Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[mercurianangel]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

*COUGH COUGH GAG SPUTTER*

NANI OR KORE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Maybe mercurianangel should draw this...or maybe just Nanoha's part to make it SFW...>_>

Oh I am sorely tempted...I have just TWO more finals left!
...
And then a whole lot of catch up drawing to do
and a more unlocking characters/stages in Smash bros 0: 3

Originally Posted by Keroko

Spoiler for Raising Heart:

I felt like I was facing the Spanish Inquisition the way Fate-chan kept staring at me, not my best friend. Fate-chan was not going to take no for an answer, but if I’d tell her the truth, she wouldn’t let me go to class!

Best to resort to a little white lie.

“I feel a bit homesick, I guess.”

Fate kept staring at me, she didn’t buy it. “You look worse then ‘a bit homesick’ you’re feeling horrible, aren’t you?”

I kept quiet, not wanting to answer the question.

“Nanoha…” Oh no… her tone had shifted from stern to worried, and her eyes… not the trembling worry eyes!

I averted my head, not wanting to meet Fate-chan’s worried eyes. Those eyes always manage to make me feel guilty if I lie about how I feel.

Having my head averted, I couldn’t see what Fate was doing, but I did feel two arms embracing me.

“You are feeling homesick.” Fate said with a sigh. “I’ve known you for years now Nanoha, there is no way you wouldn’t feel horrible after suddenly being without your family.” I turned back to face Fate-chan as she slowly let go. “But don’t worry, you’re not alone. You have friends, new friends, who will support you. Comfort you. So just talk to us if you feel like you need to.”

I mulled over Fate’s statement in my head. She was right. Fate-chan has always been by my side, since as long as I can remember. Hayate-chan I met only yesterday, but she already treats me like we were together since kindergarden, and Yuuno-san offered to help me even though we had only talked for an hour.

But… aren’t I a burden to them?

“Nanoha, let’s hurry or we’ll be late.” Fate-chan reminded me.

Placing a smile on my face, I nodded to Fate and hurried to class.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

Lunchtime arrived, and just as I tried to get up and out of the classroom, a hand grabbed my shoulder.

“Nanoha-chan.” Hayate-chan’s voice came from my left. “Did you bring lunch today?”

I blinked.

I had completely forgotten to pack my lunch this morning. I really had nothing to eat.

“I thought so.” Hayate-chan said with a grin. “Here, you can have some of mine.”

“Thanks.” I said with a smile as she shoved our two desks together and paced her lunchbox in the middle. She offered me a pair of sticks and we dug in. The lunchbox was quite rich, a mix of rice, vegetables, meat, and really delicious too.

“Did you cook this in the cooking club?”

“No, this one I made at home. I usually cook at home. Shamal tries too but… she’s not too good at it.” Hayate giggled.

“Wow, I don’t think I can do that. I mean, I can cook since my parents owned a cake restaurant, but to cook every night…”

“I could show you. Remember, the offer to come to my place still stands.”

“… I’ll think about it.”

I turned my head back to the lunch. I didn’t miss the flash of concern that passed through Hayate’s eyes, though.

Another person worried for me.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

At the end of the day, school wasn’t that bad; even though I still felt horrible I managed to get through.

Living alone was definitely a lot harder then I expected it to be. I thought ‘what’s the big deal? I’ve been home alone before when my parents and siblings were all out to do their own thing’ but it’s a lot harder then that. I miss my family. I miss my mother, my father, my brother, my sister. I wanted them back, I wanted my old life back.

I snuck out of class before Fate-chan had another chance to catch me. I really appreciate what she is doing, but all I am now is a burden. During classes she got called on by the teachers several times for not paying attention.

I don’t want that.

I looked at my watch. 15:30, I should decide what to do for dinner soon. I could make something myself, which means I’ll have to get ingredients from the store. I can also settle for a takeout, which means I’ll have a few more hours to myself. Though… Hayate also said I could come over anytime I like.

A.) I’ll go buy ingredients and cook myself a nice meal.
B.) … Hayate practically invited me over tonight; I can’t really decline, can I?
C.) A meal at Hayate’s place sounds nice.
D.) I’m going to take a nice stroll through town, and order some takeout at the end of the day.

Spoiler for Keroko's Corner:

You are standing on what looks like the bridge of a spaceship, judging by the viewports all around you. If you look at the bridge, you see a two lowered areas, where people are wildly buzzing around taking care of the ship. In the middle of the two lowered areas is a bridge, obviously for the superior officers to keep an eye on their troops. A hiss comes from the other end of the room, and a steel door opens. A blue eyed girl with red hair tied in a ponytail on the right side of her head walks onto the bridge and smiles at you.

"Welcome to Keroko's Corner. In this place we give out hints and tips to the game. These hints may help you get better relations, or avoid any 'bad endings' that may occur from your choices. If you would rather not use this help, and you don't have to, you can just close the spoiler tag and vote. Anyway, on to the subject at hand.

You're at an interesting junction right now. Nanoha is not feeling well, but, Nanoha being Nanoha she doesn't want to 'burden' others into letting them help her. She needs a strong person to break through her thick skull and tell her that she is not burdening anyone. Fate, while a close friend, is not a strong enough person to do so.

Oh, and a little warning when choosing: The intent with the choice will shape the motivation Nanoha has for aproaching the situation, which will change the way people will react to her."

The girl salutes.

"Good luck."

D~
And now I want takeout too XD

EDIT
Eep no longer a pageclaim virgin 0: X
Dedicated to TAKEOUT!

[Sam the Onion]

The Crack is strong within FF

Originally Posted by Satashi

I did a funny short where N/F/H all got together a little while ago. When they were drunk

For real, though, all the current lemons were practice for the SbtB one that is coming up. As a joint project with Angel, I wanted to get a lot of practice in so it would be worth reading.

sneak peak? Okay ^^

NSFW! But still AS safe.

