SOTM 2008 - November (Military) - Entry Phase

[Drake]

My first attempt =]

C&C please !

[KiNA]

A tad jerky snowfall IMO. +1 more frame maybe?

[Drake]

I had to cut it down to just 3 frames so i could keep it under the limit without losing image quality (which i just about managed) and TBH even with 1 more frame its pretty much the same anyway i need at least another 2 on top to get it smooth.

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[crazyhorse]

Originally Posted by Drake

My first attempt =]

C&C please !

It's really hard for me to see it going down. At first I didn't even really know it was snow since it was like going to the right really fast. So yeah too fast snowfall. You can make it smaller to decrease file size. It's a little better than lowering quality overall.

[P.G.]

indeed everyone has very good entries

btw, tried to do a possible entry on trial, still can't figure out what's missing. so any help~?


edited:
guess she's a bit blurry too eh~

[The_Artist]

Originally Posted by P.G.

indeed everyone has very good entries

btw, tried to do a possible entry on trial, still can't figure out what's missing. so any help~?


edited:
guess she's a bit blurry too eh~

You could try sharpening and erasing the bad parts. Everything else is alright.. nice and smooth.

As for mine:

Any fixes, comments, or suggestions?

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Drake

My first attempt =]

C&C please !

The snow moves a bit too fats but I think that you couldn't do it slower and keep it under AS limits so is not your fault

Is a nice sig overall

Originally Posted by P.G.

indeed everyone has very good entries

btw, tried to do a possible entry on trial, still can't figure out what's missing. so any help~?


edited:
guess she's a bit blurry too eh~

Yeah, a bit blurry but the sig is overall okay

[NorthernFallout]

Changing back..AGAIN.
FINAL ENTRY

[Kana Futayo]

1st draft, CnC appreciated.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Sacchin

1st draft, CnC appreciated.

Hmmm... the text is kinda cool but overall it's just a simple sig

[Evil Rick]

Final Entry



EDIT: Any coment will be most apreciated

[The_Artist]

Originally Posted by Sacchin

1st draft, CnC appreciated.

Possibly add C4Ds in there? it looks a bit too simplistic.

[Terrestrial Dream]

Originally Posted by Drake

My first attempt =]

C&C please !

Originally Posted by P.G.

indeed everyone has very good entries

btw, tried to do a possible entry on trial, still can't figure out what's missing. so any help~?


edited:
guess she's a bit blurry too eh~

Lol I am amazed that you guys could make such a cute sigs with the military theme . But seriously both of those works are really good. And Drake I think if you could make the snow better the sig would improve a lot.

[KiNA]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Final Entry



EDIT: Any coment will be most apreciated

Fire still looks a bit weird to me.

And TD , Military theme and you not going to make gundam siggy?

[Terrestrial Dream]

Originally Posted by KiNA

Fire still looks a bit weird to me.

And TD , Military theme and you not going to make gundam siggy?

I should make Gundam or any other war theme mech sig , but kinda lost my motivation . Still I probably will make one or I will just use that Zeon sig that I posted even though I made it while ago.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by KiNA

Fire still looks a bit weird to me.

Any advice then?

[KiNA]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Any advice then?

Smaller .. and make the middle as focus (as in the sides -top and bottom part) not as huge .. Hard to explain without example :/ .. better try and google some bullet fire picture.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by KiNA

Smaller .. and make the middle as focus (as in the sides -top and bottom part) not as huge .. Hard to explain without example :/ .. better try and google some bullet fire picture.

Thanks

I will leave that as my Final Entry though, unless I improve it

[Daniel E.]

Originally Posted by P.G.

btw, tried to do a possible entry on trial, still can't figure out what's missing. so any help~?


edited:
guess she's a bit blurry too eh~

My favorite so far!

Don't mind the blurriness one bit.

[zSolaris]

Temporary Entry (just in case I don't have time to make anything else):



Its pretty old but it'll do as a temporary. My final will probably look nothing like it. XD