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ganbaru · 2009-10-21, 01:28

Esp; the animatio n is great but the spooky factor is quite missing; I know than she is a vampire bit it's isn"t showing much o this picture. I am not sur e than it would be enought but adding some blood on the ground might help.

Eps~ · 2009-10-21, 05:12

Taken the suggestions into reality:

v2

- Fixed colour, levels
- Added glowing red vampire eyes, some blood
- Added blur to the non light area
- Made it darker to give it a true night feeling

Spoiler for comparison to v1:

Thoughts?

ganbaru · 2009-10-21, 07:28

Esp I prefer version2 but it's much scary. I did saw the glowing eyes on the dark only because I was searching for the glow. For the darkening of the the non-illuminated area, is it possible than you did it too much? something betweem v1 and v2 would look more natural.

Kana Futayo · 2009-10-21, 07:31

Esper

Eps~ · 2009-10-21, 09:06

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moonie

Esper

Pfffff

Also, version 1.5!

- Balanced the brightness
- Removed some unnecessary blur
- Slighty fixed colours

Spoiler for comparison:

Should be something between v1 and v2. *stares at ganbaru* Well, anything else?

ganbaru · 2009-10-21, 17:31

Esp I prefer V15, the lightning is more realistic. The only disavantage is than it tonned down the ''glowing red eyes''.

capture · 2009-10-21, 21:46

@Eps - I prefer this version for more spooky feeling... plus the glowing eyes in there is really cool ^^

KholdStare · 2009-10-22, 00:45

Quote:

Originally Posted by capture

@Eps - I prefer this version for more spooky feeling... plus the glowing eyes in there is really cool ^^

I also think this version is more "spooky." Technically version 1.5 has the best lighting, but what are we going for here, spookiness or realism? I know that my vote will go to the entries that will best fit the theme, which are the spookiest ones.

Evil Rick · 2009-10-22, 00:47

@Eps

Quote:

Now this is spooky.

Eps~ · 2009-10-22, 10:28

Since it's getting close to the final date, I might as well submit it as my final entry.

Final entry:

- Made adjustments from v1.5 to look more like v2
- You might call it v1.75
- Darker setting and the eyes are glowing fiercer
- I'm getting seasick from looking at the swinging lamp

Spoiler for comparison:

PreSage · 2009-10-23, 01:07

Applied the suggestions for the light, so here's version...3?

Spoiler for previous versions for comparison:

I know I'm calling it close to the deadline but which one looks good? C&C?

Larthak · 2009-10-23, 03:15

Quote:

Originally Posted by PreSage

Applied the suggestions for the light, so here's version...3?

FINAL ENTRY (...just in case.

)

I know I'm calling it close to the deadline but which one looks good? C&C?

This one, looks more natural. It's perfect.

KholdStare · 2009-10-23, 03:39

Quote:

Originally Posted by PreSage

Applied the suggestions for the light, so here's version...3?

FINAL ENTRY (...just in case.

)

I think it's a nice entry. In my opinion though, the flickering candles are quite distracting of some sort. An easy fix would be for the candles to glow and dim more slowly. While this reduces realism, it actually works in favor of the theme. I would like most to focus on the ghost, which was what made your static version so spooky.

ganbaru · 2009-10-23, 04:12

PreSage I would say than your latest look the best. The animation look better on this one, but like KholdStare said it's getting more attention than the ghost.

PreSage · 2009-10-23, 06:48

I was afraid the flashing light would divert too much attention.

Well, I toned the intensity of the lights down a bit and slowed the flashing down. This is it. No more tweaking. >_<; Thanks for all the help everyone! And good luck to all!

FINAL ENTRY
v4

Spoiler for previous versions for comparison:

KholdStare · 2009-10-23, 15:51

It looks much better. Good job!

KiNA · 2009-10-23, 22:45

Final Entry list.

SweetHoney
katiemirmo
Miko Miko
Raiga
ganbaru
ayu-smepai
Baka-man
Larthak
KholdStare
vandakiara
White Manju Bun
Soul-Stealer
Evil Rick
LKK
JRendell
Hakuryu
Katocchi
Risa chan
Drake
Endrance
Pellissier
capture
Eps~
PreSage
KiNA

Entry phase closed. Wait for Solace for voting thread.

Have fun guys and good job ^^ .. Check out the last 7 for horror animation battles

2009-10-21, 01:28	Link #261
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Esp; the animatio n is great but the spooky factor is quite missing; I know than she is a vampire bit it's isn"t showing much o this picture. I am not sur e than it would be enought but adding some blood on the ground might help. __________________

2009-10-21, 05:12	Link #262
Eps~ Busy busy busy Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Slovenia Age: 36	Taken the suggestions into reality: v2 - Fixed colour, levels - Added glowing red vampire eyes, some blood - Added blur to the non light area - Made it darker to give it a true night feeling Spoiler for comparison to v1: Thoughts? __________________ My Graphics Workshop

2009-10-21, 07:28	Link #263
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Esp I prefer version2 but it's much scary. I did saw the glowing eyes on the dark only because I was searching for the glow. For the darkening of the the non-illuminated area, is it possible than you did it too much? something betweem v1 and v2 would look more natural. __________________

2009-10-21, 07:31	Link #264
Kana Futayo is not amused Graphic Designer Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Naval Base	Esper __________________

2009-10-21, 17:31	Link #266
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Esp I prefer V15, the lightning is more realistic. The only disavantage is than it tonned down the ''glowing red eyes''. __________________

2009-10-21, 21:46	Link #267
capture Saber's Husband XD Join Date: Oct 2006 Age: 36	@Eps - I prefer this version for more spooky feeling... plus the glowing eyes in there is really cool ^^ __________________ Last edited by capture; 2009-10-21 at 22:31.

2009-10-22, 10:28	Link #270
Eps~ Busy busy busy Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Slovenia Age: 36	Since it's getting close to the final date, I might as well submit it as my final entry. Final entry: - Made adjustments from v1.5 to look more like v2 - You might call it v1.75 - Darker setting and the eyes are glowing fiercer - I'm getting seasick from looking at the swinging lamp Spoiler for comparison: v1 v1.5 v1.75 v2 __________________ My Graphics Workshop

2009-10-23, 01:07	Link #271
PreSage Strangely dependable... Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: some random place out there...	Applied the suggestions for the light, so here's version...3? Spoiler for previous versions for comparison: Static version: I know I'm calling it close to the deadline but which one looks good? C&C? __________________ :\|::\|Sig Gallery\|::\|: --------------- [/TH][/TR][/table] Last edited by PreSage; 2009-10-23 at 06:46.

2009-10-23, 04:12	Link #274
ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	PreSage I would say than your latest look the best. The animation look better on this one, but like KholdStare said it's getting more attention than the ghost. __________________

2009-10-23, 06:48	Link #275
PreSage Strangely dependable... Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: some random place out there...	I was afraid the flashing light would divert too much attention. Well, I toned the intensity of the lights down a bit and slowed the flashing down. This is it. No more tweaking. >_<; Thanks for all the help everyone! And good luck to all! FINAL ENTRY v4 Spoiler for previous versions for comparison: V3 __________________ :\|::\|Sig Gallery\|::\|: --------------- [/TH][/TR][/table]

2009-10-23, 15:51	Link #276
KholdStare ISML Technical Staff Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Phoenix, AZ Age: 35	It looks much better. Good job! __________________ Kholdy's MAL, ISML Chat, Saimoe Blog, Saimoe Wiki