Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Who knows...

D: Does that mean... you're considering doing a full blown story *hint hint hint Gets Shot*

EDIT: Page claim in the name of...Phantom Fate!!!

I think you mean Sexy Phantom Fate :3

[Satashi]

@TSS: For some reason, when I see your signature I can only think of that song "I'm bringing sexy back"

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

@TSS: For some reason, when I see your signature I can only think of that song "I'm bringing sexy back"

"Brining sexy back" O.o

*points to self*

Is confused...

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

@TSS: For some reason, when I see your signature I can only think of that song "I'm bringing sexy back"

Spoiler for ...:

Zafira: *Gets up on stage* ...I'm not doing this
Hayate: As your master I order you to.
Signum: *bright red* ... I did it so can you
Vita: Come on! Or are you too much of a wimpy puppy?
Zafira: *Angry* I'M A WOLF!
Vita: *smirk* prove it
Zafira: ... *goaded into it* mutter mutter grumble. *music starts playing* I hate you all. *picks up microphone*
Hayate: *Whistle*
Zafira: *monotone* I'm bringing Sexy Back.
Them other boys don't know how to act.
I think you're special whats behind your back.
So turn around and I'll pick up the slack.
Take em' to the bridge...
*sees next lyrics*
... No way in hell
Vita: Wimp!
Zafira: *Mic throw*

... I'm totally writing a full version of the above... if you have a suggestion for a character's song suggest it now

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for ...:

Zafira: *Gets up on stage* ...I'm not doing this
Hayate: As your master I order you to.
Signum: *bright red* ... I did it so can you
Vita: Come on! Or are you too much of a wimpy puppy?
Zafira: *Angry* I'M A WOLF!
Vita: *smirk* prove it
Zafira: ... *goaded into it* mutter mutter grumble. *music starts playing* I hate you all. *picks up microphone*
Hayate: *Whistle*
Zafira: *monotone* I'm bringing Sexy Back.
Them other boys don't know how to act.
I think you're special whats behind your back.
So turn around and I'll pick up the slack.
Take em' to the bridge...
*sees next lyrics*
... No way in hell
Vita: Wimp!
Zafira: *Mic throw*

... I'm totally writing a full version of the above... if you have a suggestion for a character's song suggest it now

*keels over trying not to laugh his ass off while at work. in an office no less!*

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for ...:

Zafira: *Gets up on stage* ...I'm not doing this
Hayate: As your master I order you to.
Signum: *bright red* ... I did it so can you
Vita: Come on! Or are you too much of a wimpy puppy?
Zafira: *Angry* I'M A WOLF!
Vita: *smirk* prove it
Zafira: ... *goaded into it* mutter mutter grumble. *music starts playing* I hate you all. *picks up microphone*
Hayate: *Whistle*
Zafira: *monotone* I'm bringing Sexy Back.
Them other boys don't know how to act.
I think you're special whats behind your back.
So turn around and I'll pick up the slack.
Take em' to the bridge...
*sees next lyrics*
... No way in hell
Vita: Wimp!
Zafira: *Mic throw*

... I'm totally writing a full version of the above... if you have a suggestion for a character's song suggest it now

*cheer!*

Fate has to do this one.......

Spoiler for Fate!:

I love how she gets tired near the end :3

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

*cheer!*

Fate has to do this one.......

Spoiler for Fate!:

I love how she gets tired near the end :3

I like how she switches from Impulse to Sonic form :3

[Hiddenryuu]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hbmdI...eature=related

I like this one the best... :-P

[Satashi]

*cough* oops.

Dream Wing: 4,000 words.

No I didn't watch Mai Otome 0 ~S.ifr~ instead of writing...
*drools over Rena*

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for ...:

Zafira: *Gets up on stage* ...I'm not doing this
Hayate: As your master I order you to.
Signum: *bright red* ... I did it so can you
Vita: Come on! Or are you too much of a wimpy puppy?
Zafira: *Angry* I'M A WOLF!
Vita: *smirk* prove it
Zafira: ... *goaded into it* mutter mutter grumble. *music starts playing* I hate you all. *picks up microphone*
Hayate: *Whistle*
Zafira: *monotone* I'm bringing Sexy Back.
Them other boys don't know how to act.
I think you're special whats behind your back.
So turn around and I'll pick up the slack.
Take em' to the bridge...
*sees next lyrics*
... No way in hell
Vita: Wimp!
Zafira: *Mic throw*

... I'm totally writing a full version of the above... if you have a suggestion for a character's song suggest it now

Funny

BTW: In you sig, I think that actually is Zaphira

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

*cough* oops.

Dream Wing: 4,000 words.

No I didn't watch Mai Otome 0 ~S.ifr~ instead of writing...
*drools over Rena*

Rena's hot.

But Nina's mother is even hotter!

[Hiddenryuu]

I just stumbled on this and thought it was kinda funny in some way

http://blazblue.jp/rachel.html

-Looks like Fate
-VA by Hayate's VA

hmm ...