Spoiler for NSFW NSFW NSFW:

Moving down, Fate kissed Nanoha's bellybutton. Hand instantly threaded through her hair as she encouraged the shirt farther up. The girl under her was shaking, breathing erratically as she once again kissed the soft skin. Red eyes explored the revealed section, hands embracing the sides in a soft caress. She could feel each pulse of Nanoha's heart though the skin that she kissed again. Her lips pursed, mouth pressing harder against the delicate stomach, and sucked. Nanoha's expression was just as she thought it would be. Her body spasmed briefly, panting increasing. The soft skin was bitten lightly, licked to be soothed, and sucked on again to increase the feeling. She left a small bruise, and kissed it to ease any lingering feeling before moving upwards again. Nanoha was gasping now, hands shivering as she was kissed again.

The blonde's mouth moved upwards, nose trailing the skin as she inhaled the scent. Another kiss just below the bra, another taste of skin, another mark of love. Fate paused to catch her breath, to look up and see Nanoha's nervous but excited look. The eyes told her everything she wanted to know. Slowly Nanoha's back arched, her shirt sliding upwards along with her bra. Hands trailed from Fate's hair as the clothing was moved along her body. Brown hair spilled out over the bed, the cool air relaxing her burning revealed skin. Hands touched, fingers interlaced, lips met skin once again.

Sneaky peek is tasty and juicy

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

*since last post*What....The....Ugggggg....

Spoiler for Sam the Onion:

More interesting scenarios. I can see the five paths resulting in two possibly related things. One that is that each path is representative of a school of Selshin magic. The second is that four of the paths leads to the new knights in some fashion and the middle one leads to the BoD or something that will lead to it.

Spoiler for Anshwers:

Actually there's much more schools than five.

And why there are five tunnels will be explained as well.

I just have to explain every little thing

*Trip...*

Spoiler for You made me do it...(not related to L!F)kindofNSFW:

"Ok" Nanoha put the shaving cream and razor back on the bathroom vanity. "Now its your turn."

Fate leaned back in the tub and gazed up at her girlfriend. "So then where are you going?"

Nanoha winked before disappearing. "Just to get something special."

'Something special?'

*putt putt putt put*

'What the hell?'

*putt putt pu- voomm putt putt putt.....*

'Is that a?!!!'

Nanoha came back into the bathroom with goggles, work gloves, a hedge trimmer and nothing else.

"IM NOT THAT BAD!"

"Nayhahah" It was worth seeing the expression on her girlfriends face...

I said when i started that the characters would be quite out there as far as their personalities. Maybe when i get to the background of the girls one might be able to pick up what would make them the way they are compared to the originals.

I think were going above the Crack that lurks within the OC thread :eyespi n:

Originally Posted by Satashi

http://snappoll.com/poll/257435.php

WTF? 52 votes?

me thinks someone realized the way to cheat on these polls... I normally get 25-30 votes max.

Somebody would cheat in that?!

The Crack is deep withing people's hearts.

edit:

Nanoha looked at the pill in her hand. "Three hours only right?" She asked yet again.

"Yes, three hours only." Shamal confirmed. "Drink it with water, have your fun, and you'll wake up a girl again."

The Ace looked down once more, closed her fist around the pill, blushed furiously, and nodded. "Um, thank you... don't tell anyone okay?"

"I promise." Shamal patted Nanoha on the head. "It's common to experiment in same-sex relationships. Just remember, you could get her pregnant, sooo...." She placed a condom in Nanoha's other hand. "Your choice."

Nanoha blushed again, pocketed both, and stammered out her goodbyes. 'Three hours... I'll be amle for three hours...Will three hours be long enough?' Her cheeks colored more.

Satashol is a very strong refinement of Crack

Originally Posted by Keroko

Spoiler for Raising Heart:

I felt like I was facing the Spanish Inquisition the way Fate-chan kept staring at me, not my best friend. Fate-chan was not going to take no for an answer, but if I’d tell her the truth, she wouldn’t let me go to class!

Best to resort to a little white lie.

“I feel a bit homesick, I guess.”

Fate kept staring at me, she didn’t buy it. “You look worse then ‘a bit homesick’ you’re feeling horrible, aren’t you?”

I kept quiet, not wanting to answer the question.

“Nanoha…” Oh no… her tone had shifted from stern to worried, and her eyes… not the trembling worry eyes!

I averted my head, not wanting to meet Fate-chan’s worried eyes. Those eyes always manage to make me feel guilty if I lie about how I feel.

Having my head averted, I couldn’t see what Fate was doing, but I did feel two arms embracing me.

“You are feeling homesick.” Fate said with a sigh. “I’ve known you for years now Nanoha, there is no way you wouldn’t feel horrible after suddenly being without your family.” I turned back to face Fate-chan as she slowly let go. “But don’t worry, you’re not alone. You have friends, new friends, who will support you. Comfort you. So just talk to us if you feel like you need to.”

I mulled over Fate’s statement in my head. She was right. Fate-chan has always been by my side, since as long as I can remember. Hayate-chan I met only yesterday, but she already treats me like we were together since kindergarden, and Yuuno-san offered to help me even though we had only talked for an hour.

But… aren’t I a burden to them?

“Nanoha, let’s hurry or we’ll be late.” Fate-chan reminded me.

Placing a smile on my face, I nodded to Fate and hurried to class.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

Lunchtime arrived, and just as I tried to get up and out of the classroom, a hand grabbed my shoulder.

“Nanoha-chan.” Hayate-chan’s voice came from my left. “Did you bring lunch today?”

I blinked.

I had completely forgotten to pack my lunch this morning. I really had nothing to eat.

“I thought so.” Hayate-chan said with a grin. “Here, you can have some of mine.”

“Thanks.” I said with a smile as she shoved our two desks together and paced her lunchbox in the middle. She offered me a pair of sticks and we dug in. The lunchbox was quite rich, a mix of rice, vegetables, meat, and really delicious too.

“Did you cook this in the cooking club?”

“No, this one I made at home. I usually cook at home. Shamal tries too but… she’s not too good at it.” Hayate giggled.

