Nanoha Fanfic Discussion

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

A joke I started...

Spoiler:

~The Succession of the Mask that Represents Self~

Panel 1

Once upon a time there was a legendary mask that is passed on generations...

Graham: *wears mask* I have awakened to my inner desires... I must create!
Liezes: Papa! Papa!
Graham: Call me Daddy. :3

Panel 2

And as the memories moved on...

Clyde: Ooohhh....I am feeling IT! I am seeing the light! Leti! Wear these glasses!
Leti: Huh... *puts on glasses*
Clyde: MOE~~~~~! Lindy, I cannot wait any longer!
Lindy: Clyde-kun, what do you need so late at nigh-WHOAH! *gets jumped on*

Panel 3

Chrono: Father's inheritance? Wear it when once you've come of age? ....OHHH~!!!!! I have found my calling!
Fate: Onii-chan?
Chrono: That's right! That's the way! *records it and loops it*
Amy: Chrono?
Chrono: Amy! You're like an older sister to me! I- *jumps on her*

Panel 4

Soon...it will come to you...

Chrono: ENJOY IT, ELIO! FOR SOON! YOU TOO SHALL SEE TEH LIGHT!
Elio: Huh...
Chrono: You will be the successor!
Amy/Fate: Successor of what, Dear/Onii-chan?
Chrono: SHIT! *dissapears*

~~~

Fetish Preferences

Graham : - Furry twin daughter-types
Clyde : - Capable business wifey-woman types.
Chrono : - Sister types, one elder-ish, and another non-blood-related-younger-sister-moe
Elio : - COMING SOON...

...........@_@!

WEll for my story it's.....

Spoiler for Elio's mask in 6th D :P:

Two hot chicks at the same time

[Edit]: OMG, Nightengale, grats on the 2,000th post!

[krisslanza]

Satashi-sama... You haven't happened to have watched Transformers now would you?

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Satashi-sama... You haven't happened to have watched Transformers now would you?

First showing opening day :P

Also watching the AVI right now * munches popcorn*

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

First showing opening day :P

Also watching the AVI right now * munches popcorn*

That's just so cute

Excellent "Vivio's high school days" Satashi-san You must make this a fic It's so funny I'd laugh if I wasn't in so much trouble T_T

[USB500]

@ Satashi: those short stories were brilliant! I had a good dose of laughter reading them.

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Diary of a Windtalker
Status: Charter 5, Part II
Progress: 60%
Note: see preview below.

Spoiler for length:

“A cat?”

Both Nanoha and Fate nodded as to answer yes. Ginga scratched the back of her head and looked around, as if she had noticed something peculiar. Nanoha and Fate warily waited, and the anticipation rose as Ginga turned back to them.

“Well?” they asked.

“I think I may have seen one, but--” Ginga’s words were cut off when Nanoha and Fate bombarded her with questions regarding Fuuko, including descriptions on the lunar cat. “Ah! You must be talking about that fork-tailed cat, right?”

“Yes! Yes!” Nanoha and Fate replied. “So where did you see it?”

“Let me see…” Ginga put a finger upon her cheek and stared upward, thinking or remembering something. “I saw it-- ettou… what’s its name?”

“Fuuko,” Nanoha told her.

“I saw Fuuko entering the kitchen minutes ago,” Ginga said. “It must be looking for something to eat--”

“Let’s go, Fate-chan!”

Ginga was left with lots of questions circling around her head as Nanoha and Fate rushed to the said location without thanking her. She did not the chance to ask what had happened, and was dumbfounded for a few seconds. “Oh, well.” She resumed her trip to Officer Nakajima’s officer; she noticed a peculiar-looking tail jutting out of the T-junction. “That must be Fuuko.” Slowly she approached the tail from the behind but it disappeared without a trace. “Are? I thought it was here just now--”

“Meow.”

Ginga turned around. There it was, the fork-tailed lunar cat Nanoha and Fate were looking for. “Oh, hello, Fuuko-chan,” Ginga greeted. “Nanoha and Fate were looking for you just now.”

“Meow.”

“What’s the matter? Is there something wrong?” Ginga asked and approached Fuuko. The lunar cat’s response was playful as it pounced at the woman, trying to grab her leg. Ginga squealed in surprise and stepped back from Fuuko. “Fuuko-chan, what are you trying to do?” Fuuko meowed and jumped at Ginga again; this time it got leg and licked it, causing Ginga to gasp in shock. “Fuuko-chan, dame!” Ginga let go off the cat and ran down the alley; Fuuko merely meowed and chased after Ginga. The woman was heard whimpering in suggestive cries as she tried outrunning the lunar cat. “Iyaa! Dareka!”

They happened to run past several passing TSAB officers. Hearing her distressed cry caused them to rush toward her, only to be greeted by a scene like nothing else.

// ENTERING THEIR HEAD //

Ginga was laughing as she ran down the road. Her face was filled with expression of happiness and bliss, and there was bubbly effects surrounding her as she playfully outran Fuuko. “Ikuyo, Fuuko-chan!” she called out between her laughs.

