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2011-11-13, 18:41 | Link #7627 | |
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And for the love of God, Chaff Grenade =/= EMP grenade! Chaff is comprised of a handful of thin metalic pieces for fooling radar.
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2011-11-13, 18:44 | Link #7628 |
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@ Zero - Sorry, made a typo. I meant that the sniper rifle is too bulky to be carried around by someone who frequently uses air vents and that all I have left are the jammer knife and chaff grenades.
I'm fully aware that chaff does not equal EMP. When he uses it in the drafts, nothing but the radar dissapears. That's what the knife is for.
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2011-11-13, 19:15 | Link #7631 | |
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I dunno, but either A Big Gun or something that is smuggled out of FRACTURE armory, in short, Anti-I.S. weapon (such as giant I.S. grade handgun or folding Rail Rifle) Something similar to this, it's a BFG but can be folded down to the size of a laptop. Meister, any ideas?
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2011-11-13, 20:50 | Link #7633 |
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@ Zero - Making a list to avoid possibly having a marty stu. Is there anything you can add?
Side note - Having these traits doesn't make a character a stu, it depends on how the writer handles it. 1. Not a male I.S pilot (obviously) 2. Doesn't attract girls like bees to honey. 3. Can't take on the personals in a straight up fight by himself and can only win through strategy or luck. 4. Not instant friends with the canon cast. Cecilia already doesn't like him. 5. Other characters call him out on assholish actions. Anything to add?
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Hot Shot: Okay Sideswipe: Okay Ratchet: Not Sure (Possibly #5, being the Negative/Sarcastic type) Scourge: Okay |
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ANother is that he doesn't combstomp the canon characters unless there's a very GOOD reason.
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2011-11-14, 04:11 | Link #7640 | |
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Damn it, Josh is defining Stu to a whole new level (except for point 6 which Blitz proposed) (and of course, we knew how it ACTUALLY goes)
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