Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Naolin]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

Second, this is kinda new for me but i wanted to give it a try anyway. I am a whole FateNanoha shipper through and through, but i really like the idea of Fatenum / Nanovita. Anyway i thought i'd write a short ficlet, possible continuity, but wanted some feedback

Spoiler for Untitled Ficlet:

Sparks of yellow, closely followed by streaks of pink interlaced across the sky, shockwave after shockwave relentlessly pounded the world around them. A large clap of thunder signalled a break in the spar between the two mages. Rain poured around them, the black clouds blocking out nearly all light save for the random bright flashes of lightning. Both were panting heavily, the duel going on far longer than either expected, yet neither wanting to give in.

Blonde tresses whipped violently in the wind, a look of determination still upon her face. No words had been exchanged since the fight began, yet suddenly the opponent speaks.

“What’s wrong Testarossa?”

Signum has known all along that in the beginning, their duels were for pride and honour, but in more recent times, Fate used them as a way for venting stress. Signum knew something was wrong, it was whether Fate would tell her or not.

Fate mulled over the question, debating whether she should speak about her current dilemma. In fact, there was no problem, the problem was solved, it just had not come to the resolution that she had hoped for. She was sad, she was angry, she was embarrassed, but above all, she felt lost. She responded to the question.

“Bardiche, load cartridge!”

Signum sighed, it was going to be one of those duels, in response Levantine was readily equipped to receive the attack.

Fate rushed forward, the glowing scythe evaporating all the water that hit its form. Another crack of thunder as the two warriors continued their fight. Signum made block after block, countering after each and still a stalemate was the outcome.

Testarossa looked desperate to her, like a puppy that had lost its way, trying to forget everything by losing herself in the moment. She wanted to help, but she needed Fate to talk to her!

“Levantine!” a look of seriousness crossed Signum’s face; she needed to put an end to this. Her intelligent devices voice cut the through the silence. “Explosion!”

The blade burst forth into flames taking Fate by surprise, her wits and mind slowed by the torrent of emotions flowing through her head. Signum pushed harder forcing Fate onto the defensive.

“Tell me what’s wrong Testarossa!” Signum yelled over the thunder crashing around her.

“You wouldn’t understand!” Fate yelled in reply, pushing with her might against Signum’s attack.

“I won’t if you don’t tell me!” Signum pushed harder and Fate was rocketed into the ground below her.

Signum descended to the crater created by the Aces not so slow descent. Levantine poised at her side. Fate looked up at her, tears not so indiscreetly falling down her cheeks, somewhat hidden by the rain.

Signum’s piercing blue eyes turned softer, as if pleading for Fate to open up. Fates mouth was ready to respond with some reply before catching the gaze of her rival.

She broke.

Tears racked her body as she threw herself at Signum. Bardiche hung at her side. Signum was stunned to say the least. With a small amount of hesitation she returned Levantine and gently embraced Fate.


Signum’s voice was no more than a whisper, “What's wrong?”

The tears started to subside; reducing down to a choked sob before Fate slowly looked into the eyes of her comforter. Soft blue met teary red.

“I was rejected”

Signum was confused at first, rejected by what, a position, a person?

“I confessed to Nanoha that I wanted to be more than just friends, she ran from me”

Realisation started to dawn on the velka knight just what had happened, she tightened her grip on her.

“When we eventually talked, she said she didn’t see me that way and that she was sorry….I-..I..couldn’t handle it, I had to get away…”

Fate looked away dejectedly, and Signum was at a loss for what to say.

She slowly moved her hand to Fates chin and lifted her gaze to meet hers.

“It hurts now Testarossa, but if Nanoha could not like you the way you liked her it would have only lead to more pain than you feel now”

Fate nodded solemnly, it was hard to digest now, everything was a mess, how would she do missions? How would she deal with section 6? What possessed her to do such a thing?

Signum surprised herself and Fate by drawing her into a deeper hug, one she did not know she could give. Fate found herself comforted by this warm embrace despite the freezing cold surrounding them.

Signum’s thoughts were in a maelstrom as she hugged the lightning mage. She had had suspicions that Fate liked Nanoha, but had not delved into business she was not concerned with. But more than that, she was confused, why did she feel so safe in Fate’s embrace, what was the sense of relief when Fate said she was rejected by Nanoha?...... she couldn’t be? Could she? No it’s not possible guardians of the tome of the night sky are meant to protect their master, nothing else. Yet, what was this warm fuzzy feeling that felt nothing like any other she feels inside her?

She would not think on this too much, now was not the time, Fate needed support, and above all a warm place, they were soaked to the bone.

“We should get you out of the rain Testarossa, you will make yourself ill and were both exhausted”

Fate nodded once more, missing the feeling of being in Signum’s embrace, she had not felt that safe since……. A slight realization hit Fate, as she gasped slightly, causing Signum to look at her with a questioning gaze. Fate returned the gaze, albeit shyly.

“Can I erm, stay with you tonight? ……” Fate looked down at her shoe, scuffing one into the dirt. “I’d rather not go back to ….”

Fate didn’t have to finish, before she could react Signum had picked Fate up in her arms and leapt into the sky, her pink aura flashing wildly in the darkness.

Fate could only hold on to Signum, trying desperately not to grope her during the flight as she did not know where to hold on. Her cheeks coloured slightly as she was faced with an eyeful of Signum's, healthy bust, to say the least.

She got comfortable, enjoying the feeling of being held for a change, awaiting her destination.

...I leave for thirty minutes and Fatenum happens. Just my luck. *huffs* Hello, new person~! You're my hero! *melts* Your first fic? Really? Those words can bring horror to the bravest of hearts, but I actually...really enjoyed that. You've got a few typos here and there, but it's nothing huge and/or marring. Tho' I'm not too sure how I feel about Nanoha rejecting her as a plot device, it still gave me the warm fuzzies. Er...the hints at posible Fatenum, not the rejection. But it was good. update now? *shot*

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Satashi

!!!Official Newcomer help post!!!

Due to the sudden swarm of newcomers here, I decided to make an official welcoming and help post. In this post I hope to answer a few of your questions.

Thanks for the helpful post. I hope it will help the newcomers as well as the other posters.

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

*De-Lurks*

Hey all *waves* thought i would follow the growing trend of people de-lurking the forum. I have to say, i have been a super-lurker for a long time, from on ff.net to this forum, been following since i saw the "boobtastically awesome" vampire!Fate pic!! *drools*

so mercurianangel almost de-lurked someone. or was it uh.. lurkified?.. oO;; or simply put, made someone a lurker.

Anyway the threads really come to life recently, and i thought, well if im going to de-lurk im going to try and come in with a bang.

First up, FatexNanohaXHayate fic for the win inspiration....

