2008-03-13, 08:18 | Link #2281 | ||
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poor, confused Nanoha it was nice to read such a thing too edit: page claim Last edited by Gillian; 2008-03-13 at 08:34. |
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2008-03-13, 08:49 | Link #2282 | |
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and IMO, forcing Yuuno x Hayate for the sake of a plot point shouldn't be done. everything was going nicely but when I read yuuno x hayate out of the blue, it stunned me for a moment, wondering why is it there? it's like forcing a joke at the cost of in-character-ness. |
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2008-03-13, 11:33 | Link #2284 | |||
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It's much better to enjoy the actual fic in shorties like this. Start analyzing 500 words and you find how find that they rarely compute. (Note: This is about when making non-canon shorties with just that one purpose. Nanoha gasming in VR training? Suuure...) Complaining about HxY pairing in there for just plot purposes is like complaning about every short novel. It's not because A, B, C and D happen in it. It's about that A, B, C and D have already happened because that is why it is being/has been written. Yes too much of coincidences is bad but HxY being OOC? Last time I looked, FxN was only distantly implied in canon but nobody's complaining about that. If we went the canon way, NxY would be the most certain pairing. And for today's scenarios. Spoiler for Scenarios 62 & 63:
Even longer scenarios >.< Edit: Well it did say part 1 so I guess it was only natural for part 2 to come... Sensing another very enjoyable serie. Last edited by Sam the Onion; 2008-03-13 at 15:11. |
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2008-03-13, 16:00 | Link #2287 |
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@Satashi : Sweet, as always ^^ (I'm waiting for the part 4)
@AshLikeSnow : "That Day" -> great ^^ the meeting with Nanoha's family was a great idea ^^ And for "Swings" is simply cute, really, really cute, I enjoy it ^^ (thanks for that ^^) |
2008-03-13, 16:45 | Link #2288 | ||
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in short novels, there tend to be interaction between paired characters. Even when assuming that they're together (e.g. NxF + vivio short fics), a well-developed scene could really make a reader feel that 'togetherness'. in this fic, YxH was just mentioned once. it wasn't developed. one needs to assume that pairing which needs to be based off of having read 6th D. Quote:
Fate and Nanoha had some of the more emotionally intense scenes together when compared to scenes between Nanoha x Yuuno. I don't hate Yuuno. He's a nice guy and he had some sweet moments with Nanoha but I don't see how that would make it the most canon seeing as it was just as implied as FxN. kindness between a girl and boy doesn't automatically make it romantic. |
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2008-03-13, 17:09 | Link #2290 | |
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Besides Nanoha's already married... to her job. And everything I just typed was Now to get back on topic sort of: Magical Babysitter Lyrical Zafira ch 3 has hit 2767 words... with no end in sight |
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2008-03-13, 18:05 | Link #2291 | ||
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I tried to lessen the effect (half-heartedly I admit) by changing the ages of the characters to 16, which would theoretically have given them time to interact amongst themselves and for such relationship developments to occur, but alas, I guess it was a weak thing. In the end I guess it really is my fault how the portrayal of the Hayate and Yuuno relationship became a bust, and I'll try my best to provide some kind of background for it in the future if it ever arises again. I guess I was just a bit impatient at the time and didn't really want to create an epicly long one-shot since I didn't put all that much thought into it. That and I'm still new at it so I wasn't sure what I was doing. I shall take your comments to heart next time when I write. :3 |
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2008-03-13, 18:44 | Link #2292 | ||
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Something as greatly built as HxY in 6th D will affect your thoughts about future HxY pairings, no matter how much you didn't want it, even if they had very little in common. But that's kinda off the point. Quote:
But that was in the past. StrikerS didn't give even once give me something like this. They were very good friends. Yuuno, on the other hand, was left alone with Nanoha by Fate, so they could 'catch up'. That athmosphere was more than enough to give me that feeling. Yes, in MSLN and A's the NxF pairing could almost be considered canon, but StrikerS missed all this. This said, I can see how 16 year old Fate couldn't be 'struggling' against her own identity and have feelings for Nanoha. Something happened between A's and StrikerS time skip that killed the massive yuri vibes. We might never be told what this was, but that's why authors like Ash are here. They create those small moments for us. A = Fate's love B = The event C = Yuuno's speech D = YxH Just because Nanoha was rejected by Yuuno once wouldn't mean that the same would happen in the future. People can change even if it would be rare. I don't see anything that would block each other out even in canon timeline. D->C->B<-A The event is written like this because all of them have happened. 500~ words is just too short to build up two relationships and have the event you want to write. That's why people (Or perhaps only me.) are left with a question 'How did D happen?'. That's why short fics are so wonderful. They leave you think 'why?' and think about the possibilities. I don't find it impossible; and when something isn't impossible, it is possible. Just because it wasn't built up isn't a reason to think so. Or we could all agree that it's an AU created by a spur of a moment like Ash wrote in the bottom. But this just makes it even more lovely. Connecting the non-existant dots into something plausible is strangely entertaining for me. I can see why but I can also see why not. It's the reader's own choice to decide, which one is the one you want to believe in. But trust me, the fic becomes much better if you choose the option that makes it possible. This of course isn't very acceptable in larger stories but in shorties like this I can take it without a sign of discomfort. It seems I wrote quite much and now that I've written it, I'm not even sure if I managed to make my point... Edit: Did I just write this thing over 40 minutes? Durr... I feel sleepy. G'nigh everyone |
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2008-03-13, 19:17 | Link #2293 |
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!!!NOTICE!!! Ashlikesnow's profile updated Sam the onion's profile modified Mercurian Angel added to profile Theshinysword added to profile @Evil Rick: please post all of your comics in order in a post for me. Comics tell a story, so I will profile them @Thread: If your profile isn't up to date please let me know. If you have not been profiled, please tell me as well.
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2008-03-13, 19:26 | Link #2294 | |
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2008-03-13, 19:32 | Link #2295 | |
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2008-03-13, 19:34 | Link #2296 | ||
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BUT! All I just posted was and belongs on the character relationship board. @Satashi I don't have a profile Edit: While I was typing Krinen helped me out. Thanks! |
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2008-03-13, 19:48 | Link #2297 | ||
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And if someone is pointing at last picture at StrikerS I can easilly point one certain track from drama cd. (I'm sorry I dont remember name, only that I read it at image thread at september/october 07)) It's about Yuuno talking with Nanoha about Fate. And from what I remember there is something about NxF.And if 4th series will be there is hope for NxF Quote:
And the rest written by TheShinySword - I agree. @Thread - sorry for ot, I just cannot help myself.
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