“Meow…!” was Fuuko’s only reply

The two kept running and outrunning each other, oblivious of what was really happening around them.

// LEAVING THEIR HEAD //

Male officers nosebled and threw their fists into the air. “FUUKO-CHAN SAIKKO DESU!” they roared in approval. “BANZAI! BANZAI!”

Their female colleagues bashed the boys’ head with metal harisen. “BAAKA HENTAI!” they shouted.

“We aren’t doing anything!” male officers replied and were again hit on the head.

What do you think?

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The Whistling Gale
Lyrical of Time
Status: Charter 2
Progress: 35%
Note: just resumed working on it after 2-month hiatus. Nothing much is going to be featured in the chapter, with the exception of Yuuno as the first half of the chapter's main focus. Then the story switches to Alexandra's first day of training at the bureau as a recruit.

[FlareKnight]

Geeze go out for a bit (nothing like a midnight movie showing) and miss commenting on the cool Vivio fic getting going. Really great stuff. Gotta feel for Vivio having cool Mom's but also having Mom's that could vaporize any potential boyfriends...gotta be rough.

But good on Erio, seems like things are working out just fine there .

[Dark Wing]

Originally Posted by Dark Wing

Oh man I wanted to a teenage Vivio fic...oh well i guess I switch over to Vivio fic plan B.

I said that I'd do it so I did it...and if anyone thinks it's bad. I'll stop it right now and try rework it.

Spoiler for For Magical Girl Lyrical Vivio Part 1:

The light of Mid-chlida’s twin moons through the starry night sky while a the cool night air blow over the abandon warehouse district. Nothing could be heard except for the echoing footsteps of a young blond haired girl, wearing a plain brown uniform with the TSAB insignia imprinted on it. Her face particlely hidden by shadow of large buildings surrounding her. As her scanned the area with her multi for any signs of movement she heard familiar female voice speak to her telepathically.

“Vivio?...Vivio can you hear me?” The Fate asked in her usual kind and gentle tone.

“Ai, Fate-mama there is no signs of activity that I can see.” The young blond replied as she rounded slowly rounded a corner. “ Are we sure this is the right places?”

“Well according to the intelligence we gathered the facility manufacturing the illegal arm should be near you now.” Fate said while peering into her monitor, which showed both RF: 6 mobile base and Vivio’s locations.

Vivio turned another corner when she noticed something odd. One of the supposedly abandoned warehouses was dimly lit and muffled sounds of machinery could be head form where she was standing.

“Fate-mama I think I found it.” Vivio said relaying the message to her mother. “I’m going to check it out okay.”

“Alright…and Vivio please be careful.” The young mother said with worry in her voice. “Remember me and Nanoha are here on stand by if you need us.”

Vivio shook slowly her head while smiling. “Don’t Fate-mama I’m not a baby anymore I can do this.” As the mage quietly moved closer to the warehouse she could hear Fate let out a small sigh.

“You know you’ve become more and more like Nanoha everyday.” The crimson-eyed woman said with a slit smile. “ Okay I’m breaking communication just contact us if you need anything Vivio.”

“Roger that Vivio out.” This was the last thing Fate heard before in her chair and once again letting out a sigh of worry to which the lovely red head next to her could help but smiled and say. ”Fate-mama worrying like always.”

The blond beauty pouted as she turned to face her life long friend and lover. “Nanoha are you sure she’s really ready to mission like this on her own?” Fate asked with a serious yet worried tone in her voice.

Nanoha seeing the worried look on her loves face moves closer and placed her hand over hers. “Fate we discussed this already Vivio is 12-years-old now we can’t hold her hand forever.” Fate gave Nanoha a small nod. “I know that but still…”

Nanoha cupped Fate’s cheek and smiled “Remember you, me, and Hayate trained her so I know she’s strong enough for this, Besides I don’t remember you getting this worked up when Caro-chan and Eiro-kun took their first solo missions.” She said with a teasing tone.

Fate gave her another pout. “Well Caro and Eiro never did anything this dangerous for their first solo missions.” She said in a defensive voice. “And yes I know who powerful she is but it still doesn’t make it easier for me, I mean what if they have an AMF or something?”

Nanoha pressed her finger over Fate’s lips and smiled. “That’s why we gave her the AMF jammer and I know how you feel…” Nanoha looked down at their joined hands before look back up again. “I’m a bit worried myself but have faith in her abilities after all she is our daughter.”

Fate closed her eye and took a deep breath before replying. “Okay but if anything goes wrong we’re pulling her out.” Nanoha laughed a little and smiled. “Okay…”