Spoiler for FxNxH win!!:

I thought it might inspire some fics

Second, this is kinda new for me but i wanted to give it a try anyway. I am a whole FateNanoha shipper through and through, but i really like the idea of Fatenum / Nanovita. Anyway i thought i'd write a short ficlet, possible continuity, but wanted some feedback

Spoiler for Untitled Ficlet:

Sparks of yellow, closely followed by streaks of pink interlaced across the sky, shockwave after shockwave relentlessly pounded the world around them. A large clap of thunder signalled a break in the spar between the two mages. Rain poured around them, the black clouds blocking out nearly all light save for the random bright flashes of lightning. Both were panting heavily, the duel going on far longer than either expected, yet neither wanting to give in.

Blonde tresses whipped violently in the wind, a look of determination still upon her face. No words had been exchanged since the fight began, yet suddenly the opponent speaks.

“What’s wrong Testarossa?”

Signum has known all along that in the beginning, their duels were for pride and honour, but in more recent times, Fate used them as a way for venting stress. Signum knew something was wrong, it was whether Fate would tell her or not.

Fate mulled over the question, debating whether she should speak about her current dilemma. In fact, there was no problem, the problem was solved, it just had not come to the resolution that she had hoped for. She was sad, she was angry, she was embarrassed, but above all, she felt lost. She responded to the question.

“Bardiche, load cartridge!”

Signum sighed, it was going to be one of those duels, in response Levantine was readily equipped to receive the attack.

Fate rushed forward, the glowing scythe evaporating all the water that hit its form. Another crack of thunder as the two warriors continued their fight. Signum made block after block, countering after each and still a stalemate was the outcome.

Testarossa looked desperate to her, like a puppy that had lost its way, trying to forget everything by losing herself in the moment. She wanted to help, but she needed Fate to talk to her!

“Levantine!” a look of seriousness crossed Signum’s face; she needed to put an end to this. Her intelligent devices voice cut the through the silence. “Explosion!”

The blade burst forth into flames taking Fate by surprise, her wits and mind slowed by the torrent of emotions flowing through her head. Signum pushed harder forcing Fate onto the defensive.

“Tell me what’s wrong Testarossa!” Signum yelled over the thunder crashing around her.

“You wouldn’t understand!” Fate yelled in reply, pushing with her might against Signum’s attack.

“I won’t if you don’t tell me!” Signum pushed harder and Fate was rocketed into the ground below her.

Signum descended to the crater created by the Aces not so slow descent. Levantine poised at her side. Fate looked up at her, tears not so indiscreetly falling down her cheeks, somewhat hidden by the rain.

Signum’s piercing blue eyes turned softer, as if pleading for Fate to open up. Fates mouth was ready to respond with some reply before catching the gaze of her rival.

She broke.

Tears racked her body as she threw herself at Signum. Bardiche hung at her side. Signum was stunned to say the least. With a small amount of hesitation she returned Levantine and gently embraced Fate.


Signum’s voice was no more than a whisper, “What's wrong?”

The tears started to subside; reducing down to a choked sob before Fate slowly looked into the eyes of her comforter. Soft blue met teary red.

“I was rejected”

Signum was confused at first, rejected by what, a position, a person?

“I confessed to Nanoha that I wanted to be more than just friends, she ran from me”

Realisation started to dawn on the velka knight just what had happened, she tightened her grip on her.

“When we eventually talked, she said she didn’t see me that way and that she was sorry….I-..I..couldn’t handle it, I had to get away…”

Fate looked away dejectedly, and Signum was at a loss for what to say.

She slowly moved her hand to Fates chin and lifted her gaze to meet hers.

“It hurts now Testarossa, but if Nanoha could not like you the way you liked her it would have only lead to more pain than you feel now”

Fate nodded solemnly, it was hard to digest now, everything was a mess, how would she do missions? How would she deal with section 6? What possessed her to do such a thing?

Signum surprised herself and Fate by drawing her into a deeper hug, one she did not know she could give. Fate found herself comforted by this warm embrace despite the freezing cold surrounding them.

Signum’s thoughts were in a maelstrom as she hugged the lightning mage. She had had suspicions that Fate liked Nanoha, but had not delved into business she was not concerned with. But more than that, she was confused, why did she feel so safe in Fate’s embrace, what was the sense of relief when Fate said she was rejected by Nanoha?...... she couldn’t be? Could she? No it’s not possible guardians of the tome of the night sky are meant to protect their master, nothing else. Yet, what was this warm fuzzy feeling that felt nothing like any other she feels inside her?

She would not think on this too much, now was not the time, Fate needed support, and above all a warm place, they were soaked to the bone.

“We should get you out of the rain Testarossa, you will make yourself ill and were both exhausted”

Fate nodded once more, missing the feeling of being in Signum’s embrace, she had not felt that safe since……. A slight realization hit Fate, as she gasped slightly, causing Signum to look at her with a questioning gaze. Fate returned the gaze, albeit shyly.

“Can I erm, stay with you tonight? ……” Fate looked down at her shoe, scuffing one into the dirt. “I’d rather not go back to ….”

Fate didn’t have to finish, before she could react Signum had picked Fate up in her arms and leapt into the sky, her pink aura flashing wildly in the darkness.

Fate could only hold on to Signum, trying desperately not to grope her during the flight as she did not know where to hold on. Her cheeks coloured slightly as she was faced with an eyeful of Signum's, healthy bust, to say the least.

She got comfortable, enjoying the feeling of being held for a change, awaiting her destination.

I wrote it in a little over an hour, first fan fiction ever!!

Any feedback whether it be grammatical, writing style, character oc ness is gratefully received!!

Its now 12:54 pm nighttime in UK, thought the fic would take me small amount of time but kept going and going and *head smacks keyboard* so hopefully ill wake up to new vampire!Fate as reward *fingers crossed*

*phew* marathon post over.

Black_Wolf (will do rest of profile when less sleepy need a funny avatar/sig)

[Edit[Just read Satashis NewComer post just as i posted *slaps forehead* Think i got everything right bar the flashy titles!

Yayy for new pairing fic!

“We should get you out of the rain Testarossa, you will make yourself ill and were both exhausted”
-were should be we're. (ahaha i'm not really good with this proof reading thing ^^')

Nice start. Very easy to read. I can see this happening. You should continue it. It was good, although Fate blushing and having strange feelings that quickly for Signum seems.. too quick? too fast? Fate just got rejected.. and Signum was just only a friend to her (before that moment).. or is that just me.. It would be good if their relationship is developed further before inevitably going into the romance route. But I hope you continue it. (It will make Enraptured foam at the mouth with uber happiness. ) *hides from Enraptured and hopes she won't read this part of the post*

edit: darn it, I forgot to welcome you *smacks forehead* Welcome to the thread!!

[Kha]

Kudos to Satashi-nyan for completing the first FF Thread tutorial post!

