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AndrewAnimation · 2008-01-13, 13:32

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Lots of fast sketches put together. Bigger on DeviantArt.

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Avantoe · 2008-01-13, 13:42

whoa, im impressed of those. They look so detailed

Edit: Yeah have to agree with The Chaos that the second one is the one i liked most

The Chaos · 2008-01-13, 13:42

Nice Work...I like It...
I like Better the Second one...It Really Lovely..

Daniel E. · 2008-01-13, 13:46

Quote:

Originally Posted by AndrewAnimation

Hi,

Here's some of my best art. You can comment, give feedback, whatever. They're original characters of mine from a novel I'm writing, with one Gaia avi thrown in there for good measure.

Awesome stuff!

Truly the work of a pro.

One thing though, I strongly suggest that you use clickable thumbnails when posting your work. It makes the page easier and faster to see.

Not to mention that you avoid the whole full quoted problem.

and yes, I also think the second one is the best.

geki~ · 2008-01-13, 14:05

I like them, second and fourth more. On the first one, the leg is bothering me a bit. It's really hard to sit like that xD
And on the third, the neck is a bit too long and making it look funny :S

Miko Miko · 2008-01-13, 14:16

I love the second one, but all of them are great!!!

tripperazn · 2008-01-13, 17:23

The second one is definitely my favorite. Fourth is good also, but her middle finger at the front of the scythe is bent in a very unnatural way.

**Solace** · 2008-01-13, 18:53

Those are all really great! I agree with the others, the second one is your best.

For the first one, even though I understand the point of the pose, the leg is extremely awkward crossed like that.

The second one I have nothing to really critique. The sitting pose has her a little offset which makes the back seem a bit too straight, but it's not detracting from the image imo.

The third, I can't get over that lump in her right leg and like Geki said, her neck is a little long for her height.

The fourth, the fingers at the tip of her weapon curve in an odd way. She's not really pushing them against anything in that direction so it makes more sense for them to be straight. Even with the curve, her thumb bends at a very sharp angle.

Overall though, very nice. You've got serious talent.

sachiyone · 2008-01-14, 01:49

It very beautiful picture >< I like it very much

AndrewAnimation · 2008-01-14, 03:27

thanks!=)

yeah i think i like the second the best too

what's the 'full quoted problem'? sorry

my characters tend to be acrobatic-ish but yeah i'm not sure if the pose in the first one is even possible

yeah the neck is definitely too long in the gaia one=D especially noticeable in the close-up. but i was like 'screw it, i'm rushing.'

i think the problem with the scythe one in terms of the fingers is that i should've made the middle finger *behind* the index one

thanks all=)

Daniel E. · 2008-01-14, 05:45

Quote:

Originally Posted by AndrewAnimation

what's the 'full quoted problem'? sorry

This:

Quote:

Originally Posted by AndrewAnimation

Hi,

Here's some of my best art. You can comment, give feedback, whatever. They're original characters of mine from a novel I'm writing, with one Gaia avi thrown in there for good measure.

If you'd like to see more, click here for my DeviantArt gallery.

If you can spare the time, you can vote in my Gaia threads for your favorite artwork out of my best 20, each of the two threads having 10 each:
Thread 1
Thread 2

Mind you, it's not the end of the world whenever it happens; It's just something I personally find a bit annoying. This is of course, just a comment on my behalf. It's your thread and your call in the end.

AndrewAnimation · 2008-01-14, 09:34

maybe i'm missing something, but why quote the front post? silly peoples :3

geki~ · 2008-01-14, 10:27

People do that sometimes, to bring out for example for that they like the most.

AndrewAnimation · 2008-01-14, 12:33

i see.....:3

Aoie_Emesai · 2008-01-14, 17:44

I love your 4th one and great job on the detail ^_^

AndrewAnimation · 2008-01-15, 02:39

thanks~~~=)

Dxon · 2008-01-15, 10:58

But.. How...?? OMG! How do you do that?!
I want to do that too. ^^

How did you learn to draw like that?

AndrewAnimation · 2008-01-15, 14:18

lol dxon xD thanks=) well i was born with it, and then i nurtured it through care and love and cuz it's just plain fun=D

here's my first Ragnarok Online character art, 2hrs17min:

Deviant Big

The Chaos · 2008-01-15, 14:29

^ Nice Work There I like it..

geki~ · 2008-01-15, 14:38

Ahh yes, a sexy priest ;3
The only thing that bothers me is her right leg (the one that's in left for us xD) because it looks like a horse's leg :S (The lower part that is) You might want to do something about that, it shouldn't be hard. Also the other foot that is resting on the boulder is somewhat awkward. There is no way it can bend like this D:
Other than than it's lovely. Great work ;3

2008-01-13, 13:32	Link #1
AndrewAnimation Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008	Some of my best art. On DeviantArt Bigger Lots of fast sketches put together. Bigger on DeviantArt. My DeviantArt Gallery!! Last edited by AndrewAnimation; 2008-04-15 at 06:50.

