Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Does Laura act with Charles like she does with Ichika?

Laura's change is less drastic... but just as forceful.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I can imagine the arm bar scene with Charles spluttering in embarassment.

Unlike Ichika who's dense as brick, Charles is shy, but if something will please Laura or make them close, he'll do it. When Laura react to Charles by armbar him, Charles reciprocates.... and then Ichika wakes up as Houki is entering the room...

Ichika: "Yawn...Huh...."

Charles: "I...Ichika"

Laura: "Just wake up, you lazy bum?"

Ichika: "....WHAT?!"

Charles: "Umm, I can explain"

Houki: "KYAAAAH!! HOW INDECENT*"

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Also, are Video game consloes allowed on campus?

Considering the SHIT Cecilia pulled on her room, why not?

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Not Tsundere, Ice queen Those tend to be appealing to Otaku.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Also, with Irish's body structure, would he be able to pull of using those outfits.

Well, that's the problem...

EDIT: go to sleep as well.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - What do you mean by just as forceful? Also, how would Charles reciprocate? Try to armbar her back? You have to remember where Ichika's hands were when he got grappled Speaking of which, Laura seems to be incredibly strong despite her lack of body muscle and the fact that she just woke up.

Side note - Why is it a problem? His body structure is feminine enough and the only problem would be his frontal underwear since he obviously has equipment girls don't. I can justify that to rule of funny, if not, I can just say his soldier is lacking since his hormone imbalance wrecked his body.

Also, I have a new short scene, please read if possible. I'm trying to add more detail.

Spoiler:

POV: Irish

The pain was unbearable. The stab wound wasn't that large, but the piercing was deep and I think one of my organs got hit. It was pointless and I knew it. How could I have beaten her by myself? I let my anger take over and now I'm paying the price.

My vision was starting to fade and it became harder and harder to see. Taking a deep breath, I braced myself and tried to stand up. I placed both hands on the floor in front of me and pushed as hard as I could.

*Pant* *Pant* "Damn, I can't....." I bite out as I felt myself crash onto the floor again. My arms were so weak I couldn't even push myself up, how pathetic. I took another deep breath and tried to crawl forward instead. I had to place one of my hands on my injured stomach just to slow the blood loss of blood.

I used my remaining hand and slowly crawled forward. where I was going, I didn't even know. To be honest, I can't see much of anything and the pain was keeping me from thinking too clearly.

"Well, well. Still alive, are you?" I heard a female voice say. I grimaced and turned to the source of the voice. A woman, no older than her late 20's, stood there with a sadistic smile and a casual stance. "Did you honestly think you could beat me? You should know your place, dog!"

I was kicked on my side and I collapsed onto the floor again. It was a hopeless fight now. I was too weak and she was too strong. I was an idiot to think I could ever beat her. She didn't even consider me as a threat or an enemy now, more like prey to be played with before killing.

She smirked as she saw my obvious discomfort, "How Ironic. You escaped dying 6 years ago because you were too much of a coward to own up to your mistakes, and now you're going to die because you tried to make sure no one else got involved. How heroic." Her voice was dripping with sadistic intent, mocking me.

I wasn't a hero, I was just an irrational idiot. I attacked her when my partner told me to stay with her. I trapped myself in this room with her just so no one would kill her before I had a chance to. I wasn't trying a hero, I was just trying to do what I always wanted, regardless of the consequences.

And now I'm paying the price for it.

She set her foot at my back and pushed down, making sure I couldn't move, "Hey, do you want to know something interesting?" She asked me. I stayed quiet and tried to ignore her. I wasn't going to give her the satisfaction of seeing me submit to her. "Did you know why your 'Brother' took the blame for you when you made that mistake? It wasn't because he cared about you."

What was she talking about? Of course Allen cared about me. I would give my life for him right now and he would do the same. He cared about all of us in the camp and we cared about him.

I tried to stand, but her foot pressed down harder, preventing my escape, "He was one of our oldest prisoners. Well, old in a sense, he was the only one who lasted more than a year without dying. Do you know why? Because he never tried to help anyone but himself." Her voice was getting more and more excited.

"That's....impossible. He was the the one who-"

"The one who helped all of you out? Of course, that was only when you showed up." She interrupted me. What did she mean when I showed up? How could me being there made any kind of difference?