Reminds me that the new OC Thread desperately needs an updated one... >.>

And what's with this sudden burst of unstealthing Rogues? I wear plate, but a Cloth would've had a heart attack pages ago!

And Kharoko goodness? It wasn't me. So it's Satashi. Hey that rhymes. ...

And RPing doesn't exactly mean your going offtopic, just need to not overdo it. At the OC thread we RP all the time, though it kinda been reduced ever since we started the OC IRC.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Kha

Kudos to Satashi-nyan for completing the first FF Thread tutorial post!

Reminds me that the new OC Thread desperately needs an updated one... >.>

And what's with this sudden burst of unstealthing Rogues? I wear plate, but a Cloth would've had a heart attack pages ago!

And Kharoko goodness? It wasn't me. So it's Satashi. Hey that rhymes. ...

And RPing doesn't exactly mean your going offtopic, just need to not overdo it. At the OC thread we RP all the time, though it kinda been reduced ever since we started the OC IRC.

I didn't tag it. Mine is "Interactive fanfiction"

which leads me to say this.......the tags were reset once, maybe as a silent warning from mods to get serious? Our tags help people search, so we should really try to help people out by tagging it properly. In jokes are fine and good but they were reset once, let's not push it until our rights are taken away?

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I didn't tag it. Mine is "Interactive fanfiction"

which leads me to say this.......the tags were reset once, maybe as a silent warning from mods to get serious? Our tags help people search, so we should really try to help people out by tagging it properly. In jokes are fine and good but they were reset once, let's not push it until our rights are taken away?

*holds up hands* Hey mine's fanfiction so don't look at me.


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So you know how Eva made YaoiFangirl!Vivio...
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Yeah so you know Eva's a bad influence on me when I write...

Spoiler for Well since there's YaoiFangirl!Vivio:

“Erio what is it?” Fate patted the top of her son’s head.

Erio’s face was as red as his hair. He was fidgeting badly, his hands were twitching around the small camera in his hands, an out of date piece of equipment. “W-well I um…”

“Ah Erio,” Nanoha popped up from behind him. “What’s this trying to get your mother to let you take a picture?” She smiled playfully, “I’m warning you she hates pictures with a passion.”

Fate blushed, looking at her feet, “That’s not true.”

Erio turned even redder, any more and he’d soon collapse. “I-I-I.”

“You what?” Nanoha moved to stand by Fate, looping their arms together.

Erio shook violently, “Well you see I need…”

Fate looked concerned, maybe he needed to see Shamal, “Erio if you need anything just ask.”

Erio gulped. Then he sucked up the little strands of courage he had left, “WOULD YOU TWO PLEASE MAKE OUT SO I COULD TAKE A PICTURE?”

Nanoha’s fist tightened and Fate looked like she was about to faint.

“Erio. Who put you up to this?



Not so far away.

“Do you think he did it?” Griffith kept looking at the door. Erio had been gone a while. “I mean that kind of mission has to be dangerous.”

Vice shrugged and knocked back another beer from their clubhouses complimentary bar. “Meh. We all have the scars from our initiation.”

Griffith shivered. “T-true.”

“Besides he should be proud that the boss tasked him with the important task of finding disreputable proof that Fate and Nanoha are doing it.”

Zafira rubbed his chin and leaned back in the chair he was sitting in. “But he is just a boy.”

“Yeah I don’t why our leader wouldn’t let him get a picture of Vita fangirling over Nanoha,” Yuuno looked very serious off in the corner.

Chrono shrugged from the couch. “That’s true. Vice got off much easier. Simply getting a picture of Tea and Subaru being loovydoovy they act like they want people to know.”

Vice frowned, “Griffith got off easier. All he had to do was get a picture of Signum and Shamal, the two are freakin’ Rabbits.”

Griffith covered his mouth with his hand obviously remembering something very very bad.

Verossa forced Chrono to sit up so he could sit down too. “I had it hardest. A picture of Rein and Agito. Honestly, I don’t even work here.” He sighed. “Luckily I caught them coming out of an air vent but really.”

Erio burst through their secret clubhouse’s door.

“Did you get it?” They all looked like excited school boys with dirty magazines.

Erio tried to catch his breath. “…run…”

Yuuno furrowed his brow, “What?”

“…run…”

Vice tilted his head to the side, “What the hell are you talking about?”

He sucked in air, “RUN YOU IDIOTS!”

“Huh.”

Their wall was then kicked in, revealing the two furious mages behind it.

“Yuuno!” Nanoha was in position to Starlight Breaker them to Never Neverland

“Onii-san!” Fate had Baridiche out in duel Zamber mode and looked ready to lop off some heads.

“RETREAT!” They all scrambled for the one solitary window in the opposite wall of their tree house.

“STARLIGHT!” Too late. “BREAKER!”



Later.

“Oh dear,” Hayate stepped around the smoking bodies of the members of a certain fanclub. “It seems I was too late.”

“B-boss,” Chrono reached out for Hayate only to then faint.

Nanoha shook her head among the carnage. “That was too close Hayate.”

Fate agreed, “What were you thinking?”

Hayate grinned. “But I got a bunch of pictures.”

“Shesh. But they almost caught on.”

Hayate waved her off. “Don’t be silly, no one suspects the TSAB is all a front for my Grand Lesbian Army.”

And they all lived happily ever after in Hayate’s Lesbian Army. Except for the guys who all got complimentary bus rides.

The Agito/Rein joke and the Signum/Shamal joke are refering to this:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4059483/..._Hayates_House

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I didn't tag it. Mine is "Interactive fanfiction"

which leads me to say this.......the tags were reset once, maybe as a silent warning from mods to get serious? Our tags help people search, so we should really try to help people out by tagging it properly. In jokes are fine and good but they were reset once, let's not push it until our rights are taken away?

It was reported by someone at the feedback section. One of the mods deleted the tags. *been lurking there since the forum upgrade* They weren't really too happy about the cracky tags.. Slightly irritated even. ^^' Someone hasn't reported the OC thread tags yet, though.

@TSS' little ficcy:
“Luckily I caught them coming out of an air vent but really.”
-got me ROFLing

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

*De-Lurks*

Hey all *waves* thought i would follow the growing trend of people de-lurking the forum. I have to say, i have been a super-lurker for a long time, from on ff.net to this forum, been following since i saw the "boobtastically awesome" vampire!Fate pic!! *drools*

Anyway the threads really come to life recently, and i thought, well if im going to de-lurk im going to try and come in with a bang.

First up, FatexNanohaXHayate fic for the win inspiration....

