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Shinobu_Maehara · 2004-03-31, 07:59

BlazeF · 2004-03-31, 12:45

holy pofo.... thats a lotta pics... some good some bad...

I likes it... keep it up

fenrihr · 2004-03-31, 15:08

hehe, can can definitely see a marked improvement in the newer pics, good job!

Yama_Le_Rouge · 2004-03-31, 15:25

Nooooo, you get that Shinobu rampage back ^^, that's a lot of art to comment

, i'll do effort in your new one

gizmo · 2004-03-31, 16:44

niiiiice you ecchi boi BAKA HENTAI (sorry just had to say that

)
hmm, not bad, not bad at all. Don't like the thick lines, but the coloring is good.

I thought "http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/1.jpg" to be really funny, you crack me up

calavera spain · 2004-03-31, 17:42

jojojojo i remember nearly all of them... darn ive been a lot of time in this forums already :P great job in all of them and the improvement has been impresive

Raxial · 2004-03-31, 18:49

just one thing that's been bothering me about some of them (well, like 2):

One is that you use the UT2k3 backgrounds. It's a cool idea and everything, but your coloring style is really bright and cartoony, while the background is much darker and realistic.

Another is that some of the picture (mostly the old ones I guess) seem especially bright, while the shadows seem so dark. It's as if a really strong light were on them, but the background doesn't suggest the same lighting. Try to keep the contrast between light and dark a little lower, so that the light doesn't seem so intense.

Other than that, you're going great. I'm still seeing improvement, so there's no telling how good you'll be in a few month's time.

Shii · 2004-03-31, 18:56

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shinobu_Maehara

newer Anime attempt

http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/Scetch1.jpg
...
http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/baibaiNaru.jpg

That sketch is really awesome.

But I can't honestly say the same thing about the CG; I don't really go for computer-generated backgrounds.

Shinobu_Maehara · 2004-04-01, 02:26

Quote:

Originally Posted by Raxial

just one thing that's been bothering me about some of them (well, like 2):

One is that you use the UT2k3 backgrounds. It's a cool idea and everything, but your coloring style is really bright and cartoony, while the background is much darker and realistic.

Another is that some of the picture (mostly the old ones I guess) seem especially bright, while the shadows seem so dark. It's as if a really strong light were on them, but the background doesn't suggest the same lighting. Try to keep the contrast between light and dark a little lower, so that the light doesn't seem so intense.

Other than that, you're going great. I'm still seeing improvement, so there's no telling how good you'll be in a few month's time.

I once started using the cartoon structure and the UT backgrounds, It's like a trademark. It always worked for cartoons, and I always did so, but I started to draw anime, which is a whole new world of art, and my art style doesn't seem to belong here. I'll have to try different styles until you guys actually like it.

It's about the majority, on my old forum where I went this style is what they liked.
I'll have to change now.

The strong shade is indeed incompatible with the background. I'll have to keep the strength of the light down then..

sopel · 2004-04-01, 02:44

"Shinobudrawing.jpg" is my fav very nice, if only her legs were a tad bit thinner.

Raxial · 2004-04-01, 09:07

i think that if you got the color and shading to match closer to the background, then it would look absolutely beautiful.

Shinobu_Maehara · 2004-04-01, 09:14

I see what you mean. It would look a lot more realistic if I use thinner lines and make them greyish instead of black.
and the colors must match the background.

There is where I get into trouble. I'll have to try something.

Maybe this weekend I'll have time to do something.

Raxial · 2004-04-01, 10:05

cool, looking forward to it

Asura · 2004-04-01, 19:18

http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/Shinobudrawing.jpg
http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/...eColabDone.jpg

me like them a lot. colour and composition..

plus:
http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/art/1.jpg
http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/SEXY2.jpg

Baka_Panda316 · 2004-04-01, 22:11

http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/Shinobudrawing.jpg
http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime...meColabDone.jpg

i like those too the best~ you improved a lot! keep up the good work

Shinobu_Maehara · 2004-04-02, 02:08

Thanks, people ^^;; I appriciate it

Once I have more time I'll draw something again. For now It's just being at work

Logical Ninja · 2004-04-02, 02:46

I love your colored anime girl, and the little girl with the Axe. Keep up the good work.

gizmo · 2004-04-02, 04:25

yeah that one's real good!! i'm totally inspirated !!

(me+littl bro=axe masacre)

Shinobu_Maehara · 2004-04-02, 04:36

There's always something with innocent little schoolgirls and a gargantuan axe that makes me all tingly inside

Shii · 2004-04-02, 08:43

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shinobu_Maehara

There's always something with innocent little schoolgirls and a gargantuan axe that makes me all tingly inside

You discovered why Gunslinger Girl is so popular!