Vivio rounded the building making her way to the front as quietly as she could. As she stood in next to the huge metal sliding door that was slightly ajar she turned her head to pick inside. There she could see machines spouting out very firearm imaginable and probably more being stored in lager metal containers stored in the back.

“Alright no doubt about it this is it.” The young enforcer said as her pulled a small red jewel form around her neck. It was a red sphere that hung form a simple brown string, two golden rings where wrapped around it with ancient Velkan etched in each.

“How may I be of assistance to you this evening Vivio-sama?” The gem in a famine tone asked as it was being held in the moonlight. Vivio smiled at her intelligent device born from a mix of both her mothers and Hayate’s devices it was the perfect mix of all three. “It’s time to go to work Twilight Fury.”

“Okay…” the device replied as Vivio started give her activation command. “Twilight Fury…Ready!” Vivio held her device upward as it began to shine and say in it’s robotic voice. “Stand By Ready…” “Set Up!” The duel eyed blond commanded.

“Lets go people! We have to have this stuff out of here before the shipment leav…” The arms dealer was cut as the door to the warehouse were blown open. When the smoke cleared Vivio stood in front of the entrance dressed in a white dress, decorated with gold crosses, and black trim. With her staff still pointing in the direction of where the door once stood she spoke.

“You are all under arrest for the violation of TSAB treating number 001-321, the illegal manufacturing, sell, and distribution of conventional weapons!” As she was saying this the young enforcer took a few steps forward into the warehouse. “Surrender now and come peacefully or…I’ll have no chose but to use force to restrain you.” With these words a black seal formed on the ground beneath her as she started to float off the ground. “So which is it going to be?”

To Be Continued...

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Satashi

...........@_@!

WEll for my story it's.....

Spoiler for Elio's mask in 6th D :P:

Two hot chicks at the same time

[Edit]: OMG, Nightengale, grats on the 2,000th post!

Shouldn't it be....

Spoiler for Erio's fetish:

Two hot summoners at the same time?

Congratulations on the 2k get, Nightengale!

Originally Posted by Dark Wing

I said that I'd do it so I did it...and if anyone thinks it's bad. I'll stop it right now and try rework it.

Spoiler for For Magical Girl Lyrical Vivio Part 1:

The light of Mid-chlida’s twin moons through the starry night sky while a the cool night air blow over the abandon warehouse district. Nothing could be heard except for the echoing footsteps of a young blond haired girl, wearing a plain brown uniform with the TSAB insignia imprinted on it. Her face particlely hidden by shadow of large buildings surrounding her. As her scanned the area with her multi for any signs of movement she heard familiar female voice speak to her telepathically.

“Vivio?...Vivio can you hear me?” The Fate asked in her usual kind and gentle tone.

“Ai, Fate-mama there is no signs of activity that I can see.” The young blond replied as she rounded slowly rounded a corner. “ Are we sure this is the right places?”

“Well according to the intelligence we gathered the facility manufacturing the illegal arm should be near you now.” Fate said while peering into her monitor, which showed both RF: 6 mobile base and Vivio’s locations.

Vivio turned another corner when she noticed something odd. One of the supposedly abandoned warehouses was dimly lit and muffled sounds of machinery could be head form where she was standing.

“Fate-mama I think I found it.” Vivio said relaying the message to her mother. “I’m going to check it out okay.”

“Alright…and Vivio please be careful.” The young mother said with worry in her voice. “Remember me and Nanoha are here on stand by if you need us.”

Vivio shook slowly her head while smiling. “Don’t Fate-mama I’m not a baby anymore I can do this.” As the mage quietly moved closer to the warehouse she could hear Fate let out a small sigh.

“You know you’ve become more and more like Nanoha everyday.” The crimson-eyed woman said with a slit smile. “ Okay I’m breaking communication just contact us if you need anything Vivio.”

“Roger that Vivio out.” This was the last thing Fate heard before in her chair and once again letting out a sigh of worry to which the lovely red head next to her could help but smiled and say. ”Fate-mama worrying like always.”

The blond beauty pouted as she turned to face her life long friend and lover. “Nanoha are you sure she’s really ready to mission like this on her own?” Fate asked with a serious yet worried tone in her voice.

Nanoha seeing the worried look on her loves face moves closer and placed her hand over hers. “Fate we discussed this already Vivio is 12-years-old now we can’t hold her hand forever.” Fate gave Nanoha a small nod. “I know that but still…”