Spoiler for FxNxH win!!:

I thought it might inspire some fics

Second, this is kinda new for me but i wanted to give it a try anyway. I am a whole FateNanoha shipper through and through, but i really like the idea of Fatenum / Nanovita. Anyway i thought i'd write a short ficlet, possible continuity, but wanted some feedback

Spoiler for Untitled Ficlet:

Sparks of yellow, closely followed by streaks of pink interlaced across the sky, shockwave after shockwave relentlessly pounded the world around them. A large clap of thunder signalled a break in the spar between the two mages. Rain poured around them, the black clouds blocking out nearly all light save for the random bright flashes of lightning. Both were panting heavily, the duel going on far longer than either expected, yet neither wanting to give in.

Blonde tresses whipped violently in the wind, a look of determination still upon her face. No words had been exchanged since the fight began, yet suddenly the opponent speaks.

“What’s wrong Testarossa?”

Signum has known all along that in the beginning, their duels were for pride and honour, but in more recent times, Fate used them as a way for venting stress. Signum knew something was wrong, it was whether Fate would tell her or not.

Fate mulled over the question, debating whether she should speak about her current dilemma. In fact, there was no problem, the problem was solved, it just had not come to the resolution that she had hoped for. She was sad, she was angry, she was embarrassed, but above all, she felt lost. She responded to the question.

“Bardiche, load cartridge!”

Signum sighed, it was going to be one of those duels, in response Levantine was readily equipped to receive the attack.

Fate rushed forward, the glowing scythe evaporating all the water that hit its form. Another crack of thunder as the two warriors continued their fight. Signum made block after block, countering after each and still a stalemate was the outcome.

Testarossa looked desperate to her, like a puppy that had lost its way, trying to forget everything by losing herself in the moment. She wanted to help, but she needed Fate to talk to her!

“Levantine!” a look of seriousness crossed Signum’s face; she needed to put an end to this. Her intelligent devices voice cut the through the silence. “Explosion!”

The blade burst forth into flames taking Fate by surprise, her wits and mind slowed by the torrent of emotions flowing through her head. Signum pushed harder forcing Fate onto the defensive.

“Tell me what’s wrong Testarossa!” Signum yelled over the thunder crashing around her.

“You wouldn’t understand!” Fate yelled in reply, pushing with her might against Signum’s attack.

“I won’t if you don’t tell me!” Signum pushed harder and Fate was rocketed into the ground below her.

Signum descended to the crater created by the Aces not so slow descent. Levantine poised at her side. Fate looked up at her, tears not so indiscreetly falling down her cheeks, somewhat hidden by the rain.

Signum’s piercing blue eyes turned softer, as if pleading for Fate to open up. Fates mouth was ready to respond with some reply before catching the gaze of her rival.

She broke.

Tears racked her body as she threw herself at Signum. Bardiche hung at her side. Signum was stunned to say the least. With a small amount of hesitation she returned Levantine and gently embraced Fate.


Signum’s voice was no more than a whisper, “What's wrong?”

The tears started to subside; reducing down to a choked sob before Fate slowly looked into the eyes of her comforter. Soft blue met teary red.

“I was rejected”

Signum was confused at first, rejected by what, a position, a person?

“I confessed to Nanoha that I wanted to be more than just friends, she ran from me”

Realisation started to dawn on the velka knight just what had happened, she tightened her grip on her.

“When we eventually talked, she said she didn’t see me that way and that she was sorry….I-..I..couldn’t handle it, I had to get away…”

Fate looked away dejectedly, and Signum was at a loss for what to say.

She slowly moved her hand to Fates chin and lifted her gaze to meet hers.

“It hurts now Testarossa, but if Nanoha could not like you the way you liked her it would have only lead to more pain than you feel now”

Fate nodded solemnly, it was hard to digest now, everything was a mess, how would she do missions? How would she deal with section 6? What possessed her to do such a thing?

Signum surprised herself and Fate by drawing her into a deeper hug, one she did not know she could give. Fate found herself comforted by this warm embrace despite the freezing cold surrounding them.

Signum’s thoughts were in a maelstrom as she hugged the lightning mage. She had had suspicions that Fate liked Nanoha, but had not delved into business she was not concerned with. But more than that, she was confused, why did she feel so safe in Fate’s embrace, what was the sense of relief when Fate said she was rejected by Nanoha?...... she couldn’t be? Could she? No it’s not possible guardians of the tome of the night sky are meant to protect their master, nothing else. Yet, what was this warm fuzzy feeling that felt nothing like any other she feels inside her?

She would not think on this too much, now was not the time, Fate needed support, and above all a warm place, they were soaked to the bone.

“We should get you out of the rain Testarossa, you will make yourself ill and were both exhausted”

Fate nodded once more, missing the feeling of being in Signum’s embrace, she had not felt that safe since……. A slight realization hit Fate, as she gasped slightly, causing Signum to look at her with a questioning gaze. Fate returned the gaze, albeit shyly.

“Can I erm, stay with you tonight? ……” Fate looked down at her shoe, scuffing one into the dirt. “I’d rather not go back to ….”

Fate didn’t have to finish, before she could react Signum had picked Fate up in her arms and leapt into the sky, her pink aura flashing wildly in the darkness.

Fate could only hold on to Signum, trying desperately not to grope her during the flight as she did not know where to hold on. Her cheeks coloured slightly as she was faced with an eyeful of Signum's, healthy bust, to say the least.

She got comfortable, enjoying the feeling of being held for a change, awaiting her destination.

I wrote it in a little over an hour, first fan fiction ever!!

Any feedback whether it be grammatical, writing style, character oc ness is gratefully received!!

Its now 12:54 pm nighttime in UK, thought the fic would take me small amount of time but kept going and going and *head smacks keyboard* so hopefully ill wake up to new vampire!Fate as reward *fingers crossed*

*phew* marathon post over.

Black_Wolf (will do rest of profile when less sleepy need a funny avatar/sig)

[Edit[Just read Satashis NewComer post just as i posted *slaps forehead* Think i got everything right bar the flashy titles!

Actually pretty good fic, I can just pray for being able to write like this....
Hmm what I forgot? ... Yes Welcome here
*wonders whether there is chance for nice fluffy chapter 2*

[illidan182]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Yeah so you know Eva's a bad influence on me when I write...

Spoiler for Well since there's YaoiFangirl!Vivio:

“Erio what is it?” Fate patted the top of her son’s head.

Erio’s face was as red as his hair. He was fidgeting badly, his hands were twitching around the small camera in his hands, an out of date piece of equipment. “W-well I um…”

“Ah Erio,” Nanoha popped up from behind him. “What’s this trying to get your mother to let you take a picture?” She smiled playfully, “I’m warning you she hates pictures with a passion.”

Fate blushed, looking at her feet, “That’s not true.”

Erio turned even redder, any more and he’d soon collapse. “I-I-I.”

“You what?” Nanoha moved to stand by Fate, looping their arms together.

Erio shook violently, “Well you see I need…”

Fate looked concerned, maybe he needed to see Shamal, “Erio if you need anything just ask.”