I call dibs on drawing Osaka with a samurai sword

2004-03-31, 07:59	Link #1
Shinobu_Maehara eternal Shinobu lover Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Netherlands (EU) Age: 41	Shinobu Maehara's Art thread >^_^< Okay, here's my art directory. I summoned most of my "still online" drawings I did in the past. These are really old and not even Anime related....at ALL... http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/art/KOTHHI.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/art/assview4fun.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/art/normalDL.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/art2/DXTmedium.jpg old anime attempts, don't laugh too hard. http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/art/korieLOW.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/13.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/2.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/3.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/Ayu.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/Hinata.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/1.jpg newer Anime attempt http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/Scetch1.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/Shinobudrawing.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/baibaiNaru.jpg Anime collabs I did http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/art/1.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/...Chiyo_chan.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/...eColabDone.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/SEXY2.jpg

2004-04-01, 19:18	Link #14
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/Shinobudrawing.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/...eColabDone.jpg me like them a lot. colour and composition.. plus: http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/art/1.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/SEXY2.jpg Last edited by Asura; 2004-04-01 at 19:36. Reason: forgoten

2004-03-31, 12:45	Link #2
BlazeF Artist Mang Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Calipornia	holy pofo.... thats a lotta pics... some good some bad... I likes it... keep it up

2004-03-31, 15:08	Link #3
fenrihr is dime-a-dozen Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Rich., VA	hehe, can can definitely see a marked improvement in the newer pics, good job!

2004-03-31, 15:25	Link #4
Yama_Le_Rouge I'm branded, I'm doomed Join Date: Feb 2004	Nooooo, you get that Shinobu rampage back ^^, that's a lot of art to comment , i'll do effort in your new one

2004-03-31, 16:44	Link #5
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	niiiiice you ecchi boi BAKA HENTAI (sorry just had to say that ) hmm, not bad, not bad at all. Don't like the thick lines, but the coloring is good. I thought "http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/1.jpg" to be really funny, you crack me up

2004-03-31, 17:42	Link #6
calavera spain empty mind Join Date: May 2003 Location: spain (barcelona) Age: 38	jojojojo i remember nearly all of them... darn ive been a lot of time in this forums already :P great job in all of them and the improvement has been impresive

2004-03-31, 18:49	Link #7
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 35	just one thing that's been bothering me about some of them (well, like 2): One is that you use the UT2k3 backgrounds. It's a cool idea and everything, but your coloring style is really bright and cartoony, while the background is much darker and realistic. Another is that some of the picture (mostly the old ones I guess) seem especially bright, while the shadows seem so dark. It's as if a really strong light were on them, but the background doesn't suggest the same lighting. Try to keep the contrast between light and dark a little lower, so that the light doesn't seem so intense. Other than that, you're going great. I'm still seeing improvement, so there's no telling how good you'll be in a few month's time.

2004-04-01, 02:44	Link #10
sopel Rei Ayanami Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: ON, Canada Age: 38	"Shinobudrawing.jpg" is my fav very nice, if only her legs were a tad bit thinner.

2004-04-01, 09:07	Link #11
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 35	i think that if you got the color and shading to match closer to the background, then it would look absolutely beautiful.

2004-04-01, 09:14	Link #12
Shinobu_Maehara eternal Shinobu lover Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Netherlands (EU) Age: 41	I see what you mean. It would look a lot more realistic if I use thinner lines and make them greyish instead of black. and the colors must match the background. There is where I get into trouble. I'll have to try something. Maybe this weekend I'll have time to do something.

2004-04-01, 10:05	Link #13
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 35	cool, looking forward to it

2004-04-01, 22:11	Link #15
Baka_Panda316 RoaR Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Arizona Age: 34	http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime/Shinobudrawing.jpg http://www.xs4all.nl/~bense12/anime...meColabDone.jpg i like those too the best~ you improved a lot! keep up the good work

2004-04-02, 02:08	Link #16
Shinobu_Maehara eternal Shinobu lover Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Netherlands (EU) Age: 41	Thanks, people ^^;; I appriciate it Once I have more time I'll draw something again. For now It's just being at work

2004-04-02, 02:46	Link #17
Logical Ninja Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Ontario Age: 39	I love your colored anime girl, and the little girl with the Axe. Keep up the good work.

2004-04-02, 04:25	Link #18
gizmo Monenenenee! Join Date: Feb 2004	yeah that one's real good!! i'm totally inspirated !! (me+littl bro=axe masacre)

2004-04-02, 04:36	Link #19
Shinobu_Maehara eternal Shinobu lover Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Netherlands (EU) Age: 41	There's always something with innocent little schoolgirls and a gargantuan axe that makes me all tingly inside