Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - So 9-10 years old are very literate and learned already?

[ZeroXSEED]

I don't think so, that's about 14-16.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - So how can I fix the scene? Is Saito acting too old?

[ZeroXSEED]

I dunno, from what I can see, he still retain his childhood side, which easily shown since he the POV holder so no need to fix anything.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Is it too Emo or wangsty? I want to make dramatic scenes, not wangsty scenes.

[ZeroXSEED]

Nope, it's not. Feel free to ask other if you still not sure about it.

[Eratas123]

Making chapter 6 now: Is it possible to loom thin yet still weigh pretty heavily when lifted or measured?

[ZeroXSEED]

Loom thin kinda pushed it though, but as I said some guys are heavier than their rather normal appearance indicate (like me ) due to muscle density and bone size (hence the term 'big boned')

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - How close do fraternal twins tend to resemble one another

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

@ Eras
Yes you can make her kid younger, there's no reason you can't. Maybe make her kid 5 is enough :3

@ Age
Mary sue factor eh. :|

@ Stratos
Good luck :

You can't prevent a male Oc from being a Sue because the moment your character is male and is capable of fighting against IS (Canon's Game-breaker), he is already one....

The point is trying to keep that Factor as low as possible......

Remember Kids:
Super Mary Sue occupy the entire universe.... They can only look down on others....

A Character (with a little sue factor) only occupy as much space as you.....and the character is almost always at eye level (figurative speaking, even if literal, it is still within the Tolerant level) with other characters....albeit a little bit higher....

[ZeroXSEED]

@ Eras
Fraternal twins aren't much different than two sibling born at different time, they can be somewhat similar, or they can be very different. But it's almsot impossible for them to be identical.

@ Age
Hmm, I see.

[Eratas123]

What are the chances that a kid would have knowledge of things like sex, politics, etc etc?

[ZeroXSEED]

High, considering recent media's advancement.

But chances that they are missing the point and misinterpret it are high too, their brains aren't ready for that yet.

[Eratas123]

So a 9-10 year old knowing how isn't too much of a stretch?

[ZeroXSEED]

Yes, but once again, to make it believable see my point above.

Example: The first thing I saw a video about human ovulation is that sperm look like a torpedo and assembled in a factory-like cell part per part (how a 10-years old robot fans saw it)

[Eratas123]

I already made it that way, thanks

In your opinion/fanon, what benefits do you think Ichika has as the first and only male IS pilot?

[ZeroXSEED]

That's obvious, fame, position, no1 man in the world in power etc.

On the downside, many people wanted his head, also, scientist wanted to study him etc.

A lot of stuff I can't cover one by one.

[Eratas123]

Does he ever take advantage of this? Fanon please.

[ZeroXSEED]

Yes, as you see in chapter 8 he use his mythical nickname, his (fake) ultimate achievement, and his similarities to Chifuyu to scare the hell out of the girls pestering him. Some people mistook this for a tsundere act, some are simply masochist about it

He's not keen of using this in public however, seeing that it'll definitely backfire on him (Dan also remark about some guys saw him as traitor or something, or at least greatly envied him for his current position). I actually plan him going out in disguise as of chapter 12.

I can think of other examples, but it's mostly a guess and haven't been decided.

[Eratas123]

Why would they think he was a traitor? Just because he can pilot an IS.