Nanoha cupped Fate’s cheek and smiled “Remember you, me, and Hayate trained her so I know she’s strong enough for this, Besides I don’t remember you getting this worked up when Caro-chan and Eiro-kun took their first solo missions.” She said with a teasing tone.

Fate gave her another pout. “Well Caro and Eiro never did anything this dangerous for their first solo missions.” She said in a defensive voice. “And yes I know who powerful she is but it still doesn’t make it easier for me, I mean what if they have an AMF or something?”

Nanoha pressed her finger over Fate’s lips and smiled. “That’s why we gave her the AMF jammer and I know how you feel…” Nanoha looked down at their joined hands before look back up again. “I’m a bit worried myself but have faith in her abilities after all she is our daughter.”

Fate closed her eye and took a deep breath before replying. “Okay but if anything goes wrong we’re pulling her out.” Nanoha laughed a little and smiled. “Okay…”


Vivio rounded the building making her way to the front as quietly as she could. As she stood in next to the huge metal sliding door that was slightly ajar she turned her head to pick inside. There she could see machines spouting out very firearm imaginable and probably more being stored in lager metal containers stored in the back.

“Alright no doubt about it this is it.” The young enforcer said as her pulled a small red jewel form around her neck. It was a red sphere that hung form a simple brown string, two golden rings where wrapped around it with ancient Velkan etched in each.

“How may I be of assistance to you this evening Vivio-sama?” The gem in a famine tone asked as it was being held in the moonlight. Vivio smiled at her intelligent device born from a mix of both her mothers and Hayate’s devices it was the perfect mix of all three. “It’s time to go to work Twilight Fury.”

“Okay…” the device replied as Vivio started give her activation command. “Twilight Fury…Ready!” Vivio held her device upward as it began to shine and say in it’s robotic voice. “Stand By Ready…” “Set Up!” The duel eyed blond commanded.

“Lets go people! We have to have this stuff out of here before the shipment leav…” The arms dealer was cut as the door to the warehouse were blown open. When the smoke cleared Vivio stood in front of the entrance dressed in a white dress, decorated with gold crosses, and black trim. With her staff still pointing in the direction of where the door once stood she spoke.

“You are all under arrest for the violation of TSAB treating number 001-321, the illegal manufacturing, sell, and distribution of conventional weapons!” As she was saying this the young enforcer took a few steps forward into the warehouse. “Surrender now and come peacefully or…I’ll have no chose but to use force to restrain you.” With these words a black seal formed on the ground beneath her as she started to float off the ground. “So which is it going to be?”

To Be Continued...

Interesting. Your using the Vivio image in your avatar and sig as a reference, right? So far, the story is fine, the characters are not being out of character regarding Vivio, and the next part is definitely a must see.

The grammar needs some work, but it's really nothing to worry about much because it can easily be fixed. Please continue.

[Jimmy C]

Dark Wing, good story idea. But I see a number of punctuation, grammatical and typo errors. If you're going to develop this further, please be more careful.

[Julius Firefocht]

Originally Posted by Kha

Looks impressive, and I like the idea that this could turn into a full table top.

In the OC thread, my OC, Kha Alexei Testarossa, is the last of the Holy Velka Imperium's "Light of Velka", which is the equivalent of the Imperium's Ordo Maelleus. I can contribute him to be a famous "Brother-Captain" in Haruhi's Grey Knights, if she has them.

And not just him; there are several characters that I've created or incorporated using the Imperial Guard "rojak" model, and those can fit into your storyline lock stock and barrel too! What do ya think?

Sure, I have not yet finalized the Legions involved in this project, but the Grey Knights have a high chance of being among them. I would also be willing to accept any character that fits into the storyline.

[Liingo]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for If Vivio was in high school......:

"So, um," Vivio looked up at nervously at the male in front of her and rocked on her heels, hands fumbling nervously at the hem of her high school cheer leader uniform. "The d-dance is coming up this Friday..."

"Yeah," The football captain nodded at her, wondering why the new girl on the cheerleading squad was talking to him. "Oh, you're Vivio right?"

"Y-yeah!" she nodded. "You remembered my name..."

"Sure, it's the, um," He coughed. "your eyes. People say your name alot."

"Oh..." She looked down. "So anyway, I was wondering... Do you have a date... for the dance yet?" She blushed darkly, trying to look at him again.