Erio gulped. Then he sucked up the little strands of courage he had left, “WOULD YOU TWO PLEASE MAKE OUT SO I COULD TAKE A PICTURE?”

Nanoha’s fist tightened and Fate looked like she was about to faint.

“Erio. Who put you up to this?



Not so far away.

“Do you think he did it?” Griffith kept looking at the door. Erio had been gone a while. “I mean that kind of mission has to be dangerous.”

Vice shrugged and knocked back another beer from their clubhouses complimentary bar. “Meh. We all have the scars from our initiation.”

Griffith shivered. “T-true.”

“Besides he should be proud that the boss tasked him with the important task of finding disreputable proof that Fate and Nanoha are doing it.”

Zafira rubbed his chin and leaned back in the chair he was sitting in. “But he is just a boy.”

“Yeah I don’t why our leader wouldn’t let him get a picture of Vita fangirling over Nanoha,” Yuuno looked very serious off in the corner.

Chrono shrugged from the couch. “That’s true. Vice got off much easier. Simply getting a picture of Tea and Subaru being loovydoovy they act like they want people to know.”

Vice frowned, “Griffith got off easier. All he had to do was get a picture of Signum and Shamal, the two are freakin’ Rabbits.”

Griffith covered his mouth with his hand obviously remembering something very very bad.

Verossa forced Chrono to sit up so he could sit down too. “I had it hardest. A picture of Rein and Agito. Honestly, I don’t even work here.” He sighed. “Luckily I caught them coming out of an air vent but really.”

Erio burst through their secret clubhouse’s door.

“Did you get it?” They all looked like excited school boys with dirty magazines.

Erio tried to catch his breath. “…run…”

Yuuno furrowed his brow, “What?”

“…run…”

Vice tilted his head to the side, “What the hell are you talking about?”

He sucked in air, “RUN YOU IDIOTS!”

“Huh.”

Their wall was then kicked in, revealing the two furious mages behind it.

“Yuuno!” Nanoha was in position to Starlight Breaker them to Never Neverland

“Onii-san!” Fate had Baridiche out in duel Zamber mode and looked ready to lop off some heads.

“RETREAT!” They all scrambled for the one solitary window in the opposite wall of their tree house.

“STARLIGHT!” Too late. “BREAKER!”



Later.

“Oh dear,” Hayate stepped around the smoking bodies of the members of a certain fanclub. “It seems I was too late.”

“B-boss,” Chrono reached out for Hayate only to then faint.

Nanoha shook her head among the carnage. “That was too close Hayate.”

Fate agreed, “What were you thinking?”

Hayate grinned. “But I got a bunch of pictures.”

“Shesh. But they almost caught on.”

Hayate waved her off. “Don’t be silly, no one suspects the TSAB is all a front for my Grand Lesbian Army.”

And they all lived happily ever after in Hayate’s Lesbian Army. Except for the guys who all got complimentary bus rides.

The Agito/Rein joke and the Signum/Shamal joke are refering to this:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4059483/..._Hayates_House

golden, pure gold

and as for the tags, not mine ither, I dont even know how to add them D:

[Kha]

I agree Satashi. And I'll own up, I was the one who tagged this place with rickroll, partly because Rick is here, and people especially Satashi love to roll you guys on occasion. I couldn't use lemonroll since no one would search that word, so I used Rickroll.

But if it's really glaring I'll remove it.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Kha

I agree Satashi. And I'll own up, I was the one who tagged this place with rickroll, partly because Rick is here, and people especially Satashi love to roll you guys on occasion. I couldn't use lemonroll since no one would search that word, so I used Rickroll.

But if it's really glaring I'll remove it.

I don't really mind them, I think they're funny actually. I'm no mod but I don't want an angry one coming here after a silent warning...... know what I mean?

[Satashi]

For Sinwithin :3

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.3c Fate:

I knew I wouldn't sleep tonight so I didn't even bother trying to. Erio knew I was a vampire because of Chrono and was used to it by now. When I told him I was going to go hunting he didn't bat an eye and wished me the best of luck. He was a sweet kid. A little hooked on those military games, but still a sweet kid. To prepare for the night I put on my bodysuit; a skin tight, almost latex type outfit that zipped up my back. It came complete with boots and gloves, as well as buckles and large silver rings dangling from my wrist. Despite being so tight that it creaked softly when I walked, I felt as if I wasn't wearing anything at all, and had complete movement.

And my breasts were, for once, not jiggling all over the place at every step.

I wasn't in the mood to hunt but instead I drove my bike down to my favorite bar, the very same one that Nanoha and I had our first date at. The bartender greeted me but understood when I simply nodded back at him. A scotch on the rocks was filled before me and I took a slow sip of it to taste the flavor that I had come to really appreciate. Living for so long has made my tongue a little picky when it came to taste, and my heightened vampire senses brought out everything when I placed it in my mouth. Honestly, I could eat something and tell you everything that was inside of it after only chewing a few moments.

I loved whiskey. The complex flavor mingled around my mouth and calmed me down to the point where I closed my eyes and concentrated on picking out what kind of wood it was made from. Oak... with a strange but welcome coconut lingering in it. Another sip was taken and I leaned onto the bar sadly. Nanoha was obviously freaked out about what I had revealed to hear earlier and I really couldn't blame her. Vampires were hardly something to take lightly, and she was just at the tip of the iceberg. If she stayed with me I would have to tell her my story, explain everything in detail. After that... well after that I would either be alone again or I would have someone very special.

Despite wanting to push her away at first, I couldn't bring myself to be happy about this chance to be rid of her once and for all. What can I say, I fell for her...

A person sat next to me and ordered a drink. I ignored this at first but I had a weird feeling after a few moments. My eyes turned to the side and I looked at a man of medium build giving me the eye. “I wouldn't try,” the bartender told him in passing. “Fate there isn't one you can pick up.”

The person beside me smiled at me, leaning forward and speaking close to my face. “Hey there sexy, want a fun time tonight?”

He met my eyes and I knew instantly why he was giving me bad vibes. A small fang was noticeable when he smiled, a sure sign of a newly converted vampire. They took time to grow and often pushed out the teeth they would replace. Personally I have had my fangs ripped from my mouth more times to consider pleasant, but each time gave me firmer fangs, sharper and a little longer. They weren't to the point of being goofy looking like the silly comic book vampires, but they were just long enough to pierce a vein. That's all I needed and that's all my body could give me. As I turned my attention back to the man who was failing miserably at trying to hypnotize me with his eyes, I simply sighed. “Get lost.”

The man stood up, apparently pissed that I had denied him. Was he so stupid as to try after failing? He put his hand on my shoulder and I quickly snapped, already annoyed at being hit on right now. I blurred behind him and ripped his arm behind his back and jerked so hard his shoulder dislocated. As he fell to his knees I mentally debated going further but restrained myself. “Alton,” I asked the bartender gently. “Please get security to clean up the mess?”

