2013-01-10, 08:31 | Link #39262 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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*Had been typing out a fanfic*
Damn... the Narrator voice sounds boring... I really need ways to spice up things, make things sounds a little more exciting. I think I really need a little more passionate character to set things ablaze.
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2013-01-10, 08:58 | Link #39265 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Yeah. Sort of, bear in mind though, the sword lifespan wouldn't be very long AND there's always that risk of overloading... if you want to add more sensible weakness. Otherwise, pass.
And Ichika WASN'T by any means bad shooter, he's just too slow compared to say, most cadet rep and their insane matrix style. He learn quick after only one tutoring session.
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2013-01-10, 09:17 | Link #39269 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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Well, here's the 4 players on the guys side.
Ichika - Completely average in everything, though on the plus side he's good enough to wield one of the bulkier guns. No training though. Vayne (From Mana Khemia) - Accurate when it counts, but can't handle recoil and just sprays. Hope (From Final Fantasy XIII) - Lowest stamina and hilariously bad at gunplay. Basically the Load. Accelerator - (From TO Aru Majutsu no Index, minus the powers) - Stupidly accurate, but isn't strong enough to use the rifle. Opts for a pistol instead, which has piss poor range and sights. And on the girls side. All of them - The Matrix.
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2013-01-10, 09:27 | Link #39271 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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And it's good for once
I am TIRED of having nameless OC MOP Cecilia and/or Ling effortlessly. TLR Stratos at least, has excuse characters being souped up of canon, and the power level is very dynamic, depending on who vs who. ST had it even worse. but I'm thinking another way, thus Ace Combat crossover.
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2013-01-10, 09:33 | Link #39273 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Well, if I have anything to say: tone down the girls to realistic but still vastly superior level, so the victory is obvious but believable.
Them acting like SWAT for example, more acceptable than them backflip dodging bullet. (and I did say acting, not means 100% authentic) Curb stomp battle happen in real life, just no the same way it happened in canon, too contrived.
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2013-01-10, 09:38 | Link #39274 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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I don't mind them basically storming the guys while they're still planning their approach or anything but the way eras' worded the skillsets. I just can't imagine anything but trying to milk comedy in situations which just seem downright humiliating for one side. call back to a lot of the LN. Crud my stomach is flip flopping.
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2013-01-10, 10:02 | Link #39275 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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I agree, major illness and real life tragedy is a bitch. I lose (kinda) 30% of my left lungs to infection and damage caused by chemical ingestion back when I'm 9, took one year for me to recover fully. there's no pain, just occasional BLOT cough...
I had to deal with treating sociopath... in a battlefield, sure thing the conflict had died down but the after war misery hadn't, and there's always occasional gunshot echoing in the silent night that made us QUITE jumpy in our sleep... then we find someone, somewhere nearby is injured in the morning, usually not treated properly but thankfully alive. Maybe this is why I'm not so motivated in writing war stories yet as you can see from latest bunny, I can wrote so comprehensively it's scary.
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2013-01-10, 10:13 | Link #39276 | ||
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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Though, Box and Hawke had helped me to speed with the archive binge and then... well, you maybe already read the first 60 pages... @ Demi I always saw myself as being hypocritical, and see fic as something to be idealized. But no matter what, I also knew something that I understand to the core is always better. That's why my story is hit and miss, one fic is about muddling my reality, and one fic is about projecting my fantasy. ==================== Okay, new bunny going zombie: The Sky Girls crossover Only with THREE Ichika, not two. Canon!Ichika, Genderflip!Ichika, and AU!Ichika Anyone interested? EDIT: Mecha from sky girls (Sonic diver) Virtually unarmored, it's 'shield' is inferior to I.S., but they can move faster and have special weapon to fight special enemies. (Note: don't be fooled, that girl would be as tall as Cecilia in I.S. scale)
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2013-01-10, 10:14 | Link #39277 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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It's the ONLY fic where this happens. Reversal doesn't have it happen, and neither does Daydreams or Future Imperfect. So I'm giving in because I give one story that humiliates half the main cast?
Anyway, can we all delete the messages we just posted. We have to remember this is a public forum and they didn't come here for our problems. I'm deleting mine now.
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2013-01-10, 10:21 | Link #39279 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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I really love humanity. The hate I feel for it makes writing so much easier
@eras: The execution is the most dangerous eras. I was worried about the wording sicne it would imply the worst kind of execution. Whether to give in or not is up to you. Whether my judging you should mean something is up to you to care as well. Which makes me flattered since my opinion seems to matter to you even if it's just as an annoyance ^_^ Just this once I'll listen Era-chin @zero: I was always an advocate of canon Ichika x genderbent Ichika. |
2013-01-10, 10:24 | Link #39280 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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What the hell do you mean by execution? This isn't persona 3. And really, how humiliating is it to get owned in paintball? I got owned in paintball and it was still fun. The game itself is meant to be exhilarating and you don't care if you win or lose.
Anyway, that's just Ichika x Madoka.
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