"Oh, well, you know," He put a hand behind his head, trying to find a way to tastefully turn her down.

"Yo man!" A new voice came up, grabbing the male around around shoulders and dragging him off. "There's this sick ride out front! You have to check it out, sounds like twin turbo and it screams!"

"A car?" He looked out the window on the door and gasped out. "Fsking SWEET! check that custom paint job!"

"Wa-wait..." Vivio chased after him quickly. Once she got outside of her highschool she came up behind the two sports players and looked where their eyes were, seeing Fate leaning against her car in full enforcer uniform.

"Check out those legs!" One of the men whistled. "God I'd like to get a piece of that!"

"Chicks in uniform!" The one Vivio was talking to earlier grinned. "Dude, military recruits at age ten, She has to meet the age limits of the dance, I'm gonna ask her out!"

"She has to be at least twenty two man!" His friend laughed. "No way you'll score with a college chick!"

"Watch me," He took a few steps forward but stopped when Vivio got infront of him. "Sorry, Vivio, I have plans for the dance."

The multi-colored eyed girl reared back and slapped the man hard, making his face rip to the side. "That's my mother you creep!" With a humph she turned to storm over towards Fate. "Thanks for picking me up Mom."

"No problem hun." Fate watched her daughter sulk over to the passenger side and climb in so she got in as well. "You seem a little tense."

"Why are guys such jerk!?" She instantly complained when Fate tore out of the parking lot like a bat out of hell. "I was SO close to asking the team captain to the dance and he just brushed me right off for a more attractive woman!"

"Aw, you're very attractive sweetheart! You don't even wear make up and you won the last beauty pageant!"

"You won't let me wear make up," She reminded her.

"Oh shush, you don't need it."

"I'm going to be dateless!"

"You'll find someone!"

Vivio sighed. "Mom did you ever go to a school dance without a date before?"

"I think the real question is did I even go to a school dance."

"You didn't?"

Fate grinned at the memory. "We tried to but we had a scramble the day before and didn't get back till it was over. Guys are over rated anyway, all they want is sex."

"Yeah but still...I want one. Everyone just avoids me, even after I made cheerleader."

"Don't worry hun, you'll find that special someone."

"I'm going to die a virgin." Vivio looked out the car window sadly. "I just know it."

"You'll make your mother happy."

"MOM! That's not a good thing!" She felt like hitting Fate as she laughed happily. "Mou."

To be continued....

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Vivio: High school Days part 2:

Vivio tossed her backpack next to a barstool and hopped up onto it, letting her ankle length hair spill out behind her. "Service!" She called out loudly, tapping the tabletop. "What does a girl have to do to get some drinks around here, huh!?"

Elio peeked out from the storage room and grinned at Vivio. "Hey there sis, how was school?"

"Sucked," She put her cheek on her palm and propped her elbow up on the table. "I don't have a date yet."

"Aw, poor baby." He ruffled her hair before jumping back at her swat.

"I hate when you do that!"

"I know," Elio gave her his classic grin. Tossing his long pony tail over his shoulder , he started making Vivio a non-alcoholic daiquiri. "So, what brings my little sister to Fuji's?"

"Elio, have you ever had a situation where you had to ask a girl out but wasn't sure how to do it?"

"Uhhhhh, can't say that I have." He winced when Vivio's forehead smacked the counter top sadly. "But I never went to school so I don't know how those things work. Uhm, so no one has asked you?"

"No."

"Cheer up," He placed the drink in front of her and watched her look up a moment before starting to drink. "Why don't you just go with some of your friends? Do they all have dates?"

"None of them do." She closed her eyes and sighed out yet again.

"You're really pretty, aren't you popular at school?" He started making a drink for someone else who just sat down.

"I am, but all the 'popular kids' are jerks so I spend my time with the nice people. That along with my parents spell out 'total loser' for me."

A new voice came up. "You're not a loser, Vivio-chan."

"Caro-chan!" Vivio hugged her friend. "And Lutecia-chan too!" She hugged the purple haired girl as well. "Hey, Lutecia-chan, how did you get Elio to pay attention to you?"

"Kidnapped him and held him prisoner for a month," She told her non-nonchalantly. "Eli-chan, can I get a martini please?"

"Comin' up sweet cheeks." He gasped. "Ah, sorry, been around Kuhn too long."

"Come on, I'm serious here!" Vivio pleaded.

"So am I," Lutecia smiled at her.

Vivio sank back a moment and turned to Caro. "You'll be serious with me right? How did you get his attention?"

"Summoned a five story tall dragon and caught a back alley on fire while enchanting him with mystical armor."

