2013-03-25, 04:11 | Link #3022 |
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New comment about the original Esper ability is still welcome. At the meantime....
Now onward to magic side. Edit: Redacted. Spoiler for New Era of Magician:
Spoiler for Monger/ Urban Mages:
Spoiler for Coder/Code Wizard:
Spoiler for Additional note:
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2013-03-25, 04:39 | Link #3023 |
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^that's actually nice. The way their magic works is unique and gendai mahoujin reminds me of a novel and anime before. Entitled Yoku Wakaru Gendai Mahō. The setting for magic there is using program to initiate the magic. Program based on electronic computers.
The use of rumors to power up their magic. Hmm interesting indeed. But there is a misconception on the magic side. When they are using idol theory. They indeed burrow the power from higher plane but its more like burrowing the knowledge and form of it and empowering it by their own mana which is why the fake or copy can't compete on the original. The magicians that tried to emulate the power of higher beings can't produce the same amount of mana/energy/telesma to produce such phenomenon. They don't burrow the mana or telesma because its ever present in the world. Mana is everywhere while telesma or divine energy is.... well I don't know the source >_> its divine energy which is different from mana. Telesma was emitted by celestial beings while saints and the like can produce it. Saints can take it inside their body to power up their magic while the likes of Levinia can use it to power her spell. Telesma or divine energy wasn't classified but its the energy that made up the divine beings. A problem on that setting is the power curriculum. Those magicians can hide in the academy city by pretending to become a magician but it must be cleared that they probably take the test to become an esper but they don't take the drugs or brain alteration which is part of the power curriculum program. Because once one take part of it. A magician won't be a magician anymore. Look at Tsuchimikado. The altered brain release AIM which opposes the MANA. The science side mess up with your brain so that it can produce AIM to become an esper. You can just say that they pretend to become a level 0 and since they are allies of the academy city. The dark side might help them on that problem as long as one has use for the other. They are branded espers but fake document because there is no way around it when a magician turns into an esper or an esper turn into magician. Unless one modifies the body into different structure that can take on AIM and MANA together then its impossible. (For now)
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2013-03-25, 09:49 | Link #3024 | |
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There is just one thing that I would like to point out: in the Indexverse, the general Japanese term for a mage is Majutsushi. On the other hand, the term Madoushi (at times translated as wizard) is used to refer specifically to those who have read and successfully mastered the contents of a grimoire.
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I dubbed it Code of God. And the Cult is the reason why Freedom Information is in AC in the first place. Since Freedom Information name doesn't sound very religious or cult like, I think I will combine the two cults into one (cutting down the number of Factions in the story) Quote:
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(Reason why I don't want them to touch with Dark Side is because I want the Cults to stay in extreme low profile) Edit: Quote:
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2013-03-25, 14:18 | Link #3026 | |
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This will help you not clash with the initial setting of the story.
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2013-03-26, 09:34 | Link #3033 |
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-_- okay Itsuwa well..... she is shy and timid girl but when someone hurt Touma. She goes bitch insane and goes kill the guy who hurt him. Itsuwa is good at housework, cooking and all around nice and kind she is absolutely lovely!!!!
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2013-03-26, 12:24 | Link #3036 | |
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= Distracted by shiny game called Bioshock Infinite at the moment.... may take a while before start typing a new story. Unrelated notes: > Named Level one Espers are actually quite rare in story. >Esper's power is related to their personality. So.... technically Esper's ability is personality power? > Going to add more crazy ability. Ranging from totally useless to Fueled by rule of Cool (literally). >Going to rewrite the story again. (mind-screw should be reserved for later). > Arranging the plots I had along a timeline.
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2013-03-29, 01:08 | Link #3038 |
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The type of god/goddess that I'm looking for,
the first one is a vicious, merciless, wicked and like rabid god. The type that is pure malevolent of evil or so his exterior projects but the truth is his legend might be shrouded by his/her wildness and craziness but he/she is kind in the inside and has a connection to healing or revitalization or resurrection or maybe reincarnation. I need an authority that can be both dangerous and can heal. I don't plan to do the kiss thing to just heal someone (though maybe not all the time ) the other god is a god of trickery and not Loki (yet, have plans for that guy) I'm looking for a god that is known for his kindness to his people that he/she ended up being sacrifice or betraying the people for his wicked plan. A god of betrayal and destruction. Finally is a god of pure evil that the other gods even are scared of him. The authority that can be usurped are the likes that aim to KILL or corrupt a weapon to deal inside and out damage. That's for the gods/goddesses that I seek. I plan to use science side weapon instead of esper abilities because I like them more so expect dragon rider back in action or a knightmare frame that Telistina used ah ah I'm having much fun planning this thing. But I really suck at planning the magic that will be usurped because most of the time I plan to use the same thing index verse where they usually don't rely on pure ability to win.
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