"You see, you and him have something in common: You're both Cowards." She stated plainly.

I struggled even more, but it was still no use. I was still being pinned to the ground, "He...He wasn't a coward! He was the only one of us there who wasn't scared of you!" I spat out, hate filling my voice.

She laughed slightly before replying, "So you don't know what he did? That he left his real little brother to die because he was scared? He just left him as he was crying for him, asking for help."

What? Is she telling the truth? It can't be, it just can't! He was the only reason I was still alive! How could someone like Allen do that? She had to be lying!

"And then comes this other boy who just happens to be the same age as his deceased little brother. Truth be told, it seems like something out of a fairy tale." She continued. What was she implying?

"So he probably thinks to himself that its his chance to make up for what he did and so he takes you under his wing. Did you never wonder why he took you in so fast?" She questioned me, the joyful tone never leaving her voice.

To be honest, I was just glad someone took me in when I had nothing else. I never questioned his reasons for doing so and I quickly became attached to him so I didn't care. But was that the reason? Did he just see me as a way to make himself feel less guilty about himself? I felt fear and doubt envelop me at the possibility. My eyes started to sting with barely restrained tears.

"Do you understand now? He never cared about you and he never would have no matter what. You were just being used to sate his own guilty conscience. All the time you've spent plotting to kill me, and for what? Another person who was using you for his own needs." She finished with another laugh.

"No....that's not true."Tears spilled from my eyes and onto the cold floor below. I tried to stop them, but more just flowed out. Why was I crying? I didn't believe her, right? She was just trying to break me for her own amusement.

"You're denying it, but you know the truth, don't you? You just don't want to admit you did everything for nothing. That the one person you thought who cared about you was just using you like everyone else."

More tears spilled out and I stopped struggling. I didn't even know if she was right or if she was making all this up, but what if she wasn't? What if Allen never cared about me? Was everything I've been doing for nothing?

She leaned down and whispered in my ear, obviously relishing the moment, "I'm going to tell you one last thing before I go." Her breath sent chills down my spine and made my blood freeze over, in fear or defiance, I didn't know.

"You're going to die here, and so will your partner."

Please tell me what you think!

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - What do you mean by just as forceful?

Such as Laura sneaking in to Charles bed and refused to go until Ichika kick the hell out of her ass....

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Also, how would Charles reciprocate? Try to armbar her back? You have to remember where Ichika's hands were when he got grappled

Charles managed to slip out and put Laura into a submission grapple, and considering she was naked... well...

EDIT: Houki's vision is worse, mainly because she saw them from an angle where they LOOK like they're doing THAT. Ichika is slightly better that he saw them from the side, thus he's more puzzled by naked Laura than the wrestling itself.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Speaking of which, Laura seems to be incredibly strong despite her lack of body muscle and the fact that she just woke up.

Indeed, my reasoning is that she has strong bones, durable joints, and solid but flexible muscles, meaning that she has the strength of well-trained grownup man and even beyond. Anime version of the flashback shown she thrown a German soldier (notably well built, probably twice her mass).

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Why is it a problem? His body structure is feminine enough and the only problem would be his frontal underwear since he obviously has equipment girls don't. I can justify that to rule of funny, if not, I can just say his soldier is lacking since his hormone imbalance wrecked his body.

Cater to rule of funny then

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Also, I have a new short scene, please read if possible. I'm trying to add more detail.

Spoiler:

POV: Irish

The pain was unbearable. The stab wound wasn't that large, but the piercing was deep and I think one of my organs got hit. It was pointless and I knew it. How could I have beaten her by myself? I let my anger take over and now I'm paying the price.

My vision was starting to fade and it became harder and harder to see. Taking a deep breath, I braced myself and tried to stand up. I placed both hands on the floor in front of me and pushed as hard as I could.

*Pant* *Pant* "Damn, I can't....." I bite out as I felt myself crash onto the floor again. My arms were so weak I couldn't even push myself up, how pathetic. I took another deep breath and tried to crawl forward instead. I had to place one of my hands on my injured stomach just to slow the blood loss of blood.

I used my remaining hand and slowly crawled forward. where I was going, I didn't even know. To be honest, I can't see much of anything and the pain was keeping me from thinking too clearly.