“Wow, I don’t think I can do that. I mean, I can cook since my parents owned a cake restaurant, but to cook every night…”

“I could show you. Remember, the offer to come to my place still stands.”

“… I’ll think about it.”

I turned my head back to the lunch. I didn’t miss the flash of concern that passed through Hayate’s eyes, though.

Another person worried for me.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

At the end of the day, school wasn’t that bad; even though I still felt horrible I managed to get through.

Living alone was definitely a lot harder then I expected it to be. I thought ‘what’s the big deal? I’ve been home alone before when my parents and siblings were all out to do their own thing’ but it’s a lot harder then that. I miss my family. I miss my mother, my father, my brother, my sister. I wanted them back, I wanted my old life back.

I snuck out of class before Fate-chan had another chance to catch me. I really appreciate what she is doing, but all I am now is a burden. During classes she got called on by the teachers several times for not paying attention.

I don’t want that.

I looked at my watch. 15:30, I should decide what to do for dinner soon. I could make something myself, which means I’ll have to get ingredients from the store. I can also settle for a takeout, which means I’ll have a few more hours to myself. Though… Hayate also said I could come over anytime I like.

A.) I’ll go buy ingredients and cook myself a nice meal.
B.) … Hayate practically invited me over tonight; I can’t really decline, can I?
C.) A meal at Hayate’s place sounds nice.
D.) I’m going to take a nice stroll through town, and order some takeout at the end of the day.

Thank catgirl there's still something normal in this thread

D from me


And for today's scenarios and another segment of...

Spoiler for A minute in Sam's mind:

Today we find out how names, magic's and pairs came to happen.

Three of the coming names are cameo's of my friends various MMO characters. One is just me rambling. (And no Same =! Sam)
Three of the names have plot significance. One is just me rambling.


If you find some similarities of any of the coming schools. It's your imagination.
If I copied something, it's unintentional as I wanted to make my story as much mine as possible. (Speaking about thing created by me. Not about owning the text.)

Sure there are some similarities to things but those are just similarities. I didn't deliberately copy something.

This issue will be handled in the future little bit more.


The pairs which are used were decided by lottery excluding one. (Within the same unit. Starts don't pair with Lighting.)
There is a similar pair choosing not far from here.

This was a minute in Sam's mind. Hope I answered some of your questions.

Spoiler for Scenarios 55, 56, 57, 58 & 59:

”Get ready for everything, Tia.” Nanoha adviced in her barrier jacket and Raising Heart ready for combat.

”Yes, captain Nanoha.” Teana was overparanoid about what they were facing. Aren was a person that could split the seas just by asking for it. You couldn't expect anything less from the knights.

After a short walk they arrived in a wide hall filled with pillars. There were total of five strong torches in the sanctum. One on each side and one in the roof, which was filled with different equipment, mostly weapons though, hanging from it. Knives to shields, Teana thought she saw a spoon there too. The entire hall was covered with metal, shocking the two of finding such place deep within an anchient temple. On the other side of the wide hall there was a high platform with a person on it.

”Good day, dear warriors.” Sitting on the high platform, he welcomed with open arms.

”Identify yourself.” Nanoha ordered, aiming her staff.

”Whoa!” The man stratled. ”The hostility.” He lifted himself up. He had a cloth around his waist and a white barret in his head. His other clothing didn't match this, as had a full black monk robe with the hood down.

”Well, that's why you and us are here.” Nanoha stated slightly amused.

”But shouldn't we do the speech between the baddie and the goodies?” The black monk suggested with large arm movement. ”You know, the one where I laugh 'Rwahaha~' and you go 'How could you?!'.” He acted overdramaticly.

”I was told that I couldn't befriend you with words.” Nanoha smirked. ”And you haven't done anything yet...” She added.

”Aaaw... I was so looking forward to it...” He frowned. ”Then, I shall introduce myself.” He made an unnecessary cough.

”I feel no fear as I am stuck in life.” A small step back.
”An open wound, where logic leaks from reality.”
”A tear in mortality, kept closed by the chains of time.” He brought his hand to his chest.
”This is who I am. A Selshin knight, Same Myes.” The man bowed deeply and noticed his loincloth. ”What the hell is this still doing here?!” He ripped it off his waist and did the same for his barret.

Teana now noticed that the man had fairly short, blond hair.

”How about you?” Same bent over for another deep bow.

”I am Takamachi Nanoha, Combat Instructor for the Riot Force 6 of Time-Space Administration Bureau's Special Management and the Captain of the Stars squad.”

”I am Teana Lanster, 2nd Class Private of the same unit and Stars-04 of the Stars unit.”

”Maybe I should do it formally as well.” Same scratched his chin and raised to bow again. ”My name is Same Myes. I am the Dark Age of the Book of Darkness 2.0. A T4 acolyte of Lucine...”

A silent and swift object flew behind Nanoha and took her ponytail with it.

”Huh...?” Nanoha turned around to see her brown hair fall down. ”My barrier didn't even flinch?!”

”...a Manipulator of Shadows and Souls.” The shadows of all weapons hanging from the ceiling rose up and aimed at Nanoha and Teana. ”Nice to meet you.”

____________________

”Hum...” Subaru hummed as her partner was rather silent.

Baby, I wanna be your girl
Baby, all I need is you...

”Be serious!” Vita yelled at the calm Subaru.

”Sorry, Vita-chan.” Subaru's vision trailed at the corridor they were in. ”Ah look... a room.” She stated after the corridor widened into a open hall filled with blue lights.

”This is...” Vita's eyes widened

”Oh, pretty.” Subaru approached a blue light.

”DON'T TOUCH THEM!” Vita screamed and swung her Graf Eisen on Subaru's way.

”Sorry...” Subaru pulled her hand back stratled.

”Vita-chan?” A male voice asked from far away in the hall. ”Is it really you Vita-chan?”

”Yes, Linque-san.” Vita remembered perfectly this man. The leader and tactician of the knights.