[Evil Rick]

Chapter 36

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for The Colisseum:

Before we get noticed on it, we alredy were in our way to the Roman Colisseum in Italy, Sasuke had fixxed the things very well, at the next morning of our meeting he called all and tolde us that he had detected the presence of Nanoha in the Colisseum, that she waslooking for something that we must find before her, that came out very well, Sasuke was awesome

We arrive the Colisseum at Night, this time we were not going to fell in the same trcik,we had been ambushed twice by Nanoha's minions, this time we were redy, we entered in the ancient estructure with our guns reday to fire, at first it seemed that there was no one there

"A batallion stays here" Sky comanded

"Alphonse, you take down by youself a big Slave,you lead the batallion that guard the entrance" Raphael added,

"Sr! Yes!" Alphonse looked very happy

"I stay here with you" Helga Added

"No, Vivio will need your help" He said, refering obviusly to the key that we were looking and to the riddle 'The shadow is the true one" I didn't understand whet does it means

In that moment Alphonse got close to Helga, said something at her ear and he gave her something that in that moment I couldn't see what it was, some tears escaped from Helga's eyes, she quickly cleaned them and kissed Alphone in his mouth, the she came with us, she looked very happy

"What did he tell to you?" Karil asked, Helga smiled and answered her

"He toldme 'Karil is very anoying. Right?'" Karil got red,that was very funny, leaded by Sky and Raphael we continue our way through the ancient building, we were going down into the cellars, while I was walking, I couldn't stop thinking in the horrible deads that suffered the ancient gladiators who fought in that place,just thinking in the screamsof the mens been devored by lions chilled my blood

"There is nothing here" A regulator told

"Drako Sasuke never faild in his predictions" Raphael said "If he said that Nanoha was looking for something here, then something is here!" After this, we all spread up, of course, Karil, Helga, Jasper and me were in the smae group

We passed like 5 hours searching the entire place, we didn't found nothing

"This is pointless" Helga said "This place had passed here for centuries and now we are supossed to find some kind of secret passague in one night?!"

"Helga relax!" I said "This is important, keep your voice down" While I was trying to caldown Helga I noticed that Jasper waslooking to a statueof the God Ares,the God of war, I got close to him and askhim

"What's up Jaser?" He only reponded, more to himself than to me

"The Shadow is the True one, The Shadow is the true one... the true one what?"

"I don't have any idea of what does it means, but there are still some doors that we don't..."

"Door! That's it!" Jasper quickly move to the back of the statue

"Jasper?" Karil asked, wemoved at the backof the statue but by our surprise, Jasper had disapeared!

"Jasper?! Were are y..AHHH!" I felt that some one grabed my feet, when I turn my sight down I saw that it was Jasper's hand who was coming out of the ground, no, to be more exactly, out of the Statue's shadow, he raised his head out and told us

"The shadow is the true door, Ares was the God of War, no one better to guard a key, come! You will not belive what's down here!" He sumerged his head again in the shadow, seeing that there was no other better option,I jumped into the shadow, it feeled like a pool of smudgue,I falled into some kind of corridor,alumbrated by torchs, Helga and Karil jumped in after me, we were in our way, but something told me that we were not alone

[Dr_Tom]

Originally Posted by Satashi

*cough* oops.

Dream Wing: 4,000 words.

No I didn't watch Mai Otome 0 ~S.ifr~ instead of writing...
*drools over Rena*

This makes me sad....I was really looking forward to reading chapter 2 today too....

[Krinen]

*curls in ball*

I have to start chapter 3 over.
I failed, miserably. I just can't seem to write in segments.
The last two were written in a oneshot spree, hence the... degraded quality.
But I'm out of time, so I cannot write Ch 3. That is, if anyone even cares enough about it to really feel bummed.
So; I'm not promising anything. But if Chapter 3 shows up tomorrow, don't be shocked, ne?

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Funny

BTW: In you sig, I think that actually is Zaphira

nope Zafira's the correct romanization (both Zaphira and Zafira are used (Zafira more widly so) have a tendecy to be used but since the car he's named after is the Opel Zafira I go with that one. Btw he's actually called Zafila on the StrikerS website but I'm never calling him that.


Any more suggestions before I run off and write the karaoke character torture fest
(Course that won't be until this afternood... or tonight depending on where you live... heck it could be morning when I write it for some people)
Hayate: Torture oh ho ho ho what could you mean
Everybody else: D:

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Dr_Tom

This makes me sad....I was really looking forward to reading chapter 2 today too....

Sorry>.<

But on a good note, I'm happy with this chapter so far. A lot is getting done and characters are starting to meet ^^.

P.S~Thanks for the siggy, Evil Rick.

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Sorry>.<

But on a good note, I'm happy with this chapter so far. A lot is getting done and characters are starting to meet ^^.

P.S~Thanks for the siggy, Evil Rick.

Excellent
Finally you sig doesn't hurt my eyes :P

[Thesinwithin]

Hey guys, question: Anyone ever written/seen an awful (and by awful I mean amazing, it's local slang) Vampire fic involving our favorite blond mage?

Because I think that Fate would make a great vampire... mage.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by KoSSa

Excellent
Finally you sig doesn't hurt my eyes :P

yours hurts my eyes

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Hey guys, question: Anyone ever written/seen an awful (and by awful I mean amazing, it's local slang) Vampire fic involving our favorite blond mage?

Because I think that Fate would make a great vampire... mage.

no, but that would be pretty sick (slag for slang)

edit:Page claim!

Claimed in the name of.... Vivio's doodles