2009-11-02, 13:10 | Link #18262 | |
Vividly Vivio
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2009-11-02, 14:48 | Link #18267 | |||||
blinded by blood
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But even though Talking is a Free Action in most anime and manga, I chose to have Fate chew Nena out after everything is said and done. Don't worry, she'll get an earful of Fate's Nanoha-inspired moral code. Pairing Fate with Nena was a very deliberate decision, especially in a wartime setting. Chrono believes that Fate is the best one to watch Nena, since her magic can pierce Nena's resistance, and Fate won't let the mercenary go overboard. At the same time, Nena's Neutral Evil-ness, her words and actions will seriously test the foundations of Fate's Lawful Good-ness. I figure this will make for some delicious drama. Quote:
Since it's Nanoha--definitely AU, but still MGLN--I figured Lost Logia would be as good a plot coupon as any. But rest assured, these Lost Logia are hardly normal, even going by previous examples. Quote:
He's running the space war, but Hayate will likely be running the ground war. When she recovers, anyway. (read the prequel story if you want to know what happened to her) Quote:
The invaders are used to killing Bureau clerks and foot soldiers. Not the Aces, so it was fitting that the recon lieutenant would severely underestimate Fate. Quote:
The invaders, much like the vast majority of Earth's humans, don't have Linker Cores. So they can't use magic, but they're much more advanced technologically than Earth's humans. Not going to spoil too much, but the "main cast" of Reborn: A Magical War Chronicle should be Nena, Fate, Yuuno, Chrono, Hayate, Nanoha, Shari and Teana, with the Nena/Fate/Yuuno triad as the primary characters involved with the mysterious new Lost Logia. The rest of the Loads and Loads of Characters are going to be relegated to background roles and cameos only. StrikerS gave us too many characters to work with, it's too hard to include everyone.
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2009-11-02, 19:06 | Link #18272 |
Burst Mode
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More trouble than it's worth Since I take in the whole paragraph, when I looked at what Satashi wrote, 'Yuuno' and 'Chrono' registered in my brain first, completely ruining the surprise.
Sometimes I'll see an interesting looking line and I'll skip over everything else and read that line first. Especially bad when reading mystery novels when I run into something like this: *Extremely long segment of exposition and explaining* "Therefore, the culprit is Steve!" So I know Steve is the culprit before I read what lead to this discovery Does this happen to anyone else?
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2009-11-02, 23:02 | Link #18277 | |||
Beta by Accident
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Maine
Age: 52
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Ein: MEOW! (trans: "The woman just hates animals, I tell you!!!") Edit: Not Allquall, Fate. Just in case anyone was wondering. Quote:
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You're welcome. Excellent, sweet fic! I still love the sig Rick did for you for it, too. |
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authorshipping, befriending, fanfiction, interactive fanfiction, nanoha |
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