”How long has it been?” Linque reminenced his lost life. ”I see you brough a pretty lady with you.” He complimented after noticing Subaru. ”I am Linque Cedoz, Recorded Age of the Book of Darkness and an acolyte of Crondo.”

Subaru expected the man to pull a rose out from somewhere. He was like one of those people in Nanoha's manga. He had long white hair hanging behind him without any hold and his face was strangely attractive and calming. He was wearing a long red robe-like jacket, wine red shirt and straight pants with shoes to match.

”A Manipulator of Time.” Vita continued.

”You remember well, Vita-chan.”

”Time?” Subaru whispered to Vita. ”You mean he can stop time?”

”To a certain aspect.” She fixated her eyes on the red man. ”They can store time of actions in time and use it when they want. But it's much more complicated than that.”

”Yes. You remember very well.” Linque pulled two carved swords from his jacket. They were beautiful and anybody seeing them could tell they were masterpieces. ”But... you really think that in these 382 years, we haven't met, I wouldn't have thought up new tricks?”

Vita laughed at the man. ”No I don't. But don't think that I wouldn't have either.” She smiled, readying her mallet.

”I'm waiting with interest.” He smiled and the two old friends engaged combat.

____________________

”Fate-san, I think I heard something.” Caro told slightly trembling.

”Don't worry.” She patted her head. ”Everybody will be fine.”

”Right!” Caro cheered suprisingly easy.

”Caro isn't ready for battle like this. She would be an easy target.” Fate thought. ”Caro, when we get there. Support me from hiding, okay?” She planned.

”I understand. That's what I do best.” Caro gave a big smile at Fate. ”Supporting I mean.” She corrected, shaking her head.

”Haha~ I know.” Fate gave another pat on Caro's head and entered a large hall.

It was well lit and you could easily see a girl, around Caro's age, on a low pedestal in the center. She had pink dress, almost identical to Caro's and you could have mistaken the two as sisters if she didn't have black hair.

”Little girl, you are a knight, right?” Fate checked as she was relucant to attack a 10 year old.

”...” The girl inspected Fate fully from head to toe. ”Nope.”

Fate knew when children lied, no matter how good they were but this was just too obvious.

”Then can you tell me why are you here?”

”Waiting.” The little girl stood up on the shrine she was in. ”Waiting for fate.”

Fate was shocked slightly as the girl called her name but discarded it as a coincidence. ”Very deep for a ten year old.” She praised.

”Tha- Hey! I'm not ten! I'm eleven!” She corrected. ”Actually much more...”

She really was a child. A child stuck in this.

Fate chuckled for a moment. ”I am Fate T. Harlaown. What is your name?” She introduced herself.

”I am Lanlai Genran. Blessed Age of the Book.” The girl bowed deeply making her hat drop, which, too, was nearly identical to Caro's. ”Good to meet you!”

Fate was slightly amused as the girl picked up her hat and gave another bow, now keeping the hat on her with another hand.

”You must be aware what this is about.”

”Yes...” The girl fell silent as it seemed she didn't enjoy combat. ”I must kill you.”

In an instant the girl was surrounded in fire and second later a horned beast showed up crouching. To Fate it looked like a were-lion with blazing red fur, dripping sparks, in it's back and joints, dark brown skin and massive backwards curved horns. Raising up the beast looked at Fate with demeading look and showed it's superiority with a bellowing roar deafening her.

”Prepeare yourself, mortal.” The beast ran swiftly towards Fate.

____________________

Miachell sniffed the air before she heard the sound of two distant footsteps. ”Couldn't be.” ”Two warriors enter the lair.” She announced from her pedestal. ”Signum and a young boy.”

Erio heard the voice but couldn't see where it came from. The walls echoed and it was dark everywhere else but the center.

”Miachell.” Signum lifted Leavantein. ”Keep yourself on toes Erio.” She adviced, knowing the woman.

”Suspicious as ever, Signum.” Miachell appeared from the shadows. She had shoulder lenght curled brown hair and her eyes looked like they could pierce walls. Despite her serious look, it seemed like it was the most natural thing for her.

”With creatures like you, I'm not taking any changes.”

”What happened to the continous 'You're human' talk?” She titled her head.

”You failed in it.” She continued to taunt.

Miachell moved to the light in the middle, flexing. She had a decorated robe on her that was more like an all around cape with loose sleeves. ”You know... I took those words to heart.”

Quickly she lept at Signum and swung her hand at her, which was quickly caught by Leavantein.

”Partial transformation?” Signum praised.

”Yes.” The two woman parted leaving comfortable space between themselves.

Signum noticed how the woman's hands were turned into giant paws. Similar to what Hayate had in her closet just with bigger claws.

”Erio.” She readied Leavantein for another strike. ”This is my fight. You stay away.”

As a knight in training, Erio understood what Signum meant and walked away from the two woman.

”So you do trust me.” Miachell lifted her hands for an unknown stance. ”Normally you wouldn't leave anything unprotected around me.”

”As long as your head is human he will be fine.” Signum jumped towards the woman. ”And when it isn't, it will be on the floor.”

Miachell easily parried the blow and swept her other hand toward Signum, who blocked it just as easily and slid backwards from the force.

”I better be careful then.” Miachell spun and leaped towards Signum.

____________________

”Hayate! All connections have been lost to the unit.” Shari informed Hayate.

She was in charge of this operation from Claudia. Chrono still wanted to keep his battle seat so she stood in front of it.

”Keep everything on stand-by. We can do nothing from here.” She ordered, worried.

Spoiler for Thingie:

I admit. Lanlai's school did receive much influence from things

But it isn't just Ifrit

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Spoiler for Raising Heart:

I felt like I was facing the Spanish Inquisition the way Fate-chan kept staring at me, not my best friend. Fate-chan was not going to take no for an answer, but if I’d tell her the truth, she wouldn’t let me go to class!

Best to resort to a little white lie.

“I feel a bit homesick, I guess.”

Fate kept staring at me, she didn’t buy it. “You look worse then ‘a bit homesick’ you’re feeling horrible, aren’t you?”

