Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Teaser? Me? NEVER!

Spoiler for I'm right here!:

“Come on! I'm right here!” Thunder pounded in her ears, eyes dilating as black slime seeped from her pores. “That's right... That's right! I'm here! Come find me!” Slowly the world came into focus, eyes staining yellow. “I'm right he-” The sound of a tuning fork wavered, changing to a low gong. “Wha...Whats... I can't... move...” Blue fire flickered across her vision, increasing her desire to fight. “Tri-Edge...” Her nails turned to claws, back sprouting satanic wings. “No! No this isn't right!” The girl stumbled back, gripping her head and crying out. “This isn't right! Something is wrong!”

“It's right,” The Azure Flame walked forward slowly. “You're on a mission remember?”

“Mis...mission...?” Nanoha shook her head, clawing at her hair as her transformation was completed.

“We were sent to terminate The Terror of Death, remember? For the crime of slaughtering thousands.”

“Kill....The Terror of Death...?” Nanoha's hand twitched, voice losing it's emotional tone. “That's right... the TSAB sent us...I remember now.”

Kite smiled. “I'm wounded, I can no longer fight.”

“I'll handle this.” Nanoha looked up, eyes flickering as she gripped her fist, turning towards the group that was too shocked to act. “Fate Testarossa... I'm here for you.”

“Na... Nanoha...?” Fate took a step back. “Wai...wait...”

Nanoha frowned. “Wait!? Did you wait when you killed those people!? When you slaughtered them!?”

Yuuno put up a shield just in time to block an attack. “She's brain washed!”

“Stop this!” Fate ran forward, only to be backhanded to the ground and pounced on.

“I'll avenge them all!” Nanoha raised her clawed hand to strike Fate's chest. “I'll kill you myself!”



I randomly saw Angel's Skeith picture so I wanted an excuse to show off her work again

Skeith is MagiShine/AbareBlack?!

*RUNS AT LUDICRIOUS SPEED*

EDIT:

"In the Name of Sankt Kaiser Vivio, Empress of Man, I, Grande Meister of Daemonjaegers, claim this page!"

[krisslanza]

*head into desk repeatedly*
So hmmm... Not sure when I'll get around to writing. My life is too miserable all the time to ever be in the mood to actually write (that or my brother is always bugging me, trying to see what I'm writing or my mom won't stop bugging me to slave away 24/7).

I'll try and maybe get something up... Either a chapter of something or a oneshot or something by the end of the week but... I'm just not sure.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Kha

Skeith is MagiShine/AbareBlack?!

*RUNS AT LUDICRIOUS SPEED*

EDIT:

"In the Name of Sankt Kaiser Vivio, Empress of Man, I, Grande Meister of Daemonjaegers, claim this page!"

Cadia's Sons: APPROVED!!!



*RUNS at ludicrous speed*

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

*head into desk repeatedly*
So hmmm... Not sure when I'll get around to writing. My life is too miserable all the time to ever be in the mood to actually write (that or my brother is always bugging me, trying to see what I'm writing or my mom won't stop bugging me to slave away 24/7).

I'll try and maybe get something up... Either a chapter of something or a oneshot or something by the end of the week but... I'm just not sure.

Hang in there *pat pat* Don't force yourself or you may not like what you get out.

[krisslanza]

But I always force myself...
I'm notoriously lazy and if you leave it up to my whims nothing ever gets done. I always just put it off... My motto would be like: "Why do something today if you can put it off until tomorrow?"

And really I'm rarely pleased with my work after a certain amount of time has passed. About a month. Then I always look at things and wonder how I ever wrote that. I have that feeling to all my early fanfiction

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Satashi

We corrupted Ash-chan in only like one week! Wow, that's a new record for us! Next thing you know, she'll be going "Satashi, can I read your lemon?"

I like your story too, Ash=chan ^^ keep it up, a lot are supporting you!

~**~

I tapped my pencil boredly as the school lesson continued on. I knew everything that was being taught, having learned it several years ago by myself. Despite this I still payed attention to what was being said. Not so much for myself but for Nanoha, who has been rather irritable lately. The past few days she has been very easily angered during my tutoring sessions, snapping at me whenever she didn't understand something. I've known her long enough to be sure it wasn't her normal small fits, but rather something bigger. It wasn't hard to piece it together; in fact I knew about it for a while now. Her clothes stunk, her breath was tinted with it despite always chewing gum and putting on perfume. I made several offers to her to tell me if she had a problem but she never took me up on it. I think she finally realized she did have one and is trying on her own to stop it. I turned my gaze over to her and found her bouncing her leg, a habit she has had for years. Whenever something bothers her to a point where she puts it aside she would always do that. Constantly complaining about a headache, not able to focus, snapping easily, chewing gum constantly... Nanoha, I know what your problem is. Why don't you let us help?

