chest. "So you had it all this time? Thank you, Yuuno-kun." Yuuno blushed a bit as he scratched the back of his head. "Technically speaking, it still belongs to the Scrya tribe, which is where ownership returned when you.... passed away. I was able to reacquire it so Shari could make the necessary programming additions for the time jump." Her head came up as she wiped her eyes. "Yes, about that; how exactly am I supposed to do this?" Yuuno brought up a holographic screen and typed a few buttons, and the lights dimmed as a holographic Mid-Childa hovered over the table along with its moons. "In two months time, the moons will align again and the rift will open. Raging Heart has the necessary information programmed in to identify the rift and guide you into it. After that, it will be up to your will and your magic to get you to the right point." Nanoha looked back and forth between the couple, realizing something. "You don't know what will happen when I go into it, do you?" "Not exactly, no," Shari admitted, apologetic. "I've been running simulations and calculations for the past ten years, but as far as I know, no one has attempted anything like this." "It may very well come down to you keeping a date and time firmly in mind when you enter," Yuuno added, hopefully. "With any luck, it will just be a short hop and you'll barely realize anything has happened; almost like a teleport. All I can say is keep the destination firmly in mind." Nanoha understood something else about all this. "You said I was to take the place of my younger self, so I suppose that means I die in her place so she can live." "I know," Yuuno told her softly, putting his silverware down. "It means you'd end up sacrificing your life to change history, so that none of this would happen. No one will have died. It's a long shot, but we'll leave the choice up to you." "Up to me?" Nanoha questioned, closing her hand around the jewel in her hand, the familiar warmth offering a strange comfort after all this time. "I already gave my life for everyone once, and you already know me well enough to know I'd do it a second time if it meant saving everyone. But will this actually work? You don't know. You had me cloned, gave the people a hope that I would solve everything, and several have died for me... all for me to go back and time and make it so nothing happens! Her head came up. "Wouldn't this cause a paradox? If I save my younger self so that this doesn't happen, doesn't that mean I won't exist to go back in time? What if I go back even farther? I could really change history!" "There are a number of theories, but no one really knows," Shari answered softly. "Don't get too mad at him, as this is my fault, too. I thought he was crazy at first, but I eventually went along with it, because I don't see any other way. I hate seeing what has become of our world, and our friends, and I can't help but feel this was never supposed to be. But in answer to your concerns, it's possible that you going back in time will simply create an alternate timeline, and this future will continue as is. Or after you save yourself, you'll cease to be, but everyone will experience the new alternate reality. In short, this is a last ditch effort, a gamble. That's why we recommend you focusing on the moment you died, and not attempt to go any farther back." Nanoha's head lowered again as she thought about that; sacrificing her life to save others was a given, if there was no other way. But what if it did form an alternate timeline and Hayate continued ruling here? That would make her efforts all for naught, regardless if there was a new second timeline where this was prevented. In any case, temporal mechanics was beyond her understanding. "There's one other thing, that will influence your decision," Yuuno said at last, which brought Nanoha's head back up and her focus to the holographic planet. "The place on Mid-Childa where the moon's focus their energies is always the same, and is probably a reason why Clanagan was built where it is. Not only does the rift form in the city, but it does so in a very specific place; due to the lensing effect of our atmosphere, the effect is concentrated at a single spot." As Yuuno spoke, the hologram began to shift, zooming in on the spot where the moon's were concentrating their effect to showcase the city, and then to the specific point indicated by a flashing red dot. The location made Nanoha's eyes widen; it was the top of the central spire in Clanagan. She turned to stare at him upon realizing the implications. "Yes," he answered to response to her unspoken question. "Before you'll be able to even think about using the time travel option, you'll have to conquer Clanagan, the bastion of Hayate's Bureau, first." x~~*~~x Nanoha leaned back in the hot water, watching the steam drift upwards, glad that Shari had suggested a bath after dinner; the cloned woman hadn't really had one this nice since the few days she spent at Neyra's restaurant, which seemed like ages ago. She had been able to get a short shower and wash-down at the rebel base, but nothing like the clean and well-kept furo she found herself in now. She figured Yuuno probably had it installed, as he had come to like them during his stay at the Takamachi household. It also gave her a chance to collect her thoughts and reflect on all that she had been told since she arrived at the hidden Finieno home; she didn't know why, but it brought her a bit of amusement to realize Yuuno had taken Shari's name, rather than the other way