“You got it, Fate.” The man nodded at me and shortly two large men came to lift up the shocked man to haul off.

I reseated myself and found yet another sit beside me. This time a rather girly type drink was sat down and a soft voice came. “You're snappy tonight.”

My eyes widened slightly. “What brings you here?”

“Customers,” the man told me simply. “Speaking of which, I have the analysis you requested.” A folder was placed in front of me after being removed from a black, soft briefcase that also held an expensive looking laptop. “Have the money?”

“Of course,” I reached down to a small zipper on my leg and carefully slid out a check. “Pen?”

“Don't have one with you?”

“You're lucky I can fit paper in this outfit. Fork one over.” I took the pen from him and jotted down a large sum on it. “Here.”

“A pleasure,” he took it and placed into his shirt pocket. “The vial inside of the stake you gave me is made up of an interesting composition.”

“Details?”

“In the folder,” he told me casually while taking a sip of his drink. “But basically... it reacts to blood cells and destroys them. The interesting thing is, it is harmless to every type of human blood cell I can think of.”

“Figures.” I slowly drank and crunched a piece of ice. “You worked fast.”

“I've seen it before.” The man leaned forward and grinned when my hand tightened over the glass I was holding.

“You work for them?”

“I work for money,” he countered easily. “What goes on in your war has nothing to do with me. If you have a job, I'll see to it. If you don't, I won't bother you. Rest assured, Fate, no one will know of our business, just as I won't tell you what they are after.”

I smirked. “I could beat you up and force it out of you.”

He chuckled. “Would you want to?” He looked down at his drink. “I have a request for you, though.”

“Oh?”

He nodded. “Half off next job if you accept it. That girl you met with the other day at school, Nanoha.”

“Yes?”

“Don't turn her.”

I glared into my drink and slammed it down, empty. “I wasn't planning on it.” I nodded at Alton and took the folder as I moved to leave the bar, leaving the man with the long blond ponytail by himself.

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Satashi

For Sinwithin :3

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.3c:

I knew I wouldn't sleep tonight so I didn't even bother trying to. Erio knew I was a vampire because of Chrono and was used to it by now. When I told him I was going to go hunting he didn't bat an eye and wished me the best of luck. He was a sweet kid. A little hooked on those military games, but still a sweet kid. To prepare for the night I put on my bodysuit; a skin tight, almost latex type outfit that zipped up my back. It came complete with boots and gloves, as well as buckles and large silver rings dangling from my wrist. Despite being so tight that it creaked softly when I walked, I felt as if I wasn't wearing anything at all, and had complete movement.

And my breasts were, for once, not jiggling all over the place at every step.

I wasn't in the mood to hunt but instead I drove my bike down to my favorite bar, the very same one that Nanoha and I had our first date at. The bartender greeted me but understood when I simply nodded back at him. A scotch on the rocks was filled before me and I took a slow sip of it to taste the flavor that I had come to really appreciate. Living for so long has made my tongue a little picky when it came to taste, and my heightened vampire senses brought out everything when I placed it in my mouth. Honestly, I could eat something and tell you everything that was inside of it after only chewing a few moments.

I loved whiskey. The complex flavor mingled around my mouth and calmed me down to the point where I closed my eyes and concentrated on picking out what kind of wood it was made from. Oak... with a strange but welcome coconut lingering in it. Another sip was taken and I leaned onto the bar sadly. Nanoha was obviously freaked out about what I had revealed to hear earlier and I really couldn't blame her. Vampires were hardly something to take lightly, and she was just at the tip of the iceberg. If she stayed with me I would have to tell her my story, explain everything in detail. After that... well after that I would either be alone again or I would have someone very special.

Despite wanting to push her away at first, I couldn't bring myself to be happy about this chance to be rid of her once and for all. What can I say, I fell for her...

A person sat next to me and ordered a drink. I ignored this at first but I had a weird feeling after a few moments. My eyes turned to the side and I looked at a man of medium build giving me the eye. “I wouldn't try,” the bartender told him in passing. “Fate there isn't one you can pick up.”

The person beside me smiled at me, leaning forward and speaking close to my face. “Hey there sexy, want a fun time tonight?”

He met my eyes and I knew instantly why he was giving me bad vibes. A small fang was noticeable when he smiled, a sure sign of a newly converted vampire. They took time to grow and often pushed out the teeth they would replace. Personally I have had my fangs ripped from my mouth more times to consider pleasant, but each time gave me firmer fangs, sharper and a little longer. They weren't to the point of being goofy looking like the silly comic book vampires, but they were just long enough to pierce a vein. That's all I needed and that's all my body could give me. As I turned my attention back to the man who was failing miserably at trying to hypnotize me with his eyes, I simply sighed. “Get lost.”

The man stood up, apparently pissed that I had denied him. Was he so stupid as to try after failing? He put his hand on my shoulder and I quickly snapped, already annoyed at being hit on right now. I blurred behind him and ripped his arm behind his back and jerked so hard his shoulder dislocated. As he fell to his knees I mentally debated going further but restrained myself. “Alton,” I asked the bartender gently. “Please get security to clean up the mess?”

“You got it, Fate.” The man nodded at me and shortly two large men came to lift up the shocked man to haul off.

I reseated myself and found yet another sit beside me. This time a rather girly type drink was sat down and a soft voice came. “You're snappy tonight.”

My eyes widened slightly. “What brings you here?”

“Customers,” the man told me simply. “Speaking of which, I have the analysis you requested.” A folder was placed in front of me after being removed from a black, soft briefcase that also held an expensive looking laptop. “Have the money?”

“Of course,” I reached down to a small zipper on my leg and carefully slid out a check. “Pen?”

“Don't have one with you?”

“You're lucky I can fit paper in this outfit. Fork one over.” I took the pen from him and jotted down a large sum on it. “Here.”

“A pleasure,” he took it and placed into his shirt pocket. “The vial inside of the stake you gave me is made up of an interesting composition.”

“Details?”

“In the folder,” he told me casually while taking a sip of his drink. “But basically... it reacts to blood cells and destroys them. The interesting thing is, it is harmless to every type of human blood cell I can think of.”

“Figures.” I slowly drank and crunched a piece of ice. “You worked fast.”

“I've seen it before.” The man leaned forward and grinned when my hand tightened over the glass I was holding.

“You work for them?”

“I work for money,” he countered easily. “What goes on in your war has nothing to do with me. If you have a job, I'll see to it. If you don't, I won't bother you. Rest assured, Fate, no one will know of our business, just as I won't tell you what they are after.”

I smirked. “I could beat you up and force it out of you.”

He chuckled. “Would you want to?” He looked down at his drink. “I have a request for you, though.”

“Oh?”

He nodded. “Half off next job if you accept it. That girl you met with the other day at school, Nanoha.”