Saved by the Bell XVII
By: Satashi

Oh it's ok Sata-chan, I've been corrupted a long time ago by your fics lol
But still, you can't deny that a pervy Fate is a hot Fate haha ~

Is Nanoha's smoking addiction getting that out of hand? Would be sad for them to have another row ._. Maybe she should get herself a new inhaler? xD

[Kazu-kun]

Originally Posted by Satashi

But for hack:

Kite killed Skeith. Skeith came back in //SIGN to Data drain Sora, who went into a coma for several odd years. He work up and later joined "the world: R2" as "Haseo" and can summon skeith to help him fight.

Actually, it's the other way around: Skeith appears for the first time at the end of .hack//SIGN, and then its data combines with Sora's, making Ryou Misaki (Sora's player) to fall in a coma.

Six month later, when Kite kills Skeith, and subsequently defeats Morganna, Ryou Misaki finally wakes up in the real world. His adventure as Haseo in The World: R2 comes 7 years after that.

Sorry for off-topiness btw ^^.

[TheShinySword]

I just read Landscaper!Fate and while it is made of sheer awesome, I noticed one little thing that bugged my nitpicky mind.

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:

“She’s a dike.”

So Fate is a vertical sheet of magma wedged between rock? (among many other things that dike could also mean, none of which are what you mean. That word is spelled with a y.) Not that it matters but the image I got made me giggle enough to point it out.

By the way I've been lurking around here for a while. I kept meaning to post but I never really got around to it. So um... I'm TSS (because TheShinySword's a pain to type out) I like to write fanfiction primarily about the characters everyone forgets about and... that's about it.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

I just read Landscaper!Fate and while it is made of sheer awesome, I noticed one little thing that bugged my nitpicky mind.

So Fate is a vertical sheet of magma wedged between rock? (among many other things that dike could also mean, none of which are what you mean. That word is spelled with a y.) Not that it matters but the image I got made me giggle enough to point it out.

By the way I've been lurking around here for a while. I kept meaning to post but I never really got around to it. So um... I'm TSS (because TheShinySword's a pain to type out) I like to write fanfiction primarily about the characters everyone forgets about and... that's about it.

Welcome! Your fics are welcome here ( and your avatar rocks!) If you ever need anything don't hesitate to ask me!

[mercurianangel]

@TSS: I love the Wolkenritter-love you write XD

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

You take care of yourself during your tests. I know the feeling too well.

Thankies...I'll try ^_^

Originally Posted by Gillian

nice chapter

@Mercurianangel
maybe we can get a pic with Fate in the china dress
would absolutely awesome

but only, when you have enough time

Thank you for the test well-wishes
I had to do this for a study break or explode from the excess stress and pent up drawing-juices
too bad that break turned from 30 minutes to a 90 minute one XD

Spoiler for China dress!:

DA Link

BONUS!

Spoiler for a quick teaser for the latest Sataurial production (NSFW!):

Nanoha's breath caught in her mouth, stolen by Fate's soft intake of air. Warm skin pressed against her, heartbeat pounding as lips touched hers again. Fate's hand once again took hers, interlacing their fingers as she gently started urging Nanoha to lean back on the bed. Cool sheets soothed her burning skin, pillows cushioning and caressing her hair as the blonde's locks fell over her shoulder. Again soft lips pressed against hers, tongue moving slowly into her mouth. The taste came again, matched with the smooth slow motion of their tongues touching each other's. Mouths slightly open, the lovers breathed each other's air as they revealed in the feelings pounding in their chest, the shocking touches, and trailing fingertips. Fate pulled back softly, kissing Nanoha once more and touching their tongues lovingly before resting their foreheads together and looking into each other's eyes.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Satashi

We corrupted Ash-chan in only like one week! Wow, that's a new record for us! Next thing you know, she'll be going "Satashi, can I read your lemon?"

O.K... now I'm scary

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

You take care of yourself during your tests. I know the feeling too well.

doing a joint fanfic/doujinshi for SbtB is going to be awesome. As long as you take your time when you have it it will be alright.

Now i should have been writing reviews or doing something schoolwork constructive during my free time. Instead i picked up on doing more Landscaper!Fate...

Here is another installment. Remember this is going out there.

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:

Fate stretched herself out in the truck while heading to their next job. Eying the newbie that was eying her she smacked him across the head before turning her attention to the driver.

“So Chrono where are we going today?”