"Well, well. Still alive, are you?" I heard a female voice say. I grimaced and turned to the source of the voice. A woman, no older than her late 20's, stood there with a sadistic smile and a casual stance. "Did you honestly think you could beat me? You should know your place, dog!"

I was kicked on my side and I collapsed onto the floor again. It was a hopeless fight now. I was too weak and she was too strong. I was an idiot to think I could ever beat her. She didn't even consider me as a threat or an enemy now, more like prey to be played with before killing.

She smirked as she saw my obvious discomfort, "How Ironic. You escaped dying 6 years ago because you were too much of a coward to own up to your mistakes, and now you're going to die because you tried to make sure no one else got involved. How heroic." Her voice was dripping with sadistic intent, mocking me.

I wasn't a hero, I was just an irrational idiot. I attacked her when my partner told me to stay with her. I trapped myself in this room with her just so no one would kill her before I had a chance to. I wasn't trying a hero, I was just trying to do what I always wanted, regardless of the consequences.

And now I'm paying the price for it.

She set her foot at my back and pushed down, making sure I couldn't move, "Hey, do you want to know something interesting?" She asked me. I stayed quiet and tried to ignore her. I wasn't going to give her the satisfaction of seeing me submit to her. "Did you know why your 'Brother' took the blame for you when you made that mistake? It wasn't because he cared about you."

What was she talking about? Of course Allen cared about me. I would give my life for him right now and he would do the same. He cared about all of us in the camp and we cared about him.

I tried to stand, but her foot pressed down harder, preventing my escape, "He was one of our oldest prisoners. Well, old in a sense, he was the only one who lasted more than a year without dying. Do you know why? Because he never tried to help anyone but himself." Her voice was getting more and more excited.

"That's....impossible. He was the the one who-"

"The one who helped all of you out? Of course, that was only when you showed up." She interrupted me. What did she mean when I showed up? How could me being there made any kind of difference?

"You see, you and him have something in common: You're both Cowards." She stated plainly.

I struggled even more, but it was still no use. I was still being pinned to the ground, "He...He wasn't a coward! He was the only one of us there who wasn't scared of you!" I spat out, hate filling my voice.

She laughed slightly before replying, "So you don't know what he did? That he left his real little brother to die because he was scared? He just left him as he was crying for him, asking for help."

What? Is she telling the truth? It can't be, it just can't! He was the only reason I was still alive! How could someone like Allen do that? She had to be lying!

"And then comes this other boy who just happens to be the same age as his deceased little brother. Truth be told, it seems like something out of a fairy tale." She continued. What was she implying?

"So he probably thinks to himself that its his chance to make up for what he did and so he takes you under his wing. Did you never wonder why he took you in so fast?" She questioned me, the joyful tone never leaving her voice.

To be honest, I was just glad someone took me in when I had nothing else. I never questioned his reasons for doing so and I quickly became attached to him so I didn't care. But was that the reason? Did he just see me as a way to make himself feel less guilty about himself? I felt fear and doubt envelop me at the possibility. My eyes started to sting with barely restrained tears.

"Do you understand now? He never cared about you and he never would have no matter what. You were just being used to sate his own guilty conscience. All the time you've spent plotting to kill me, and for what? Another person who was using you for his own needs." She finished with another laugh.

"No....that's not true."Tears spilled from my eyes and onto the cold floor below. I tried to stop them, but more just flowed out. Why was I crying? I didn't believe her, right? She was just trying to break me for her own amusement.

"You're denying it, but you know the truth, don't you? You just don't want to admit you did everything for nothing. That the one person you thought who cared about you was just using you like everyone else."

More tears spilled out and I stopped struggling. I didn't even know if she was right or if she was making all this up, but what if she wasn't? What if Allen never cared about me? Was everything I've been doing for nothing?

She leaned down and whispered in my ear, obviously relishing the moment, "I'm going to tell you one last thing before I go." Her breath sent chills down my spine and made my blood freeze over, in fear or defiance, I didn't know.

"You're going to die here, and so will your partner."

Please tell me what you think!

Thats'.... scary....and tragic too.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - I'm surprised he doesn't try to tie up Charles while she's at it By the way, who's her roommate now?

How does Charles deal with her nudity?

So she's the best rep candidate outside of combat I wonder if she's strong enough to move around quickly in body armor.