“Yes?”

“Don't turn her.”

I glared into my drink and slammed it down, empty. “I wasn't planning on it.” I nodded at Alton and took the folder as I moved to leave the bar, leaving the man with the long blond ponytail by himself.

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

A - Nanoha's got a bee in her bonnet about this one, I can tell.

[Naolin]

Go Fate, snappy moves. Hm...this man is interesting... So the Paladins have new technology? And...w-wait...Yuuno? *blinks* Well, at least he's being protective, but grar.

Ahh, do you know how hard you just made it? *sulks* Fate would be conflicted, but- Nanoha might notice Yuuno acting odd (if it is him)- but-

[Edit] Gaah, changed my mind. A *headslam*

[kasu1127]

Originally Posted by Satashi

For Sinwithin :3

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.3c Fate:

I knew I wouldn't sleep tonight so I didn't even bother trying to. Erio knew I was a vampire because of Chrono and was used to it by now. When I told him I was going to go hunting he didn't bat an eye and wished me the best of luck. He was a sweet kid. A little hooked on those military games, but still a sweet kid. To prepare for the night I put on my bodysuit; a skin tight, almost latex type outfit that zipped up my back. It came complete with boots and gloves, as well as buckles and large silver rings dangling from my wrist. Despite being so tight that it creaked softly when I walked, I felt as if I wasn't wearing anything at all, and had complete movement.

And my breasts were, for once, not jiggling all over the place at every step.

I wasn't in the mood to hunt but instead I drove my bike down to my favorite bar, the very same one that Nanoha and I had our first date at. The bartender greeted me but understood when I simply nodded back at him. A scotch on the rocks was filled before me and I took a slow sip of it to taste the flavor that I had come to really appreciate. Living for so long has made my tongue a little picky when it came to taste, and my heightened vampire senses brought out everything when I placed it in my mouth. Honestly, I could eat something and tell you everything that was inside of it after only chewing a few moments.

I loved whiskey. The complex flavor mingled around my mouth and calmed me down to the point where I closed my eyes and concentrated on picking out what kind of wood it was made from. Oak... with a strange but welcome coconut lingering in it. Another sip was taken and I leaned onto the bar sadly. Nanoha was obviously freaked out about what I had revealed to hear earlier and I really couldn't blame her. Vampires were hardly something to take lightly, and she was just at the tip of the iceberg. If she stayed with me I would have to tell her my story, explain everything in detail. After that... well after that I would either be alone again or I would have someone very special.

Despite wanting to push her away at first, I couldn't bring myself to be happy about this chance to be rid of her once and for all. What can I say, I fell for her...

A person sat next to me and ordered a drink. I ignored this at first but I had a weird feeling after a few moments. My eyes turned to the side and I looked at a man of medium build giving me the eye. “I wouldn't try,” the bartender told him in passing. “Fate there isn't one you can pick up.”

The person beside me smiled at me, leaning forward and speaking close to my face. “Hey there sexy, want a fun time tonight?”

He met my eyes and I knew instantly why he was giving me bad vibes. A small fang was noticeable when he smiled, a sure sign of a newly converted vampire. They took time to grow and often pushed out the teeth they would replace. Personally I have had my fangs ripped from my mouth more times to consider pleasant, but each time gave me firmer fangs, sharper and a little longer. They weren't to the point of being goofy looking like the silly comic book vampires, but they were just long enough to pierce a vein. That's all I needed and that's all my body could give me. As I turned my attention back to the man who was failing miserably at trying to hypnotize me with his eyes, I simply sighed. “Get lost.”

The man stood up, apparently pissed that I had denied him. Was he so stupid as to try after failing? He put his hand on my shoulder and I quickly snapped, already annoyed at being hit on right now. I blurred behind him and ripped his arm behind his back and jerked so hard his shoulder dislocated. As he fell to his knees I mentally debated going further but restrained myself. “Alton,” I asked the bartender gently. “Please get security to clean up the mess?”

“You got it, Fate.” The man nodded at me and shortly two large men came to lift up the shocked man to haul off.

I reseated myself and found yet another sit beside me. This time a rather girly type drink was sat down and a soft voice came. “You're snappy tonight.”

My eyes widened slightly. “What brings you here?”

“Customers,” the man told me simply. “Speaking of which, I have the analysis you requested.” A folder was placed in front of me after being removed from a black, soft briefcase that also held an expensive looking laptop. “Have the money?”

“Of course,” I reached down to a small zipper on my leg and carefully slid out a check. “Pen?”

“Don't have one with you?”

“You're lucky I can fit paper in this outfit. Fork one over.” I took the pen from him and jotted down a large sum on it. “Here.”

“A pleasure,” he took it and placed into his shirt pocket. “The vial inside of the stake you gave me is made up of an interesting composition.”

“Details?”

“In the folder,” he told me casually while taking a sip of his drink. “But basically... it reacts to blood cells and destroys them. The interesting thing is, it is harmless to every type of human blood cell I can think of.”

“Figures.” I slowly drank and crunched a piece of ice. “You worked fast.”

“I've seen it before.” The man leaned forward and grinned when my hand tightened over the glass I was holding.

“You work for them?”

“I work for money,” he countered easily. “What goes on in your war has nothing to do with me. If you have a job, I'll see to it. If you don't, I won't bother you. Rest assured, Fate, no one will know of our business, just as I won't tell you what they are after.”

I smirked. “I could beat you up and force it out of you.”

He chuckled. “Would you want to?” He looked down at his drink. “I have a request for you, though.”

“Oh?”

He nodded. “Half off next job if you accept it. That girl you met with the other day at school, Nanoha.”

“Yes?”

“Don't turn her.”

I glared into my drink and slammed it down, empty. “I wasn't planning on it.” I nodded at Alton and took the folder as I moved to leave the bar, leaving the man with the long blond ponytail by himself.

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

As always, another amazing part.
...And is that... Yuuno!? This is getting really, really interesting.

And I vote A

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

For Sinwithin :3

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.3c Fate:

I knew I wouldn't sleep tonight so I didn't even bother trying to. Erio knew I was a vampire because of Chrono and was used to it by now. When I told him I was going to go hunting he didn't bat an eye and wished me the best of luck. He was a sweet kid. A little hooked on those military games, but still a sweet kid. To prepare for the night I put on my bodysuit; a skin tight, almost latex type outfit that zipped up my back. It came complete with boots and gloves, as well as buckles and large silver rings dangling from my wrist. Despite being so tight that it creaked softly when I walked, I felt as if I wasn't wearing anything at all, and had complete movement.

And my breasts were, for once, not jiggling all over the place at every step.