Vivio let her head hit the counter again "Why don't I have any normal people in my family?"

Kuhn made his appearance then. "Elio, you staying long today?"

"All day, why?"

"BIG night," The blue haired man spun around Elio and started checking supplies. "I just got a call, the local police force's new training members came back from section six and are going to hold a party here, we're going to be over packed, and Atoli has the flu! Haseo is going to be worked to death." Looking up, he noticed the three girls at the bar. "Well helllllooooooooo ladies!"

~**~

"Why am I doing this!?" Vivio cried out nervously as she weaved in and out of people while holding a platter of food above her head.

"You look cute in the waitress outfit!" Caro cheered at her as she served a table a round of drinks.

Vivio smiled overly happily at the group of men at the table. "Here is your food gentlemen!" After setting the plates down she winked and giggled at them. "Anything else, nya ha?" The people shook their heads at her, all grinning dumbly, before she bowed and trotted off back into the kitchen. "Ugh, gag me, why do I always attract people twice my age?"

"People dig small girls," Elio teased her.

"I'm growing! I'm only six-teen"

"Yeah, you may hit five feet soon!" He laughed merrily before going back out to tend to his bar.

"Grrrr, I swear one day I'm going to chop that pony tail of yours off!"

"Vivio-chan!" Kuhn's voice called out. "Table five please!"

"Yes sir!"

~**~

"So no date yet?" Nanoha asked her sleepy daughter around midnight when she finally called it quits and called to pick her up.

Vivio leaned her seat back and closed her eyes tiredly. "They're all either complete jerk-offs or only want sex."

"That's a teenager for you."

"Hey," She turned to look over at her second mother. "Nanoha-mama, Did you and Fate-mama date in high school?"

"The very end of it, yes. Quite a commotion back on earth, they don't really accept same-sex relationships like they do here on Midchilda."

"Was it hard back then?" She observed her mother. Nanoha kept her hair in a braid now but it went clear to her waist where it tied off with a large fluffy blue ribbon. Despite being almost thirty-three she still appeared to be in her early twenties with a toned body that just wouldn't stop even when she stood still. "Did a lot of guys hit on you?"

"Oh no," She laughed happily. "The only guys in my life were my best friends and they all had other interest. "I got lucky with Fate is all. Don't worry, hun, you'll get a date."

"Promise me you won't scare them off when they come get me?"

"Vivio! When have I ever embarrassed you like that?"

"You threatened to Starlight Breaker the last guy who had the nerve to ask me out to get ice cream! In the middle of the day! And he was gay!"

"Oh yeah, I forgot..."

"Mou, Nanoha-mama, I'll never get anywhere if you don't let me have some freedom!"

"You have lots of freedom!"

"You won't let me get a car!"

"Because you went behind my back and got a driver's license."

"Fate-mama took me!"

"Yeah, well, I didn't agree." She puffed out her cheeks.

"And you don't let me wear make up!"

Nanoha looked over at her. "I never wore make up until I was almost twenty."

"And you come in my room without knocking!"

"What, were you doing something you don't want me to see?"

"If you never let me get a boyfriend I won't have a choice now will I!?"

"You're too young to be thinking about sex."

"How old were you when you had your first time?"

"That's not important."

"Fourteen from what Yuuno-san told me!"

Nanoha flushed. "Ohhh, I'm gonna get that ferret...."

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Vivio: High School days part 3:

Vivio turned around in the shower, lathering her hair up with shampoo as she sang happily. “I wish that you were my lollipop, sweet things I will never get enough! If you show me to the sugar tree, will you give me a soda pop for free?” Her song died got louder when she started rinsing out the giant mass of hair that she possessed. It was almost seven in the morning now, a good hour and a half past when everyone else on the military base woke up, giving her the showers all to herself. Once done she dried herself off and pulled her hair up into a type of turban after getting some clothes on and heading back to the room she had to herself. Despite not being military she still lived on base, given one of the forward rooms by Hayate as a present for becoming thirteen. Although she spent most of her time in her mother's large apartment she still had a place to call her own.

'Today is going to be a good day,' She thought to herself after getting into her room and drying her hair with a blow dryer. 'Cheerleader practice after school so I can't forget my uniform... What else? Oh yeah, Sarah wanted to get a study group together and...Is that knocking?' Vivio turned to the door and cut off her hair dryer, hearing a steady knock on her door. Trotting over to it, she opened it up to find her mothers. “Good morning.”

