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Old 2011-11-28, 01:31   Link #10101
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@ Senpai - He's only supposed to stop the drone from attacking her at the concert (that failed) but I could probably put it that he's assigned to watch her just in case. This solves the problem since she can room with Irish while Ichika rooms with Tatenashi in V5. Though she'll probably try to read his mind and get freaked out by the block he has.
Yeah, I remember that scene from the old draft, very heartwrenching.
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Old 2011-11-28, 01:36   Link #10102
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@ Senpai - Though I'll only show snips in this one since the flashback chapter explaining that will be from Allen's POV. Obviously, it's going to end badly considering what happens to him at the end.

Her trying to read his mind will be shocking since he's the first person with a complete block unlike the others who at least have small openings. The only other person with a complete block is Chifuyu.
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Old 2011-11-28, 01:39   Link #10103
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@ Senpai - Though I'll only show snips in this one since the flashback chapter explaining that will be from Allen's POV. Obviously, it's going to end badly considering what happens to him at the end.


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Her trying to read his mind will be shocking since he's the first person with a complete block unlike the others who at least have small openings. The only other person with a complete block is Chifuyu.
Maybe it was due to overtly traumatic memory? This kind of 'mental block' are common with patients of mental trauma.
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Old 2011-11-28, 01:48   Link #10104
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@ Senpai - The way Allen died is the same way Irish nearly dies in the Mondo Grosso defense: A stab in the stomach area. This is one of the main reasons he lost his memory, his psyche couldn't handle remembering what happened and it happening at the same time.

The mental block is from the Trauma at the camp. Also, if she looks deeper she'll see that he lacks memories from before 7 years old which will no doubt cause questions. The rest is just because of his natural resistance to the supernatural.

Side note - Allen dies in the flashback chapter, The terrorist break happens as he's dying and he sees his kid bro joining the group. His death takes a while since the group tries to help him but they can't and the last thing he hears is: "Alright kid, let's call you 'Irish' then". Too bad he's trying to stop him from joining but he's too weak to say anything.
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Old 2011-11-28, 01:53   Link #10105
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@ Senpai - The way Allen died is the same way Irish nearly dies in the Mondo Grosso defense: A stab in the stomach area. This is one of the main reasons he lost his memory, his psyche couldn't handle remembering what happened and it happening at the same time.

The mental block is from the Trauma at the camp. Also, if she looks deeper she'll see that he lacks memories from before 7 years old which will no doubt cause questions. The rest is just because of his natural resistance to the supernatural.
If we took some bio-technobabble into account, Irish 'brain' is a bit special then.

It was theorized that Psychic ability came mostly from person's brain. Mind reading itself works if you synchronize your brainwave with the person you wanted to read. If Meister adopt this theory as well, we could asume that Irish' state of brain is so chaotic that most ISper can't understand it.

Maybe this is why Karon took 82 years evolving with Tree Diagram, just so she can understand Irish trully?

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Side note - Allen dies in the flashback chapter, The terrorist break happens as he's dying and he sees his kid bro joining the group. His death takes a while since the group tries to help him but they can't and the last thing he hears is: "Alright kid, let's call you 'Irish' then". Too bad he's trying to stop him from joining but he's too weak to say anything.
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Old 2011-11-28, 01:57   Link #10106
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@ Senpai - Allen obviously doesn't want his surrogate bro to join, it's just that he's barely clinging to life at that point so he doesn't have enough energy to try and dissuade him. Ironically, Allen is his only reason for joining

I'm gonna write that part of the flashback later, can you read it?

Side note - What's with the Cry emoticons? I didn't think it was that depressing.
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Old 2011-11-28, 02:08   Link #10107
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@ Senpai - Allen obviously doesn't want his surrogate bro to join, it's just that he's barely clinging to life at that point so he doesn't have enough energy to try and dissuade him. Ironically, Allen is his only reason for joining

I'm gonna write that part of the flashback later, can you read it?
Of course I'll read it.

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Side note - What's with the Cry emoticons? I didn't think it was that depressing.
U MAD? Allen die in desperation, and watching Irish picked by resistance group before he gone, how is that not depressing?

(Yeah, I'm easily touched due to shoujo influence)
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Old 2011-11-28, 02:22   Link #10108
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@ Senpai - I'm just used to things like that, that's all. I've read different books and watched things that made me more accustomed to it.

Side note -
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Side note 2 - The explanation for his brain is as good as any. He keeps a calm composure but his mind is mostly empty and numb due to how he views things.
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Old 2011-11-28, 02:31   Link #10109
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@ Senpai - I'm just used to things like that, that's all. I've read different books and watched things that made me more accustomed to it.
Yeah, maybe I'm just exaggerating, but that's how I view it.

That aside, WHERE THE HELL IS EVERYONE?
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Old 2011-11-28, 03:23   Link #10110
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Probably doing stuff for school. It's monday from where I am and I'm sure all of us are doing something related to school. In fact, I have a project for Child Development about infants
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Probably doing stuff for school. It's monday from where I am and I'm sure all of us are doing something related to school. In fact, I have a project for Child Development about infants
Not going to school cos all the tutor are busy, so today's class is canceled.

(a little lonely maybe? )
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Old 2011-11-28, 03:37   Link #10112
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@ Senpai - I'll make the flashback end soon. I hope it's okay.
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Old 2011-11-28, 03:40   Link #10113
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@ Senpai - I'll make the flashback end soon. I hope it's okay.
Yup, don't rush thing, just let the story flow.
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Old 2011-11-28, 03:42   Link #10114
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@ Senpai - The side note I placed with a spoiler is a simplified version of it.
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Old 2011-11-28, 03:43   Link #10115
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@ Senpai - The side note I placed with a spoiler is a simplified version of it.
Yep, i read it before you go, I'd say the bare bones is good. Push some emotion into it and it'll be incredible.
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Old 2011-11-28, 03:47   Link #10116
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@ Hawke - Finally get the block out?

@ Senpai - Starting in a bit, wish me luck!
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Old 2011-11-28, 04:13   Link #10117
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More inspiration for my fic, I should digest that!
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Old 2011-11-28, 04:13   Link #10118
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Frederick Marks, child of the business rival for Dunoa industries. Gets closer to Charlotte despite warnings from parents.
- Why do I suddenly think of Riddhe Marcenas when reading that description...?>
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- Why do I suddenly think of Riddhe Marcenas when reading that description...?>
Gun-dam...?
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@Eratas no...not..REALLY. I just ended up writing unrelated stories, dammit. AUGH!
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