around. But the nagging concerns from earlier still remained. Time travel. Sacrifice. A number of people had already sacrificed themselves for her, some making the ultimate offering of their life itself, and now she was expected to give up her life to possibly undo all that. In doing so, they never would have died, but those who hadn't died would never have lived, like Amos and Givo. And who is to say Vice and Alto, or Yuuno and Shari would have ever gotten together? Could she be the sole judge and take that choice away from them? Obviously, Yuuno and Shari were prepared to take that route, but what about everyone else? Making extreme decisions regardless of people's feelings was something Hayate had been doing. [Would I be any better if I did this?] she finally asked herself the question that had been forming in her mind. [Perhaps the right path is simply to end the dictatorship and return freedom to the people living now.] The cloned mage didn't quite know what she expected to find at the end of her journey, the reasons for her creation and the purpose she was to fulfill, but somehow she didn't expect time travel. "And that's what I am," Nanoha said softly. "A clone; a sacrifice. A spare part to fix something gone wrong." "Master?" Raging heart chirped, floating nearby. "I'm not the real Nanoha," she informed her device. "She died years ago. I'm a substitute. And we're being asked to sacrifice ourselves; are you okay with that?" "I do not understand," Raging Heart replied. "You are my master. We will fight together as we always have. I will assist you however you desire. That is all." Nanoha stared at the device, a million thoughts going through her head, then smiled. "Thank you, Raging Heart." She decided she had been in the bath long enough and got out, drying herself off and dressing in the loose shirt and trousers Shari had left for her while her other clothes were washed. Nanoha wanted more; she wasn't sure if she'd exercise the time travel option, but the original problem still remained: Hayate's Bureau. It needed to be brought down first, and had to be done within two months if she was going to do this. As she dried and combed her hair, she realized that since Yuuno and Shari seemingly plotted this much out, they had to have some idea of how to accomplish that. She hook Raging Heart's necklace cord around her neck and left the bathroom, searching through the corridors looking for her hosts. As she approached what looked like an indoor arboretum, voices lightly drifted through the trees. "Are you going to tell her?" came Shari's voice. Curious, Nanoha paused, listening in. x~~*~~x "I'm not sure, actually, but I don't think it makes a difference, honestly," Yuuno replied as the two sat together under their favorite cherry blossom tree. "At the most, it might just hurt her more. And that's not something that I want to do; I've already hurt her enough." "You still have feelings for her," Shari stated, still leaning against him. It was a fact, and not a question; she knew him too well. "Which is why you know I hate doing this, but it's the way things have to be, I think," he told her, his arm around her, gently rubbing her far shoulder. "And I told you why." Shari smiled. "I know, because you saw her for a brief moment that one morning. And you're right, you know. The one you saw, and this one... they both have short hair. But it still doesn't mean she succeeded; and if one of those theories is true, it means she didn't." "But I have to believe that it did," Yuuno replied, adamant as he closed his eyes, remembering that time. He wasn't sure what it was about that morning, only that he sensed someone else in the room, other than his first wife in the bed next to him. He turned as his eyes opened, and that's when he saw her, standing next to the bed and gazing fondly down at him. At first he thought he might have been a ghost or just a hallucination especially since the figure promptly faded from sight, but two things stuck in his mind that morning, the first being her short hair. Why would he hallucinate that? He spoke the second thing softly. "She smiled...." x~~*~~x Nanoha's eyes widened at the revelation, not sure how to take it; did that mean she didn't have a choice, and would end up taking the time travel option? She wasn't quite sure, but she wasn't about to take anyone withholding information on her now. She strolled into the arboretum and approached the pair. "I need to know everything," she told them as she gazed at them evenly, hands on her hips. "How am I supposed to take down Hayate? I'm guessing you know already." The pair glanced at each other, then Yuuno sighed, nodded, and stood up. "You're right, we do have an idea. Come with us." Curious, she followed them as they headed down another side passage and Yuuno glanced at Shari, an unspoken signal traveling between them. "During the war, Carim kept trying to see exactly how it was supposed to end, but it was never very clear," Shari began to explain as they walked. "Since Yuuno brought me in to help study her ability, I eventually made a device for her, which helped her better control her 'future-gaze' for lack of a better term. Because so much information comes out of the rift, her linker core is mostly overwhelmed, which is why her prophecies were always pretty vague and limited. But the device I made for her assists her linker core to filter through the terabytes of data that comes through, partly allowing her to actively look for specific things, if they exist. It's mostly junk data, but