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Raxial · 2004-02-08, 19:19

Tired. I seem to draw better when I'm tired. Anyway, I drew this after a very uncesucessful picture. I started at like 1:30 AM and finished at 3:00 AM or so, after staying up late the night before. And yeah, I know it needs work, simple things like that stick out, just tell me if there is something seriously wrong that I did (like something with proportions) Well, anyway...

http://www.deviantart.com/view/5165379/

Shii · 2004-02-08, 19:21

She needs to fatten up a little :/

Raxial · 2004-02-08, 20:41

well, maybe just a little, but not too much. I didn't want to make her too fat (she started a lot skinnier, lol)

fenrihr · 2004-02-08, 22:37

those some tiny feet....
i can see a few things that might make it look better as well. hand position, the far arm looks alot longer than the near one.

Forsaken102 · 2004-02-09, 23:36

Her pant legs seem to be in the punk style of being cut up... (Hey, I think I still have a pair like that... maybe... 'course, I didn't make mine like that on purpose. It just kinda... happened. -_-')

And, also the chin is (pardon the expression) sharp enough to be used as a weapon. 'Course, that could be a benefit... chins can be pretty devastating weapons too... if the circumstances are right.

However, check out the hair and how it falls. Since it falls over on shoulder and then around the ribcage, it shouldn't hang in a straight line. At least, not all of it. And the strands in front of the ears should also fall down, and not stick out like (I forget her name- that readheaded girl with the candy-cane stockings...) Pippin's pigtails. Also remember that hair is made our of individual strands, although most people can easily get by with drawing clumps of it. For truly beautiful hair, make it... flow... for lack of a better term.

Other than that, nice!

Biohazard · 2004-02-10, 07:34

Hmm i like it , but the cheek and the chin seem a bit out of proportion ... anyways cheek n chin look a bit wrong imo ^^

Other then that its pretty good ^^
I like the hair and the folds

Will post a pic of mine i just doodled in class later ^^

calavera spain · 2004-02-10, 07:59

great job raxial and thank u for adding me to your friend list in DA

2004-02-08, 19:19	Link #1
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 35	Product of Tiredness Tired. I seem to draw better when I'm tired. Anyway, I drew this after a very uncesucessful picture. I started at like 1:30 AM and finished at 3:00 AM or so, after staying up late the night before. And yeah, I know it needs work, simple things like that stick out, just tell me if there is something seriously wrong that I did (like something with proportions) Well, anyway... http://www.deviantart.com/view/5165379/

2004-02-08, 19:21	Link #2
Shii Afflicted by the vanities Fansubber Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Fish-shape Paumanok Age: 36	She needs to fatten up a little :/ __________________ Learn to define and spell moé Shii (formerly known as ashibaka)

2004-02-08, 20:41	Link #3
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 35	well, maybe just a little, but not too much. I didn't want to make her too fat (she started a lot skinnier, lol)

2004-02-08, 22:37	Link #4
fenrihr is dime-a-dozen Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Rich., VA	those some tiny feet.... i can see a few things that might make it look better as well. hand position, the far arm looks alot longer than the near one.

2004-02-09, 23:36	Link #5
Forsaken102 Insanity Goddess Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Missouri Age: 40	Her pant legs seem to be in the punk style of being cut up... (Hey, I think I still have a pair like that... maybe... 'course, I didn't make mine like that on purpose. It just kinda... happened. -_-') And, also the chin is (pardon the expression) sharp enough to be used as a weapon. 'Course, that could be a benefit... chins can be pretty devastating weapons too... if the circumstances are right. However, check out the hair and how it falls. Since it falls over on shoulder and then around the ribcage, it shouldn't hang in a straight line. At least, not all of it. And the strands in front of the ears should also fall down, and not stick out like (I forget her name- that readheaded girl with the candy-cane stockings...) Pippin's pigtails. Also remember that hair is made our of individual strands, although most people can easily get by with drawing clumps of it. For truly beautiful hair, make it... flow... for lack of a better term. Other than that, nice!

2004-02-10, 07:34	Link #6
Biohazard -kanashii~desu- Join Date: May 2003 Location: Germany Age: 38	Hmm i like it , but the cheek and the chin seem a bit out of proportion ... anyways cheek n chin look a bit wrong imo ^^ Other then that its pretty good ^^ I like the hair and the folds Will post a pic of mine i just doodled in class later ^^

2004-02-10, 07:59	Link #7
calavera spain empty mind Join Date: May 2003 Location: spain (barcelona) Age: 38	great job raxial and thank u for adding me to your friend list in DA