“Today we are going to the Takamachi residence. Seems like you little stunt two weeks ago didn’t piss them off so its part of our normal rotation now.”

Looking back at the kid sitting bitch in the truck more curiosity perked the blond. “So why are we dragging this Gomer around?”

“He is cutting the banks,” Fate rolled her eyes at that thought, “while you get a chance to do what you wanted last time.”

“Oh” she looked at Chrono with a grin.

“Yea, you’re trimming the hedges and when we’re done we’ll help clean up.”

“Well that’s better than fighting a mower.”

The rest of the trip was made in relative silence. Once they pulled up to the property Fate jumped out and went to the back of the truck to get her stuff. The boy followed Chrono closely as they made their way to the trailer that carried their tractor and mowers.

“Hay,” the boy whispered to Chrono, “that girl is kind of hot.”

“Yea and you’re not getting any action from her. Dream all you want but she got her eyes on that same thing we do.”

The boy looked at him with a puzzled face. After a few moments Chrono couldn’t take it any more.

“She’s a dike.”

“Oh.”

“Hay you, new guy.” Fate hoped out of the back of the truck with her hedgetrimmer in hand. “If you break my mower I’m shoving my boot up your ass.” Not waiting for a reply she made her way to her first set of hedges.

“Does she hate me?”

“No” Chrono hopped up on the trailer to start up his tractor, “She just gets anal around new guys because they tend to wimp out. Don’t worry, if you stick it out we’ll anoint you with 2-cycle oil and dub you one of us.”

= = = = = =

Fate took a break to wipe the sweet off her brow and look over at the new guy. He still couldn’t hold his mower right and was flipping it over for the fifth time that Fate could count. Sighing she turned back to her work. ’At least he isn’t missing spots.’ Continuing her careful treatment of the ornamental shrubs she felt like eyes were staring at her. Finally annoyed by the feeling she stopped and looked around seeing that there was a pair of blue eyes staring at her. That girl from the window was standing about six feet from the base of her ladder looking at her. Fate turned around and looked down on the properly dressed girl. For a moment the girl just looked back but then started to fidget and blush a little.

“What are you doing” the girl finally spoke up.

Oh that was way too easy, but Fate remembered some of the stern lectures she got from her boss about her behavior. Choosing her most professional voice she replied to the girl.

“I’m cleaning up theses hedges. The design in them is too detailed for using the trimmers so I’m doing it by hand” She added a little snip from her hedge shears to add to the point.

The girl paused for a moment letting Fate returned to her work. Once she got up some courage she questioned the blond again. “I’ve never see a girl do this kind of work before.”

A buried nerve got struck in Fates brain. “Well princess, not every girl can sit around on their ass and have things handed to them. Like me, some of us have to work in our lives.”

The blue eyed one looked down for a minuet until she decided to run off into her house. After watching her go inside Fate returned to her work with a single curse word.

:3

One word: MORE!!!

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by mercurianangel

BONUS!

Spoiler for a quick teaser for the latest Sataurial production (NSFW!):

Nanoha's breath caught in her mouth, stolen by Fate's soft intake of air. Warm skin pressed against her, heartbeat pounding as lips touched hers again. Fate's hand once again took hers, interlacing their fingers as she gently started urging Nanoha to lean back on the bed. Cool sheets soothed her burning skin, pillows cushioning and caressing her hair as the blonde's locks fell over her shoulder. Again soft lips pressed against hers, tongue moving slowly into her mouth. The taste came again, matched with the smooth slow motion of their tongues touching each other's. Mouths slightly open, the lovers breathed each other's air as they revealed in the feelings pounding in their chest, the shocking touches, and trailing fingertips. Fate pulled back softly, kissing Nanoha once more and touching their tongues lovingly before resting their foreheads together and looking into each other's eyes.

Something tells me this is not going to last long

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

By the way I've been lurking around here for a while. I kept meaning to post but I never really got around to it. So um... I'm TSS (because TheShinySword's a pain to type out) I like to write fanfiction primarily about the characters everyone forgets about and... that's about it.

Post them Your idea sounds interesting

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Something tells me this is not going to last long

Either that, or that is a very hot sneak peak into the much awaited lemon between Nanoha and Fate at the end of the story.

@Satashi: Perchance that you could actually write a lemon dedicated to your Riot Force 6 series? Perhaps around the first time they first had sex together, or at the very least, a more detailed short of when Fate finally admitted to Nanoha that she loved her in that way if you don't feel like writing such lemon? :3

[Dr_Tom]

Hello everyone! I'm new here...kind of. I've been browsing through this thread for the last few days looking in on the kind of people who write my favorite Nanoha fanfics and just decided to start posting. Not really sure how often you'll see me post but you should be blessed or cursed(however you decide to look at it) with a post by me every once in awhile.