Side note - Is the content ok? Was it a bit too overdramatic?

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - I'm surprised he doesn't try to tie up Charles while she's at it By the way, who's her roommate now?

I haven't think about that, but the plan is Charles 'relocate himself' to Laura's room after Tatenashi barges in, much to Ichika's dismay.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

How does Charles deal with her nudity?

Like Ichika, dumbfounded and stuttering, but since Charles is more attentive, he quickly realized Laura's misconception and explain it... but Charles's movement, coupled with Laura being a little sleepy, caused another misunderstanding about CQC and stuff.

(Yes, Charles complies anyway, since it benefits him, since naked Laura = skinship. Twin!Charles is somewhat a manipulative bastard in more ways than one )

Originally Posted by Eratas123

So she's the best rep candidate outside of combat I wonder if she's strong enough to move around quickly in body armor.

Her body armor would be custom size and thus lighter than those wore by adult soldier.

[B]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Is the content ok? Was it a bit too overdramatic?

No, nope, no need for drastic improvement (but then again that's my personal opinion)

[Eratas123]

Tatenashi still barges in here? Ichika's strong and confident enough that he doesn't need a bodyguard so what's her reason? In Shadow, Ichika's still a guy who gets lucky most of the time so Tatenashi still does it. Irish celebrates the fact that he has the room to himself.......till Karon barges in and says they're temp roommates. Cue Facewall.

At least Houki doesn't do her Houki Pouki attack after this one Though Charles being a covert pervert makes sense You can make them the beta couple.

I can just Imagine Laura and Irish sitting in Seiza position while being lectured by someone for proper nudity taboos. This comes from the fact that she asked him to help her fit the swimsuit for the beach school arc and they got caught since they weren't exactly being quiet.

Do you think that customized armor applies to all the Shwarzer Haze?

Side note - What about the writing style? I tried to focus more on detail and Character thoughts.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Tatenashi still barges in here? Ichika's strong and confident enough that he doesn't need a bodyguard so what's her reason?

FRANKLY, even in Canon Ichika doesn't need any escort inside I.S.A., it's all Tatenashi's plan for the lulz (and fix her relationship with Kanzashi)

Originally Posted by Eratas123

In Shadow, Ichika's still a guy who gets lucky most of the time so Tatenashi still does it. Irish celebrates the fact that he has the room to himself.......till Karon barges in and says they're temp roommates. Cue Facewall.

He's really lucky... or not.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

At least Houki doesn't do her Houki Pouki attack after this one

She DOES berates Ichika for constantly looking at submitted, naked Laura than looking away, at least no Houki pouki here indeed.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Though Charles being a covert pervert makes sense You can make them the beta couple.

My plan from the beginning.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I can just Imagine Laura and Irish sitting in Seiza position while being lectured by someone for proper nudity taboos. This comes from the fact that she asked him to help her fit the swimsuit for the beach school arc and they got caught since they weren't exactly being quiet.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Do you think that customized armor applies to all the Shwarzer Haze?

I was talking about custom SIZE, Clarissa will obviously use standard size.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - What about the writing style? I tried to focus more on detail and Character thoughts.

Yup, it's better, to be honest.

Going to school, see ya.

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by Detective-san

Slow Meister is slow.

(Did I mention I'm also a Combat Gardener?)

I've been so focused on fighting and writing and plotting that I overlooked this.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Meistah - What did you expect? Karon's Singaporean. Erika's and Celeste are German. Tsubomi is Japanese. The Esquivel twins are Spanish. Ange is American. And Riselle is part Chinese. This even applies to the non-idols. Browning is American, Maximillian is Eurasian while Irish at least looks like a western albino. That's one of the most multi-national teams I've seen for a while in a fanfic and there are other idols too.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Just got another idea for some lighthearted humor in Shadow: Irish is supposed to keep a close eye on Karon, but he can't exactly always stay close to her. This is further complicated by the fact that they can't tell her manager or anyone except her. All the positions like make up etc etc have been filled and there's only one left: Another Idol. You can tell where this is going

Then let me tell you something good... This can work as-is, for historical records show that not only traps exist, apparently he is the most popular Idol amongst the fans of Idolm@ster:

Spoiler for Akizuki Ryo:

Ryo Akizuki (秋月涼 Akizuki Ryo?)
Voiced by: Yuko Sanpei
Age: 15
Image Color: Mint Green
Image Songs: "Dazzling World" and "Himitsu no Sangoshou"

Ritsuko's cousin, though very soft-spoken compared to her. Ryo's actually a boy trying to pass himself as an idol, and keeps that as a secret from the other idols. He wanted to become a male idol, but when he goes to see Ritsuko about it, she takes him to Studio 876 to become one. There, he ends up covering for a female idol. He does so well, the studio hires him as a female idol.