I wasn't in the mood to hunt but instead I drove my bike down to my favorite bar, the very same one that Nanoha and I had our first date at. The bartender greeted me but understood when I simply nodded back at him. A scotch on the rocks was filled before me and I took a slow sip of it to taste the flavor that I had come to really appreciate. Living for so long has made my tongue a little picky when it came to taste, and my heightened vampire senses brought out everything when I placed it in my mouth. Honestly, I could eat something and tell you everything that was inside of it after only chewing a few moments.

I loved whiskey. The complex flavor mingled around my mouth and calmed me down to the point where I closed my eyes and concentrated on picking out what kind of wood it was made from. Oak... with a strange but welcome coconut lingering in it. Another sip was taken and I leaned onto the bar sadly. Nanoha was obviously freaked out about what I had revealed to hear earlier and I really couldn't blame her. Vampires were hardly something to take lightly, and she was just at the tip of the iceberg. If she stayed with me I would have to tell her my story, explain everything in detail. After that... well after that I would either be alone again or I would have someone very special.

Despite wanting to push her away at first, I couldn't bring myself to be happy about this chance to be rid of her once and for all. What can I say, I fell for her...

A person sat next to me and ordered a drink. I ignored this at first but I had a weird feeling after a few moments. My eyes turned to the side and I looked at a man of medium build giving me the eye. “I wouldn't try,” the bartender told him in passing. “Fate there isn't one you can pick up.”

The person beside me smiled at me, leaning forward and speaking close to my face. “Hey there sexy, want a fun time tonight?”

He met my eyes and I knew instantly why he was giving me bad vibes. A small fang was noticeable when he smiled, a sure sign of a newly converted vampire. They took time to grow and often pushed out the teeth they would replace. Personally I have had my fangs ripped from my mouth more times to consider pleasant, but each time gave me firmer fangs, sharper and a little longer. They weren't to the point of being goofy looking like the silly comic book vampires, but they were just long enough to pierce a vein. That's all I needed and that's all my body could give me. As I turned my attention back to the man who was failing miserably at trying to hypnotize me with his eyes, I simply sighed. “Get lost.”

The man stood up, apparently pissed that I had denied him. Was he so stupid as to try after failing? He put his hand on my shoulder and I quickly snapped, already annoyed at being hit on right now. I blurred behind him and ripped his arm behind his back and jerked so hard his shoulder dislocated. As he fell to his knees I mentally debated going further but restrained myself. “Alton,” I asked the bartender gently. “Please get security to clean up the mess?”

“You got it, Fate.” The man nodded at me and shortly two large men came to lift up the shocked man to haul off.

I reseated myself and found yet another sit beside me. This time a rather girly type drink was sat down and a soft voice came. “You're snappy tonight.”

My eyes widened slightly. “What brings you here?”

“Customers,” the man told me simply. “Speaking of which, I have the analysis you requested.” A folder was placed in front of me after being removed from a black, soft briefcase that also held an expensive looking laptop. “Have the money?”

“Of course,” I reached down to a small zipper on my leg and carefully slid out a check. “Pen?”

“Don't have one with you?”

“You're lucky I can fit paper in this outfit. Fork one over.” I took the pen from him and jotted down a large sum on it. “Here.”

“A pleasure,” he took it and placed into his shirt pocket. “The vial inside of the stake you gave me is made up of an interesting composition.”

“Details?”

“In the folder,” he told me casually while taking a sip of his drink. “But basically... it reacts to blood cells and destroys them. The interesting thing is, it is harmless to every type of human blood cell I can think of.”

“Figures.” I slowly drank and crunched a piece of ice. “You worked fast.”

“I've seen it before.” The man leaned forward and grinned when my hand tightened over the glass I was holding.

“You work for them?”

“I work for money,” he countered easily. “What goes on in your war has nothing to do with me. If you have a job, I'll see to it. If you don't, I won't bother you. Rest assured, Fate, no one will know of our business, just as I won't tell you what they are after.”

I smirked. “I could beat you up and force it out of you.”

He chuckled. “Would you want to?” He looked down at his drink. “I have a request for you, though.”

“Oh?”

He nodded. “Half off next job if you accept it. That girl you met with the other day at school, Nanoha.”

“Yes?”

“Don't turn her.”

I glared into my drink and slammed it down, empty. “I wasn't planning on it.” I nodded at Alton and took the folder as I moved to leave the bar, leaving the man with the long blond ponytail by himself.

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

And my dreams of Paladin!Yuuno crash down around me. (Don't care cause if that is Yuuno he's awesome *tackle hugs Freelance!Yuuno *)

Question that you may or may not want to answer Satashi. If we had chosen way way way back when Fate was going to meet Nanoha for the first time at Nanoha's school to have Fate's POV would we have seen Yuuno from Fate's POV? (in other words would we have gotten an idea of who/what Yuuno is back then)


B for more vampirey info

[illidan182]

YUUNO IS FATES CONTACT!!!! >.>

B for shure

Lol, I bet Satashi is gonna don devil horns and not tell us TSS... D:

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by illidan182

YUUNO IS FATES CONTACT!!!! >.>

B for shure

Lol, I bet Satashi is gonna don devil horns and not tell us TSS... D:

D: And leave us in cruel suspense *Hates not knowing what I missed xD*

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Question that you may or may not want to answer Satashi. If we had chosen way way way back when Fate was going to meet Nanoha for the first time at Nanoha's school to have Fate's POV would we have seen Yuuno from Fate's POV? (in other words would we have gotten an idea of who/what Yuuno is back then)

Yes, you would have seen Yuuno with Nanoha and Fate thinking about how ironic it was they knew each other. Also, later while Nanoha was in class you would have found out that Yuuno is a child prodigy in genetics. And recently if you picked Fate after the split up, she went to give Yuuno the stake that she stole from Signum in the alleyway brawl.

Another reason to think carefully when picking.

[EDIT]: you guys are mean T_T

[illidan182]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Yes, you would have seen Yuuno with Nanoha and Fate thinking about how ironic it was they knew each other. Also, later while Nanoha was in class you would have found out that Yuuno is a child prodigy in genetics. And recently if you picked Fate after the split up, she went to give Yuuno the stake that she stole from Signum in the alleyway brawl.

Another reason to think carefully when picking.

[EDIT]: you guys are mean T_T

Awww common Satashi =P you know we love you, or else we wouldnt comment =D *huggles*

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Yes, you would have seen Yuuno with Nanoha and Fate thinking about how ironic it was they knew each other. Also, later while Nanoha was in class you would have found out that Yuuno is a child prodigy in genetics. And recently if you picked Fate after the split up, she went to give Yuuno the stake that she stole from Signum in the alleyway brawl.

Another reason to think carefully when picking.

[EDIT]: you guys are mean T_T

Satashi I take it back you're awesome. Here's a cookie *gives cookie*.

That's pretty cool :3 It's like we get all the information we need but we only get part of the whole picture, enough to understand it but only Satashi knows everything.

Edit: Page claim for ANALOGIES