I kept quiet, not wanting to answer the question.

“Nanoha…” Oh no… her tone had shifted from stern to worried, and her eyes… not the trembling worry eyes!

I averted my head, not wanting to meet Fate-chan’s worried eyes. Those eyes always manage to make me feel guilty if I lie about how I feel.

Having my head averted, I couldn’t see what Fate was doing, but I did feel two arms embracing me.

“You are feeling homesick.” Fate said with a sigh. “I’ve known you for years now Nanoha, there is no way you wouldn’t feel horrible after suddenly being without your family.” I turned back to face Fate-chan as she slowly let go. “But don’t worry, you’re not alone. You have friends, new friends, who will support you. Comfort you. So just talk to us if you feel like you need to.”

I mulled over Fate’s statement in my head. She was right. Fate-chan has always been by my side, since as long as I can remember. Hayate-chan I met only yesterday, but she already treats me like we were together since kindergarden, and Yuuno-san offered to help me even though we had only talked for an hour.

But… aren’t I a burden to them?

“Nanoha, let’s hurry or we’ll be late.” Fate-chan reminded me.

Placing a smile on my face, I nodded to Fate and hurried to class.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

Lunchtime arrived, and just as I tried to get up and out of the classroom, a hand grabbed my shoulder.

“Nanoha-chan.” Hayate-chan’s voice came from my left. “Did you bring lunch today?”

I blinked.

I had completely forgotten to pack my lunch this morning. I really had nothing to eat.

“I thought so.” Hayate-chan said with a grin. “Here, you can have some of mine.”

“Thanks.” I said with a smile as she shoved our two desks together and paced her lunchbox in the middle. She offered me a pair of sticks and we dug in. The lunchbox was quite rich, a mix of rice, vegetables, meat, and really delicious too.

“Did you cook this in the cooking club?”

“No, this one I made at home. I usually cook at home. Shamal tries too but… she’s not too good at it.” Hayate giggled.

“Wow, I don’t think I can do that. I mean, I can cook since my parents owned a cake restaurant, but to cook every night…”

“I could show you. Remember, the offer to come to my place still stands.”

“… I’ll think about it.”

I turned my head back to the lunch. I didn’t miss the flash of concern that passed through Hayate’s eyes, though.

Another person worried for me.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

At the end of the day, school wasn’t that bad; even though I still felt horrible I managed to get through.

Living alone was definitely a lot harder then I expected it to be. I thought ‘what’s the big deal? I’ve been home alone before when my parents and siblings were all out to do their own thing’ but it’s a lot harder then that. I miss my family. I miss my mother, my father, my brother, my sister. I wanted them back, I wanted my old life back.

I snuck out of class before Fate-chan had another chance to catch me. I really appreciate what she is doing, but all I am now is a burden. During classes she got called on by the teachers several times for not paying attention.

I don’t want that.

I looked at my watch. 15:30, I should decide what to do for dinner soon. I could make something myself, which means I’ll have to get ingredients from the store. I can also settle for a takeout, which means I’ll have a few more hours to myself. Though… Hayate also said I could come over anytime I like.

A.) I’ll go buy ingredients and cook myself a nice meal.
B.) … Hayate practically invited me over tonight; I can’t really decline, can I?
C.) A meal at Hayate’s place sounds nice.
D.) I’m going to take a nice stroll through town, and order some takeout at the end of the day.

Spoiler for Keroko's Corner:

You are standing on what looks like the bridge of a spaceship, judging by the viewports all around you. If you look at the bridge, you see a two lowered areas, where people are wildly buzzing around taking care of the ship. In the middle of the two lowered areas is a bridge, obviously for the superior officers to keep an eye on their troops. A hiss comes from the other end of the room, and a steel door opens. A blue eyed girl with red hair tied in a ponytail on the right side of her head walks onto the bridge and smiles at you.

"Welcome to Keroko's Corner. In this place we give out hints and tips to the game. These hints may help you get better relations, or avoid any 'bad endings' that may occur from your choices. If you would rather not use this help, and you don't have to, you can just close the spoiler tag and vote. Anyway, on to the subject at hand.

You're at an interesting junction right now. Nanoha is not feeling well, but, Nanoha being Nanoha she doesn't want to 'burden' others into letting them help her. She needs a strong person to break through her thick skull and tell her that she is not burdening anyone. Fate, while a close friend, is not a strong enough person to do so.

Oh, and a little warning when choosing: The intent with the choice will shape the motivation Nanoha has for aproaching the situation, which will change the way people will react to her."

The girl salutes.

"Good luck."

Definetly D for me. Nanoha is sick but she needs to go around town and grab some food.

[Jimmy C]

Originally Posted by Satashi

"It's common to experiment in same-sex relationships. Just remember, you could get her pregnant, sooo...." She placed a condom in Nanoha's other hand. "Your choice."

Now, this is a better way for them to have a child. Compared to some boring clinic procedure, this is much more "fun".

[Skyfall]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Spoiler for Raising Heart:

I felt like I was facing the Spanish Inquisition the way Fate-chan kept staring at me, not my best friend. Fate-chan was not going to take no for an answer, but if I’d tell her the truth, she wouldn’t let me go to class!

Best to resort to a little white lie.

“I feel a bit homesick, I guess.”

Fate kept staring at me, she didn’t buy it. “You look worse then ‘a bit homesick’ you’re feeling horrible, aren’t you?”

I kept quiet, not wanting to answer the question.

“Nanoha…” Oh no… her tone had shifted from stern to worried, and her eyes… not the trembling worry eyes!

I averted my head, not wanting to meet Fate-chan’s worried eyes. Those eyes always manage to make me feel guilty if I lie about how I feel.

Having my head averted, I couldn’t see what Fate was doing, but I did feel two arms embracing me.

“You are feeling homesick.” Fate said with a sigh. “I’ve known you for years now Nanoha, there is no way you wouldn’t feel horrible after suddenly being without your family.” I turned back to face Fate-chan as she slowly let go. “But don’t worry, you’re not alone. You have friends, new friends, who will support you. Comfort you. So just talk to us if you feel like you need to.”