“About time,” Nanoha sighed. “We've been knocking for five minutes.”

“Couldn't be, I havn't been here for five minutes!”

“Nanoha, teenagers need a little privacy,” Fate whispered to her.

“Yes, see, I like that.” Vivio pointed to Fate. “Listen to Fate-mama, I need privacy sometimes.”

“You know the rules, no locking your door to us,” Nanoha countered.

“I must have set it on lock all by accident Nanoha-mama, I didn't mean to lock you out. Besides, what if I wanted to be alone?”

“Oh!” Fate blushed. “She was probably masturbating,”

“Fate!” Nanoha scolded her. “Don't say that!”

“I can hear you!” Vivio almost screamed. “ I was not doing that! I'm sixteen, not twelve, if I was you don't need to know about it!”

“Oh, I'm sorry sweetheart,” Fate apologized. “WE don't have to call it that if it makes you uncomfortable. How about... 'Vivio's happy time'?”

Nanoha looked at Fate in shock. “Fate, stop while you're behind.”

Vivio blushed darkly, grabbing her backpack. “Just take me to school, please!”

“I'm sorry Vivio-dear!” Fate ran to catch up with her. “I didn't mean to embarrass you!”

“Just drop it!” She pleaded loudly, still red.

~**~

“God, I can't believe my parents,” Vivio complained sadly when she sat at the lunchroom table. “Whenever Nanoha-mama pesters me, Fate-mama tries to help and ends up embarrassing the life out of me. It never fails!” Groaning she opened her lunch box and couldn't help but smile at the deluxe lunch special that the two of them made for her. “If I didn't love them to pieces, I'd run away, I swear.”

“Whatever,” Sarah, a blond that shared a class with Vivio, rolled her eyes. “You go on and on about how awesome they are all the time, it's really quite funny.”

“I do not go on and on about them!”

“Whatever,” A new person sat down. “Vivio is a mama's girl through and through.”

“Jazz-chan!” Vivio sent her second best friend a death glare when she stole some of her food. The girl nicknamed 'Jazz' had light blue hair and matching eyes. Although popular enough to hang out with anyone at the school thanks to her legendary dancing skills, she chose to spend her time with Vivio and Sarah.

A boy made his way over to the group slowly and waved at them when close enough. “Um, hello girls.”

“Rin-kun,” Vivio greeted the class president. “What can we do for you?”

“Well, Vivio-san,” He began nervously, looking over to the side where three boys all gave him a thumbs up. “I was thinking...That we could go to the dance together if you wanted?”

Vivio almost dropped her chopsticks. “You're asking me to the dance!?”

“If-you-have-someone-else-already-I-understand!” His sentence blurred in on itself in his hurry to speak it.

“No! No, I'm free! I'll go with you!” She almost yelled it out, making the people close around them all turn and stare.

“Great! Well then, I'll, um, pick you up at six Friday then?”

“Yeah! I mean, um, yes. Six sounds good.” Vivio nodded at him.

“Then... I'll see you later!” He turned and waved at her before quickly darting over to his group of people.

“Rin-kun?” Jazz pondered while nibbling on her sandwich. “Well, I guess that's okay. He is rather cute.”

“I hate a date!” Vivio squealed out happily. “Oh my god, I have a date!” Her words sudden sounded horrified. “I don't know how to dance! Jazz-chan, teach me!”

“What, me?” She pointed to herself. “I can't, I have after school activities you know that! By the time your cheer leading is over and my clubs are done you have to get to the base, my house is across town!”

“Oh no! I only have two days! What do I do!?”

Sarah pondered it. “Wait, isn't Subaru-san a great dancer?”

Vivio's eyes went wide. “Subaru-san and Tia-san! They'll know what to do!

~**~

A twenty seven year old Subaru skated circles around the drones on the training field and took them out with a solid blast from her fist. Her short hair blew lightly in the wind as she slowed down and turned to the people watching. “And that is how you take care of a group of drones at the same time,” She instructed. “Break into teams and go over the strategy, be prepared to diminstrate it to me in ten minutes!” She got saluted and turned away to walk over to the other side of the field where Tia was flying around through the imitation city shooting practice targets. “Tiaaaaa!”

“Hm?” The gunslinger twirled her pistols, forming them together into a shotgun type device and blasted a small group of her zig-zagging targets. Once clear she turned her weapon again and turned it into a sniper rifle, shooting a beam across the area and blasting the last target. “What's up, Subaru?”

“I suddenly had a weird feeling, did you?”

“Ah, I did.” Tia landed and felt her waist length hair fall around her, being held at the end with a black ribbon. “Vivio is probably plotting something again...”

Where do you come up with these story lines...*holds up jealous sign*

Getting rejected over Fate....ow that must hurt.