Anyways, I decided to start posting for 2 reasons. One is to possibly get to know the writers of my favorite fan fictions a little better and see how they think. Maybe see how they come up with some of these AU scenarios yet still keep characters believable and true their canon selves.

The other reason much more selfish. I recently read one of Satashi's SNL Digital Shorts called "Come Home." I really, really liked the idea and was wondering if maybe he might want to expand upon that short little story. Maybe give us a glimpse of Fate and/or Nanoha while seperated from the other for so long. Or possibly follow it up and show us true happiness yet awkwardness that would be present after finally reuniting after so long.

Anyway's that's all from me for now, adios until next time.

-Dr_Tom-

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Dr_Tom

Hello everyone! I'm new here...kind of. I've been browsing through this thread for the last few days looking in on the kind of people who write my favorite Nanoha fanfics and just decided to start posting. Not really sure how often you'll see me post but you should be blessed or cursed(however you decide to look at it) with a post by me every once in awhile.

Anyways, I decided to start posting for 2 reasons. One is to possibly get to know the writers of my favorite fan fictions a little better and see how they think. Maybe see how they come up with some of these AU scenarios yet still keep characters believable and true their canon selves.

The other reason much more selfish. I recently read one of Satashi's SNL Digital Shorts called "Come Home." I really, really liked the idea and was wondering if maybe he might want to expand upon that short little story. Maybe give us a glimpse of Fate and/or Nanoha while seperated from the other for so long. Or possibly follow it up and show us true happiness yet awkwardness that would be present after finally reuniting after so long.

Anyway's that's all from me for now, adios until next time.

-Dr_Tom-

Welcome to the forums Dr_Tom Be very welcome. I hope you'll enjoy your stay here and that you'll be posting a lot (Yes, yes, I know you just said you don't know how often you'll post but it's worth the try).

[USB500]

Ah, newcomers. Welcome to this thread. Have fun writing stuffs and remember to be yourself in everything.

A warning though: by no any circumstances shall anyone of you venture into the Outer Cadia, lest you want to face the wrath of the Outer Cadians.

Peace.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Dr_Tom

Hello everyone! I'm new here...kind of. I've been browsing through this thread for the last few days looking in on the kind of people who write my favorite Nanoha fanfics and just decided to start posting. Not really sure how often you'll see me post but you should be blessed or cursed(however you decide to look at it) with a post by me every once in awhile.

Anyways, I decided to start posting for 2 reasons. One is to possibly get to know the writers of my favorite fan fictions a little better and see how they think. Maybe see how they come up with some of these AU scenarios yet still keep characters believable and true their canon selves.

The other reason much more selfish. I recently read one of Satashi's SNL Digital Shorts called "Come Home." I really, really liked the idea and was wondering if maybe he might want to expand upon that short little story. Maybe give us a glimpse of Fate and/or Nanoha while seperated from the other for so long. Or possibly follow it up and show us true happiness yet awkwardness that would be present after finally reuniting after so long.

Anyway's that's all from me for now, adios until next time.

-Dr_Tom-

Hello and welcome! We always enjoy new people around here so kick off your shoes and take a load off! You'll meet a lot of writers here who will be more than happy to talk to you ^^ Myself included, if you need anything at all feel free to ask or PM me.

As for "Come Home", that was one of my "shorts", AKA one of the stories I write during my lunch break at work or one of my two 15 minute breaks. I can't really think of anything else to add on to it without taking away from the feel. Is there anything else you might want to see, though? I do take request, even if sometimes it takes a while to get around to them

At any rate, please post all you want and get to know everyone. We range from experianced to breand new authors here so you'll fit in just fine (you don't have to write to post here). Hope to see a lot from you in the future.

@TSS: What fics do you write? you said about characters others forget about? You perked my interest ^^

Edit:

USB-chan: Where have you been? We miss you T_T

Edit2:

Yes, the sniplet Angel posted along with Chinadress!Fate (that will appear in 17- Angel is ahead of me now XD) is a cut of our combination doujin, tho it's a teaser so you don't get the full image. XD

so now who's evil?

[Kha]

Originally Posted by USB500

Ah, newcomers. Welcome to this thread. Have fun writing stuffs and remember to be yourself in everything.

A warning though: by no any circumstances shall anyone of you venture into the Outer Cadia, lest you want to face the wrath of the Outer Cadians.

Peace.

Now wouldn't you be scaring everyone out of our lovely thread instead of inviting them?