I mulled over Fate’s statement in my head. She was right. Fate-chan has always been by my side, since as long as I can remember. Hayate-chan I met only yesterday, but she already treats me like we were together since kindergarden, and Yuuno-san offered to help me even though we had only talked for an hour.

But… aren’t I a burden to them?

“Nanoha, let’s hurry or we’ll be late.” Fate-chan reminded me.

Placing a smile on my face, I nodded to Fate and hurried to class.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

Lunchtime arrived, and just as I tried to get up and out of the classroom, a hand grabbed my shoulder.

“Nanoha-chan.” Hayate-chan’s voice came from my left. “Did you bring lunch today?”

I blinked.

I had completely forgotten to pack my lunch this morning. I really had nothing to eat.

“I thought so.” Hayate-chan said with a grin. “Here, you can have some of mine.”

“Thanks.” I said with a smile as she shoved our two desks together and paced her lunchbox in the middle. She offered me a pair of sticks and we dug in. The lunchbox was quite rich, a mix of rice, vegetables, meat, and really delicious too.

“Did you cook this in the cooking club?”

“No, this one I made at home. I usually cook at home. Shamal tries too but… she’s not too good at it.” Hayate giggled.

“Wow, I don’t think I can do that. I mean, I can cook since my parents owned a cake restaurant, but to cook every night…”

“I could show you. Remember, the offer to come to my place still stands.”

“… I’ll think about it.”

I turned my head back to the lunch. I didn’t miss the flash of concern that passed through Hayate’s eyes, though.

Another person worried for me.

~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~

At the end of the day, school wasn’t that bad; even though I still felt horrible I managed to get through.

Living alone was definitely a lot harder then I expected it to be. I thought ‘what’s the big deal? I’ve been home alone before when my parents and siblings were all out to do their own thing’ but it’s a lot harder then that. I miss my family. I miss my mother, my father, my brother, my sister. I wanted them back, I wanted my old life back.

I snuck out of class before Fate-chan had another chance to catch me. I really appreciate what she is doing, but all I am now is a burden. During classes she got called on by the teachers several times for not paying attention.

I don’t want that.

I looked at my watch. 15:30, I should decide what to do for dinner soon. I could make something myself, which means I’ll have to get ingredients from the store. I can also settle for a takeout, which means I’ll have a few more hours to myself. Though… Hayate also said I could come over anytime I like.

A.) I’ll go buy ingredients and cook myself a nice meal.
B.) … Hayate practically invited me over tonight; I can’t really decline, can I?
C.) A meal at Hayate’s place sounds nice.
D.) I’m going to take a nice stroll through town, and order some takeout at the end of the day.

Spoiler for Keroko's Corner:

You are standing on what looks like the bridge of a spaceship, judging by the viewports all around you. If you look at the bridge, you see a two lowered areas, where people are wildly buzzing around taking care of the ship. In the middle of the two lowered areas is a bridge, obviously for the superior officers to keep an eye on their troops. A hiss comes from the other end of the room, and a steel door opens. A blue eyed girl with red hair tied in a ponytail on the right side of her head walks onto the bridge and smiles at you.

"Welcome to Keroko's Corner. In this place we give out hints and tips to the game. These hints may help you get better relations, or avoid any 'bad endings' that may occur from your choices. If you would rather not use this help, and you don't have to, you can just close the spoiler tag and vote. Anyway, on to the subject at hand.

You're at an interesting junction right now. Nanoha is not feeling well, but, Nanoha being Nanoha she doesn't want to 'burden' others into letting them help her. She needs a strong person to break through her thick skull and tell her that she is not burdening anyone. Fate, while a close friend, is not a strong enough person to do so.

Oh, and a little warning when choosing: The intent with the choice will shape the motivation Nanoha has for aproaching the situation, which will change the way people will react to her."

The girl salutes.

"Good luck."

Yay, finally an update ^^ (i am one to talk ) ... strolling through the town sounds like a good idea at this time, and there is the possibility of running in to someone. Going to vote D

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Jimmy C

Now, this is a better way for them to have a child. Compared to some boring clinic procedure, this is much more "fun".

Depends on the definition of "fun"
I don't like futa myself so if Satashi-sama wrote something about it I wouldn't read it but it doesn't mean the idea isn't... What's the word...?

"Different"?

[Satashi]

Amazing what comes in your mind when you take a late lunch. My day sucks so far, but at least now I feel better.

Here, this is how Fate's day went today

Spoiler for Fate's day at work! (6th D kinda):

Sometimes I got bored. Yes, I'll admit it. I, Fate Testarossa, got bored. Currently I was in my office, with my door shut and blinds closed, leaning back in my chair. A pen was balanced between my upper lip and nose while I simply thought about nothing in general. Several monitors were floating around me but I didn't really care. I hated desk work. Badly. Hayate knew this, and my work output reflected it.

That's why I had three secretaries.

Who were all sick with the flu.

Damn flu.

I pondered dinner tonight, one eye glancing to the monitor surveying the training field. Nanoha was doing a mock battle with everyone, brow focused and eyes stern. Five-on-one battles really taxed her, specially since all her students were ranked B now. Except for Lutecia, she had made it to A+ rank. The though was made obvious by a sudden darkness surrounding my wife. Oh my,my, Nanoha, A swarm of beetles. Have fun with that.

Oh, yes, dinner. I had been thinking about that hadn't I? Nanoha would probably be tired so a nice meal... We haven't had steak in ages. That's it, I'll grill some steaks on our patio... some baked potatoes! and a salad... and some garlic bread. Oh lord I loved garlic bread. So much so. garlic bread, garlic crutons for my salad, maybe some garlic and cracked peppercorn marinade for steaks...

Too much, Fate, too much.

My eyes stared through the window displays that had been on the same page for several minutes now. What was I supposed to do again? Oh yes, read over them and approve or disapprove. Normally my secretary Kha did this kind of thing. Read the entire 20-page notice, highlight the interesting parts, and I'd spend all of five minutes skimming and signing. Damn Kha, why are you sick?