major events affecting Mid-Childa come through stronger than the rest, which is what she usually picked up on." Yuuno continued for her as they entered a side room. "Shortly before the end of the war, Carim finally found the prophecy she was looking for, the one that would signal the end of the dark times and return what she was looking for; "The long night ends and a new day dawns when one who has returned from the grave leads the army of the d-” An explosion to Nanoha's right cut off Yuuno's words, and sent her her flying against a wall where she felt her head hit something, and then the world became blurry, while the bang from the blast had left her ears ringing. But she cold make out a new person standing in the wreckage from the newly formed hole, someone with long golden object that matched her hair, and that surprised her almost as much as the following discussion that she could just barely understand. x~~*~~x “I figured I'd find my ex-husband here, but not my old aide as well,” Fate stated, glancing back and forth between the two as the dust settled and she took stock of the situation. “You're both under arrest for aiding and abetting an enemy of the state. My enforcers are covering all exits; there is no escape.” She noticed subtle apprehensive glances pass between the two instead of responding to her which left her wondering what it could mean, until a feminine groan sounded to her left. The figure her peripheral vision detected forced a second look as the world around her stopped. Fate's skin tingled and her mouth dropped open as the woman slowly tried to sit up, a ton of feelings and emotions pouring through her in a fraction of an instant. “Nano...ha?” “Fate...chan?” Nanoha questioned blankly, holding her head while staring back. “Nanoha!” Fate exclaimed, beginning to run in her direction; but before she got to the other, green chains ensnared her arms and legs, and her head snapped around with a snarl. “Yuuno!” His hand outstretched and glowing the same emerald green, Yuuno shifted in front of, his face showing visible strain to maintain the spell. “Shari, do it!” “Right!” the other woman agreed, quickly moving over to help Nanoha up. “Yuuno, what are you...” Fate started to say, slowly breaking the binds, gripping the handle of Bardiche's Zanbar form tighter. “Stop it!” “This is the first time in a long time the three of us have been together in the same place,” Yuuno reminisced with a sad smile, as the sounds of boots running in the halls got louder signaling the approach of her Enforcers. “But I'm sorry, I can't let you stop her. Hurry, Shari!” A clearly dazed Nanoha had been helped up by Shari, who had draped one of the former's arms across her shoulders and was now leading her across the room to a teleporter. Fate grit her teeth, realizing what they were up to, and in Yuuno's eyes she could see that he had come to a similar conclusion: it was a race as to whether Shari could get Nanoha out, Fate would break the binds, or that the Enforcers would back her up. Fate had a barrier setup over the place, but Yuuno was an expert in teleportation and Shari was a master technician; between the two of them, they might very well be able to get out. The bonds finally dissolved the instant Enforcer's appeared in the door, but Yuuno leapt back and cast his next spell. “Steel defense!” Fate's golden blade met the barrier covering Yuuno, Shari, Nanoha and the teleportation pad, the same moment her Enforcers opened fire. “Nanoha, stop!” Nanoha looked up from where she sat on the platform, as Shari activated the machine. “I'm sorry... Fate-chan. I-” The whole building shook, and lights began blinking out all over the room. “The generator is down!” Shari announced in alarm. “There's not enough power to send her all the way!” Yuuno grunted under the strain of maintaining his shield. “Do the best you can, Shari! Nanoha, find your daughter; find Vivio!” “Vivio!” Fate exclaimed, her eyes widening, feeling a surge within her as the barrier began to crack under the strain of her sword and the Enforcer's fire, and the teleportation machine began it's start-up whine. “STOP!” The shield finally shattered as Nanoha vanished in emerald light. Fate whacked Yuuno aside with her blade and then bound Shari as she reached the control panel, but the coordinates of the transfer weren't listed; the database appeared to be blank. “You won't find her, as the machine doesn't record where it sends people,” Shari informed her. "Neither of us knows exactly where Nanoha is now. I know it probably pains you, but it has to be this way; Yuuno told me how close you were to her and your daughter.” Fate turned her glare on the woman. “You have no idea what I'm feeling right now, but you'll soon find out.” She turned around and strode towards her Enforcers, pausing to bind Yuuno. “And for both your sakes, you better hope I find them.” x~~*~~x “[Linker core completion at 100%,]” Rein intoned from within her mistress. “[All magic particles have been gathered, but there is some minor distortion I cannot account for.]” “Steady,” Hayate stated, as the glowing crimson sparkle grew brighter in the center of the elaborate magic circle. “Just focus on the restoration. Reinitialize Signum program.” The hovering sparkle in the middle of the room flashed once and a crimson Belkan magic triangle spun underneath, a transparent form rising from it and materializing around the core. With a final push, Hayate completed the spell, then leaned on the nearby book podium to rest, as Signum blinked her