Also, in AKB49, the 49th 'girl' to AKB48 (also the protagonist) is also a trap.

So Irish has his work cut out for him.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Do male idols and female idols sing together or form a duet? If not, its off to the crossdressing antics again.

All angles work. Remember, Karon's forte is that of a band-type idol group. Maybe in this world, Irish takes the guitar and Karon does the singing, like angela.

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Then again, we can say that toy ship is another form of innocence, plus Irish might be bishie enough, so Karon and Irish duet might attract a lot of positive attention and corrective critics rather than batshit insanity (unless it's from Karon's crazy fanatics which is jealous of Irish...)

Can happen.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

What's the difference of male and female idols apart from gender? Also, you think anybody will catch on if Irish crossdressed as a female idol?

See above. :3

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Then I guess Irish will fail as a male idol. Guy pretty much kills any sexual charm or tension around him. On the other hand, that's perfect for a female idol

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Are you sure? He does make a good uke though... with or without male partner (Which means a field day of fanservice for female fans of Shooting Star).

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - Do fans really want to see male Yaoi idols on stage? Anyway, Irish has his menories here so he might break the uke performance if he gets sufficiently rattled enough. Do Tsundere's or Ice queens make good idols?

Quite bad idols actually. Kisaragi doesn't become wildly popular until after she lightens up. I wrote in the same way for Houki. Chiwa Saito and Rie Kugyu are famous for being in tsundere roles, but they themselves are one of the most bubbly characters (short of Yukari, who btw takes kuudere to a whole new level) IRL.

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Well, if he doesn't do it too intensely and the situation quickly sorted, fans MIGHT mistake it for tsundere or ice queen act (remember they often blinded by shipping goggles and stuff like that)

Can happen.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Irish really sounds like he'd make a better female idol since he acts like a tsundere/Ice queen while in a crossdressed state. Do idols wear fanservicey or tight clothes?

Not necessarily. IRL, Kalafina wears only frilly gowns and full frocks to date, and everyone loves them to death. This was the design I used for the Riz, Houki and Louise unit, [crozius] using their powerful voices and singing talent to drive their popularity.

So you have either trap Irish in an idol unit (Akizuki-type), or normal Irish with a guitar in an idol band (angela-type). If he's that good at playing undercover, then both will be fine. Though I think him playing the 'cool guitarist' works better.







This is TOTALLY the cover for SHOOTiNG ST@RS SS ~Gr@vure 4 You~.

[ZeroXSEED]

Anyway, by the time V7 arc rolled out, Charles will be manly enough that one can't mistake him for a girl anymore (of course not to the same level as Dan or Ichika). This is because adjustment of complete and functional reproduction system took more than 1 year, compare to 6 months 'corrective' theraphy.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Canon Ichika needs it because he's an idiot Besides, it was official since the headmaster ordered it himself.

If not Karon, then most likely Maya. The room is only for students and he's only staying there since the owner of the room lets him. With the owner gone and no other student staying there, he has no reason to stay there so he has to stay with Maya. Cue more Facewall.

What did Houki expect him to do? He wakes up and sees his roommate being armbarred by a naked girl. Anyone would be surprised and stare unless they're really stoic.

@ Meistah - Damn that's a lot of replies!

1. The only reason he has to take the idol role is because he can't play an instrument to save his life. His voice is naturally good, though, so he gets a pass there.

2. No one is supposed to know he's watching Karon so he needs a cover. Anything apart from Idol or manager would make him seem suspicious since why would the guitar man hang around the idol other than practice? Fellow idols have been seen getting along, so no one gets suspicious there.

3. I thought shy Ice queens would be popular? I've seen people get ridiculous just because the idol acts cold and then starts blushing. Irish has a perma blush since he's crosdressing and singing in front of a crowd.