I felt a thump on my nose and almost screamed in shock from it. Luckily I held it in, but was sweating instantly and panting while looking up at Hayate. Oh my, she didn't look pleased.

I was getting scolded. Guilt trip scolded. The kind where you think 'Man I really shouldn't have done that.' kind of scolded. Oh well, Hayate was by best friend so after it was over I simply invited her for dinner and we were on good terms again.

Although she still won't let me patrol the town until my paper work was done.

Now I was chewing my pen, a really really bad habit I had. I always had to do something with my mouth. chew pens, chew gum, bite my nails, blow pops were the best, candy... I want some candy. Fortunetly I had a candy drawer, and I raided a cherry starburst from it to sate my fixation.

Two more hours. Come on clock, hurry up. Or at least give me a scramble warning. A few drones, some moron trying to rob a bank...anything! Well, not anything, I don't want anyone to get hurt... A car chase would be good, though. On the highway. during the slow time of the day. Oh yes, that sounds fun.

My ear buds were retrieved from another drawer and placed in my ears lazily. Nice music started to play through my MP3 player of choice, that was not an iPod. I nodded my head to the music while reading the documents in front of me without taking it in.

I hated desk work.

My thoughts were interrupted when someone knocked on my door. I bid them entrance and chatted with them a few moments before following them to a floor beneath me to scold the people who were caught playing games on their computers instead of working. I gave the two a rather loud earful, being sure they thought twice of it before attempting to do such things on a military base again.

Somewhat satisfied, I returned to my desk and actually worked seriously for the rest of the day. Nothing like a good yelling to put me back in the right frame of mind.

When Nanoha knocked on my door I smiled fondly at her. She smiled back happily and came over to me, helping me up from my chair. At one her hands went to my stomach and grinned. True, I was getting plump, but it was still way too early for our baby to be making motions hard enough to be felt. She didn't mind, though, and she bent over to kiss my stomach before kissing me.

Time to cook for my wife, and enjoy a nice evening at home.

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Jimmy C

Now, this is a better way for them to have a child. Compared to some boring clinic procedure, this is much more "fun".

I can't help but think of that scene from the Evangelion fanfic where Shinji and Asuka switch bodies....

damn...can't remember the title...

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Amazing what comes in your mind when you take a late lunch. My day sucks so far, but at least now I feel better.

Here, this is how Fate's day went today

Spoiler for Fate's day at work! (6th D kinda):

Sometimes I got bored. Yes, I'll admit it. I, Fate Testarossa, got bored. Currently I was in my office, with my door shut and blinds closed, leaning back in my chair. A pen was balanced between my upper lip and nose while I simply thought about nothing in general. Seveal monitors were floating around me but I didn't really care. I hated desk work. Badly. Hayate knew this, and my work output reflected it.

That's why I had three secretaries.

Who were all sick with the flu.

Damn flu.

I pondered dinner tonight, one eye glancing to the monitor surveying the training field. Nanoha was doing a mock battle with everyone, brow focused and eyes stern. Five-on-one battles really taxed her, specially since all her students were ranked B now. Except for Lutecia, she had made it to A+ rank. The though was made obvious by a sudden darkness surrounding my wife. Oh my,my, Nanoha, A swarm of beetles. Have fun with that.

Do ,yes, dinner. I had been thinking about that hadn't I? Nanoha would probably be tired so a nice meal... We haven't had steak in ages. That's it, I'll grill some steaks on our patio... some baked potatoes! and a salad... and some garlic bread. Oh lord I loved garlic bread. So much so. Farlic bread, garlic crutons for my salad, maybe some garlic and cracked peppercorn marinade for steaks...

Too much, Fate, too much.

My yes stared through the window displays that had been on the same page for several minutes now. What was I supposed to do again? Oh yes, read over them and approve or disapprove. Normally my secretary Kha did this kind of thing. Read thee entire 20-page notice, highlight the interesting parts, and I'd spend all of five minutes skimming and signing. Damn Kha, why are you sick?

I felt a thump on my nose and almost screamed in shock from it. Luckily I held it in, but was sweating instantly and panting while looking up at Hayate. Oh my, she didn't look pleased.

I was getting scolded. Guilt trip scolded. The kind where you think 'Man I really shouldn't have done that.' kind of scolded. Oh well, Hayate was by best friend so after it was over I simply invited her for dinner and we were on good terms again.

Although she still won't let me patrol the town until my paper work was done.

Now I was chewing my pen, a really really bad habit I had. I always had to do something with my mouth. chew pens, chew gum, bite my nails, blow pops were the best, candy... I want some candy. Fortunetly I had a candy drawer, and I raided a cherry starburst from it to sate my fixation.

Two more hours. Come on clock, hurry up. Or at least give me a scramble warning. A few drones, some moron trying to rob a bank...anything! Well, not anything, I don't want anyone to get hurt... A car chase would be good, though. on the highway. during the slow time of the day. Oh yes, that sounds fun.

My ear buds were retrieved from another drawer and placed in my ears lazily. Nice music started to play through my MP3 player of choice, that was not an iPod. I nodded my head to the music while reading the documents in front of me without taking it in.

I hated desk work.

My thoughts were interrupted when someone knocked on my door. I bid them entrance and chatted with them a few moments before following them to a floor beneath me to scold the people who were caught playing games on their computers instead of working. I gave the two a rather loud earful, being sure they thought twice of it before attempting to do such things on a military base again.

Somewhat satisfied, I returned to my desk and actually worked seriously for the rest of the day. Nothing like a good yelling to put me back in the right frame of mind.

When Nanoha knocked on my door I smiled fondly at her. She smiled back happily and came over to me, helping me up from my chair. At one her hands went to my stomach and grinned. True, I was getting plump, but it was still way too early for my our baby to be making motions hard enough to be felt. She didn't mind, though, and she bent over to kiss my stomach before kissing me.

