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Old 2008-11-16, 19:36   Link #11001
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I can't wait until you actually post the full story. These teasers are killing me.
This one weren't really a teaser in that sense. It is just a short set in that universe, during that timeline. It gives me some ground to write stuff on, as I have trouble writing shorts normally.
Naturally, you can see it as teasers to as they convey happenings that might or might not happen in the series. Either way, you have to endure them, as I might write some more until the real fic.

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That was really gruesome AX, REALLY. Now how does this all fit together?
My intention has gone gold. Time will tell, things will be explained.

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I'm really really impressed by this short. These aren't mindless zombies anymore, killing only by instinct, but the man seemed perfectly aware of what he was doing. The thought of it is even more gruesome than the gore description. I think I'm starting to get a faint idea about what Havoc is and what it does. Can't wait to see the full chapters.
I can say now, without spoiling too much, that they are not zombies per se. They are still 100% humans/mages (still not gotten that one right). Will get into more detail on that as time goes.
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Old 2008-11-16, 19:37   Link #11002
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HAVOC, the ruthless virus of True Lies. How did it come into existence? What is the result? Leaving people in despair, this is one of the stories left behind for those seeking the thruth.

A lie is not a lie, if it is true for the one doing the deed.
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Chilling. And the end makes me wonder: is the axe-wielding man the infected one, driven by the virus to commit acts of barbaric evil according to some insane logic? Or were his dead family the infected ones, eliminated by grim necessity? Or is it all one of the tales of inhumanity that comes out of an era of fear and suffering?

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I'm really really impressed by this short. These aren't mindless zombies anymore, killing only by instinct, but the man seemed perfectly aware of what he was doing. The thought of it is even more gruesome than the gore description. I think I'm starting to get a faint idea about what Havoc is and what it does. Can't wait to see the full chapters.

Farewell remains of sanity, the temptation has won. The plot bunnies have taken over.

How about some classics? A quick done short to please the angry plot bunnies. for now...
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Random, I know.
*chortle* Cute, very cute...and the funnier thing is that it's accurate in a backhanded way, not just a parody!
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Old 2008-11-16, 21:09   Link #11003
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Farewell remains of sanity, the temptation has won. The plot bunnies have taken over.

How about some classics? A quick done short to please the angry plot bunnies. for now...
Spoiler for short text:
Random, I know.
Yes! I'm telling you epic WIN! Jail is kind of her father...in an indirect way.
All I want to know is who is going to be Yoda and Obi Wan.
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Old 2008-11-16, 21:46   Link #11004
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Yes! I'm telling you epic WIN! Jail is kind of her father...in an indirect way.
All I want to know is who is going to be Yoda and Obi Wan.
>.>

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Yoda: Vita
Obi Wan: Signum
Leia (or however you spell donut hair's name): Nanoha
Han Solo: Hayate
Chewbaka: Zaffy

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Old 2008-11-16, 21:51   Link #11005
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>.>

<.<

Yoda: Vita
Obi Wan: Signum
Leia (or however you spell donut hair's name): Nanoha
Han Solo: Hayate
Chewbaka: Zaffy

So that makes Luke = Fate?
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Old 2008-11-16, 21:53   Link #11006
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I'm really really impressed by this short. These aren't mindless zombies anymore, killing only by instinct, but the man seemed perfectly aware of what he was doing. The thought of it is even more gruesome than the gore description. I think I'm starting to get a faint idea about what Havoc is and what it does. Can't wait to see the full chapters.

Farewell remains of sanity, the temptation has won. The plot bunnies have taken over.

How about some classics? A quick done short to please the angry plot bunnies. for now...
Spoiler for short text:
Random, I know.
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>.>

<.<

Yoda: Vita
Obi Wan: Signum
Leia (or however you spell donut hair's name): Nanoha
Han Solo: Hayate
Chewbaka: Zaffy

Actually Alicia should be Leia and Nanoha Should Mara Jade
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Old 2008-11-16, 21:54   Link #11007
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So that makes Luke = Fate?
Did you read Kai's short