eyes open. Hayate allowed herself a smile. “Welcome back, Signum. I thought I'd lost you there for a bit. Are you okay?” “I seem to be intact,” Signum stated, glancing at her hands. “Though as before my memories seem to have-” Her sentence was interrupted by an exclamation from behind. “What the hell!?” x~~*~~x Nanoha suddenly found herself face down upon soft grass after the teleportation. Her mind head still felt a bit cloudy, but she could feel the cool water against her legs as her loose trousers slowly soaked up water, making her realize she had materialized partially into a babbling stream; but most of her thoughts were on Fate, Yuuno, and Shari, wondering what had become of them. The former, in particular, seemed as shocked as Nanoha, to see the other, and genuinely appeared to be distressed at Nanoha having to leave so abruptly. She blinked her eyes, suddenly feeling saddened for some reason, and attempted to get up. She was only moderately successful, getting her hands underneath her body before the dizziness made her collapse again. As her vision began to go dark, she thought she spied a rather tall individual approaching her through the bushes and trees, dressed in tanned leather. Xx~~*~~xX Author's notes: Raiser knew about the Yuuno/Shari angle back when I told him about this fic and showed him my very early notes, but it was only coincidence that he had started work on his own Yuuno/Shari fic. So neither of us copied the other; it was just random happenstance, heh. Just a note about the time travel angle: it may or may not be the solution, or may only be partially the solution. I'm not telling at this point. =) I'm expecting to get raked over the coals for this, so don't let me down! |
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Damn, Diana. Just... damn. I sense she's going to be a lot of fun. Very sweet to see Kevin trying so hard to be a good father to the girls, even if at times he doesn't really know what to do for them. The way he comforted Lilia after she hurt him was incredibly heartwarming. Also, ouch, poor Yuuno. Poor guy just can't win. Either he's considered too nice to try anything, or any girl who doesn't want him can beamspam him.
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Here's my omake for the new chapter of Future Tense.
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Fate: “Nanoha?” Nanoha: “I knew it... I knew that as soon as Yuuno was done helping me, something would happen! Why is this happening to all my allies?!” Yuuno: “Well, at least I’m not dead yet.” Nanoha: “Yuuno! ...Wait, why ‘yet’?” Fate: “...” Yuuno: “It’s rather obvious, considering how much I know, that Fate will have to interrogate me and get everything out of me.” Nanoha: “Fate-chan...” Raging Heart: “Charging...” Fate: “Wait wait wait! Even if I wanted to interrogate him, I’ll probably be out again soon to search for you and Vivio.” Yuuno: “I’ll have to agree on that.” Raging Heart: “Abort.” Nanoha: “Then... if not Fate,who?” “That would be me, naturally.” Nanoha: “Haya... te?” Fate: “I know you still like that hobby, but aren’t you a bit old for it now?” Hayate: “Hey! Who decided what we had to be like here? Nanoha didn’t even comment on your appearance Fate!” Yuuno: “Because there was no point to comment on it?” Hayate: “And now you’ve ruined my entrance. For the sake of readers picturing the scenes in their minds, can’t we just be at the age of... Well, as old as when you’re supposed to return to? It’s between Vivid and Force, right? That should be good enough. Let’s redo this.” *Take Two, Action!* “That would be me, naturally.” Nanoha: “Hayate!” Yuuno: “Graglekd.” Fate: “I’m not sure this is better than before...” Hayate: “Well, I thought it was a good time to try out the Evil Queen costume I had. Does it look good on me?” Yuuno: “Gruernt.” Nanoha: “What he said.” Hayate: “I’ll that that as a yes. Moving on, I’m afraid that even if he knows nothing about you Nanoha, he has information on the Resistances group that I simply can’t afford to pass on.” Nanoha: “But! ...But...! ” Hayate: “And after what he did to the Library when he left...” Nanoha: “Yuuno?” Yuuno: “I’m afraid I can’t say it yet. And chances are that it isn’t important enough for us to learn it.” Nanoha: “But you always liked it... Why would you do something to it?” Yuuno: “It occurred to me that Hayate would use the Library to learn how to use certain Lost Logia against others. Sadly, we don’t even know if I did anything at that point. Fate: “And that means?” Yuuno: “At worst, I just left and Hayate lost her best librarian. At best, I put the books exactly as they were before I took over as Head Librarian.” Nanoha: “...How is that supposed to be the best you could.” Yuuno: “If only you knew Nanoha... Let me explain it simply: it took YEARS with me supervising ALL of the reorganisation to put most of it in order. I would pity whoever is the current Head right now if I did mess up everything.” Fate: “Current?” Yuuno: “I’m certain my immediate replacement quit just before going insane.” Hayate: “You know, shouldn’t we be discussing the main topic of the chapter? Nanoha, how do you think this time travel will go?” Nanoha: “What? How can I possibly imagine? Messing up with time is like asking for anything to go wrong in any number of ways imaginable.” Fate: “...And your personal opinion on how this will end considering the author? If the time travel will work?” Nanoha: “The original me will die, forcing me to replace my original in the past while trying to live with