4. What do you think should be his costume? I'm thinking something black to contrast with his pale features.

5. How long does Idol training take place? I've seen 13 year olds do it so it can't be too overdemanding.

[EthernalRain]

So, what I miss? I know I've missed a lot.

And I am craving to discuss funny omakes at the moment.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Canon Ichika needs it because he's an idiot Besides, it was official since the headmaster ordered it himself.

Considering her performance and professionalism, I can't see why he would pass the idea (except the usual boy-girl stuff, unless he doesn't know Tastenashi is a cocktease ).

Ichika might not be that much of an idiot, less reckless, and more skilled. But he still a league behind the rest (since everyone is took a pill of badass themselves), and being one of the few men who can pilot I.S., and the fact that PT specifically targeted Orimura (Madoka is the first victim).

Originally Posted by Eratas123

If not Karon, then most likely Maya. The room is only for students and he's only staying there since the owner of the room lets him. With the owner gone and no other student staying there, he has no reason to stay there so he has to stay with Maya. Cue more Facewall.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

What did Houki expect him to do? He wakes up and sees his roommate being armbarred by a naked girl. Anyone would be surprised and stare unless they're really stoic.

Houki expect Ichika to be greatly embarrassed and looking away from the scene at least.

[Eratas123]

@ Rain - I posted a scene up there. Can you tell me what you think of it?

@ Senpai - She's professional when she needs to be. Just look at her scene with the Headmaster and when they were discussing PT.

What if Ichika was worried and focused more on Charles than Laura?

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - She's professional when she needs to be. Just look at her scene with the Headmaster and when they were discussing PT.

Indeed. Tatenahsi also specifically noted it was her fault That Madoka ran away, allowing her to be kidnapped, and she won't let the same thing happens to Ichika. Nobody actually blames her tho.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

What if Ichika was worried and focused more on Charles than Laura?

Elaborate? By the time Ichika regained his senses, it was Charles who's put a submission on Laura.

This is why he's staring THAT hard, from his POV Charles look like he wanted to raep Laura, while from Houki's POV... looks like Charles already does....

[EthernalRain]

@ Eratas: It gave me some chills, in a good sense. It's a highly effective scene, and it's very well written.

Random side note: Any omake ideas cooked up in your head? I'm in the mood for lighter hearted discussion.

[Eratas123]

Senpai - So Houki thinks the Super Soldier is being raped? Yeah, I think she should feels sorry for Charles.

@ Rain - Nope, not one since I'm busy trying to find Boethia's Shrine. Do you have any ideas?

[ZeroXSEED]

@Rain
There's a plan for faux-Volume 8, but it was dark so I think you'll pass (it was Ping's idea too)

@Eras
Only Ichika, Madoka and Charles knew her history as super soldier, Houki DOES know Laura is strong, but Houki ALSO knew Charles by no means weak. That or Houki actually think it's consensual.... hence why she cried "HOW INDECENT" instead of "RAPIST!" or "WHAT ARE YOU DOING!"

[Eratas123]

Yet she goes after Ichika? I know she focuses on him, but that's a bit much.

[EthernalRain]

@ Zero: I'll pass then. Also, how dark are we talking about here?

@ Eratas: Wiki. I can't skim the location off the top of my head right now.

@ Both of you guys: Also, what are your ideas on an ISA film festival? Where the students film videos for a contest, and the winning, most popular video gets a prize?

Which could somehow involve our (un)lucky protagonists...

[ZeroXSEED]

Umm, the dialogue is incomplete. After chew Ichika and told him to look away, she then proceed to yell at the two, but Charles quickly pulled Houki outside and explain everything (once again because Charles is definitely far from dense).

It would be OOC for Houki NOT to angry or complain anyway, but she'll understand.

@Rain

As in "PT declared open war to I.S.A., Chifuyu killed by Kuu-chan, Tabane elected to one of Big Bad, Ichika goes to a revenge campaign".

Yeah, that bad.

EDIT: Film festival? Well, if anything, have an epic shooting where multiple fake I.S. (not as in PT unit, but robot shaped like an I.S., a functional props) is used in an epic war in the veins of Sengoku Basara, Dinasty Warriors or Samurai Orochi (I plan to have it as omake for TLR Stratos)