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Actually Alicia should be Leia and Nanoha Should Mara Jade
Duh why didn't I think of that (though then Nanoha won't get any screen time due to Expanded Universe status now she sees how it feels)
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Old 2008-11-16, 21:57   Link #11008
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Duh why didn't I think of that (though then Nanoha won't get any screen time due to Expanded Universe status now she sees how it feels)
Unless they make another Movie
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Old 2008-11-16, 22:00   Link #11009
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Unless they make another Movie
Hmm... I don't think I want that... *shivers*

to stay on topic

Vita: Use the force you must yes? ... SCREW THIS SPEECH PATTERN!
Fate: ^^;;;; how am I supposed to learn if you keep yelling
Vita: Oh zip it and go balance on something.
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Old 2008-11-16, 22:02   Link #11010
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Did you read Kai's short



Duh why didn't I think of that (though then Nanoha won't get any screen time due to Expanded Universe status now she sees how it feels)
Yes, this is the story you are talking about, right?

Like I said it plays out similar the "Luke I am your Father" scene from Star Wars, just with "Fate" and Dr. Spaghetti rather than "Luke" and "Vader".
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Old 2008-11-16, 22:06   Link #11011
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Hmm... I don't think I want that... *shivers*

to stay on topic

Vita: Use the force you must yes? ... SCREW THIS SPEECH PATTERN!
Fate: ^^;;;; how am I supposed to learn if you keep yelling
Vita: Oh zip it and go balance on something.
As long as they dont rape it like they have been doing (Indie I will never forget)

Didnt Yoda (Vita) whack Luke (Fate) with his walking Stick a couple of times, thats going to hurt with a hammer
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Old 2008-11-16, 22:37   Link #11012
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As long as they dont rape it like they have been doing (Indie I will never forget)

Didnt Yoda (Vita) whack Luke (Fate) with his walking Stick a couple of times, thats going to hurt with a hammer
Fate can take it she's a durable little girl!

Fate: Vita it hurts!!!
Vita: Get used to it bitch!
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Old 2008-11-16, 23:18   Link #11013
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>.>

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Yoda: Vita
Obi Wan: Signum
Leia (or however you spell donut hair's name): Nanoha
Han Solo: Hayate
Chewbaka: Zaffy

Yes! Zafira totally fits Chewbaka's role!
So the updated list would be:

Yoda: Vita
Obi Wan: Signum
Leia: Alicia
Han Solo: Hayate
Chewbaka: Zaffy
R2D2: Reinforce
C3PO: Agito
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Old 2008-11-16, 23:35   Link #11014
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Yes! Zafira totally fits Chewbaka's role!
So the updated list would be:

Yoda: Vita
Obi Wan: Signum
Leia: Alicia
Han Solo: Hayate
Chewbaka: Zaffy
R2D2: Reinforce
C3PO: Agito
...Palpatine = Precia?
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Old 2008-11-16, 23:47   Link #11015
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Leia: Alicia
Han Solo: Hayate

So that would make it a HayateAlicia or for TSS HayateNanoha?

By "Reinforce" do you mean I or II?
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Old 2008-11-17, 00:00   Link #11016
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Leia: Alicia
Han Solo: Hayate

So that would make it a HayateAlicia or for TSS HayateNanoha?

By "Reinforce" do you mean I or II?
What, are those pairings not kosher for you?

Since C3P0 is Agito, it's rather obvious that R2D2 would be Rein Zwei. Unless they're looking for an odd reversal of sizes with a tiny C3P0 and large R2D2, to which then Rein Eins would be fine. Then comes the question of where to put Zwei.
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Old 2008-11-17, 00:02   Link #11017
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What, are those pairings not kosher for you?

Since C3P0 is Agito, it's rather obvious that R2D2 would be Rein Zwei. Unless they're looking for an odd reversal of sizes with a tiny C3P0 and large R2D2.
It's not that they "aren't koshier" it's just I found it slightly humors, in the suggested ...
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It's not that they "aren't koshier" it's just I found it slightly humors, in the suggested ...
You could always go for the twincest option if that's more your thing.

...okay, you can shoot me for that.
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Old 2008-11-17, 00:26   Link #11020
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Fate can take it she's a durable little girl!

Fate: Vita it hurts!!!
Vita: Get used to it bitch!
Nothing like lessons from Vita . If you can survive you'll be ready to take on anything.
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