Time to cook for my wife, and enjoy a nice evening at home.

Nice.
Didn't suspect that bit at the end I'll say...

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Depends on the definition of "fun"
I don't like futa myself so if Satashi-sama wrote something about it I wouldn't read it but it doesn't mean the idea isn't... What's the word...?

"Different"?

ah, that was for complete genderbend male!Nanoha, not Futa

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Nice.
Didn't suspect that bit at the end I'll say...

random additions are random.

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Satashi

ah, that was for complete genderbend male!Nanoha, not Futa

...
... ...
... ... ...
*Explodes*

random additions are random.

Nothing wrong with those

[Satashi]

http://snappoll.com/poll/257435.php

29 yes
27 no

Voting closed now, actually.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

http://snappoll.com/poll/257435.php

29 yes
27 no

Voting closed now, actually.

Oh snaps! 56 ppl voted :3 XD

HAIL RH/NANOHA!!

Edit:

So I'm being childish...as long as the whole thing is tasteful, it's allz goodz :3

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Satashi

ah, that was for complete genderbend male!Nanoha, not Futa

Aww...no futa? lol . Though seeing Fate's reaction to a bishie Nanoha would be just as good . Oh man...better hope Subaru doesn't see 'him'

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Satashi

http://snappoll.com/poll/257435.php

29 yes
27 no

Voting closed now, actually.

Lol wow, close poll. So I take it we're getting a RH lemon then?

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

http://snappoll.com/poll/257435.php

29 yes
27 no

Voting closed now, actually.

very close but... we win!

On another Satashi related note the gender bended Nanoha short and the Fate's day were truly awesome and if you ever wanted to take the idea beyond shortdom no one would mind.

[Kha]

It's been long enough. Thanks for your hard work, Kero-chan!

And Keroko's corner? I rather have Keroko-tan do the debrief. :3

I vote B, even though we might be forcing Nanoha to pass out at Hayate's...

[Krinen]

I think I'll go B as well.
Nanoha needs sum luff.
Yesseree, she needs her some VITAmins. [/subtlety]

[TheShinySword]

I vote B

Though I'm curious about the difference between B and C. I wish we could have two choices so I could see exactly what would change but then again it wouldn't be any fun if we could see two.

[Dr_Tom]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Amazing what comes in your mind when you take a late lunch. My day sucks so far, but at least now I feel better.

Here, this is how Fate's day went today

Spoiler for Fate's day at work! (6th D kinda):

Sometimes I got bored. Yes, I'll admit it. I, Fate Testarossa, got bored. Currently I was in my office, with my door shut and blinds closed, leaning back in my chair. A pen was balanced between my upper lip and nose while I simply thought about nothing in general. Several monitors were floating around me but I didn't really care. I hated desk work. Badly. Hayate knew this, and my work output reflected it.

That's why I had three secretaries.

Who were all sick with the flu.

Damn flu.

I pondered dinner tonight, one eye glancing to the monitor surveying the training field. Nanoha was doing a mock battle with everyone, brow focused and eyes stern. Five-on-one battles really taxed her, specially since all her students were ranked B now. Except for Lutecia, she had made it to A+ rank. The though was made obvious by a sudden darkness surrounding my wife. Oh my,my, Nanoha, A swarm of beetles. Have fun with that.

Oh, yes, dinner. I had been thinking about that hadn't I? Nanoha would probably be tired so a nice meal... We haven't had steak in ages. That's it, I'll grill some steaks on our patio... some baked potatoes! and a salad... and some garlic bread. Oh lord I loved garlic bread. So much so. garlic bread, garlic crutons for my salad, maybe some garlic and cracked peppercorn marinade for steaks...

Too much, Fate, too much.

My eyes stared through the window displays that had been on the same page for several minutes now. What was I supposed to do again? Oh yes, read over them and approve or disapprove. Normally my secretary Kha did this kind of thing. Read the entire 20-page notice, highlight the interesting parts, and I'd spend all of five minutes skimming and signing. Damn Kha, why are you sick?

I felt a thump on my nose and almost screamed in shock from it. Luckily I held it in, but was sweating instantly and panting while looking up at Hayate. Oh my, she didn't look pleased.

I was getting scolded. Guilt trip scolded. The kind where you think 'Man I really shouldn't have done that.' kind of scolded. Oh well, Hayate was by best friend so after it was over I simply invited her for dinner and we were on good terms again.

Although she still won't let me patrol the town until my paper work was done.

Now I was chewing my pen, a really really bad habit I had. I always had to do something with my mouth. chew pens, chew gum, bite my nails, blow pops were the best, candy... I want some candy. Fortunetly I had a candy drawer, and I raided a cherry starburst from it to sate my fixation.

Two more hours. Come on clock, hurry up. Or at least give me a scramble warning. A few drones, some moron trying to rob a bank...anything! Well, not anything, I don't want anyone to get hurt... A car chase would be good, though. On the highway. during the slow time of the day. Oh yes, that sounds fun.

My ear buds were retrieved from another drawer and placed in my ears lazily. Nice music started to play through my MP3 player of choice, that was not an iPod. I nodded my head to the music while reading the documents in front of me without taking it in.

I hated desk work.

My thoughts were interrupted when someone knocked on my door. I bid them entrance and chatted with them a few moments before following them to a floor beneath me to scold the people who were caught playing games on their computers instead of working. I gave the two a rather loud earful, being sure they thought twice of it before attempting to do such things on a military base again.

Somewhat satisfied, I returned to my desk and actually worked seriously for the rest of the day. Nothing like a good yelling to put me back in the right frame of mind.

When Nanoha knocked on my door I smiled fondly at her. She smiled back happily and came over to me, helping me up from my chair. At one her hands went to my stomach and grinned. True, I was getting plump, but it was still way too early for our baby to be making motions hard enough to be felt. She didn't mind, though, and she bent over to kiss my stomach before kissing me.

Time to cook for my wife, and enjoy a nice evening at home.

cute, very cute. Must say I liked it a lot.