all the tragedies I’ve seen. The most recent ones would be Fate sacrificing herself to help me defeat Hayate and Vivio dying as she make sure I make it across time after the inevitable screw-up arrives. And, of course, I would have found Yuuno either already dead or with his mind shattered beyond healing before all of that.” Fate & Yuuno & Hayate: “...” Nanoha: “Can you not see it?” Yuuno: “...I actually can.” Fate: “You’re becoming rather pessimistic Nanoha...” Nanoha: “How can I NOT!? Ever since I woke up, it’s been one bad thing after another, no real moment to rest and now... and now...” *cries* Fate: “Come here... I’m sure it will end well. It’s always the darkest before dawn, right?” Hayate: “And since I’m supposed to be the Mistress of the Night Sky, it’s going to be really dark.” Nanoha: *cries* Yuuno: “Was that supposed to help?” Hayate: “I’m supposed to be the evil last boss right now, remember?” Yuuno: “For Nanoha’s sake, I hope it will be bright soon... Like she said, with no real time to clear her mind, she’s probably going to snap very soon.” Hayate: “Then hope the new one appearing is an ally... then again, it’s probably 95% certain.” “Yuuno: “Well, let’s see how this go... and please don’t hurt me too much when you get to interrogate me? Hayate: “I make no promise.” I'm thinking of doing this for each new cruelty on Nanoha you come up with. Which probably means one for every chapter up until the end.
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Uh, you already got evil twins, sex, and now brainwashing. You're knee deep in soap opera territory already
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So great chapter! It didn't disappoint The time travel thing works, as you've grounded it within canon via an established plot point (Carim's prophesies). It just figures that Yuuno gets cut off right when he's about to say something important Now I'm looking forward to when you delve into Fate and Yuuno's past relationship. What Clonoha thinks about that should be interesting. |
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2010-08-10, 22:30 | Link #26407 |
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It's time to play storm the cast-er i mean bureau eh Kaijo. Time travel huh? Not the route I was expecting, this could throw a whole new twist to the storyline.
The best thing that could happen is for the spacae time continuem rift to expand and transport all characters born after the tragedy to the good timeline that Nanoha creates by replacing herself with increased magical powers to avoid dying, Hayate is de-throned, everybody lives happily ever after with a communication network with the alternate timeline. The worst thing U can see happening is Nanoha succesfully timetravelling to the past and changing history causing the disintegration of the current world. Sice her origins came from the future of that world Nanoha begins to disappear. The alternate timeline turns out to be ten times worse than the current one onnly there's no Nanoha to save it, as she watches the devestation while slowly fading away she curses the day she ever agreed to time travel. That the worst I can see, anybody got any other ideas. These are overly optimistic and (probably) over pessimistic so...yeah.
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Miracle Max: Goodbye, boys! Have fun storming the castle! His wife: Think it'll work? Miracle Max: It would take a miracle. Good bye! Anyway, we'll see how well your good and bad predictions turn out. ;p Thanks for the comments! |
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2010-08-10, 22:50 | Link #26409 | |
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Incidentally, my plans for Yuuno was going to be similar to how you had him, but now I may have to rethink it a bit just to keep things fresh.
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2010-08-10, 23:26 | Link #26410 |
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Trust me: my imagination will do the job. If you had any idea how many different scenarios for Material Days on Mid I ran in my mind...
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2010-08-11, 00:55 | Link #26414 |
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Considering the situations Yuuno was put in prior to his revealing his true form in the first season, Kevin would likely have to be more worried about the girls putting the poor boy in compromising situations. I'm not sure he could take another round at the bathhouse.
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Assault the base! Row Row! Fight da powah! Is Nanoha going to have to use her power to pierce through destiny? Guess we'll find out. |
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2010-08-11, 09:28 | Link #26416 | |
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Poor Fate, every time she get close to Nanoha, her favourite brunette always run away from her and don`t mentoing her luck with Vivio... or Yuuno. Hm, maybe she used interogation as excuse to make up for every years of forced celibate with her ex-husband. |
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Made the corrections people sent me, and uploaded Chapter 15: Triumvirate Reunion to ff.net.
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2010-08-11, 18:39 | Link #26420 | |
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Liking quite a few aspects of it, but i do wonder what the hell the author can do with it now. |
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