Waitress....happen to have a picture handy....

Lol so it's 'do as i say' not 'do as i did' in the family....

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Julius Firefocht

Sure, I have not yet finalized the Legions involved in this project, but the Grey Knights have a high chance of being among them. I would also be willing to accept any character that fits into the storyline.

Great! Now to get to work on another Bluecheesium bomb... Liingo! Help me! And does Darco do WH40K too?

[Liingo]

Originally Posted by Kha

Great! Now to get to work on another Bluecheesium bomb... Liingo! Help me! And does Darco do WH40K too?

Help you with what.... I've already done my 40k/nanoha crossover with Akilae

I just have to work on his backstory to explain why Akilae is there now.

I don't think so.

[Kha]

CrosyS has been updated! Track 7 at 50%, and First Lightning, the prequel coming soon!

[Jimmy C]

I think we could use a master database for the fics on this discussion, like the one on the OC discussion. Instead of directly linking to each fic, I propose that the database will link to a post maintained by an author here that lists their fics on this discussion. That way, the maintainer of the master databse only needs to add new authors, the authors themselves will update their own listings. I believe this will be faster and more flexible than the master database on the OC discussion. Thoughts?

[Satashi]

@Dark Wing oh noes you have the same siggy as me D: (gonna read ficcy in a few hours, getting ready to go watch Harry Potter)

@Liingo: Hehe, Vivio as a waitress is a spiffy mental image isn't it? As for where I get the ideas.....this one came out of the blue while while watching Transformers the movie lol! The main guy is kinda a dork so it jsut randomly hit me, "What would Vivio be like in high school?" and I pictured her as the kinda very pretty outcast but still somehow popular ( hence cheerleader but hanging out with the 'common' group of people isntead of the popular bratty snobs :P )

@FlareKnight: Yeah, poor Vivio Nanoha really wouldn't hesitate to make that fact known and poor Fate just wants to help but ends up embarrassing her

@USB-chan new stuff! I'll read as soon as I'm back from movie theature!

Vivio:High school days part 4:
status :0%
ETA: This afternoon

[seaotter]

as usual satashi writes out stuff that 1. is gorgeous 2. delicious to read 3. cracks people up.

Satashi - when are you going to like make the shorts here on a page somewhere? maybe in text form so we can leech it off?

[Dark Wing]

Originally Posted by Jimmy C

Dark Wing, good story idea. But I see a number of punctuation, grammatical and typo errors. If you're going to develop this further, please be more careful.

Well in my defense I was still half sleep with I started writing this so I kind of figured I would miss a few errors. It also would seem that Microsoft Word is the best program for checking spelling or grammar errors.

Anyway your I'm going to have to look over all my mistakes before I can continue any further.

Originally Posted by Satashi

oh noes you have the same siggy as me D: (gonna read ficcy in a few hours, getting ready to go watch Harry Potter)

Don't worry this is only a temp sig my Vivio turned out to be two big so I was forced to change it. I'll switch over to my new one when it's ready.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by seaotter

as usual satashi writes out stuff that 1. is gorgeous 2. delicious to read 3. cracks people up.

Satashi - when are you going to like make the shorts here on a page somewhere? maybe in text form so we can leech it off?

I post them all under "SNL a digital short" on fanfiction.net. I'm just lazy updating it hehe

Originally Posted by Dark Wing

Well in my defense I was still half sleep with I started writing this so I kind of figured I would miss a few errors. It also would seem that Microsoft Word is the best program for checking spelling or grammar errors.

Anyway your I'm going to have to look over all my mistakes before I can continue any further.

Don't worry this is only a temp sig my Vivio turned out to be two big so I was forced to change it. I'll switch over to my new one when it's ready.

Here's some advice from someone who makes a TON of spelling erros: Use Open Office, you can download it for free from fanfiction.net . Unlike Microsoft word, you can have multiple spell corrections for a single word. AKA, you can have Nanha,Nanaha,Nanoa, and the likes all auto correct to "Nanoha", while Microsoft word will only allow one of them to do it. So once you set it to auto correct your common typos you won't have to spellcheck but like 1 minute before it's ready to go. It doens't have a grammar check tho >.<

And I was kidding about your siggy :P tho, the Vivio one kicks major butt

[Edit] @USB-chan: Funny Chasing a kitty always = funny

[krisslanza]

I write all my fanfiction in Wordpad xD
It just tends to have grammer errors and I just Firefox for spell checking. XD