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The Chaos ǾΝΈ ΡЇΈÇΈ is the Best !! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: away from you Age: 35	Nice Work...I like It... I like Better the Second one...It Really Lovely.. __________________

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Miko Miko Imouto-Chan♥ Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: England Age: 30	I love the second one, but all of them are great!!! __________________

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tripperazn Toyosaki Aki Scanlator Join Date: Nov 2007	The second one is definitely my favorite. Fourth is good also, but her middle finger at the front of the scythe is bent in a very unnatural way. __________________

2008-01-13, 18:53	Link #8
Solace (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ Moderator Join Date: Mar 2006	Those are all really great! I agree with the others, the second one is your best. For the first one, even though I understand the point of the pose, the leg is extremely awkward crossed like that. The second one I have nothing to really critique. The sitting pose has her a little offset which makes the back seem a bit too straight, but it's not detracting from the image imo. The third, I can't get over that lump in her right leg and like Geki said, her neck is a little long for her height. The fourth, the fingers at the tip of her weapon curve in an odd way. She's not really pushing them against anything in that direction so it makes more sense for them to be straight. Even with the curve, her thumb bends at a very sharp angle. Overall though, very nice. You've got serious talent. __________________

2008-01-13, 13:42	Link #2
Avantoe In Memories Graphic Designer Join Date: Apr 2007	whoa, im impressed of those. They look so detailed Edit: Yeah have to agree with The Chaos that the second one is the one i liked most

2008-01-13, 14:05	Link #5
geki~ noLife Artist Join Date: Jul 2007 Age: 35	I like them, second and fourth more. On the first one, the leg is bothering me a bit. It's really hard to sit like that xD And on the third, the neck is a bit too long and making it look funny :S

2008-01-14, 01:49	Link #9
sachiyone Norma Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Japan(minami)	It very beautiful picture >< I like it very much

2008-01-14, 03:27	Link #10
AndrewAnimation Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008	thanks!=) yeah i think i like the second the best too what's the 'full quoted problem'? sorry my characters tend to be acrobatic-ish but yeah i'm not sure if the pose in the first one is even possible yeah the neck is definitely too long in the gaia one=D especially noticeable in the close-up. but i was like 'screw it, i'm rushing.' i think the problem with the scythe one in terms of the fingers is that i should've made the middle finger behind the index one thanks all=)

2008-01-14, 09:34	Link #12
AndrewAnimation Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008	maybe i'm missing something, but why quote the front post? silly peoples :3

2008-01-14, 10:27	Link #13
geki~ noLife Artist Join Date: Jul 2007 Age: 35	People do that sometimes, to bring out for example for that they like the most.

2008-01-14, 12:33	Link #14
AndrewAnimation Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008	i see.....:3

2008-01-14, 17:44	Link #15
Aoie_Emesai ♪♫ Maya Iincho ♩♬ Artist Join Date: May 2004 Location: Unnecessary Age: 37	I love your 4th one and great job on the detail ^_^ __________________ How to Give / Receive Criticism on your work / Like to draw? Come join Artists Alike Visit my Deviantart Or Blog ~A Child should always surpass his/her parent, Remember.

2008-01-15, 02:39	Link #16
AndrewAnimation Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008	thanks~~~=)

2008-01-15, 10:58	Link #17
Dxon Inactive Member Join Date: Dec 2007	But.. How...?? OMG! How do you do that?! I want to do that too. ^^ How did you learn to draw like that?

2008-01-15, 14:18	Link #18
AndrewAnimation Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008	lol dxon xD thanks=) well i was born with it, and then i nurtured it through care and love and cuz it's just plain fun=D here's my first Ragnarok Online character art, 2hrs17min: Deviant Big

2008-01-15, 14:29	Link #19
The Chaos ǾΝΈ ΡЇΈÇΈ is the Best !! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: away from you Age: 35	^ Nice Work There I like it.. __________________

2008-01-15, 14:38	Link #20
geki~ noLife Artist Join Date: Jul 2007 Age: 35	Ahh yes, a sexy priest ;3 The only thing that bothers me is her right leg (the one that's in left for us xD) because it looks like a horse's leg :S (The lower part that is) You might want to do something about that, it shouldn't be hard. Also the other foot that is resting on the boulder is somewhat awkward. There is no way it can bend like this D: Other than than it's lovely. Great work ;3