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Ah, I'm confused Despite sounds great, I'd rather not fund that idea... there you go.
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2012-02-03, 01:44 | Link #20662 |
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Rain - Character's frequently break the fourth wall in the fic. Kazuma says he'll tell Ichika what happened.....then we skip to the next segment and Ichika's wondering what the he'll just happened. Kazuma explains he had to cut the explanation because it wouldn't fit the story.
@ Senpai - If only we could see from Dan's POV
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2012-02-03, 01:47 | Link #20663 | |
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2012-02-03, 01:55 | Link #20666 |
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When Yachiyo said doesn't deserve, that could also means that the end result in a bad childhood for the kids.
For example, you really do not want canon Chifuyu as your mother, you'll face a lot of hardship unimaginable. Neither you want canon Tabane as your mother, because she'll spend time running away and doing what she want, being irresponsible. Of course there's always light in the end of the tunnel ("I have an awesome mom" the kids think), but the point is that whether you shown more positive or negative side.
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2012-02-03, 01:59 | Link #20668 |
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Why do you think the kid's are so happy about being in the past? They have new brother's and sister's, and their parents have time to spend with them. The ending is definitely happy overall since they all get together.
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2012-02-03, 02:03 | Link #20669 |
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Once again, it definitely lies on your perception, of course as writer, we have to be neutral, and has to deliver our POV about a certain character while not making an excessive filibuster in the process.
Not everyone has the same perception after all, maybe I'm sort of an asshole member of minority?
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2012-02-03, 02:06 | Link #20670 |
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The asshole member of the minority belongs to Chifuyu's kid and Kazuma Chifuyu's kid openly complains how strict Chifuyu is and how she has to do everything at her best to even get a "good job". Charles and Shouta are more idealistic since they're naturally kind. Then again, I dunno if they go back to the future or choose to stay behind in the present.
@ Treme - Really? Where did it show this?
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2012-02-03, 02:13 | Link #20675 | |
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I'm going out now, see ya guys later
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2012-02-03, 02:24 | Link #20679 |
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Please give specific size
If the small shard is <2 cm i doubt it can be lethal, unless penetrated deep through the bone screening and went to vital organs. I once have such (nonlethal) wounds due to gas exploding in the kitchen, and leave a tiny scar.
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